Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 50
You are evil! how could you do this to us! we are dying here!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 50
Holy Crow, time to find an escape for Bella...any windows near? Phone, fire alarm, something? I hope Edward beats the crap out of Demetri, but I bet Carlisle knows what Demetri is doing too. Thanks for the update! I always look forward to it. Thanks for sharing your talent!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 50
Oh my God! How could you leave us hanging like that!!! That was an excellent chapter! Please, oh please let Edward get there in time! I'll be looking forward to your next post!
LindyP :)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 50
Why do I feel Carlisle's presence? Thank you for the update. As always I can't wait for more.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 50
WHAT!!! NOOO!!! please come out with another one soonnn I can't wait till nxt weekkk and pls dont let bella get rapedd
Date: 27 Mar 2010 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 50
OMG, is it Carlisle?
Poor Bella...she deserves to be happy, although is constantly suffering. :(
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 50
oh jeez it's Carlisle isn't it. ugh!!!! she really needs to fight as hard as possible. no more taking crap Bella! anyway, i'm glad Edward is getting over himself. i really hope he finds her before she's raped. update soon!
Kristi
Date: 27 Mar 2010 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 50
AWW. POOR BELLA!
I HOPE EDWARD FINDS HER SOON!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 50
Oh no !!!
Can't wait for the next chapter :D
Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 50
OMG that must be Carlisle. I hope that the boys come and give him what he deserves. I want Esme to be the one to kill him or throw him in jail though ok? She deserves it after all that she has been through. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 50
I am French, so if I do not write well in English sorry.
I love your fiction.
In my opinion it should be Carlisle or madman of Démitri who invite other people.
I hope that Bella will escape safely with everything she has already live.
I can not wait to read more.
Bye
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 50
hope it's not Carlisle...I just can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 50
oh fuck dood ...
big cliff not just a small one a really fucking big one
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 50
Surely it's the boys coming to Bella's rescue?!?!
OMG - what a god damn cliffie - geez, there's alot of that going around lately!
What is it & the writers this week - all my favourites have these "terrible" cliffies I have to wait for!!!!!
My heart is racing right now... so need a drink!!!!
Thanks for the update though... awesome chapter :)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 50
My heart broke for Edward. I thought it was good to see how upset he was about what has been happening between him and Bella. And again, Jasper was amazing. He is so understanding and supportive with Edward.
I couldn't believe that Bella was kidnapped. I loved how Edward and his brothers rallied to help him and find Bella. I hope that they get there in time.
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 50
Mic, I cried as I read this. Gosh I hope Edward can get to her. Or that she can get away. I think Carlisle is the other voice she's hearing. Why the hell doesn't she just start screaming when they go in the hotel? Argh! I can't stand the cliff hangers! Looking forward to the next chapter, its been a wild ride indeed.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 50
I wouldn't want to be Demetri when Edward and his brothers find him! Poor Bella, she really deserves a break! I think the only way they will ever be free of Carlisle's ways is to put him six-feet under Esme's garden! I don't know who Edward will find her, maybe she will find a way to escape! Wondering why she didn't refuse to leave with him from school!? Good chapter.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 50
AAAAARRRRGGGGGHHH. I can't stand waiting like this, you are so so mean.
Edward has to be there at the door, or maybe it is carlisle he wanted Bella too. oh God what would be worse. It just has to be Edward, Jazz and EM. to the rescue.
Poor Bella and just when things start going good for her WHAM she is thrown under a bus again.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:02 AM Title: A Mother's Love
oohhhh end of this chap is....making me scream.
though is great story and i love it. i completely didn't expect something like this to happened.
oh i have questions - where is Bella's cellphone? & it was Carlisle coming in the room, wasn't he?
i can't wait next chapter. God i won't make it till next week ;)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 50
Is it Carlisle?
Date: 27 Mar 2010 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 50
No, no, no!! Not Demetri again. And there I hoped everything's gonna get better now that they've left. I don't think it's Edward at the door, there's no way he found them that quickly. Maybe someone from the hotel staff is arguing with Demetri? Bella has suffered enough by now, she really doesn't deserve anymore trouble.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 50
REally a cliffy i want to cry :( this story just gets better and better OMG i wonder who was on the other side of the door! Next wekk omg you rock! :)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 50
geez, who came to the room???
Carlisle should adopt Demitri and together they should love happily ever after.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 50
What. The. Fuck!!!!......................love this story though.....but please don't let Bella get rapped!!!!...please!!!.....oh damn!!!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 50
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH you took so long to write!!! and then you put in a CLIFFY!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!,
either you can bring out the next chapter some time THIS week or the next chapter has to be MUCCCCCCCCCCCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH longer
LOL, no pressure!
Twilight's evil pixie (twi-pixie)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 50
Oh GOD! Who is it? Carlisle? Marcus? I would suggest it isn't someone who would help Bella, judging by her reaction. I feel a sense of doom and dread. Unless Bella can get away by herself, i don't see how she is going to survive this unharmed. Edward and his brothers have no idea where she is and how to get to her.
A few questions though...when did Bella send the text message? where is her phone now? why hasn't she used it again to contact Edward? why not just fricken knee Demetri in the balls and run?
Also, Edward doesn't think he's changed. But the simple fact that he can see the difference between Carlisle's Edward and Bella's Edward, and that he knows that Carlisle is wrong, shows big change in him. Hopefully Jasper, and perhaps Bella, will be able to remind him of that.
Death to Carlisle, Demetri and Marcus! That is all...
Thankyou for the update. I anxiously await your next installment...
Date: 27 Mar 2010 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 50
HOLY
O.o
pls tell me u will not let anything bad happen to her PLEASE!!! OMG who was it? it couldnt be Edward could he? Daddy C? its Carlisle?! that bastard!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 50
Please don't let them do this to her? She has been through so much already. I know that is good old Daddy C at the door and lord knows she would have no problems in sharing her. Or just take her and rape her himself. At this point if I was her man I would just give up. Take myself out, she is strong
Date: 27 Mar 2010 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 50
Well. I sure didn't see that one coming!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 50
Great Chapter, loved it!
It's Carlisle isn't? Isn't?
Nice job, can't wait for the next one.
P.S. : I'm not whining, i'm just eager about Creating A Mate. Didn't you say you'd have that out before the next Chapter of The Perfect Wife. Again not whining, just curious, and missing my Controlward.
Keep up the good work. ;)
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 50
omg omg omg ... poor Bella
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 50
so carlisle is the voice, right????
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 50
omg my heart is beating so fast. man what was demetri thinking. if edward already popped her cherry then him fucking her shouldn't matter. i know going against carlisle is bad but then again alice was raped and she was still let intot he family because jasper wanted her. edward is to be her husband so what is the big deal daddy dearest.
love it all i hope that beat the living shit out of demetri and loses a few teeth and gets something shoved up his ass.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 50
ohhh god please not Carlisle...
I really could not handle that one.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 50
Sounds like maybe Carlisle showed up instead of her knight. Evil cliffy!!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 50
Great chapter.. I am loving the drama. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 50
ooooohhh so mean!!!! lol
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 50
I was swollowing the paragraph. PLEASE I HOPE IS EDWARD OR THE POLICE OR JESUS. At this point i'm happy with anyone. Your story has the same effect on me all the time every time that i finish reading the chapter my hands start shaking i think is the adrenaline pumping. Can't wait for next week.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 50
damnit thats horrible please let edward save her or maybe its even carlisle i dont care get her back to edward no harm done pretty plz
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 50
It must be Carlisle! Can't wait for the next update!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 50
It's Carlisle, isn't it? Wow, what a cliffie!
Edward's discussion with Jasper was heartbreaking. There is good in him, but his self-assessment was fairly accurate for who he was. Jasper was right, though. Bella loves him. And he IS changing and trying. Reading about poor Alice just tore at my heart.
If it's Carlisle, you just know Demetri is going to tell him what Bella said, and then Carlisle may well decide that since she's already "ruined", she's fair game. Oh, please don't leave us hanging for long
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 50
Oh wow! Only thing worse than Demetri would have to be Carlisle....crap. Poor, Poor Bella. She can not catch a break.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 50
Your leaving me hanging like this, really. The only other person I can think of is Carlisle. Please update as soon as possible I don't want to be left alone with my imagination.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 50
Great Chapter
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 50
Da*g it, I really hate the cliffy. It's freaking Carlisle, isn't it? I really need to read the next chapter now.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 50
Oh my God its probably Carlisle. I can't wait for the update. I feel so bad for both Edward and Bella.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 49
lets hope that Edward is her knight in shinning armor
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 50
dammit stupid demitri and pervert carlise sickos....nice cliffy....damn...
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 50
that was very intense!
Angel
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 50
Ooh, I'm thinking it's Carlisle......
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 50
Awwww I'm dying to know what happens next! But I love this so much, except for the whole Demitri thing of course. Thank you!
Btw I still dont know how to add this to favorites. When ever I click Add to Favorites either above the review box or under the The Perfect Wife story summary area it just takes me back to a screen where at the top is says Your statistics then Add to Favorites. But it really doesnt matter as long as you post to FF.net and let us know about updates.
Anywhooo, thanks so much for the update, love <3
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 50
I'm guessing that it is Carlisle.
There is just no way I am going to believe that you're going to allow Carlisle, Demetri or anyone else to rape Bella at this point in the story.
So, I'm just going to have faith that this will all work out.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 50
Wow! Hey, I don´t want to be mean, i know life gets this shitty for some people, but this is too much. I mean, seriously, if it is Carlisle in there I don´t think she will get it better and I don´t think that Edward can get to her fast enough. Serously, this is so horrible, why make the poor woman suffer even more? She is tougher than anybody gaves her credit for; someone else would have already turned into a lunatic, a corpse, and she still hangs on. Altough she could have tried to run or scream, or tell someone, deny he was his cousin in school or something. But, well, everyone shuts out in times of crisis.
I know you promised a happy ending, but I am sorry, I can´t see how, not right know, everything gets worst, and worst for her.
I really hope Carlisle and his party of fucked-up followers get their punishment, or die, or just disappear. They are really, really insane; beyond insane. The word doen´t need them.
I really hope this gets better soon, otherwise, well this just would be so tragic and depressing.
Take care
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 50
oh crap its daddy evil loved it
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 50
WHAT?!
Come on... Yeah I'm not happy.. LoL
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 50
omg please update soon. the suspense is killing me.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 50
My guess is Carlisle lol......God i just love this...I know I must be twisted too mwwaaaahhhh
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 50
PLEASE BE EDWARD! I don't think I (or Bella for that matter) could take her being violated again, especially in such a brutal way when she experienced so much from making love with Edward. I normally don't say this to authors b/c I think it can be rude, but PLEASE update soon! The suspense will surely kill me!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 50
Oh sweet lord.... why must you torture us so??? Love the cliffy, I'm wondering who is behind the door... Carlisle??
Is it next week yet?
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 50
YOU PROMISE?? next week. I wanna know this poor girl can't get a break!!!
Awesome intense chapter!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 50
thank you so much for the update.. I love Bella ended with a sense of humor, sick sense of humor, but sense of humor none the less.. Please please please continue and post asap!!
;)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 3
this is all crzy but so thrilling at the same time.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 50
he stole her out of class, o m g what a total ******* edward has no idea where she is so who on earth is at the door? carlisle come to claim what he sees as his? or demetri dad came to get bella so to return her not willing to risk upsetting carlisle, please more soon, fantastic chapter
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 50
nawwww that was really scary and sudden
it was totally random but i loved it
whould have wanted to see bellas reaction to when demeti took her though
anyways awesome chapter loved it
pooor bella help her out
pray edward comes to save her in time
UDPATE SOOON!!!!!!!!!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 50
guessing its the prick Carlisle there to rape her too.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 50
Oh shit.
Why do I get the feeling that Carlisle is at the door?
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 50
Great chapter, thank you for writing it. Amanda
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 48
GREAT F#@%EN CHAPTER !!!!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 50
Dun-dun-duh, and the devil aka Caralisle arrives. Stay locked in there Bella! Find a freaking weapon, the calvary is on its way!!!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 50
ahhh death by cliffy!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 50
GRRR!! I thought for sure it would be Carlisle or someone else...now i dont know!!!!
~Tiffany
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 50
Gah, how about an early release for the next chapter as your long term fans have had to follow your story from one internet sight to another! How many chaps is this story anyway? Wow, its been a rough road and I certainly cannot wait for Bella's HEA! Thanks for continuing the story amongst all the drama to continue to provide this story to your loyal readers. It was really hard to make it through a lot of the graphic abuse chapters but for the people who complained about the graphic abuse, I wonder do they realize that their are a lot of EVIL people out there capable of these horrendous acts. As one person mentioned to me, people read to learn and what i've learned from your story is surviving a traumatic experience. What's wrong with that? Abuse is obviously not a pleasant thing to read about but learning to survive is extremely important. Thanks for your continued dedication to the story and best wishes for productive writing.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 50
om fing g whats cliffy please dont leve us hanging to long
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 50
Holy SHIT!!! Tell me it's Carlisle! OMG! ........ I don't know what else to say.....
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 50
Oh shit! Oh shit! Oh shit! I can't stand being stuck in a cliffie spot like this. But this story is just so fantastic put together I can do nothing but wait here, hopefully I'll be patient. Good job!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 50
OMG...it's Carlisle, isn't it?
Please, please and please sprinkled with sugar, put us out of our misery soon with an update.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 50
Cliffhanger. Very, very, very mean!!!!
I hate angst and I hate cliffhangers. I get why you writers have to do them but, that still doesn't make me like them!!!!
I will never give up on a good story no matter how many moments of angst are in them. I just hope that it's in the brotherhood of the writers NOT to torture your readers with cliffhangers in every chapter!!!! That would kill me if cliffhangers at the end of every chapter came true!!!!
Great chapter!!!
Soooooooooooooooooooooooo looking forward to the next chapter when you post it next week!!!!
Cory
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 50
Is it Carlisle at the door? I don't think he's in on it because Demetri made a comment about hoping his father was behind him for this. So, I think Demetri has gone rogue.
Please let someone save her before she's raped or beaten again.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 50
OMG OMG WHO COULD IT BE??!! If it's Carlosle I will seriously cry!!! Please let Edward save her in time please please please please please with a million trilltion cherries on top!!!!!! I love this story and can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 50
Oh, how evil of you to leave us hanging. Is Carlisle at the door? He has to be in on Demetri's plan, right? Edward's gonna have a fit!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 50
Oh Crap!!! Who is it? Who are the other voices!!! Not fair!!! Hurry with the next chapter!! I am on the edge of my chair!!!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 50
PLEASE LET THAT BE EDWARD AT THE DOOR TO SAVE HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 50
i bet its Carlisle, I hope she doesnt get raped
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 46
looks like some drama is coming ...
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 50
I was wondering why you had wrapped the Demitri thing up so quckly before. I should have known!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 50
Please let it be Edware. Please let it be Edward. Please let it be Edward... Bella deserves to get a break. :0) Glad to see that Edward hasn't really gone back to his old ways. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 50
Excellent chapter, and a truly evil place to stop!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 50
Please let Edward as his brothers find Bella before Carlisle or Demetri can hurt her. I think a hit on dear old dad and cousin D are in order and add uncle Marcus for good measure...let's call Jake!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 50
Machete, pliers, and Tar Treatment all around.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 44
YEAH !!!! glad to see they finally got some together
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 50
too short!! talk about torture! some stories I see come innto my inbox and I leave them for later. this one, I must read as soon as it comes in...like I said, TOO SHORT!! is it Carlilsle at the door?
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 50
Well that sucks... poor Bella is going to be even more messed up. I’m betting it’s Carlisle and he wants a piece as well
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 50
Love it as always!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 50
NNNOOOO!!! WHY!!! you are so bad girl!!!...
Thank's... Bye...
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 50
I'm guessing Carlisle? Can't wait to find out who it is? Great Chapter. Kat
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 50
Damn you cliffies!!!!!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 50
Aww poor bella, i hope edward gets to her in time. Glad Edward is feeling hurt/guilty, and trying to make it up to bella/
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 42
Thank you !! what a great chapter...