Date: 29 Jun 2012 6:32 AM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward
They are really going somewhere with the letters. I'm guessing they are going to be halfway in love with each other before they even meet.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 6:13 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella
Bella is really sweet. My cousin is active duty and he always says they appreciate anything anyone takes the time to send something.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 48: Edward
The thing I like most about these two is their honesty. The don't have the time to play games or be coy. E erything is out there on the line.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 2:49 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward
Tanya is a selfish cow. I can't believe someone would do something like that. Here's Edward fighting for our country and she can't be honorable and tell him the truth. I love what the boys have cooked up so far. Serves her right. And there is no way he should send her picture back. He should send everyone's but hers.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 48: Edward
He's so devoted to bella that it makes me cry. Please update soon I NEED MORE
Date: 28 Jun 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 48: Edward
Love his reaction to the whole Emmett smoochies thing. I'm really glad he plans on going to Washington when he's done, and I'm curious to know what he will end up doing for a career.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 47: Bella
I'm glad Bella has such good friends. That they all have each other they can lean on as their loved ones are away. I would think it would be a great comfort. Curious to see what Edward will say about what his plans are once October comes.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 48: Edward
Just have to say that this is the best story I have read in a loooooong time!!!! You guys are great!!! Keep it coming!!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 48: Edward
damn, come on girls!! Lovely now I am all hot and bothered. I can't wait for them to meet in person!!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 48: Edward
Love it and how he told her his plans
Date: 28 Jun 2012 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 48: Edward
I can't wait to see Bella's reponse to his wants!!! Swoon!!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 48: Edward
he is full of love and thats good
Date: 28 Jun 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 47: Bella
I love your Bella!! She is a tough and sweet girl!!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 47: Bella
good that they are so open and honest with each other
Date: 28 Jun 2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 48: Edward
Yummmmmmm, thx so much!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 48: Edward
I have a question, how many chapters will this story have?
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 48: Edward
fab chapter.awww bless him.glad hes ok.update soon
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 47: Bella
fab chapter awww that was so emotional.bless em.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 48: Edward
Wow! He really put himself out there, but she did ask. Great updates!! Do you girls know how many rec's you've been getting on other stories that I am reading?? I think at least 4 of my WIP's that I am reading have suggested you. Mine will have one on it on Monday....Thanks for writing a great story!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 48: Edward
Flying trapeze artist, ey! Sarge... those truly are some great meds son.... Yes, indeed he laid itmout there for her and left no doubt How deeply he is invested... loved the chapter
Date: 28 Jun 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 48: Edward
man! i love this guy!
yeah...panty change after that email! lol
Date: 28 Jun 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 48: Edward
LOL Love it!! Man if that ain't a way to tell someone whatcha want then I don't know what is. Love Sargward!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 47: Bella
This reader/fan hearts You and Deb Big time, Jen....yep...big question, will he re-up? hum... I love how she did the right thing and put his feelings first, making him take his pain meds and rest...he will heal quicker....Big Bad Soldier! :-) lots of kisses for our Sarge!!! that will make him betta!!!!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 48: Edward
Such a sweet reply!!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
SHE SAID IT!!!! YES!! not to his face mind you..but she said it :D!! Bella I'm so so Proud of you!!! I just want to hug her so much!!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 45: Bella
I couldn't Review on FF.net so I'll do it here. I think Bella reacted like anyone would has a loved one hurt. I'm just so glad Alice was there for her instead of getting a call from there and her being alone.
what Bella has to remeber and most importantly BELIEVE. is Edward is really okay, he looks worse then it is, nothing is broken, he is Okay.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
I'm so glad they both confessed their feelings and that he realizes she's not going to go anywhere.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 45: Bella
I really hope their Skype call goes well.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 44: Edward
I hope he's not going to get all emo on Bella and try to stay out of her life. I guess I'll just have to read and find out. So glad he's okay.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 42: Edward
Emmett is a genius. I loved it.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 41: Bella
Mike really is mentally unstable if he thinks he just say a few words and get Bella back....like that would ever happen again. Part of me hopes that Edward gets to meet him one day and scare the living crap out of him.
Love the teasing about sleeping nude, and I especially loved her PS.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
Awhhh Deb and Jen!!!! Concourses of Angels were singing on High!!!! Yippee such a simple thing 3 little bitty words, but such huge and lasting implications to the persons saying this.....Yes, Yes.....doing the Happy Dance!!!! laters Doll'ngs
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 45: Bella
No' I agree Jen this was important... given the gravity of a solider in combat, the loved ones at home have to be the strength in times like this... and it's very true what Alice said to Bella, if she isn't able to handle this then she needs to be honest with Edward... it's really unfair... such a great story!!!! TY Jen
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 44: Edward
no I'm gonna stop and review and say that you gave me a damn heart flutter for a minute....opening up with "Breathe for me, Sarge"...Geez!!!
laters BB oh and I see another update on Fate Interrupted ...yes sir're......hoooraahhh Deb---
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 43: Bella
that was so incredibly sweet...Edward has such a way with words.... Geez I just Heart that Sarge!!!!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
I love this story and look forward to your posting everyday. Please don't make us wait till October in real life for them to meet. Let it come now, please and begging
Date: 27 Jun 2012 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
Thank you, thank you, thank you for not leaving us hangiing!!!! I would've lost sleep if you had!!
Just perfect:)
Date: 27 Jun 2012 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 40: Edward
loved his words, and hoping he stays safe.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 39: Bella
Gotta love Charlie, that was exactly what Bella needed to hear.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 38: Edward
He's losing it little by little...I love it.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
I didn't realize that I was teary until I wiped my eyes. Even though I knew he was alright that was scary. You guys are doing a great job.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 43: Bella
Swoony is right, but it said some much. I got chills twice, once at work and and then we I reread this chapter again at home. Got chapter.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 43: Bella
Awwwww, that was extra sweet of Sarge. Who knew Mikey could act human.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
SO amazing! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 45: Bella
OH WOW...I loved her reaction. I would be worried too.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
I love your mad writing skills
And I love your Sarge and Bella, they're absolutely perfect for each other
keep writing
I definitely keep reading!
Cheer
Tina
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 44: Edward
OH WOW...AMAZING!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 43: Bella
OH WOW...AMAZING!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
Wonderful chapters! I can't wait for the next update! :)
Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
WHATTTTT NOOOOO Tha t is so not all for today come on you can't really do this to me can you come on PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
Good!! I didn't want this story to be angsty.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
Thank you for posting the extra chapters. Do I really have to say it? Loved them! As much as I'm looking forward to their face to face meeting, I think the anticipation and build up is well worth it. To watch these two characters fall in love and discover each other on an emotional level is beautiful.
I do have to admit I did squee (On the inside. Wouldn't wan't my daughter to think I'm totally crazy. Oh who am I kidding she already thinks I'm crazy.) when the ILY's were exchanged. Looking forward to Bella's reaction to this revelation.
Until tomorrow......
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 45: Bella
I can't even imagine
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
I trust you !! Love this story, I look forward to your daily updates!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 44: Edward
he is okay. He is okay.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 42: Edward
lol at Mike.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
IS it tomorrow yet? I'm sitting here at work, trying to hide behind my monitor with my kleenex box!! How in the world am I going to work now, waiting for the next update? I'min this with them, hook, line, and sinker!! NOw, if I cna just figure out a way to speed up time, we'd all get what we want! :D
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
aww that was so emotional brought tears to my eyes.fab chapter.update soon
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 45: Bella
poor bella that was so emotional.fab chapter
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 44: Edward
omg so glad hes ok.fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 43: Bella
lol that was hilarious.fab chapter awww bless him hes so romantic.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
sigh...they can breathe easier, well Edward can't but he will heal.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 45: Bella
oh gosh to be awaken with that news, I would have gone bat shit crazy.
Vicki
(Ilivetoread flanfriction on FB btw)
Date: 27 Jun 2012 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 44: Edward
oh dear, thank goodness he is okay
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
Wow thank God edward is gonna get better. I hope they can meet soon. Please update soon
Date: 27 Jun 2012 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 43: Bella
swoon, I want a sarge
Date: 27 Jun 2012 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
Ahh! He said "I love you"!! She said "I love you"!! :) :) Yay! Please update soon! I can't wait to see how Bella reacts when she realises that he said "I love you"!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
Yes that was a chapter right lumps back and a few tears so going for some kleenex wow just wow finally said it yay xx
Date: 27 Jun 2012 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
Gah those two chapters had me tearing up! Thanks to you guys, I've become that type of woman who cries when reading a romance story, much like Joan Wilder! (lol).
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 38: Edward
damn, i want some dreams like Sarge, only starring him, not Bella, HA HA or him and Bella, actually i am not really picky!!! ;-)
Date: 27 Jun 2012 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
Thank you for keeping him safe...can't wait for the next chapter.. The I love you's were so natural from them..
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
YAY!!! They said it, they said it. I loved the way that Bella revealed her feelings. She didn't even have to think about it, they just came. I wonder if she even realized it until Edward said it back. LOVED IT!!! Thanks...
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 45: Bella
Wow i actually got a bit of a lump and i know he ok, anyway moving on where is the second part of the call ????????? Also i would like to apologise to you ladies i never review every chapter i'm bloody lazy like that but i would like to say that i am enjoying this story so much and Thank you for writing/sharing it hugs to you both Dakota-Lou xx
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 45: Bella
I think she can handle it. She's stronger than she knows. Now where the hell is my next button???
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 44: Edward
I can't click next...there is no NEXT....Where is the NEXT??? ARGGG!!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 44: Edward
I can only imagine how scared Edward would be!! Bella will be his saving grace!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 43: Bella
FOUR!!! I am so excited. The card he sent was beautiful! Off to the next one!!!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 43: Bella
That card was so sweet!!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 37: Bella
They both need to invest in cold water...
Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 36: Edward
Loved his description on bowling...........yeah, I guess that's all I can say right now.:)
Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 35: Bella
Loved the warning Charlie gave for Edwrad, and her first date was hysterical.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 34: Edward
Curious to find out what she will do for his birthday......Hmmmmmm.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 33: Bella
I'm almost too excited to find out what Charlie thinks about Bella's fairly new relationship. Better yet, will there be a day that he will make Edward squirm? I'm evil, I know.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 32: Edward
I hope he doesn't come across any problems related to the strange questions the CO was asking. It would be awful if something happened to him, Jasper or Emmett.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 31: Bella
I'm glad he was able to call her, but I'm sure he was in panic mode when he heard just how upset she really was.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 30: Edward
I really like the fact that he sending new pictures and will be sending a shirt to her. I love wearing my husbands shirts when he's gone; when/if she gets the shirt I hope she like it:)
Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 29: Bella
I'm glad the Bella was able to get help for Christopher, and I love the fact that she needs some special time with her dad.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 28: Edward
I love how they seem to enjoy their banter, but one of these days they may explode with how much they want each other. loved it.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 27: Bella
I really hope Edward is alone when he reads her latest email, otherwise things may get very interesting.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 42: Edward
Emmett is a genius. That should put Mikey in check without Edwar lifting a finger.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 42: Edward
Love the Emmett!!! That was classic!!!!! The world needs a few more Emmetts!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 42: Edward
Ooohh, a surprise you say, the big I Love You, I hope...you better keep Edward safe though, I know he is gOing out tonight so I hope nothing happens. I probably cry like a big baby that I am LOL! Thank you so much for updating.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 42: Edward
surprises tomorrow? hum... is that equivalent to our Sarge going Commando?!?!? just kidding...loved how Em called the sucker Mike personally and told him about Bells BF.... till tomorrow!!!
Date: 26 Jun 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 42: Edward
Loved Edward's reaction to what Bella told him about Mike. Was surprised by Emmett's suggestion and by him calling Mike. I wonder what Mike said. Hopefully the flowers Edward sent will give Mike the rest of the message, Bella is taken. I'm also glad Edward didn't mention sending her anything in his reply.
Great chapter. Can't wait to see how Bella reacts to the flowers Edward sent and to see what he had print on the card.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 42: Edward
great chapter. :)
Date: 26 Jun 2012 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 42: Edward
Wow, this chapter was fifty shades of HOT. I can't wait for October. Lol
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 42: Edward
A surprise?!?! Mike is an idiot. I mean hello she showed you a picture! I think he has a stupidity leak that needs plugged up. Can't wait for tomorrow!!!