[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2010 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 48
I wondered how Edward was going to pull that one off!
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2010 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 47
Oh man, I didn't see this coming!;(
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2010 8:43 AM Title: A Mother's Love
Wow... this has been an interesting turn of events for me this evening. I have been following you on twitter so that I could see when you updated. I've been checking in religiously since Jan 24th... so, when you tweeted this evening that you updated, I thought that it was chapter 46... but, when I finally got the site working, there were a fuck-load more chapters. Quite the surprise... and I definitely wasn't prepared emotionally. I always have to build myself up to read this... yes, I really like it... yes, I think you're writing it brilliantly... hell yes, it's fucking disturbing as fuck and makes me cry often and gives me stomach aches... but I honestly didn't think I'd be able to finish them tonight/or maybe ever when I got to the Carlisle, Marcus, Demetri shit... I was literally hyperventilating when Edward had to revert to his old ways to save her. All I will say is thank FUCK you wrote it like that in the basement... I don't know if I could have made it to the end of this story if Edward would have not told her everything and actually beat her. I'm still feeling a little put off by him even though I know he's been under a shitload of pressure to put on a show for the last 2 weeks. I can't wait to get to the end of this story... for justice... for the Bella's Edward to be a permanent fixture.
Their love-making scene was great. Please, I beg you, make their wedding beautiful. You've said that you're almost at the end, and that Carlisle and friends are going to get what they deserve... which I hope is slow and torturous... but please make this story end well. Please... I need more soft, nurturing Edward moments to help me heal from this story. Honestly, I hope the bastard is fucking dead before their wedding so that they can have a real wedding that is filled with love and hope and don't need to pretend for that satanic mother-fer.
Anyway, my main request is for you to please keep your twitter page updated when you update your story. I check it every single day. Also, is it possible for pics of E and B's wedding, etc. I love it when author's provide pics. If not, that's okay... the main thing I want is a HEA... which I'm sure we all want, include yourself. Sorry for my foul mouth... I normally don't speak like this but I get so worked up over this story that I need to release my anger in the form of cuss words... sorry *blushes like Bella*.
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2010 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 46
Delightful;)
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2010 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 45
Oh Edward, if you only knew:(.
Great chapter!
Date: 05 Mar 2010 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 48
I'm so glad he didn't hit her. I had a knot in my stomach and now I can relax a bit and breathe. Hope they are able to fool Carlisle.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 7:09 AM Title: A Mother's Love
Wow, extremely powerful beginning chapter. So sad, but beautifully told at the end.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 48
Oh what a twist normally I can see when the writer is going to do something like this but you caught me off guard i really thought Edward was going to hurt her! I hope Carlisle believes he did!
LOVE THIS STORY!
Date: 05 Mar 2010 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 47
When is Carlisle going to go down!?! I'm almost in tears I'm so afraid for Bella.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 46
OMG i caant wait to see what happens this story just get better and better!
Date: 05 Mar 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 48
I just wanted to say how all consuming your story is.
It took me a long time from when I first heard about The Perfect Wife til I finally started reading it.
I admit the content of it was off putting at first, even though I badly wanted to read it as so many people recommended it and a lot of the FF members have it as a recommended story on the profiles but I finally put on my big girl panties and started reading and I gotta say you are absolutely brilliant in the way you have worded it. What a mind blowing adventure to be taken on and I aboslutely can't wait for an update.
Keep up the fuckinawesome work,you're a fab writer! 0.o
Date: 05 Mar 2010 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 47
Oh NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
Please tell me he explains it to her before he switches to A-HOLE Edward!!!!
Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 43
Great chapter...read on blog! THX
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 48
Oh thank god...that just about scared the shit out of me when is first started to read this chapter. Finally Esme's secret...can't wait! THX
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 47
Well shit...I pray Edward gives her a heads up! I love this story...where it goes I follow! THX
Date: 04 Mar 2010 10:08 PM Title: A Mother's Love
This story is repugnant.
You should have your children taken away.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 48
i just got in to the story and i finnished it in 3 days. i love it and i cant wait for the next chapter. i hope you update soon.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 48
thank good god.
esme's garden is a freakin secret tunnel out of carlisle's house of horrors !
Date: 04 Mar 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 48
Wow what a sad chapter. Atleast Bella knows he was acting, I hope he doesnt do this again,
Date: 04 Mar 2010 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 48
GAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!! I won't sleep till this is resolved...
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 8
this is the most fascinating story that i have read in a long time and i am only on the eighth chapter thank you for writing so well.
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2010 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 48
wow,I am glad that she finally told Edward about what Charlise want to do to her.. I hope he keeps her safe. They have come a long way for this to go bad. I hope that nothing bad happens. you did leave a good cliffhanger.. Please let me know when you up date.. I did not see an alert on this page. will you be emailing up to let us know.. I have been following this story since i found it on Twiilighted and the other networking ones you had it on.. I cant wait to read the next chapter.. thank you
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2010 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 48
wow, yet another good chapter, you never cease to amaze me you truely are a brilliant writer. cannot wait for the next chapter xxx
Date: 03 Mar 2010 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 19
Ok, way to go Jasper. Let me say, I´m a sucker for the angst, and the hurt, or the drama, but I endure some things, but, sorry, tough this idea of yours is interesting and is a good novel, I couldn´t endure read any more than the first two chapters, so I started out on the 13th again and tought I could catch up, but seeing something Bella tought about James´restraint when Edward mentioned he could rape her, I wonder if he already did. I really don´t want to read the details, but I don´t know if James raped Bella, how will Edward react in the future, so i´m asking.
And thus far, I just want to kick Edward´s ass, and Carlisle, and about Charlie and James, I better don´t go there... If I were Bella, I would run as far as I could in spite of not having anywere to go. I supose she has a friend, someone. I would figure it out on the run. Altough, I guess the story would end up there. Take care.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 48
this was an intense chapter, but in the end i felt like a burden lifted off my chest. Thank God she told Edward about that son-of-bitch carlisle.... Great Work :)
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 48
I was so afraid that he'd really hurt her in his effort to appear real in front of the guys and she'd never be able to forgive him. I just hope his plan with the belt doesn't backfire if Carlisle wants to examine her.
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 48
Just refound your story after realizing I hadn't seen an FFN update in ages. Wow, you have done a lot since then! Still, I like this story. I like the characters, even Carlisle. He's so fucked up he can't truly think straight.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 48
whoa, whoa, whoa
man i am so happy that part is over
im looking forward to esme's garden. ive been thinking about it ever since i started reading this story.
great job and keep up the good work :)
Date: 03 Mar 2010 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 48
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you! My pitchfork is down and the fire has been douced. The chapter update was wonderful. I was a little nervous at the beginning, but I pulled through. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE. KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT WRITING!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 48
Wow! My heart stopped when he took her to the basement...i totally thought he was gonna go through with it! Gah lol I love him even more now and im so glad bella finally told him about carlisle that was way overdue. I still have a suspicious feeling about that tho, something keeps telling me what carlisle wants he gets or maybe thats me being really paranoid and scared shitless lmfao Really excited for esme's garden that little tidbit has been nagging at me for freakin ever yay!! :)
Date: 02 Mar 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 48
OMG! Thank God he told her...a little late but better then never...right? :s I'm dieing to find out the secret to Esme's garden! I seriously cant even guess what it could possibly be!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 48
OMG...I was so scared and I really thought he was gonna hit her, but I'm glad ...sooooo glad that he didn't. It really would've ruined everything and I didn't expect her to tell him about Carlisle..I can't wait for the next chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 48
I can't wait for the next chapter keep up the great work...I love this story and always find it a nice break from studying for school... Thanks
Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 48
Amazing. You've done it again. This story is hust so good and I hope you know it. I followed it on FF (bite-me-twilight) and I am so glad that u r still continuing it. Thanks so much.
P.S When will you be updating Better Than Perfect?
Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 48
Omg... I had a thought in the beginning that just maybe he would fake it out and he did. Thank gooddnes he did...I hate Carlise...Get Bella a gun...
Please update soon. I wish I got notifications. I have this story on favorites, I don't get any thought. I just happen to check and bam an update there...
Great chapter.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 48
I can't stand the tension!!!!!!!!! This is a great story hope it resolves soon for my mental health : )
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 48
Wow, thought Edward wasn't going to tell her what was going on there for a minute. At last she has told him about Carlisle's intentions. This is scary stuff. They'll have to act their socks off if they are going to convince Carlisle that Bella should still marry Edward. They have to get the adoption reversed or they won't be able to marry so they can't just escape. Sitting on the edge of my seat here waiting for the next chapter.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
why is this girl not fucking runnung?
also, it would have been nice to add warnings about the nature of your story.
Author's Response:
If you like you can skip the first 10 chapters to get past the graphic beginning. Start at chapter 11 and send me an email. I'll summarize what you need to know.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 48
Love the story! I can't wait till the next chapter!!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 34
He finally sees the light
Date: 01 Mar 2010 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 29
uh oh what is he going to do in Phoenix
Date: 01 Mar 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 48
I'm definitely routing for Carlisle being killed, that way Bella & Esme are safe.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 48
Oh, I almost freaked out when he turned into Monsterward! I am almost hoping that the Cullen boys go vampire on the lot!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Just wanted to say I read most of this story over on FF. When it was gone I was devistated!!! I loved this story!!! So I thought I would never see it again! Then another author moved their stories over here and I find this story once again! I am Excited to say the least! I am so glad I will finally get to see what happens!!!! ~Love~
Date: 01 Mar 2010 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 28
well finally Edward
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 48
huh, hard staff. Your story is worth reading, but really hard to bear sometimes.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 19
yes Jasper is right
Date: 01 Mar 2010 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 14
okay more insight on Edward
Date: 01 Mar 2010 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 48
wheeew i thought carlisle's edward was going to come out to play again
Date: 01 Mar 2010 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 13
hmm still don't know what to think about Edward
Date: 01 Mar 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 48
Love it! This is so anticipating. Please update soon.
Great job!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 48
Okay. I don't think that I have reviewed this fic at all since I started reading it. This story is so unbelievable. It kept me on the edge of seat and for the first time ever, I actually HATED my Edward. I couldn't believe that he was for real. But there is a saying. You live what you learn. That is certainly true. I could not believe the story about Esme and what Carlisle did with the humiliation of her. I AM SORRY BUT I AM GLAD THAT CHARLIE AND JAMES GOT THEIRS AND I CANNOT WAIT UNTIL EITHER EDWARD FUCKING KILLS CARLISE. All three brothers should get together and take his ass down. He is truly sickening. Any way, I just could put this fic down since I started reading. THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR THE AWESOME READING I HAVE DONE. Sherri
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 48
I just started reading this a few days ago. Such a great story. I was so scared to read this chapter. I thought Edward was going to break his promise. It seriously took me a day to just bring myself to read it. And wow..it didnt go like I thought it would. And Im so happy about that. I cant wait to see what going on in the next chapter. And I glad we can finally see the answer to Esmes garden. Hope its plans on how to kill Carlisle without getting caught.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 48
i was wondering what happened to this story on FF and now I know. Love, love love this story. Update soon pleeeaseee i need to know whats up with the garden!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 12
okay usure what to think about Edward
Date: 01 Mar 2010 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
okay kinda sweet Edward
Date: 01 Mar 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 10
okay death is too good for them
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 46
i loved it cnt wait 4 more
Date: 28 Feb 2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 48
Wow...I'm so glad Edward didn't revert back to Carlisle's Edward! And I'm glad Bella finally told Edward about Carlisle. Hopefully the boys can come up with an idea to keep Bella safe. Can't wait to see what Esme's garden is all about. Well done as usual
Date: 28 Feb 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 37
i like this chapter! Finally you can see the change and the want to change in Edward. I love your writing. I have been searching for this story for a long time, i'm happy i finally found it!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 48
well i must admit you really had me worried there but edward came through in the end thankgod xx loving this story xx
Date: 28 Feb 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 48
oh. my. fucking. god.
i don't think i breathed thro this chapter! Jesus Christ, my neck hurts! Oh my God... I.. i can't make a good review. I'm still on shock.
U know u're the best. Don't u forget. I'll try and write something better on the last chapter in a review. but for now.. i can't.
and THANKS for making him believe.
xxx
Date: 28 Feb 2010 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 48
nice chapter~
Date: 28 Feb 2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 48
Oh my GOD!!! I didn't think that I would ever find a fanfic that i didn't like Carlise in but that day has come!! He is so evil and to tell you the truth he scares me a little!!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 48
All I know is this story can only end with Carlisle dying. And I think Esme is the one who has to do it! He is so evil...he is what nightmares are made of.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 48
Omg I was actually about to cry! If Edward had laid a finger on Bella I think I might have!
This was such an emotional chapter... I may need a moment to recover...
I already have a theory about Esme's garden... I really want to see if it's right (oh and I hope Jasper and Emmett can help solve the Carlisle/Demitri/Marcus issue)