Date: 21 Feb 2012 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move
Shoes, words, and probably passion and tension is flying between these two for a long time.
It is going to be fun to see how they treat each other.
I like your nicknames for the characters, which Bella gave Rosalie, Emmett or Jasper.
Date: 21 Feb 2012 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move
While it's not good to hear that your son wasn't feeling well it IS good to hear that you discovered another thing to stay away from, discovered a way around it and most importantly that he is feeling better!
now the chapter... I effin' love Prezward and Bella and the dynamic between those two! I can't wait for the blood shed those two will cause when working closely together! oh and Alice is back! yay this hopefully means "Surfer Ken" get's his Barbie that isn't stuck in a Business Suit! cos I've heard the Business Suit Barbie LOVES Oafs :-P
Alice
Date: 21 Feb 2012 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes
well I am assuming that B got fired cos of the shoe incident. Also I loved the chapter! great work!
Alice
Date: 21 Feb 2012 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home
Just started the story. And it is so great. Especially the ending of this chapter. Seth vomiting over the President. The visual is epic. :)
Really funny. I am curious, what will happen next to them and if they will have their happy ending.
I guess it would be good looking, when they hook up for President Edward, with more votes from hopelessly romantic females ;)
Date: 21 Feb 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move
loved the chapter looking forward to the next one
Date: 20 Feb 2012 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move
wow i hope your little keeps doing better. so much to look for. i give you props for being so dilegent with your son and knowing what to look for and do.
so bella is going to work for the president
omg i bet shoes will be flying. edward i am sure is looking forward to more attitude but maybe behind closed doors instead of in front of others.
bella still needs to be respectful he is the president and not just a man
love it
Date: 20 Feb 2012 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move
all the additives in our food are not good for us. I have asthma. My doctor said better description is reactive airway disease. I have been tested for allergies to penicillin and it comes up negative, but once injested I go into antiphlatic shock. I get all this on a personal level. Extremely allergic to sulfa drugs. My biggest problem is chemicals whether in the environment or in medicine.
I think Bella is abrasive. I think a mother in her shoes would do almost anything to have good health care for her child. I think a good job where she can come home not worn out to take care of said sick child. My mother used to say "you get more with honey than vinegar". Bella needs to hear that daily.
Date: 20 Feb 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move
your poor little angel....stay well little one!!!!
TY for another round of the tongues and verbage of PrezWard and Bella
Date: 20 Feb 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move
I'm glad your little guy is on the mend! Scary allergies- very, very scary!
As. Stressed as she is at this point, Isabella needs to start toning things down a bit. Yelling is clearly getting her nowhere whereas concise information has. ( the threat handled promptly). The President needs a reality check here. A single mother on a low paying salary affording Jimmys?! Not in this lifetime! Isabella can dress professionally and yet less costly. I somehow keep seeing Seth as the joining point for these two people. Loving the. Story!! Thanks!
Date: 20 Feb 2012 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move
:)
Date: 20 Feb 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move
Great update, thanks. These two are really a pair. Still surpised she's not behind bars, at least as a lesson in knowing when to STFU.
OMG, your sweet little boy. So sorry.
Date: 20 Feb 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move
Love this ff! <3 More please!
Date: 20 Feb 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move
She`s a bit too much, in my opinion.Maybe an excess of hormones?I don`t know why but maybe she needs Alice to put a stop to her irritation.All in all it`s a very interesting twist from the classic Edward and Bella characters.
Date: 20 Feb 2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move
Boy are gonna be stressed out until they finally fuck. I could barely see the words the sexual tension is so thick.
Date: 20 Feb 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move
I am so sorry about your son, but glad he is doing better. I truly love this story. I am at home LOL by myself. My kids would think that I am crazy if they walked in.
Date: 20 Feb 2012 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home
omg! I love this little one!
Date: 20 Feb 2012 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations
aah Edward - this is why we love you!!
Date: 20 Feb 2012 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
oh my!
Date: 20 Feb 2012 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
I have been holding off to begin your story so that I would have a good few to read in one go! Loved the begining!
Date: 20 Feb 2012 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move
OMG i am so happy for yet another prezward update i love the way these two interact can't wait to see what happens next i think Bella is just the fire Prezward needs.
Sorry to hear you son is having a hard time of it. I hope he is feeling better soon
Author's Response:
Woman, first off, thank you sooooo much for putting my banner up on twificpics and reccing the story out, I've gotten a lot of new readers because of you, so thank you, you amazing woman. Secondly, I hope you continue to love the story. I always look at your banner before starting and it helps me write faster. And, lastly, he is feeling better now, and I found a safe sliced ham for him. So YAY!!!!
Date: 20 Feb 2012 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes
i think she is blaming him for her actions lol
Date: 20 Feb 2012 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes
you really can't talk to the President like that.
Date: 19 Feb 2012 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes
Bella lost her job because of her own action against the President. Yes, he did keserve it, but if you go after the President or United States, everyone in America will hate you. Look at the Dixie Chicks..Yeah, if you even remember who they were...said a comment about not being proud of America...bam..careers gone...
Date: 19 Feb 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes
Little firecracker.
Date: 19 Feb 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes
they fired her...wow...jerks..update soon
Date: 19 Feb 2012 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes
A more than realistic read on today's political dominos. Cause and AFTEReffect. By the way, Vice President Cheney? Brilliantly funny! Sooner or later Edward is going to realize that Bella is not just like everyone else.
Date: 19 Feb 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 19 Feb 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes
it just keeps getting better and better
wow now she wants a job. well i guess because the store woudn't keep her
that is tuff. she is trying so hard and being a single parent is hard. you are mother father and friend. and in her case she is also a doctor watching after her son.
love the story
Date: 19 Feb 2012 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes
She got her mouth going and go herself into this. Yes she is frustrated, you have to use your brain first. Now they have fired her. Obviously
Date: 19 Feb 2012 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes
:)
Date: 19 Feb 2012 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes
Obviously, Bella got fired fom her job.....people don't like it when you mess with a favorite prez!
Great chapter!
Date: 19 Feb 2012 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes
:)
Date: 19 Feb 2012 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes
ooooo i so love this story i am like a happy kid in a candy store when i see an update for this in my inbox.
I cannot wait to find out why she got fired but i'm guessing his agents ahd something to do with it.
Date: 18 Feb 2012 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
WOW, that was an interesting chapter!
Date: 18 Feb 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
Oh, shit. I didn't think about the backlash towards her. Well, now they need each other.
Date: 17 Feb 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
ugh oh what is edward going to do people r cruel update soon
Date: 15 Feb 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
Oh no, now she will be forced to stay at the white house so Eddie can keep her safe??? Oh, please say it's so????? Can't wait for more.....
Kay
Date: 15 Feb 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
good chapter
Date: 15 Feb 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
omg!!! Please hurry with the next chapter! I hope she tell Edward! <3
Date: 15 Feb 2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
:)
Date: 15 Feb 2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
oh man this is gonna be bad I have a feeling... loved the chapter! Can't wait for more!
Alice
Date: 15 Feb 2012 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
I think Bella is going to be moving into the white house
Date: 15 Feb 2012 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
wow it is amazing how some people take things that are not done to them so personal.
she was trying to get someone to listen to her pleas. maybe going about it the wrong way
people don't have the right to threaten someone else that is wrong
Date: 15 Feb 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
He will probably handle it like the self centered asshole that his is.
Date: 15 Feb 2012 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
Ok the desert storm guy was out of line. Trust me, Us military people aint really keen on most of the CIC's.
Date: 15 Feb 2012 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
Nooooooo.... you DID NOT just leave us here. The "b" word comes to mind.
Fantastic update!
Date: 15 Feb 2012 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
Throwing a shoe was childish. This is America people protest. She did not threaten the president. She was against the bill. She made a point that would cause people including him to stop and not just do the status quo. People in the military can not protest! We are not in a third world country where you can not speak out. She acts childish and self centered because her life is pretty much a big stress party.
Those people are not patriots.
Date: 15 Feb 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
I really really enjoyed this update!!!! Bella's attitude was much better and she is beginning to understand the depth of what she's done. Maybe she'll be a little more humble to the president for forgiving her. Good Job!!!!!!
Date: 15 Feb 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
Wow - I didn't expect that! I don't think I even realized that she might face repercussions with the public. I think Edward is going to be PISSED bigtime! He seems to be a wee bit protective of her, when he's not letting his anger take over. Of course, she doesn't help that by being quite so bitchy.
Anyhoo, now seeing this whole public threat come into play, I will have to think more about who will crumble first. Hmmm...I still think he will come down first (peg-wise), but it might happen sooner with her being threatened. Now, to sit back and wait for the next chapter. (And yes, I actually sat & thought about that for a few minutes before I typed it!)
Thank for the update! See ya soon!
~allidel :)
Date: 15 Feb 2012 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
looking forward to the enxt chaqtper
Date: 15 Feb 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
ooooo Bella the nut jobs are on the war path now. Me thinks prezward my actually step up to the plate on this one. I hope?!!!
Date: 15 Feb 2012 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
this is such a good story
Date: 15 Feb 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
Was not expecting this turh of events, but like it! Like Prezward, even tho he has a big "head", haha. I too would vote for this Prez, hands down!. Write fast! Thank you Cheri
Date: 13 Feb 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules
I love that she was on speaker without even realizing it or that both Edward & Rose were in the room. I'm not angry or disgusted with him, though I find him quite cocky and am looking forward to Bella bringing him down peg ny peg! Maybe as she does that, he can slowly bring down her walls. I am intrugued to see which happens first or if they will occur at the same time. Right now, I'm going to put my money on Cullen coming down first. Now, I can't wait to see if that becomes true!
~allidel :)
Date: 13 Feb 2012 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules
good story so far but Edward is an asshole
Date: 13 Feb 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules
raises hand. he's a total asshat. like all politicans, out of touch withwhat average americans have to do on daily basis to survive. stay strong bella.
Date: 13 Feb 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules
I'm suprised she has so much energy to be so angry! I'm exausted just from hearing her rant. I think she needs a long hot bath and to take a chill pill. He is trying to help her and all of the others like her after all.
Date: 13 Feb 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules
i think of her as strong and needed to be assertive to get her way or noone hears her. especially with her sons illness she is up to date on what is going on but not many doctors are. she needs to be strong and outspoken so others hear her.
love it
Date: 13 Feb 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules
Love this!! xD Hope they get romatic .. <3
Date: 13 Feb 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules
You know I love your writing, however, how can he rearrange his schedule on a moments notice, it's in place months ahead of time. (Yes, it's Fiction I know) He would have had to clear his schedule overnight, don't think that's possible. Now a Saturday might be, but doubt that too. I'm glad he got and earfull of her opionions of him, sooo deserved it.
Thanks for the update.
Date: 13 Feb 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules
I'm enjoying this story alot! I can't wait to see them come together. I also would like to see Seth get better.
Date: 13 Feb 2012 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules
I am not angry with him. He is actually so removed from these issues he acts just like that. He is priviledged and what President is not? I think when she is so rude to him it makes him worse. He gets defensive then he gets aggressive.
I think Bella could act a little more mature. Her burden is her raising a child with special needs alone. If there was a daddy present she would have her load lessened. All parents with special needs children need additional help getting them raised.
Date: 13 Feb 2012 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules
lovedthe chapter
Date: 13 Feb 2012 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules
somehow I have a feeling the "asking her to lay across my desk so I could fuck her" will eventually happen :-D
and yeah I enjoy Prezward Asshat as well and I find Bella's bitchyness very amusing! loved the chapter!
Alice
Date: 13 Feb 2012 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules
Is he really an asshat though? He didn't press charges for the flying Jimmy, bearing in mind he is da man!
he's hot! I love Pres Cullen, he's actually been v.patient with angryella!
I want some oval action......
Date: 13 Feb 2012 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules
I still think that President Cullen is an arrogant prick that acts like a petulant child. Love Bella as the bitch who could care less who he is!
I know about Master work and a real job. I feel you.
Date: 13 Feb 2012 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules
that was wonderful and pretty hilairious in parts
Date: 13 Feb 2012 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules
I love Bella's fire she dont give a shit who he is her family comes first. He is acking like a little kid that is not getting the new toy that is out lol. I cant wait for the meeting.
Date: 13 Feb 2012 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules
ooo Prezward has a hardon for Miss Swan something fierce i so have the mental image of him fucking her over his desk stuck in my mind please tell me that will eventually happen ;)
Date: 13 Feb 2012 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
I love this story. Do the crime put in your time. LOL
Date: 10 Feb 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
He is not going to let her go that easy he love the fire in her . Rose is trying to do her job she is a bitch but that is how she gets things done.
Date: 10 Feb 2012 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
well while I definetly am not a fan of Rosalie I don't mind Edward so much. Though I find it hilarious that Bella keeps calling him an asshat! I really loved the chapter and I think I'll definetly rec the story on twitter... btw do you have a twitter?
Alice
Date: 10 Feb 2012 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
Oh Asshat needs a swift kick in the arse along with Dippy Dr G.
Date: 10 Feb 2012 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
love this story!
Date: 10 Feb 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
love it
i do not hate edward. i think just a littl misguided. bella is great. i love her snarky perky attitude. i would have like to see her hit the president just once more. rosalie just comes off as a bitch even more so. you love to hate her. it seems she doesn't have a likeable bone in her body. charlie he means so much good and just made a mistake.
love it
Date: 10 Feb 2012 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
Well I'm really loving it. I'm not feeling the hate for the PresWard yet..All politicans are smugs Turds and Asshats, but I'm over looking that little fact for the sake of the story.. I think Rose is doing what she thinks is he right thing for her job... I think she is seeing that Seth is a sick little man.. Dr Gerandy ticked me off more in this chapter than Edward did... but yea, that's just me... ***Team BellaWard, I guess you figured that out huh? :-)***
Love the story and I will be more than happy to recommend to others ...till next chapter Kathy
Date: 09 Feb 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
oooo i can so see this getting fiery cannot wait
Date: 09 Feb 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
What a sweet guy. Coercion and blackmail. Nice presidential behavior.
Too bad she can't slap the shit out of him. And, she's already had one day off from work, he's going to make her lose her job. Can you call the president a bastard and get away with it?
Great story. Thanks for the update.
Date: 09 Feb 2012 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
Edward is being a prick! Bella is being a royal bitch! and Rosalie is just a bigger bitch than Bella. Ok I guess that sums it up. But on a brighter note, Seth is a cutie!
Date: 09 Feb 2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
Cute story! I wish the reality could be so easy. And I think it is a good idea to let Bella help to overwork the bill. I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter.
Love - Tiina
Date: 09 Feb 2012 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
Belle seems a little to hard. She is constantly bitting peoples heads off, is she so focused on her own situation that she has no repect for anyone else? It makes it a little hard to relate to her character, I think you should show us a softerside of her with someone other than her son or father. Other than that I'm really enjoying the story!
Date: 09 Feb 2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
well well well edward blackmailed bella so not the way to get her help that you need...update soon
Date: 09 Feb 2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
:)
Date: 09 Feb 2012 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
I don't hate the Pres right now. He did talk to her about that. Are they using her and her son? Probably. The thing is if she is helpful to them, then other people like herself will benifit. Her son will benifit. So you bite the damn bullet and proceed with something you would rather not do. She threw a shoe and for that she pays a price, this is small.
Political people are all users.
Date: 09 Feb 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
I can't wait to see what asshat does tomorrow!
update soon, its fab!
Date: 09 Feb 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
It is Rosalie's job to make the President look good, but she still is a coniving bitch!
President Cullen is still a sanctimonius asshole who needs to learn some manners. I can believe that the stooped to blackmail to enlist because he does not have any social skills what so ever. His family name and panty dropping smile was what got him elected!!!
I did notice that you threw in the pulse of electricity that surged through my body under his touch.
Date: 09 Feb 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
I'm not hating Edward right now, because I don't think he's in favor of using Seth to get votes. Working with Bella to get votes? Maybe. But I do not like Rosalie for even suggesting using Seth. I can't wait to see what happens when they work together! :)
Date: 09 Feb 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
OK I love spunky Bella!! I'm not sure about Rosalie but President Assward is hot!!! :)
Kay
Date: 09 Feb 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
I don't hate the prez. I think he's intrigued by Bella but can't figure it out so he's going to use the bill to to so.
Great
Date: 09 Feb 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
iipp!! <3 Can't wait til they get romantic! <3
Date: 09 Feb 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
looking forward to seeing what happens next
Date: 08 Feb 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency
Talk about getting lemons and making lemonade! You do your son proud by bringing this issue to such a vast audience and educating them. Who knows, you just may be the catylyst for change or better yet, the saving of a life!
Your story, by the way, is marvelous in its own right. It's current and the characters are fleshing out well. Thanks for an excellent read! I'll be looking forward to your updates!
Date: 08 Feb 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency
I love this story but I am sad to hear that your son has this condition. I think it's very comendable that you not only take care of your son but also draw attention to a rare condition with your writing! and I absolutly loved Bella's reaction!
Date: 08 Feb 2012 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency
I can't get enough of Presward! Update soon, pretty pretty please.....
Date: 08 Feb 2012 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency
oh wow..!! Can't wait for more!! <3
Date: 08 Feb 2012 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency
Well I love a mom protecting her baby!! ":)
Date: 08 Feb 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency
:):):) keep them coming really enjoying this story :D