THANK GOD he told her the truth! That he communicated what was really going on! I was hoping that you would write it that way! Great job

Love this story!

Hehehe you sure had us all scared there for a moment.
But knowing the evil the other Cullens are capable ofn it is nowonder that was so.

I kept reading each line and thinking of all these possibilities and options they had for him not having to hurt her.
But then I would stop and repeat my mantra: I TRUST MIC, I TRUST MIC...
And sure enough you found a way. And even if I believe him not telling had more to do with him not knowing what else to do rather then purposwfully wanting to give reality to the scene, it did work best.
Although I agree with Bella that they need to comunicate for this to work between them.

And the more I think about it the more I decide that I hope you don't kill Carlisle.
I think that for him to live the rest of a very long and miserable life would be better. But I think he would need to be physically weak for that to work. He can not be allowed to hurt anyone ever again.

Thank you for posting so soon and giving us some piece of mind.
Hugs

I was SO SO worried about how Edward was going to handle this. I'm VERY relived that he didn't hit her! Yes, he should have told her before leaving their room, but at least he told her. And I'm very glad that she told him of Carlisle's threat. I really hope this is the worst its going to get and from here on out everything will get better again.

Can't wait to find out the secret of the garden! I think about it each time we have a new chapter. I just can't figure it out.

I was really worried about the punishment, but im so proud of Edward for teh way he handled it! adn Bella finally told him about Carlise!

I am so glad he told her and didn't keep up the act for long! Can't wait to hear about Esme's garden!!!

I am soooooooo glad that this happened I was so scare about what would happen!!!!! I can't wait for thier happy ening...I think the end of Carlisle is coming soon and I can't wait!!!!!

Nicely done! Love that Edward found the solution and managed to keep his word to Bella. I just hope that the basement doesn't have cameras and they aren't found out. And I am so happy that Bella finally told Edward about Carlisle. Can't wait to see what you have planned for us next.

Nice chapter.  I hope Carlisle didn't have cameras in the basement and that Edward can keep Carlisle away from Bella.             Kat

I'm so relived he told her before it went to far. I hope Carlisle is satisfied. Will they ever be able to get from under his thumb?

Oh Mic! I'm so glad this got here so quick after the last chapter! I can't wait to know about the garden- this suspense is KILLING me I hope you know!

*releases held breath*

Thank fuck for that!

What a roller coaster ride. You really get my heart pounding with your writing. So glad how you resolved this chapter.Edward behaved in his typical Edward way - doing what he thinks best, but not clueing Bella in, yet working to keep her safe and Carlisle in the shadows as much as possible.

Looking forward to reading your next chapter to get the answer to Esme's garden.

WOW! I love this story but I am afraid to read each chapter. I think what would I do if I was Bella? If I was Edward? scary stuff but so tender and loving at the same time. You are doing a great job walking that line. cringing waiting or the next chapter. Your story is like walking thru a haunted house .. always waiting to see whats around the corner.

Oh thank God. That's all I can think right now. Thank God. Update again soon please. I liked the fast update.

I was convinced Edward was going to do it all alone and not et Bella in on it at all. I'm so glad I was wrong! He really has come around and there may just be salvation form them all. Well, not Carlisle, Marcus or Demitri who all need to die painfully. I'm especially glad Bella finally told Edward about Carlisle. Through this horrible mess, they really are coming together better than I thought possible.

I'm looking forward to the answsers behind Esme's garden.

In all honesty I was shaking while reading this whole chapter and yes I trust you

I just knew edward wouldn't hurt/beat bella again.  i mean he did have to make it look real so i guess she did get hurt but he is doing his best.  but won't his father have a key to his room so that he could go in there without edward knowing?  couldn't he get to bella anyway?  poor bella.  and she is probably pregnant to boot.  hey wouldn't esme's name have to be on her adoption papers as well...would they just sign over someone to just the father figure?  or now i can't remember how it worked...was it "under the table' sort of law?  I am so confused now aaaaahhhhhh.  anyway they need to run away and get married. or just tie carlisle up in the basement when they get the chance.  yeah, that's the ticket.

Awesome chapter! Thanks for the update!

The crafty Esme has money buried doesn't she?  Like a stash for each of them.  I really would love it if Esme personally killed Carlisle and his creepy family members and buried them in the garden.

Ahhh...I was hoping Edward was just fooling for the benefit of the sadistic cavemen.  It would be awesome if the 3 lovely men ended up in prison and were at the mercy  of men who thought they had pretty mouths and cute tight butts.

Edward has redeemed himself to an extent but I just can't get passed the fact he thought it was okay to not only have Bella trained but let her be trained by her father and brother.  I mean he realizes part of it was wrong but he never dwells on it in his thoughts that they were her FATHER and BROTHER.  She learned kissing, blow jobs,  anal, and her first orgasms from her father and brother.

Can't wait for more!  My review is not aimed at you rmcrms5.  I am totally wrapped up in your story.  I just get frustrated with that Edward character.  But if was the perfect guy, we wouldn't have much of a story now would we?

Thanks!

Amy

poor bella having to go through all that even though it wasnt reall

but at least now they both knnow the truth about everthing

that was an awesome chapter

loveedd itt

UPDATE SOON!!!

p.s cant wait to see some justice on carlise demetri and marcus

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Excellent chapter

Oh my God my heart was pounding so hard when I was reading that chapter. I am so glad Edward did finally tell Bella what was going on.

AAAAWWWWWW!!!!!! so long i've waited for you to update. u are an amazing writer!!! and this story is absolutely engaging, unique, dramatic, and tragic. it is brilliant. i have to tell you, i had a pretty crappy week. in fact, i was just released from the hospitl yesterday. yup, i had to get a bunch of blood transufions... but getting an email saying that you have updated... well, it made my week!!!! love this chapter. can't wait for more.

Thanks,

Alisa

Oh, God. I'm shaking here. I was so afraid there would be no recovering from the rise of Evil Edward. I'm glad Bella finally told Edward about Carlisle. But it seems like a foreshadowing. Please post soon. This story rocks. Demetri makes my flesh crawl.

Thank you for the quick update - that truely was a Birthday treat for me!! I loved that Edward was just putting off The Three Turdwads off the scent! I'm still loving this story, even if it does have me chewing my nails down to the quick at times!! You Rock!!!!

Phew!! I was scared there for a few minutes!!

Love it! I can't wait for next chapter :D I hope it will be soon ;)

.....................this story is slowly killing me. I LOVE IT.  Im still really tense after reading that.

Whoa baby! Edward scared the hell out of me for a little bit but then he caved and Bella was telling him what to do. Pussy whipped freak. Anyway, I love how Bella does have Edward wrapped around her finger. She needs to raise her acting skills up a little more because Carlisle, Marcus or Demetri are not going to be hard to fool especially big bad C. I loved it as always and thank you for updating so soon. I have talking about on twitter since you switched over and telling my fellow readers where to find you. Until next time, keep up the messed up fuckery!

*slowly lowers fire torch* That wasn't so bad. I do feel bad he had to cal Esme a bitch though.

The Garden!! Finally!! that shit has been slowly eating at my insides i wanna know so bad.

Thank goodness I can breathe again. I have been so afraid since chapter 41. I like how everything played out. I think this chapter showed the growth and strength of Bella and Edwards relationship when she told Edward what she forgave him and didnt forgive him for. I love how after being scared liked that she still trusted him enough to be honest about her feelings and that she finally told Edward about Carlisles threat.

Its about freaking time she told him!!!!  I had a feeling Edward was going to put on a show for Carlisle, Marcus and Demitri and not tell Bella.  It's the only way he could make sure she was really scared.  I don't think the other men would have believed any of it if Edward had told Bella, she really isn't that great of an actress.  Thanks for the quick uypdate!  Can't wait to see what is in Esme's garden.....

So glad you wrote this like this. I was at breaking point

oh man. i literally had tears in my eyes when he first grabbed her and took her to the basement. thank God he didn't go through with it! i don't think my poor heart could take that! or Bella's for that matter. i'm so glad she finally told him about Carlisle. i really hope Edward is able to keep Bella safe. she has been through so much already. really great chapter. i can't wait to find out the secret of Esme's garden. update soon!!

Kristi

I can't wait.I was freaked he would trun back to his old self but knew he wouldn't .

Loved it !!!!!!!!!!!

Oh Thank God It Was An Act. You Scared The Beejeezez Out Of Me In The Last Chapter. I Thought He had Become Carlisle Edward.

I was just thinking of how long the weekend seemed to be in coming, and you surprise me with a quick update!

Beautiful. I am SO glad that she trusted him enough to tell him what Carlisle has been planning to do. And I am very, very glad that Edward didn't hit her.

I also loved her fighting back, and that Edward recognized and admired her for it? Even better. Truly, they have both come so far.

Now, let's let them get through the rest of this horrible visit. Fantastic chapter, and I'm really looking forward to finding out if my suspicions were correct about Esme's garden.

::exhales::

Your story makes my palms sweat.  After you wrote the chapter from Carlisle's POV, I had a dream that I was trapped in a compoud with elements of this story.  ::shudders::

I'm hoping that now, things will finally get resolved for our couple.  That things with Carlisle will come to a head and they will be free.  I can't handle the pain anymore!

Thank God that it was over so fast :)

Thank you. That wasn't so bad and thank you for not making us wait. My heart stuttered when I saw the update alert. I am anxious to find out Esme's garden secret.

AHHHH....I could just punch Carlisle!!!!  I hate what he is doing to them!!!  I am glad that Bella finally told Edward about Carlisle though.  He needed to know.  I can't wait to see what Esme has hidden in her garden!!  Update soon!

Oh my goodness!!! Thanks for the update !!

*puts the pitchfork down cautiously..*  *puts kick boxing gear on*  time to kick Carlisle's ASS!!! 

in almost every other fanfic.. carlisle is the good guy... so here it feels so rong that carlisle is evil... i feel like any second he'll idk turn good.. just because Carlisle Cullen IS relatively 'good'... but you.. you made him psycho.. Father Aro psycho ;)

awesome chapter...so glad he idnt acctually hurt her

whewww intense chapter

Ok so Charlie and now James too, train young girls to be their version of perfect wives and then sells them or gives them away. I wonder if they only do this to the Cullen family. From their conversations it doesn't seem like it.

Bella is obviously intended for Edward though. I wonder if Carlisle meant that Edward isn't ready because he's still in med school or because he's resisting his own training - in which he's presumably trained to degrade women and accept and make full use of his "wife".

I can't wait for the rest!!

Oh no! Poor Bella. But at the same time, I'd rather Edward be the one then Dimetri because he's right, I think he would send her back as some lifeless zombie. But still...

Crap, is he really going to beat or hit her...It would be hard for me to forgive him...Why can't he just take her and leave? Damn being under Carlise's control.

I didn't even knew you updated. I just happened to check and seen 2 updates. I added this story as my favorite, but still no alert.

I can't wait for next chapter. Please don't drag this on for a bunch of chapters. Hasn't Bella been thru enough?

noooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, I can't wait, but I just know it will be soooo hard to read next chapter, please please please make Bella understand!!, and everybody!!, they'll be soo disapointed!!!!, I love Edward so much, even if what he's gonna do it's horrible

Wow, this was a twist. Great chatper :)