You know, at Leah's "You're not sorry.  You're trying to ruin my and Will's happiness." (I paraphrased)  I was thinking...Yeah, he's so happy with you, he married someone else.  Jeez, can she not do math and figure out the timeline?

I totally went off on a fictional character...Sigh.

:)

I am behind on my reviews, sorry. I love this story. Can't wait to read what they both think when they finally realize that they have loved each other all these years. Love Motherbear Esme. Tanya scares me. What really happened to Mr. Brandon????

You must be from the south, cause I don't think they have Blue Bell up north. Good story.

Alice is a sneeky little she devil LOl.  Bella is priceless.  Tanya is nuts and should be put away I have a feeling she is going to cause a bunch of shit.  I am so happy that they have made contact.  Are they going to kill Alice when they find out who the other is.????

OME!!!!  What a completely awesome chapter!  Hell, where do I even begin???  Seriously?  I could start by saying what a phenomal cliffie!!!  Holy smokes, I cannot wait to hear THAT conversation!!!

Mojo's pic of him gettin' his sleep on is priceless! 

The way that you write these characters is fab. I love the conversations between each other and especially the ones inside their heads!  Too funny.  And Bella thinking that she only thinks things and that they are not coming out of her mouth.  Well that cracks me up. 

The bit between Rose and Bella?  Wow!!  Never thought about a female Dom training a female sub but you changed my mind on that!  LOL!!!  And Edward's award winning proformance with Tanya?  OME, I totally cracked up!!!  Um, yeah, you might want to ice that...................hahahahaha!!!!

Alice getting all up in everyone's business to make sure all is right in their worlds?  Love that too!  I need an Alice in my life.

I cannot wait to read conversations between Emmett and Bella now that all the cats are out of the bag!  That is going to be some pretty hysterical stuff too I can imagine.

Geez, did I miss anything?  There was so much yummy goodness in this chapter!  Oh well, suffice to say, I enjoyed the heck out of reading it and I cannot wait until you update again!!

Merry Christmas to you and yours!!!
Keye

oh my...Mistress Rose can just talk you into an orgasm, how good is that?! LOL great chapter and I almost feel sorry for T, almost.

Love the update! :)

Youhou....They're gonna talk and play on the phone without knowing who is who...But I've got a little question here missy....Why won't They recognize each other's voice (I assume They won't seeing your prologue!)...I mean yeah it's been years since They saw each other but They're madly in love so They should know his/her voice no???

Anyway, I'm sooo happy you chose Rose to train Bella...We're in for some hot and naughty play sessions :D Can't wait for that!!!

I love the gift Edward chose for Bella but (sorry if this is a stupid question but I wanna know!) what does BEB stand for???

Your EPOV are really always the best, and his dream freaking hot....I sooo love being in his mind ;)

Hope you'll update soon Xxx

Well, I'm really looking forward to them finally interacting some in reality, although dream life's been pretty hot.;D)

Happy holidays, thanks for the rec's

Thanks for the fic rec.

Now this chapter had a lot in it totally loved it. I seriously suspect Edward is going to pay for his lack of honesty with Tanya.

But can't wait for the test scene.

Keep up the excellent work Babe

vbfb1

xoxo

THANK YOU FOR THE CLUE TO BEB ENGRAVING ON THE BRACELET

BROWN EYED BEAUTY

wow, loved your chapter, i was giggling my ass off abotu BElla and R ose's tits.  hmmm, rose, alice jasper and emmett will all know that Edward and Bella will be doina test scene, has trouble written all over  i t.

What an funfilled chapter... I can wait until they get together.

Thanks for your consistent updates!  Have a wonderful Holiday season.

Well, you've got me hooked.  I live for my notification of updates...sad isn't it??!! *grin*

Trying to get a grip.

Excellent Chapter, I would rather have more of this than an outtake or Mojo's point of view, you sound busy but I would sure like another chapter for a Christmas present.

Happy Holidays

Cheryle

OMG!!  That rocked!!  Thank you, honey, for moving us right along here.  That's awesome!!  GREAT, long ass chapter!  Wonderful!!

Maybe by Jan 1st, we'll be back to the Prologue and "the scene" in question?  That would be great!  No pressure!!

I'm sorry, we (your readers) are slave drivers.  I just love this story soo much.  It's very intriguing!  Can't wait to get my BFF to read it.

Thanks for posting early, too.

Now all we've got to do is get through this phone call, Charlie's visit and back to the Prologue.  Right?

I love all the pics, btw.

I can't fucking wait until Edward and Bella realize that "Sir" and "Pet" are each other!!  That will be fucking epic and I can't imagine the fireworks that will occur.  Yippee!!

I think it is fucking insane that you live in Spain and I live in Texas.  I don't know why that blows my mind soo much, but it does.  It's cool.

Outtake on Jasper and Alice would be great as well as a Mojo POV.  Too cute!!  Have a great Christmas season!

Nice ending to a superb chapter!  A little annoyed that Edward is "playing" with Tanya though.

i know i'm new to reviewing your story but i love you haha k so now that that's out of the way this was such a great chapter i love that alice went and did everything she did and i love the fact the bella is comfortable enough with her sexuality to ogle rose and all that and i love how alice rubbed it in afterwards haha this is really a great story and i don't know if i'm just a little slow from the lack of sleep or if you didn't put it for a reason but i'm confused at what beb stood for doll thank you for sharing this story with us :D you are brilliant :D and i can't wait for the next update :D

BEB????

The stalling or build up on these two having their test scene is killing me.  Can't wait. 

Thank you for this story!!

Author's Response:

  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!

Wahh!! I can't wait till the next chapter and their first interaction..even if it's via phone =))

..keep the imaginative juices flowing and update soon ^_^

hehe this is going to be so sweet!.

Krazi - I love this story!!  My new obession I fear!!! 7 chapters and I'm jumping up and down ready for them to find out the truth!?!?   Tanya few nuts short of a PayDay is right!?!?  Things are going to be fantastic with this story!  Happy Holiday's and will anxiously and Patiently I might add, wait for the story to progress... Laterz BB

I like how you've created a situation where Bella and Edward know each other, but they don't know that they have a past yet. I love this story and I will continue to read.

Oh, I so ready for Edward to realize that his "pet" is the one he wants the most, Bella.  How long are we going to have to wait for their scene to happen?  I am very, very patiently waiting.

Damn, Tanya is a psycho or more like a sociopath.

Thank you for the update.  I am always to excited when I see the email letting me know that their is a new chapter for me to read.  I am just like Emmett on Christmas morning.

Well this chapter was interesting.  I love the kisses that Alice sent to Edward. LOL.  As for the phone I would think after years of having a secret love for Bella he would know her voice and vice versa.  So the cell phone was not really believable to me.  I would think that they would have only texted.  Until the actual test scene.  I cant wait for that.  THis is actually getting me all anxious for this training to be over with already so we can see them together at this test scene.  I cant wait to see when they find out who they other is. 

loved it very much but worried Alice is going to mess this up for them They might feel played update when you can thanks.....

Loved the chapter! Can't wait for the next one.

Loved the first chapter, cant wait to read more has my curiosity peaked!

I can't wait to read on...This is going to be crazy fun!Ü

hi again!

So this chapter had me wanting to casterate Jacob. Seriously.

Again, the dream (even if it was a punishment) was great. I'm a little bit of a sub-whore :-P For someone who doesn't deal in the lifestyle, I find you write it well. I'm no pro in D/s, by any means, so maybe you don't...IDK. I believe it ;-)

Thanks for another great chapter!

xoxo,

AG1981

Still loving this story BUT I do have to say that it is wearing on me that you're only updating every two weeks.  Ugh!!  I'm not trying to be a bitch, I just love this story soo much I want it to "move along" and at this rate it'll be next year (literally) before we can get these two together.

I know real life comes first and I will try my best to be patient.

I think you are wonderful, humorous and talented writer.  I will stick with you no matter how long it takes.

Love Alice !!!! So funny

Fucking WOW!!

I've been reading on my phone this afternoon and haven't been able to review until now.  I'm on Chapter 3, now.

This story ROCKS!!!  I just got finished reading your other story TOHTMMW.  It rocks, too!!  I love your sense of humor!!  It's greatness!!

It is going to eat me alive to wait until you get us up to the Prologue, in both stories.  I CAN'T WAIT!!!  You are a tease of a writer.  That's not a bad thing, though.  You're good, girl, keep going!!

You got me.  I thought he wouldn't go through with it.  At least she didn't touch him.  She is so crazy.  I hope she is not too much trouble.  I love this story!!!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Great reveal awesome, sub time masterful, and bath time with Mama Esme mothering.  All-in-all this is a great story.

Bella seems scared of the reality of BDSM. She seems to only like the idea of it. I can't believe she freaked out like she did. She has been reading and watching videos. What she saw should not have shocked her, just maybe the location of it.

I love it!!!  I can't wait to get caught up.  Great job...thanks!!!

Ooooo  good start.  Looking forward to this!

Great chapter as always......  hmmm I want a Domsper.

Damn, Bella and Alice must be related in another life - they both have funny, arguing inner-monologues and they both skirt around the issues and don't communicate well unless they are forced to  It was fun to see some girl-time and the strength of their friendship.  Now I know you are using these chapters to set up Edward and Bella's backstories. which I apprecaite, but I am so excited to get to finally see these 2 characters interact together that I am hopeful you will update really soon!!!

I am soooo lvoing your story. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!! I love the enternal conversations that both Alice and Bella have with theirselves. Even about Mojo, which by the way I love when you write about him. Can't wait for more. Go and write, write, and write.

I'm not surprised that Bella flipped out a bit at the sight of the playroom.  That is definatly something that takes getting used to when you are not expecting it.

I am dying to see what Alice has in store for our little Bella.

FYI, Love, love, love Dom Jasper!!!  Oh my word, moments like that should come with a panty alert.  Like, you need to get another pair if you are going to read this.

thanks for the update & rec's;D)

*sighs dreamily while waving a very large fan* Alice... oh lovely Alice. Now we're getting some where. I do hope we'll get to visit Dr. Domward next chapter... I miss his... his... emo-ness. lol.

Well I can't wait til next time hopefully Alice will have all the stars aligned. She's not going to tell him its Bella though is she... Oh well all the more surprise for him. ;)

Two weeks and counting down... Happy typing!

CrimsonR

Awesome chapter

hurry back can't wait

SO glad you’re back – I love this story and the “back” story, getting us to the Prologue has me on pins and needles – cannot wait to see those two together!  And only a truly gifted writer could have a married virgin – pulled that one out of the hat!

The unrequited (or so assumed) love between these two is great but I absolutely love, even more than Mojo the wonder dog, is the inner monologues!  Even E – I went back a re-read some things “Down boy... caveman much Cullen... just make it through the scene before you order the wedding invitations...”

Such a great story but I, like B, am always left wanting MORE!  And that fuck-hot banner…ummmmm!!!!