Oh gosh i was so scared that Edward will hit her. I have tears of relief in my eyes now. You are great writer. I hope that next chap will be soon. P.S Maybe  Carlisle  will have accident in this story or sth. I will be very happy :D

You are an amazing writer. My emotions felt like a roller coaster: I was terrified for her when Demitri and Marcus showed up, wanted to castrate Edward for reverting back to his old self...then wanted to give him a big kiss for not going through with it.

But as usual, I am still ready to kill Carlisle. Not to sound morbid or twisted or anything, but he really needs to die. There's no way in hell he can change. And PLEASE, if there is any justice in the world, let Esme deliver the final blow.

Update soon,

Morgan

poor Bella

Awww.  Eddie has a heart after all  :)

i would stab them in their sleep

sick pricks

god i would have puked on them

excellent cant wait for the next one

Oh my!Oh jeez!!!! Somebody get the gun!  I chewed my lip,dropped my ciggie, and gulped my drink.  I HATE CARLISLE!!!      P.S. We would follow you no matter where you post.

I love your story so much! I'm glad Bella finally told Edward about Carlisle and I can't wait to see how everything plays out! And I can't wait to find out about the garden!

OMG! I just love ur story! My heart stopped beat in my chest while I was reading the last chapter.

I'm from Brazil, and I just wanna tell ya that you are an increadible writer and your story is one of my favorites!


PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon! I'm dying to discover Esme's secret.

I know this makes me a really bad person but I really hope something really awful happens to Carlisle, Marcus and Demetri. Some kind of karmic payback. That would be sweet!

Oh Shit! Oh Shit!

This is my nightmare..

But I'm here til the end....

Here we go.....

wow i love this story!

I read it when it was still on fanfiction

i think you are an amazing writer and you should consider writing a book of your own! please keep working on this story please!

only just realised you had moved when checked your blog, and came over here to find heaps of updates!....I loved them. Was a bit worried about what E was doing in this CH. but glad it all turned out ok. I keep on thinking that i read that there were cameras in there?...hope not!....and im so glad B finally told him about carlisle

cant wait for more!!!!

So glad he told her the truth. I can understand the need to make it look real, but fuck, he could have given her some kind of warning.

Ooh, the mystery of the garden. Can't wait for that.

DONT U EVER SCARE ME LIKE THAT AGAIN!!!! U NEARLY GAVE ME HEART FAILURE! hmmph. i dont think ill forgive u for that one either!!! meanie! loved it tho... meanie! lol wow im a 27 yr old woman acting like a 5 yr old. oh my.

i want to know the secret of esme's garden and i want that

edward and bella are marring soon... thank you

for this amazing chapture...

Sema.

Holy crap Mic, you scared me there for a second.

Thank you for not letting Edward break his promise and I just hope Bella is able to get some peace soon, and I hope she marries Edward soon as well.

Please don't let the like of Marcus or Demetri get their hands on her.  Then her life will truly be in danger.  Carlisle is bad enough. 

I am glad Edward found away around what he had to do and keep is promise to Bella.  I am also glad she finally told Edward about his father idea of using her.  God I cant wait for the next chapter.  It will be nice to see if my idea on Esme's garden is correct.  Amazing work.

Okay - I'm not cheating and reading any of the other reviews or anything like that... but I'm so hoping Charlie and James aren't actually related to Bella biologically!  heebie jeebies.... ew! 

Very intrgued with where this story goes, though.  Can't wait to continue reading!

Oh. Phew.

I thought it was serious.

lol

I mean, it is serious.

But I don't want her to be anyone else's but Edward's. Nobody elses!

So if he has to do what he has to do, then go for it.

But what they really need to do is beat the shit out of Carlisle, Marcus, and Dmetri. Six guys just need to go at it and have it out. Really, what is stopping everyone from beating the shit out of Carlisle?

And I know I'm going to feel Bella's pain.

I mean, Edward really doesn't have to do what he is about to do.

It's truly sad. I might have to stop reading this. It may have just become too damned much for me.

Knowing abuse personally from a young age, I just want the suffering to end.

Damn you, Carlisle!!

You'll burn in hell!!

*Composing myself*

Back to the story...because that is what it is after all, a story.

I'm so glad Edward made good on his promise and that Bella finally fessed up about Carlisle. But I'm not sure locking her in their room is going to work.

UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE IM BEGGING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Won't Carlisle want to see belt marks?  

Thank you for not hurting her! Please continue to keep her safe!

You know it's a good story when your emotions are on a roller coaster and mine certainly were!

Mic--- I held my breath... THIS chapter had me in tears.... OMG. this chapter just killed me. 

OMG. I wanted to kill him. grab him by his neck.. and slap him... but when he cried with her... as he tried to play the role.... OMG. it was all sooo EMO.

Thank the lord that she FINALLY told him about Carlisle..... OMG. i am just scared that even a locked door won't kepp her safe... **thud** yupper i am fainted.

xoxo--FunkyD.

i have been soo busy and sick.. and moving!! but i just got some free time inbetween everything to finally get here and add you to fav's and try and catch up!!

I heart you Mic... My heart loves E and B as they heal... but EVIL Carlisle.. he just makes me SHAKE! 

xoxoFunkyD.

Whew, that was a close one. Great chapter! Can't wait to know what's in esmes garden. Carsilile really makes me sick!!

nooooooo! i knew it, but i didn't want to be right. damn him! he should just kill carlisle and get it over with - hire sam adn jacob, end of story. it would solve allll these problems!

preggers? oh no! hopefully not. she's going to make a beautiful bride though!

so sweet! a proper engagement! but the calm before the storm... the shit's going to hit the fan

what a bastard! i knew it! i hope edward doesn't take the bait and revert. noooo!

so what was up with carlisle? he must have had embry alter the will. did embry kill them? so many more complicaions!

another delightful chapter! really loving the turn of events, but i have a feeling things aren't going to stay this way - i hope i'm wrong

this is so sad

poor bella#poor edward

kill calisle

holy mother of jesus

i cried the whole story until he hit the table with the belt! i realy feard he would hit her again! thank you that edward kept his promise to bella! it would have killed me otherwise ^^

hopefully Edward is smart enough to explain to Bella why he has to be a monster again... it's necessary to get to the HEA.

i've followed you to the ends of the earth, and i am looking forward to seeing this story follow through.

You're awsomeeeee! I was so scared at first, when he did this to her. But i know now, he love her, more than everything. Thank you, for every word of this story.

WOW, you make me shiver, I wad so afraid of Demetri's behaviour with Bella.

And Bella find the courage to speak to Edward about what Carlisle planned, it's a big step too.

loved reading his side of all this. he really had a breakthrough and i'm pround of him! can't wait to read more!

FINALLY!!!!! she stood up for herself and told him how she felt and he reacted like a normal human being! love the breakdown at the end adn a beautifully written chapter!

fantastic chapter! i love the voice inside edward's head and that he constantly calls him names - its really fantastic! love jasper even more than before - he's such teh little schemer!

I am so thankful that he didn't hit her and he did explain it to her.  And then she told him about Carlisle's threat!  I am now scared that he won't be able to protect her, but locking her in their room as punishment is a good idea.  And he does seem to be aware that others can also open the lock, as he left the key inside the basebment door so no one else could come to watch.  Maybe...

OMG i had to stop like 8 times during that chapter cuz i didn't think I could finish it hahah! I was so nervous hoping he didn't ruin their progress and hurt her :(  I'm so glad she told him about Carlisle's advances and THANK THE LORD ON FINDING OUT SOON ABOUT ESME'S GARDEN!!! hahah much love linz :)

OMG okay so idk why i'm not getting alerts, I'll have to check my settings again---but holy fuck!! When will Carlisle die because I cannot believe he's being this much of a fucking creep and douiche all mixed in one! Although I know how bad he really is and kno he would stoop this low, I never thought it would be taken there :( I'm glad I have another chapter to get through, but I'm seriously freaking out...I hope that Edward screams but tells her to go along with it...they're in such a great place, i seriously will cry if all the work they did to be comfortable and in love gets ruined because of Carlisle the biggest bastard that was ever created in the fic world! hahah

I will just say I was a little nervous. I think more than a little nervous. I was scared to read this chapter. he has worked so hard to get to where he has and man this could have gone a whole other way. i totally understand why he did what he did. It had to be believable. if he would have talked to her maybe not so much. the basement edward is a smart cookie. i am very proud of him. i bet his leg hurts after all that spanking. I sure hope he made a big enough stink with bella that carlisle backs the fuck off. I am so proud of bella for finally telling edward that carlisle planned on taken her nad is wondering if he still is planning on taking her. he is truly one sick fucker. I have someone for carlisle to meet. He is actually edward/masen in the Buried Amongst the Begonias and man that edward is one fucked up boy. I sure Masen edward alter would love to have some fun with carlisle. i would love to hear carlisle scream for mercy and beg for his life. unfortunately masen doesn't like beggers. Maybe for once these people can live there lives. carlisle what happen to you that you treat women this way. Your whole family does so i am wondering what type of sick fuck was your dad. I so love this story. I am glad bella knows why edward did what he did

lovely!

Oh, Edward scared me there for a minute.  I am so glad that she finally told him.  I just hope he can keep her safe.