[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 60: Edward
Omg that was so awesome and beautiful!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 60: Edward
Loved it and I am so glad that he is coming back stateside. Will they get to see each other? I mean she is going to visit her mom in Florida....just saying. Can't wait for tomorrow.
Date: 03 Jul 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 60: Edward
I'm thinking the girls need a little time in sunny Florida. Those boys have to have some down time. At least I'm hoping Edward and Bella will get to old each other real soon.
Date: 03 Jul 2012 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 60: Edward
As usual with your story this chapter was amazing.I can`t wait to read the chapter of their reunion.Thank you.
Date: 03 Jul 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 60: Edward
So, when do the girls land in Tampa???? Before or after the boys get in?? LOL
Love it:)
Date: 03 Jul 2012 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 59: Bella
And time is going by fairly quickly
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
Yay!! *squeal* Your story just keeps getting better and better! Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 60: Edward
LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!!! I CANT BELIEVE THEYRE GOING STATESIDE!!!!!!!!!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPPP IT MAKES ME WANT TO SQUEAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CANT WAIT FOR TOMORROWS UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03 Jul 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 60: Edward
I'm so happy for both of them!! I can't wait for their face to face but the emails are yummy too!!
Date: 03 Jul 2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 59: Bella
Aaaa!!! Tokio Hotel!!! Thought I was the lone American fan. Love them!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 60: Edward
aww bless him hes so romantic.fab chapter.can't wait till they finally meet.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 59: Bella
fab chapter.i would have done the exact same thing n screamed really loud lol.the stuff he sent he was really was sweet bless him
Date: 03 Jul 2012 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
Yayyyyyy!!! LOL I kept looking at every date on every letter thinking, shit October is a long fucking time away!
Date: 03 Jul 2012 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
Oh love it! Hopefully they can get vistors stateside?
Date: 03 Jul 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
That was the best Independence Day present ever.
Date: 03 Jul 2012 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!!!!
You have totally blown me away today!!! What a way to end my first day of my promotion at work! We get the boys home!!!
Can't wait till The Boys are Back In Town!!!
Author's Response:
Oooh, congrats on the promotion at work! :)
Date: 03 Jul 2012 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 55: Bella
I wonder what kind of stories Tge boys would have about a drugged Edward? I'm sure they will have some fun stories to tell Bella at the shooting range.
Date: 03 Jul 2012 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
HOLY NO FUCKING WAY!!! I am so happy for this chapter!!!! I will admit I am a bit nervous about the 2 weeks. Anything could happen but this is very exciting! I love this! :)
Date: 03 Jul 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
I am 30 minutes from Mcdill, can I be in the welcoming committee?
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 15: Bella
Holy crap! That spider thing sounded like something from a horror movie. *shudders* Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 14: Edward
Loving the story! I just had to say that imagining edward talk like Tow Mater was the funniest thing ever!
Date: 03 Jul 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
Woo hoo! Sarge and the boys are going home! Can't wait to finally see them meet.
Thank you. Keep up the great work.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
Yeah!!!!! I am sooooo happpppyyyyy!!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 57: Bella
Can anyone say Shampow?
Date: 02 Jul 2012 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 56: Edward
damn that's all I can say
Date: 02 Jul 2012 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 55: Bella
Love this story
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
Omg I love how this is going!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
Love it can't wait to read what the girls reactions are going to be to this very good news. I wonder if the girls will be now deciding to go spend a lot of time in Florida...possibly visit Renee and then maybe drop in to see their boys for some much needed personal time.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
I so love this story.... You girls rock hardcore!!!!!
Kimberly
Date: 02 Jul 2012 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Date: 02 Jul 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 57: Bella
Yummy and awwww
Date: 02 Jul 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 56: Edward
They are gonna be really explosive when they are in the same room
Date: 02 Jul 2012 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 55: Bella
Renee is pathetic. Ah well. Lol for drunk emailing
Date: 02 Jul 2012 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
ohhh I live close to Tampa, when should I be looking for him to arrive?
Date: 02 Jul 2012 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
Squee! Finally - a slow burn is nice, but I've been dying for some face-face action. Can't wait for the next few chapters ;-)
Date: 02 Jul 2012 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
Ahhhh, I feel like I've been waiting for this moment forever! I cannot wait to read more! Back to the States, Yay!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
I am loving this story so fucking much(yes I had to swear) I am such a saddo first thing i do is fire up my laptop before work to see if there is another chapter. Great work girls love ya
Date: 02 Jul 2012 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
What a great way to get them home -- so realistic and believable! You've done an outstanding job with this story. It seems very "real". Thanks! I love your style of writing too.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 55: Bella
luv the picture taking, and the drunk emails.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!! Sqeee!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
Reduced me to soggy tears... must be the Army brat/wife still in me.
Beautiful story!
Catherine
Date: 02 Jul 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
Yeah!! OMG can't wait for Bella's reaction!! I bet the girls head to Florida!!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 56: Edward
I'm so happy for Bella! What a wonderful man and sexy!!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 57: Bella
That was hot and sweet!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
yey!!!!!!!!!thats awesome news.fab chapter thats gonna make bella,rose and alices day to have their men back in america can't wait for them to finally meet.update soon.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 57: Bella
aww that was so emotional fantastic chapter.scorching hot phone sex!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 56: Edward
wow that scorching hot phone sex!fab chapter.love edwards reaction to the pics.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
Love having the multiple chapters and so excited for the boys to be stateside. So much trouble they could all get into.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
SQUEEEE!!!! They are coming stateside! I am so excited, but wwill they get to see each other??? OMG! Can't wait for tomorrow! Oh, yeah and uh, I could use a ShamWow about now!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 55: Bella
fab chapter.aww bless her glad shes got the girls and her dad.can't wait for edwards reaction.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
Thanks for the four chapters today. The last three chapters were awesome.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
Yuuuuuppppppeeeeee!:).
Date: 02 Jul 2012 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
not screaming... just tears!!! Silly I know, it's just a story ( A very GOOD story)
Date: 02 Jul 2012 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
Yo sarge, it's your birthday... Going stateside... Seeing Bella.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
I love your story so much!!!!Thanks for today and feel free to give us more every time you want :)
Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
OH MY GOSH! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 57: Bella
SO amazing!!!!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 56: Edward
GAH!!!!!!!!! I love his dirty talk ;)
Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
Yahoooo! The guys a coming home! Well not all the way home, but close enough. I think the girls will be busy planning a proper welcome home.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 55: Bella
OH WOW...amazing!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
Yay! Hopefully Bella will be allowed on base on Edward off.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 57: Bella
Wow just wow!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
yessssssssssssss, please update soon, i so love this story and you are amazing wrtiers i really enjoyed everything i have read unfortunately i do not review much but you guys deserve it!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 56: Edward
OH MY GOD!!!!! And yes I read this at work!!! Does that make me a sick puppy? Okay moving on to the next chapter.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 54: Edward
Three fingers Edward? Stop bragging bb. ;)
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 54: Edward
They are definitely going to be having phone sex or Skype sex. They have been flirting, teasing and leading each other in that direction and I cannot wait to get to read it. It is time for them to make that progression. My, my you two girls are ready to get down and dirty with these two characters.
Love you guys for it!
Date: 01 Jul 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 54: Edward
OMG shamwow. You guys are too funny. I agree with Edward. Lame that b has to do all the travelling
Date: 01 Jul 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 53: Bella
Aww for her wanting to meet the parents. Lol for her being intimidated by his coco. Rofl
Date: 01 Jul 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 52: Edward
Well dayum
Date: 01 Jul 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 51: Bella
Lol for piano. Australia is somewhere I want to go too
Date: 01 Jul 2012 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 50: Edward
Prefer Grimm to once upon. An well. Lol for piano innuendo
Date: 01 Jul 2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 49: Bella
Yea for future talk
Date: 01 Jul 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 48: Edward
Wow. He really laid it out. Woo hoo
Date: 01 Jul 2012 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 47: Bella
Glad the girls are there for her
Date: 01 Jul 2012 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
Woo hoo for the ily.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 45: Bella
Gladalice is there for her
Date: 01 Jul 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 44: Edward
awww poor eddie and masen. glad they are both ok
Date: 01 Jul 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 43: Bella
sweet note Glad Mikey got the message
Date: 01 Jul 2012 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 42: Edward
oh Mike...youve pissed off the wrong men
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 54: Edward
Omg I cannot wait for the phone call! Please I need more.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 54: Edward
Idk how they're gonna survive the next few months apart!! They might just combust during a skype session with all this foreplay!! LOL
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 41: Bella
wow <fans self> as if it isnt hot enough where the boys are.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 40: Edward
lol for the closet Jake threats.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 39: Bella
awww ICE is important thats for sure. Hope she tells him soon
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 38: Edward
ooooh you are getting close to getting a lemon dance. Hope the boy has plenty of moisturizing soap for the shower. LOL
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 37: Bella
holly cow bella. Gonna give the boy a permaboner
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 54: Edward
OH MY GOSH!!!!!! SO amazing...3 fingers?! YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 53: Bella
OH wow, SO amazing :D
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 54: Edward
wow that was hot fab chapter.update soon
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 53: Bella
fab chapter.loved it.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward
What a great chapter. As a sister of somone who served i know how important care packages and letters were. I also loved the Tanya revenge thing:O)
Please add more soon.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 36: Edward
aww those too are so cute with the innuendos
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 35: Bella
Charlie seems lie a great guy.
I;m a dog person but we have cats. With long hours and wierd schedules when I was active duty wasnt fair to the dogs, esp with having to deal with 3 kids and thier schedules and activities too. Cats are pretty much self sufficient
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 34: Edward
rofl tight ends. Aww for dates
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 54: Edward
this girl's doing a happy dance! (resembles a pee pee dance but in a good way lol) 4 chapters tomorrow!!!!!