[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2012 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency
Dear Lord Woman...you are strong as hell
Oh Rose...you've made an enemy now. Dont you love how when docs dont understand something that its the flu or a cold or a bug?
Date: 08 Feb 2012 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency
wow......so sorry for your son and your family that is so crazy I never knew about this before.
Rose is a bitch!but bella let them have it :) update soon
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2012 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency
Go Bella!
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2012 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency
Being redundent - I'm loving this story. And two updates in two days, thank you thank you, thank you.
Thanks for writing.
Date: 08 Feb 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency
Wow I cant imagine I had a little one that was lactos intolerant but that is all I have had to deal with. I love Bella she is a true mother it doesnt matter how they are you dont mess with her baby.
Date: 08 Feb 2012 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency
I totally understand. In my family we have auto immune disorders. Both my daughter and son projectile vomited as babies. They however were easily controlled by not drinking formula that was not soy based. My son's was the worst and I went nuts trying to get the right formula for him. He went on in life to be lactose intollerent as all the other boys.
good story, so far!
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2012 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency
I Love this story...well done...
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2012 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency
he is allergic to so much. seems dairy and eggs are in so much that it would be hard to miss. but from such a reaction you could not be on the look out for his items he is allergic too. wow
so love how strong bella is . she is so snarky especially to the president, love it
Date: 08 Feb 2012 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 08 Feb 2012 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency
I am totally in love with this story i am so happy you are so inpsired to write it i'm going looking for my CT update now
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2012 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home
Well, arrogant President Cullen learned first hand that there is actually something wrong with Seth. The proof is on his suit. I actually had pyloric stenosis when I was a baby. I stayed in the hospital for over a month after I was born because of it. Also, I had symptoms well into my toddler years.
Date: 07 Feb 2012 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home
lmao! projectile vomit lmao! oh edward well thats better then a shoe.....update soon. what is really wrong with seth?does he need gluten free items?lactose intolerant?what? update soon
Date: 06 Feb 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home
:)
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home
OMG that is so funny!
Date: 06 Feb 2012 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home
I love your crazy AN!! It's pretty funny! :)
Kay
Date: 06 Feb 2012 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home
omg!! xD poor Seth! Can't wait for more!
Date: 06 Feb 2012 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home
oh good!!! it was funny!!I loved the chapter!!!
Date: 06 Feb 2012 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home
Now that projectile vomit was PERFECT.. ha ha.
Does she have a sick baby??
Date: 06 Feb 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home
Funny chapter, especially the last part.And I think the Edward in this story will be interesting.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home
Did ya write all night? This wasn't up went I went to bed at 12:30. Oh well, I like my/our morning gift. You positively have me hooked w/ this one. Poor baby does he have celiac disease?
The aupdate is MUCH appreciated. Thanks for writing. Bev
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home
OMG I love that he threw up on the Prez!!!!!
LOL for charlie yelling at her and for nekkid little seth
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home
Seriously it is sooooo not funny that Littlle Seth is sick; however, everyone must admit how hiliarious it is that Set threw up on President (what does she call him?) Asshat Cullen. Oh and he is good, setting this up to look like its for her benefit... which I guess iit really is...... Yes it's going to be a long day dear Bella...
Date: 06 Feb 2012 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 06 Feb 2012 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home
I love it nothing like pukin on the pres he asked for it lol
Date: 06 Feb 2012 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home
OOOO I love this story so much can't wait to see what President Cullen thinks of being thrown up on.
Date: 06 Feb 2012 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations
Great chapter can't wait for more!!
Kay
Date: 05 Feb 2012 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations
so far so good. All high and mighty Cullen as usual.
Date: 05 Feb 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations
looking forward to mroe
Date: 04 Feb 2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations
:)
Date: 04 Feb 2012 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations
I love this story! can't wait for the next chapter! Why haven't anybody else thought of making Edward the President?! xD
Date: 04 Feb 2012 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations
wow, I'm in!
I'm a CT reader and I love your style.
loving Powerward so far....who wouldn't!
Date: 04 Feb 2012 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations
What a lovely Predident you have crafted ,we all love a sympathetic Edward ,another lovely chapter ,Well done
Cheers Lou
Date: 04 Feb 2012 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
Soooo good ,please tell me this is already written and I won`t have to wait forever??? Will absolutely rec this to everyone !!
Cheers Lou
Date: 04 Feb 2012 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
I can feel this one sucking me in already ,that my friend is a good thing ,keep up the good work
Cheers Lou
Date: 04 Feb 2012 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations
He has a heart and Bella is in shock I cant wait for more.
Date: 04 Feb 2012 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
Alice is going to flip her shit Bella is in so much trouble. The Pesident is pissed to hopefuly not after you tell him about Seth.
Date: 04 Feb 2012 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
Go Bella that is the way to get the point across lol.
Date: 04 Feb 2012 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations
Omg!:)
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2012 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations
humm good for him....
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations
She got his attention. I think that is what she wanted.
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2012 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations
Update soon!
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2012 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations
Enjoying it.
Bella is a brave one. You know this would never happen rl but that's what makes ffn so much fun!
Good job!
Date: 04 Feb 2012 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations
Like snarky bella. The ss isn't going to like him just letting her go. Rose is going to be a problem I bet.
Date: 03 Feb 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations
ooo me thinks miss swan has gotten under mr presidents skin
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2012 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
Yum! I'd vote for him...no questions asked!
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2012 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
Intriguing!!
Date: 29 Jan 2012 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
Oh my god! love this story already, was in for the ride the moment she hurled the shoe at him!
Date: 29 Jan 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
I love this!! Oh to have a President that would come to talk to "we the people"
Date: 29 Jan 2012 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
surprised she didnt call him president prick. LOL.
Date: 29 Jan 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
Great begining, can`t wait to see the rest.
Date: 28 Jan 2012 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
Like this new story very different, can't wait for the update, let's hope Edward has some compasion for Bella
Date: 28 Jan 2012 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
:)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
I can't wait to see what happens!!!!
Date: 28 Jan 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
Well I guess we can't still use the hormonal explanation can we!? Well I guess she could attempt, but honestly - Just be honest Bella.... your good at that when you want to be.... Asshat Rose for pointing out that it was a designer shoe no less... but she did take them from her sister after all.... it's funny how in this scenerio because they see she has a ROOF her and her sons head then she can fend for herself and is considered USING the system.. In my humble opinion... it's persons like this who are NOT using or abusing the system, they are trying, they work and only ask for what they just absoultley NEED, not Want, NEED....she lives on the bare essentials... good story look forward to more. Yes, I get this is not a polictical story just wanted to express my thoughs on how she could go about explaning to him.... that's all!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
wow!!! Not what I thought when I read the snopsis; but this is going to be pretty good I can tell right now....
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
I see the makings of another fantabulous story here!!!!!!
Jo
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2012 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
AGAIN w/ the CLIFFIE! Damn! Great update. You just love realing us in, don't you?
Date: 28 Jan 2012 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
looking forward to seeing what happens next
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2012 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
I know this is a serious situation, but it is still so funny!
Date: 28 Jan 2012 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
I'm really liking this story:)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2012 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
Yes, what will Mr President do? Will he allow his sliver spooned ass listen to Bella's story and not condem her?
Date: 28 Jan 2012 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
Ahhh...cliffie! I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Date: 28 Jan 2012 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
I can't believe how in love i am with this story and it is only two chapters in
Date: 28 Jan 2012 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
Hi!! it is good!! I really want to read more!!!
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2012 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
Agh damn, I was just getting into it. Definitely going to be watching for an update on this one.
Thanks for writing.
Date: 26 Jan 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
Very interesting.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2012 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
Flash back!
Date: 25 Jan 2012 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
Oh I really enjoyed that, I'll look out for your next chapter.
Date: 25 Jan 2012 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
:)
Date: 25 Jan 2012 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
Ooh - I like it! I'm very interested in seeing where this goes next. :)
~allidel
Date: 25 Jan 2012 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
ROFL for throwing a shoe. Looks to be a cute story.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
Hello, idiot President! The shoe belongs to the real Alice Swan!! How stupid can people be?
Mr. President does not know his constituants, and he appears to be out of touch with how the real world really is. Did he not say himself that his family has been in politics for years? I bet he never had to work a shit job for $5 and hour!
Author's Response:
YAY! You get his idiocy! Big thumbs up and a cheesy ass grin from me!!!!! Others haven't seemed to pick up on it yet.
Date: 25 Jan 2012 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
If you are going to write a story about people who work in the White House, including the President, you have to do it in a way that doesn't make them sound like they are all still in high school. I love the idea for this story, but they have to sound like grown-ups.
Author's Response:
I was wondering what you considered juvenile about the way the characters sounded. They did not feel that way when I wrote this chapter or when I read over it so if you could let me know what you considered juvenile about the way they sound, I would appreciate it. Always looking for ways to better my writing.
Date: 25 Jan 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
OK, I'm curious... looks fun.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
I am greatly intrigued and Very excited to see where you go with this! :)
Date: 25 Jan 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
oooooo i love this so far can't wait for more