Date: 02 Feb 2019 5:51 AM Title: Taken
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 02 Feb 2019 5:27 AM Title: The set-up
Loved it!
Date: 02 Feb 2019 5:08 AM Title: A New Beginning
Loved it!
Date: 02 Feb 2019 4:20 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
Loved it!
Date: 19 Oct 2016 3:40 PM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)
Cruel and sadistic..edward...hate him..or not?
Date: 19 Oct 2016 3:29 PM Title: Hiss Pt.1 (Actual Chapter)
Poor Bella being hopeless little human..i love Tanya..and James because this time theirs character as good vampires.
Date: 19 Oct 2016 1:03 PM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
God!!..i almost vomits when reading this chapters..edward with the blood whore..i really hate that part..damn it!!
Date: 19 Oct 2016 12:28 PM Title: Pull
Love the intensity..awesomely written every words..but one thing..non virgin Edward? Kind of disappointed ..it would be so memorable feelings for mated couple to feel the first time making love/ mating/ fucking...almost make me stop reading because of non virgin Edward.. ( sigh....)
Date: 31 Dec 2015 3:20 AM Title: New Chapter up next.
Please update this story... I mean you are updating living amongst vampires! I like this story just as much and love to see whats going to happen next!
Date: 31 Dec 2015 3:17 AM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)
Really you made their weakness garlic??? Is it the same for Living aongst vampires too?
Date: 19 Sep 2015 10:28 PM Title: New Chapter up next.
please please please finish this story!
Date: 09 Aug 2015 9:40 PM Title: New Chapter up next.
Will you be updating this story?
Date: 28 Jul 2014 1:15 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)
Carlisle is a sadistic bastard
Date: 28 Jul 2014 12:50 AM Title: Urge
whoa what is going on here tanya is being NICE and james and victoria are ANIMAL-DRINKERS Edward's an asshole and Emmett the cuddly teddy bear is a jerk not to mention Esme and Carlisle hate humans has the world gone topsy turvy nice story please continue
Date: 21 Feb 2014 6:53 AM Title: Grand Funk
Pmsl!!! Whaaa? Looool!
Date: 21 Feb 2014 4:36 AM Title: Hiss Pt.1 (Actual Chapter)
No time to eat, Tyggy! This is too good!! Oh but no!! Is this Edward doing the new moon of his own? Gahhh gotta read...
Date: 21 Feb 2014 1:15 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
Wow... can't stop reading this
Date: 20 Feb 2014 1:16 PM Title: The set-up
Wow, very, very interesting!!!
Date: 20 Dec 2013 6:52 PM Title: New Chapter up next.
hope all is well loving this story would love to kill charlise
Date: 16 Dec 2013 7:07 PM Title: New Chapter up next.
will this be updated soon?
Date: 06 Sep 2013 11:01 PM Title: New Chapter up next.
I absolutely love this story! This story is defiantly a 10 in my book! But one question, when might you ladies continue the story? Until then! Dana
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! =) I'll try to update asap. I need to get together with Tyggy and talk it over with her.
Thanks again!
Date: 18 Apr 2013 3:36 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
Are you still giving out the guide? I hope so; please!!
Author's Response:
Yes =)
Date: 18 Apr 2013 3:34 AM Title: New Chapter up next.
I am really enjoying this story!!!! Please please please update!!!! The suspense is so awesome
Date: 24 Feb 2013 2:12 AM Title: New Chapter up next.
WHEN WILL THIS STORY BE UPDATED AND LIVING AMONGST VAMPIRES TOO? I NEED MY FIX
Date: 05 Feb 2013 10:37 AM Title: New Chapter up next.
this is a great story... I hope to read more in the future and im sorry about the hard patch in ur life...
Date: 18 Jan 2013 6:39 PM Title: New Chapter up next.
Love the story! Can't wait for more!
Date: 30 Dec 2012 6:22 AM Title: Urge
Sooooo good!
Date: 30 Dec 2012 5:46 AM Title: The Gauntlet Pt 2
I thought the pee part was brilliant and totally was in character!
Date: 30 Dec 2012 1:11 AM Title: The Gauntlet part 1
Im afraid to read more. You have me so hooked and I just want to read to the end, but i know it's incomplete! Ug, what to do?
Date: 29 Dec 2012 4:44 PM Title: Pull
I trust u. And i love it!
Date: 29 Dec 2012 5:53 AM Title: Taken
I am sooo hooked on this story!
Date: 29 Dec 2012 5:28 AM Title: The set-up
That was brutal and fun :)
Date: 29 Dec 2012 5:11 AM Title: A New Beginning
I just wanna saw awwwwww
Date: 29 Dec 2012 4:58 AM Title: Hate
I like how they are vicious and compassionate at the same time, like humans.
Date: 29 Dec 2012 4:40 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
I did enjoy it! Thank you
Date: 05 Dec 2012 4:22 PM Title: New Chapter up next.
hope rl is better for you.
looking forward to an update
Date: 05 Dec 2012 4:20 PM Title: Unbelievable Right?
sorry to hear
Date: 05 Dec 2012 4:19 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)
can't wait to see what happens. hopin yo might give the guide out still :)
Date: 04 Dec 2012 12:09 PM Title: New Chapter up next.
I am really new to this site and i read your story.I really lie it. My english is not very good but you wrote an awesome story so I thought I shoud at least appreciate it. Iam sorry for not putting a reveiw for other chapters but I hpoe you can forgive me.You are a good writer hpoe you will continue with this story.Also your other story CAMBION is really amazing.I request you to continue it too.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 9:48 AM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.1 (actual chapter)
good
Date: 03 Dec 2012 2:47 AM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)
Very funny ladies...you had me going there the last chapter...This one was fucking awesome!!! You nailed it!! You two certainly have a vivid imagination!!Can't wait for the next chapter! I do hope that there is a HEA & that they both survive it!!
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:45 AM Title: Red Sky (Mini part 3)
wondering if b's reaction is a bit heightened as it seems she picked up on it before e
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:26 AM Title: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)
keep wondering if there is something special with b as she seems to have strong reactions from vampires. wondering if the vampyrcients will have a strong reaction as well or discover it somehow
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:23 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)
:)
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:22 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)
:)
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:22 AM Title: Hiss Pt.1 (Actual Chapter)
:)
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:21 AM Title: We Usually Don't Do This On Here
:)
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:18 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
hi - started reading this and got caught up without reviewing. enjoying this twist to what we normally see for these characters as well as the vampire story line. can't wait to see where you go with this
Date: 03 Dec 2012 12:10 AM Title: Grand Funk
WTF??? LOL!! I am totally lost now...
Date: 02 Dec 2012 6:12 PM Title: Red Sky (Mini part 3)
Amazing story...was not too sure about reading a dark fan fic...it has certainly pulled me over to the dark side!! Thank you ladies!!
Date: 21 Oct 2012 9:59 AM Title: New Chapter up next.
Prayers to you two too. Thanks for staying with the story. Am looking forward to the next chapter & congrats on your successes.
Date: 21 Oct 2012 4:38 AM Title: Unbelievable Right?
More please
Date: 15 Oct 2012 3:24 AM Title: New Chapter up next.
Hi,
Um.. How do I subscribe to this story? I normally use fanfiction and there is a 'follow' box to click in. I don't see one with twcs.
thanks
Bec
Date: 12 Oct 2012 9:28 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)
Oh yeah, dominant Edward has woken up. I hope they take head of her warning and get the fuck out. I'll stay and keep the fit one (cant remember his name) company lol.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 8:15 PM Title: Grand Funk
?? I take it someone was dreaming a really weird dream lol
Date: 12 Oct 2012 7:31 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.1 (actual chapter)
Dimitri is a good guard to Edward, I hope that Bella treats him better than she has so far. After all he is helping them
Date: 12 Oct 2012 7:07 PM Title: Red Sky (Mini part 3)
Oh Edward is changing too, this should be a good fight between emmett and him, if they catch up to each other. I hope he has managed to get Bella away to safety.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 6:57 PM Title: Red Sky (Part Two-Mini)
Wow can I have Lulkis..pretty please, I am not above begging. He could definitely go Dom on me, I wouldn't have a problem submitting to him lol.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 6:47 PM Title: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)
Oh sounds like the fun is starting..not that it hasn't already but I think the camps are going to get a rude awakening
Date: 12 Oct 2012 5:52 PM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)
Jasper is a sneaky SOB, and poor Bella is caught up in the middle of all the drama and family hatred.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 5:30 PM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)
Poor Bella witnessing Edward in his true asshole form must not have been pleasant for her at all. I hope he gets a better attitude as time wears on otherwise Bella will truly despise him despite them being mates
Date: 12 Oct 2012 6:57 AM Title: Hiss Pt.1 (Actual Chapter)
Wow.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 1:07 AM Title: Urge
Not sure that Tanya knowing will be a problem, after all sex is allowed. Maybe Bella and Tanya will become good friends.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 12:09 AM Title: The Gauntlet part 1
Oh jasper is playing with fire. Lol. Edward serves this kick up his ass.
Date: 11 Oct 2012 11:44 PM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
Oh dear will jasper try and buy her and use her as a personal slave. He is bound to try and do something to tease and taunt Edward.
Date: 11 Oct 2012 11:01 PM Title: Pull
Oh yay they met again. Only who is gonna stop Edward from taking what is his.
Date: 11 Oct 2012 10:32 PM Title: Taken
Oh so close yet so far away. They still have that amazing bond, but will Edward be able to find her again.
Date: 11 Oct 2012 10:09 PM Title: The set-up
Edward will surly kill Caius when he gets older for the killing of his parents
Date: 11 Oct 2012 9:48 PM Title: A New Beginning
Great story so far, really looking forward to these two meeting up and read about this bond they had
Date: 11 Oct 2012 9:36 PM Title: Hate
Aww well at least Bella was safe..for now anyway
Date: 11 Oct 2012 9:26 PM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
This sounds sooo good
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:47 PM Title: New Chapter up next.
sorry to hear about the troubles, but good luck with your new challenges in publishing. well done on your positive attitude too! I look forward to the next chapters.
Date: 11 Oct 2012 7:25 AM Title: New Chapter up next.
ty so much
Date: 11 Oct 2012 1:57 AM Title: New Chapter up next.
yay for more! sorry about the cancer
Date: 11 Oct 2012 12:50 AM Title: New Chapter up next.
au plaisir de vous revoir...
Date: 10 Oct 2012 11:23 PM Title: New Chapter up next.
Eeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!! I can't wait!!!!!!! I'm sorry about jellybeans grandma :/ mine means the world to me :/ I'm happy to know this story wasn't abandoned ^_^
Date: 10 Oct 2012 11:06 PM Title: New Chapter up next.
Flouncing! So annoying when you get an alert thinking that a story you were really enjoying that hasn't updated in forever has finally updated, only to find that it's another typical pity party excuse for why there is no update!
Author's Response:
*yawns* Sorry for having a life. Those do seem to get in the way of fanfic doesn't it? Oh..sorry. My bad. You must not know. lolol Bye kidd! *waves*
Date: 10 Oct 2012 8:35 PM Title: New Chapter up next.
So glad to hear from you! Our prayers will be with your Grandma...we've lost several family members to cancer. Think good thoughts and try to stay positive. Your new mantra? One day at a time, some days will be easier than others. Keep repeating that. Take care.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 8:27 PM Title: Revolutionary Red pt.1 (actual chapter)
Bella is so stupid sometimes. Her pitiful bravery can get her kill. She comes off annoying in certain situation.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 7:44 PM Title: New Chapter up next.
Thank you!!!
Date: 10 Oct 2012 7:54 AM Title: New Chapter up next.
So good to hear from you. I am sorry to hear about Jells grandmother I have her in my prayers. Congragulations on school keep it up.