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Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move

Shoes, words, and probably passion and tension is flying between these two for a long time.

It is going to be fun to see how they treat each other.

I like your nicknames for the characters, which Bella gave Rosalie, Emmett or Jasper.

Reviewer: germanAkice Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move

While it's not good to hear that your son wasn't feeling well it IS good to hear that you discovered another thing to stay away from, discovered a way around it and most importantly that he is feeling better!

now the chapter... I effin' love Prezward and Bella and the dynamic between those two! I can't wait for the blood shed those two will cause when working closely together! oh and Alice is back! yay this hopefully means "Surfer Ken" get's his Barbie that isn't stuck in a Business Suit! cos I've heard the Business Suit Barbie LOVES Oafs :-P

Alice

Reviewer: germanAkice Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes

well I am assuming that B got fired cos of the shoe incident. Also I loved the chapter! great work!

Alice

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home

Just started the story. And it is so great. Especially the ending of this chapter. Seth vomiting over the President. The visual is epic. :)

Really funny. I am curious, what will happen next to them and if they will have their happy ending.

I guess it would be good looking, when they hook up for President Edward, with more votes from hopelessly romantic females ;)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move

loved the chapter looking forward to the next one 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2012 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move

wow i hope your little keeps doing better. so much to look for. i give you props for being so dilegent with your son and knowing what to look for and do. 

so bella is going to work for the president

omg i bet shoes will be flying. edward i am sure is looking forward to more attitude but maybe behind closed doors instead of in front of others.

bella still needs to be respectful he is the president and not just a man

love it

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2012 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move

all the additives in our food are not good for us. I have asthma. My doctor said better description is reactive airway disease.  I have been tested for allergies to penicillin and it comes up negative, but once injested  I go into antiphlatic shock. I get all this on a personal level. Extremely allergic to sulfa drugs.  My biggest problem is chemicals whether in the environment or in medicine.

 

I think Bella is abrasive. I think a mother in her shoes would do almost anything to have good health care for her child. I think a good job where she can come home not worn out to take care of said sick child. My mother used to say "you get more with honey than vinegar". Bella needs to hear that daily.

 

 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move

your poor little angel....stay well little one!!!!

TY for another round of the tongues and verbage of PrezWard and Bella

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move

I'm glad your little guy is on the mend!  Scary allergies- very, very scary!  

As. Stressed as she is at this point, Isabella needs to start toning things down a bit.  Yelling is clearly getting her nowhere whereas concise information has.  ( the threat handled promptly). The President needs a reality check here.  A single mother on a low paying salary affording Jimmys?!  Not in this lifetime!  Isabella can dress professionally and yet less costly.  I somehow keep seeing Seth as the joining point for these two people.  Loving the. Story!!  Thanks!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2012 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move

:)

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move

Great update, thanks.  These two are really a pair.  Still surpised she's not behind bars, at least as a lesson in knowing when to STFU.

OMG, your sweet little boy. So sorry.

Reviewer: KarenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move

Love this ff! <3 More please! 

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move

She`s a bit too much, in my opinion.Maybe an excess of hormones?I don`t know why but maybe she needs Alice to put a stop to her irritation.All in all it`s a very interesting twist from the classic Edward and Bella characters.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move

Boy are gonna be stressed out until they finally fuck. I could barely see the words the sexual tension is so thick.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move

I am so sorry about your son, but glad he is doing better.  I truly love this story.  I am at home LOL by myself.  My kids would think that I am crazy if they walked in.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2012 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home

omg! I love this little one!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2012 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations

aah Edward - this is why we love you!!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2012 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here

oh my!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2012 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly

I have been holding off to begin your story so that I would have a good few to read in one go! Loved the begining!

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2012 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move

OMG i am so happy for yet another prezward update i love the way these two interact can't wait to see what happens next i think Bella is just the fire Prezward needs.

 

Sorry to hear you son is having a hard time of it. I hope he is feeling better soon



Author's Response:

Woman, first off, thank you sooooo much for putting my banner up on twificpics and reccing the story out, I've gotten a lot of new readers because of you, so thank you, you amazing woman. Secondly, I hope you continue to love the story. I always look at your banner before starting and it helps me write faster. And, lastly, he is feeling better now, and I found a safe sliced ham for him. So YAY!!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2012 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes

i think she is blaming him for her actions lol

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2012 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes

you really can't talk to the President like that.

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes

Bella lost her job because of her own action against the President.  Yes, he did keserve it, but if you go after the President or United States, everyone in America will hate you.  Look at the Dixie Chicks..Yeah, if you even remember who they were...said a comment about not being proud of America...bam..careers gone...

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes

Little firecracker.

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes

they fired her...wow...jerks..update soon

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes

A more than realistic read on today's political dominos.  Cause and AFTEReffect.  By the way, Vice President Cheney?  Brilliantly funny!  Sooner or later Edward is going to realize that Bella is not just like everyone else.  

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes

looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes

it just keeps getting better and better

wow now she wants a job. well i guess because the store woudn't keep her

that is tuff. she is trying so hard and being a single parent is hard. you are mother father and friend. and in her case she is also a doctor watching after her son. 

love the story

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes

She got her mouth going and go herself into this. Yes she is frustrated, you have to use your brain first.  Now they have fired her. Obviously

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes

:)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes

Obviously, Bella got fired fom her job.....people don't like it when you mess with a favorite prez!

Great chapter!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes

:)

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes

ooooo i so love this story i am like a happy kid in a  candy store when i see an update for this in my inbox.

 

I cannot wait to find out why she got fired but i'm guessing his agents ahd something to do with it.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2012 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions

WOW, that was an interesting chapter!

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions

Oh, shit. I didn't think about the backlash towards her. Well, now they need each other.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules

:)

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions

ugh oh what is edward going to do people r cruel update soon

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions

Oh no, now she will be forced to stay at the white house so Eddie can keep her safe??? Oh, please say it's so????? Can't wait for more.....

 

Kay

Reviewer: Ladyros Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions

good chapter

Reviewer: KarenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions

omg!!! Please hurry with the next chapter! I hope she tell Edward! <3 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions

:)

Reviewer: germanAkice Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions

oh man this is gonna be bad I have a feeling... loved the chapter! Can't wait for more!

Alice

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2012 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions

I think Bella is going to be moving into the white house

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2012 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions

wow it is amazing how some people take things that are not done to them so personal.

she was trying to get someone to listen to her pleas. maybe going about it the wrong way

people don't have the right to threaten someone else that is wrong

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions

He will probably handle it like the self centered asshole that his is. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2012 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions

Ok  the desert storm guy was out of line.   Trust me, Us military people aint really keen on most of the CIC's.    

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2012 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions

Nooooooo.... you DID NOT just leave us here.  The "b" word comes to mind.

Fantastic update!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2012 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions

Throwing a shoe was childish. This is America people protest. She did not threaten the president. She was against the bill. She made a point that would cause people including him to stop and not just do the status quo. People in the military can not protest!  We are not in a third world country where you can not speak out. She acts childish and self centered because her life is pretty much a big stress party.

 

Those people are not patriots.

Reviewer: bluebelle11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions

I really really enjoyed this update!!!! Bella's attitude was much better and she is beginning to understand the depth of what she's done. Maybe she'll be a little more humble to the president for forgiving her. Good Job!!!!!!

Reviewer: allidel Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions

Wow - I didn't expect that!  I don't think I even realized that she might face repercussions with the public.  I think Edward is going to be PISSED bigtime!  He seems to be a wee bit protective of her, when he's not letting his anger take over.  Of course, she doesn't help that by being quite so bitchy. 

Anyhoo, now seeing this whole public threat come into play, I will have to think more about who will crumble first.  Hmmm...I still think he will come down first (peg-wise), but it might happen sooner with her being threatened.  Now, to sit back and wait for the next chapter.  (And yes, I actually sat & thought about that for a few minutes before I typed it!)

Thank for the update!  See ya soon!

~allidel  :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2012 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions

looking forward to the enxt chaqtper 

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions

ooooo Bella the nut jobs are on the war path now. Me thinks prezward my actually step up to the plate on this one. I hope?!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2012 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions

this is such a good story

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions

Was not expecting this turh of events, but like it!  Like Prezward, even tho he has a big "head", haha.  I too would vote for this Prez, hands down!.  Write fast!  Thank you Cheri

Reviewer: allidel Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules

I love that she was on speaker without even realizing it or that both Edward & Rose were in the room.  I'm not angry or disgusted with him, though I find him quite cocky and am looking forward to Bella bringing him down peg ny peg!  Maybe as she does that, he can slowly bring down her walls.  I am intrugued to see which happens first or if they will occur at the same time.  Right now, I'm going to put my money on Cullen coming down first.  Now, I can't wait to see if that becomes true!

~allidel  :)

Reviewer: Ladyros Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules

good story so far but Edward is an asshole

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules

raises hand.   he's a  total asshat. like all politicans, out of touch withwhat average americans have to do on daily basis to survive. stay strong bella.

Reviewer: bluebelle11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules

I'm suprised she has so much energy to be so angry! I'm exausted just from hearing her rant. I think she needs a long hot bath and to take a chill pill. He is trying to help her and all of the others like her after all.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules

i think of her as strong and needed to be assertive to get  her way or noone hears her.  especially with her sons illness she is up to date on what is going on but not many doctors are. she needs to be strong and outspoken so others hear her.

love it

Reviewer: KarenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules

Love this!! xD  Hope they get romatic .. <3

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules

You know I love your writing, however,  how can he rearrange his schedule on a moments notice, it's in place months ahead of time. (Yes, it's Fiction I know) He would have had to clear his schedule overnight, don't think that's possible.  Now a Saturday might be, but doubt that too.  I'm glad he got and earfull of her opionions of him,  sooo deserved it.

Thanks for the update.

 

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules

I'm enjoying this story alot!  I can't wait to see them come together. I also would like to see Seth get better.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules

I am not angry with him. He is actually so removed from these issues he acts just like that. He is priviledged and what President is not? I think when she is so rude to him it makes him worse.  He gets defensive then he gets aggressive.

 

I think Bella could act a little more mature. Her burden is her raising a child with special needs alone. If there was a daddy present she would have her load lessened.  All parents with special needs children need additional help getting them raised.

 

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules

lovedthe chapter 

Reviewer: germanAkice Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules

somehow I have a feeling the "asking her to lay across my desk so I could fuck her" will eventually happen :-D

and yeah I enjoy Prezward Asshat as well and I find Bella's bitchyness very amusing! loved the chapter!

Alice

Reviewer: poppyanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules

Is he really an asshat though?  He didn't press charges for the flying Jimmy, bearing in mind he is da man!

he's hot!  I love Pres Cullen, he's actually been v.patient with angryella!

I want some oval action......

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules

:)

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules

I still think that President Cullen is an arrogant prick that acts like a petulant child.  Love Bella as the bitch who could care less who he is!

I know about Master work and a real job.  I feel you.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules

that was wonderful and pretty hilairious in parts

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules

I love Bella's fire she dont give a shit who he is her family comes first.  He is acking like a little kid that is not getting the new toy that is out lol.  I cant wait for the meeting.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules

ooo Prezward has a hardon for Miss Swan something fierce  i so have the mental image of him fucking her over his desk stuck in my mind please tell me that will eventually happen ;)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

I love this story.  Do the crime put in your time.  LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

He is not going to let her go that easy he love the fire in her .  Rose is trying to do her job she is a bitch but that is how she gets things done.

Reviewer: germanAkice Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2012 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

well while I definetly am not a fan of Rosalie I don't mind Edward so much. Though I find it hilarious that Bella keeps calling him an asshat! I really loved the chapter and I think I'll definetly rec the story on twitter... btw do you have a twitter?

Alice

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2012 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2012 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

Oh  Asshat needs a swift kick in the arse along with Dippy Dr G.  

Reviewer: windy9901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2012 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

love this story!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

love it

i do not hate edward. i think just a littl misguided. bella is great. i love her snarky perky attitude. i would have like to see her hit the president just once more. rosalie just comes off as a bitch even more so. you love to hate her. it seems she doesn't have a likeable bone in her body. charlie he means so much good and just made a mistake.

love it

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2012 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

Well I'm really loving it.  I'm not feeling the hate for the PresWard yet..All politicans are smugs Turds and Asshats, but I'm over looking that little fact for the sake of the story..  I think Rose is doing what she thinks is he right thing for her job... I think she is seeing that Seth is a sick little man.. Dr Gerandy ticked me off more in this chapter than Edward did... but yea, that's just me... ***Team BellaWard, I guess you figured that out huh?  :-)***

 

Love the story and I will be more than happy to recommend to others ...till next chapter   Kathy

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

oooo i can so see this getting fiery cannot wait

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

What a sweet guy. Coercion and blackmail.  Nice presidential behavior.

Too bad she can't slap the shit out of him.  And, she's already had one day off from work, he's going to make her lose her job.  Can you call the president a bastard and get away with it?

Great story.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: TwilightFann1969 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

Edward is being a prick! Bella is being a royal bitch! and Rosalie is just a bigger bitch than Bella. Ok I guess that sums it up. But on a brighter note, Seth is a cutie!

Reviewer: tiina Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

Cute story! I wish the reality could be so easy. And I think it is a good idea to  let Bella help to overwork the bill. I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter.

Love - Tiina

 

Reviewer: bluebelle11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

Belle seems a little to hard. She is constantly bitting peoples heads off, is she so focused on her own situation that she has no repect for anyone else? It makes it a little hard to relate to her character, I think you should show us a softerside of her with someone other than her son or father. Other than that I'm really enjoying the story!

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

well well well edward blackmailed bella so not the way to get her help that you need...update soon

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

:)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

I don't hate the Pres right now. He did talk to her about that.  Are they using her and her son? Probably. The thing is if she is helpful to them, then other people like herself will benifit.  Her son will benifit. So you bite the damn bullet and proceed with something you would rather not do.  She threw a shoe and for that she pays a price, this is small.

 

Political people are all users.

Reviewer: poppyanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

I can't wait to see what asshat does tomorrow!

update soon, its fab!

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

It is Rosalie's job to make the President look good, but she still is a coniving bitch!

President Cullen is still a sanctimonius asshole who needs to learn some manners.  I can believe that the stooped to blackmail to enlist because he does not have any social skills what so ever.  His family name and panty dropping smile was what got him elected!!!

I did notice that you threw in the pulse of electricity that surged through my body under his touch.

Reviewer: allidel Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

I'm not hating Edward right now, because I don't think he's in favor of using Seth to get votes.  Working with Bella to get votes?  Maybe.  But I do not like Rosalie for even suggesting using Seth.  I can't wait to see what happens when they work together!  :)

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

OK I love spunky Bella!! I'm not sure about Rosalie but President Assward is hot!!! :)

 

Kay

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

I don't hate the prez. I think he's intrigued by Bella but can't figure it out so he's going to use the bill to to so.

 

Great 

Reviewer: KarenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

iipp!! <3 Can't wait til they get romantic! <3 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

looking forward to seeing what happens next

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency

Talk about getting lemons and making lemonade!  You do your son proud by bringing  this issue to such a vast audience and educating them.  Who knows, you just may be the catylyst for change or better yet, the saving of a life!  

Your story, by the way, is marvelous in its own right.  It's current and the characters are fleshing out well.  Thanks for an excellent read!  I'll be looking forward to your updates!

Reviewer: germanAkice Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency

I love this story but I am sad to hear that your son has this condition. I think it's very comendable that you not only take care of your son but also draw attention to a rare condition with your writing! and I absolutly loved Bella's reaction!

Reviewer: poppyanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency

I can't get enough of Presward!  Update soon, pretty pretty please.....

Reviewer: KarenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency

oh wow..!!  Can't wait for more!! <3 

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency

Well I love a mom protecting her baby!! ":)

Reviewer: x-Holly-x Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency

:):):) keep them coming really enjoying this story :D

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