Date: 26 Jun 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 42: Edward
Lovin' this story, shugah! I'm one state away from ya, and piiiiisssed we didn't get any rain, just lotsa wind from Debby~~~but did cool us off a li'l bit. Keep on keepin' on with Coming Home, and thanks btw.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 42: Edward
OH WOW, SO amazing! I cannot wait to see what the note on the flowers says ;)
Date: 26 Jun 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 41: Bella
SO amazing :D
Date: 26 Jun 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 42: Edward
Wonderful chapter! :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 42: Edward
lol love emmett hes ace.fab chapter.update soon
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 42: Edward
Sexy SKYPE please! LOL
Glad to hear Debby's hasn't washed you away. My sister-in-law is in Jax and the're getting a deluge as well. It could be worse, at lest it's not a hurricane.
Thanks for the wonderful updates.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 41: Bella
awww fab chapter.mike needs to take a hike!!!
Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 42: Edward
Can't wait for tomorrow!!! I loved Emmett in this chapter!!
Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 42: Edward
Love it
Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 42: Edward
Gotta love a pissing contest!
Date: 26 Jun 2012 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 41: Bella
He might need to have a talk with a few guys when he gets home.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 40: Edward
I'm in love with this story!! Can't wait for an update!!!
Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 26: Edward
I'm dying over here, and I'm mad that I really need to stop reading right now and get my tired self to bed for work in the morning. I will be back though to continue w/ this awesome story.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 25: Bella
Yup, how are either one of them going to survivie their time apart now that they found each other.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 24: Edward
Oh boy, how is Edward going to survive before he can be face-to-face with Bella?
Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 23: Bella
I hope they are all okay. I think I'm starting to worry too.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
I hope Edward and the rest get back to their camp safe. Two weeks will be a very long time for these two. i hope they both can handle it okay.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 21: Bella
That was really sweet.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 19: Bella
I feel like squealing in excitement.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 18: Edward
Will he be happy with what he gets when he answers that? I hope so...
Date: 26 Jun 2012 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 17: Bella
I hope she goes for it, which I'm assuming she did since there are still a lot of chapters that I need to read to get caught up. It should be interesting to find out what Alice and Rose think.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 16: Edward
Okay, I can't make up my mind if I'm on fire from the last two chapters, or if I'm just a puddle of goo. I'm loving it and can't wait to find out what happens on Skype.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 15: Bella
Well, I guess you could say that Bella just took that little flame they had started with their flirting and turned it into an outright inferno. Love it. Can't wait to find out his reaction to her little note.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 14: Edward
Love the flirting they have going on.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 13: Bella
I really like how concerned Bella is for her student. I love the fact that she's trying to help take care of him the best she can. I think that says a lot about a teacher/person.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 12: Edward
I'm glad he explained his relationship to Tanya, and I love the fact that Jasper got a picture of him smiling.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 11: Bella
I can see him getting a little annoyed with Mike and her mom. I can also see him getting excited about the idea of blue lingerie.
I can't wait for their Skype meeting.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 10: Edward
Yay, they're going to Skype. Hoping things go without a hitch:)
Date: 26 Jun 2012 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 9: Bella
Love the flirting. Will he write her a song???? Guess I'll just have to wait and see.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 8: Edward
I loved the chapter, getting inside Edward's head was a lot of fun.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 7: Bella
I almost feel bad for the fact that Edward has to hear about the meal Bella is about to enjoy. I wonder what his response back will be.
Great chapter
Date: 26 Jun 2012 12:54 AM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward
I'm really loving this story, and I'm sorry this is the first review I've left. I like the correspondence they have going back and forth betweent the two of them as they get to know each other. Bella's special occasion drink at Starbucks is mine as well, and I can sympathize with the lack of coffee like Edward was enduring.
It's very sad that Edward had to see his parents go like that, and for different reasons as well, but he seems to have not let it slow him down any which is good.
I can't wait to find out what else is in store for these two. I'll try to be better about the reviews:)
Date: 25 Jun 2012 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 38: Edward
I will take either elevator version with Sarge, just saying.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 40: Edward
fab chapter.awww.update soon
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 39: Bella
bless charlie.fab chapter awww she loves him.
Date: 25 Jun 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 40: Edward
SO amazing :D I really loved it!
Date: 25 Jun 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 39: Bella
OH wow, SO amazing :D
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 40: Edward
Wow I cannot wait to see them be finally together! I love the story.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2012 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 40: Edward
TS Debby needs to go away. I can't not have my Sarge fix. I hope they get to talk soon, preferably through Skype so that they can reveal their feelings. Thanks for the update!
Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 40: Edward
This love story is so amazing. Can't get enough of it.
Hope TSDebby doesn't do too much damage. Be safe.
Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 40: Edward
Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for the next update! :)
Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 40: Edward
I absolutely love this story! It is the highlight of my day when it gets updated! Thanks girls :) keep it coming x
Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 40: Edward
Debby was here...almost gone. She was a wet one!!
Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 39: Bella
Charlie was awesome about it!
Date: 25 Jun 2012 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 40: Edward
Love it, when does edward get a leave? This is a great story, keep it up
Date: 25 Jun 2012 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 40: Edward
If you get on the ark take that computer!! I need these daily updates!! Can't wait for the ILY's!!!!
Date: 25 Jun 2012 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 40: Edward
He called her love. They need to tell each other. Lol
Date: 25 Jun 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 38: Edward
Oh man, I hope the emergency contact stuff isn't foreshadowing UNLESS he gets hurt just enough to be able to go home and not have any permanent injuries. I guess that I wasn't very vague when making my "demands" known. Lord have mercy, this Edward may kill me before the end of this story!
Date: 24 Jun 2012 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 38: Edward
Damn, you have got to write longer chapters!!! Love it~~
Date: 24 Jun 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 38: Edward
dang girl...new panties! whats it gonna be lik whn they really get together?!?!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 38: Edward
fab chapter hot dream awww bless him.update soon
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 37: Bella
go bella.fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 36: Edward
lol fab chapter.mmm elevator sex with edward
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 35: Bella
fab chapter hmm hot fantasy.
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 38: Edward
It funny I was about to ask about when he was due back. You must have read my mind. Good chapter.
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 38: Edward
OH my gosh...dirty Sarge ;) I really loved it! I cannot wait for them to meet in person now ;)
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 37: Bella
OH WOW...that was amazing :D I really loved it!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 38: Edward
I really hope that she doesn't freak out about being made his emergency contact. He can put me down! LOL! Can't wait for the update, thanks ladies!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 38: Edward
Love them. I need more
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:00 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward
I just wanted to say thank you for writing such a wonderful story. I am anxiously awaiting additional chapters and have LOVED the story thus far. Kepp up the fabulous work!
Date: 24 Jun 2012 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 38: Edward
He is so sweet! I think Bella will be happy and terrified of being his emergency contact! I know I would be.
Date: 24 Jun 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 38: Edward
Mmmm dirty typing sarge
Date: 24 Jun 2012 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 37: Bella
It doesn't appear like Bella needs any motivation. lol
Date: 24 Jun 2012 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 36: Edward
Can't wait for more!
Date: 24 Jun 2012 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 36: Edward
!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 24 Jun 2012 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 35: Bella
Enough Jake. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 36: Edward
Maybe I'm wrong here, but that read like he said the L word. When he said 'I won't share you with prying eyes when we're making love, beautiful. Period. When I'm in love with someone, I don't want anyone else seeing her but me.' That almost reads like a confession to me....Can't wait until tomorrrow!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 11: Bella
oh yeah, they are definitely getting to know each other & teasing. I bet he will be panting when he reads about the blue lingerie LOL ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 10: Edward
awwww, well they care about each other & now have physical attraction so let the teasing begin! I do love Tom Hanks & Matt Damon, but Hugh Jackson is eye candy & his accent, mmmm. what is it about an accent anyway? LOL another great chapter, or should I say email? ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 9: Bella
well they definitely have a lot in common and enjoy care about each other. they both worry about each other. so what with Edward think of Bella's photos?? ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 23 Jun 2012 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 8: Edward
definitely more Saving Private Ryan, I could see that. Instant chat would be nice huh? but Skype would definitley be better LOL I look forward to whatever you guys have coming our way :) ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 7: Bella
awwww, I love how you met your husband!! Fate had a special plan when you got that email :) I love that Bella is getting close to him, sometimes you just know! I met my husband at a local gas station. We both happened to know the clerk & were there at the same time. We have been together 20+ years now :) great chapter & wonderful A/N ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 23 Jun 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 36: Edward
Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for the next update! :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 36: Edward
Did. He just say he was in love with her? Is that the first reference one of them has made to being in love? Wonder how Bella will react to that.
Loved the discussion about bowling. :-)
Can't wait until tomorrow's update
Date: 23 Jun 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 36: Edward
OH WOW...yeah! Go Edward ;)
Date: 23 Jun 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 35: Bella
OH WOW...that was amazing!!!!!!!!!! YAY! So, I have two cats, though, one could count as two, since she weighs 22 pounds! They are 7 years old. I do love dogs too, but I love cats more :D
Date: 23 Jun 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 36: Edward
I love how he ended his letter . Lol till tomorrow girls.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 36: Edward
I love them being playful! Thanks for more awesome chapters please update soon.
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 36: Edward
He is so funny and sweet!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 35: Bella
Can't wait to read Edward's reaction to that!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 36: Edward
oh damn! now i need a cold shower! and he told her he was in love with her! hope she caught that!!! :d
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:00 AM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward
I think the pace you have both set is perfect. They have never met & not even shared photos yet. So sad about Edward's parents. he also lost a man in his platoon, that is life at war & it sucks! ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:47 AM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward
so glad Edward is giving Bella ideas for her to send things over. This also lets her get to know him a little better. cookie thief? LOL I think every baker should try their creation before sharing them, gotta make sure they taste good after all :) ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:38 AM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward
what a perfect beginning. they gave each other a little of themselves and both were very appreciative. I loved it! ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:25 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella
awwww, I love when people want to do something special for someone in need. I hate that it is so rare anymore. We can't always do it but sometimes just a letter or call is appreciated, kinda like a review to a couple special authors letting them know we appreciate them ;) ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:07 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward
why didn't Tanya take the outs when she had the chance?? not that I care to hear her reply. my daughter is joining the Army, next year. I am so proud that she wants to join but worried at the same time. I like the story so far & look forward to reading more. Thank you TLS :) ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 32: Edward
too funny Deb--- no even close to his tight end... you are a riot... lets see we know he is sending her a shirt, but he wants to get his name on her too, soooo not totally sure what .....oh wait he's writing her a song perhaps...well maybe not.... not sure.... not going to fret over his job right now....
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 34: Edward
Cracked me up!!! Even fell on on tight end!!! We all have those things in our past that we would prefer to keep filed away never to be tought of again!!!
And now I'm crying - I've caught up with everyone!!!! No Next!!!! Boohoooooo~~~
Girls you have to know how great your story is. It's our favorite Twilight couple but a very unique storyline. You are the only WIP that I'm reading right now. I just don't do them -- but -- you can thank Jules Twifanwesomesox for this. We rec each other all the time.
Enjoying the FB page -- seeing lots of new and old names there.
Can't wait until next update!!! Ah, but the images you've left in my head!!! Toiletpaper and puke!!!
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[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 33: Bella
Rose has really good reaction time!!! Funny!!!
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[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 34: Edward
I can't wait until tommrow and the update that it will be bringing especially since you say that we are going to get Charlie's reaction to everything. Hopefully Charlie has enough trust in his daughter and her judgment to trust her and support her decision on seeing what kind of relationship Edward and Bella will have in the future. Plus Emmett and jasper are his friends so he can't be too bad.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 32: Edward
Perhaps a little drama coming? I know you said no worries but those questions were very telling!!!!
Loving the story!!!
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[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 29: Bella
Christorpher breaks my heart!!!! There is no punishment great enought for an abuser of any kind!!!!
Bella all but said I love you this chapter. Doesn't feel like it will be long coming!!!
Thanks for writing.
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[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 28: Edward
Reading chapter capped off a conversation and posting pictures on CaraNo's FB page. With the revealing of the Comopolis sex scene, peen pictures began posting. This is just to strange a coincidence abourt size!!!! ;)
Love your girls. Haven't done anything the last couple hourse but read this. I'll be kicking dust bunnies tomorrow!!!
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[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 27: Bella
Open, unihibited, knows-what-she-wants sexy Bella. Not many of those in our fandom.
I love the casualness of such an intense, personal conversation between these two. So connected!!!
Thanks for writing.
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[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 25: Bella
Uhmmm, few words to describe here!!! Frustrated Bella and Edward.
I loved that he asked her about the balls to the wall sex.
You girls are awsome!!!!
Elaine - sparkledamnu on twitter Sparkle Damnu Phillips on FB
Date: 22 Jun 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 34: Edward
I finally caught up! Love this story.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 24: Edward
Heartstrings pulled, tingles and silly giggles. Those are a few of the emotions I felt reading this chapter. I even heard the thud when his head fell against the wall!!! I love it when and author not only gives me tell-all words but also the ability of what I call a "mind video.!"
I don't know what I'm gonna do when I catch up to all that is posted!!! I don't normally read WIP's because when a story is as good and as well written as Coming Home I can get impatient as hell waiting on updates!!!! :D Brilliant authors are what make our fandom so great.
I know both of you read the reviews! I mean all these words to both of you. Somehow they seem to come at the end of an Edward chapter but I read in pairs JSYK. You both are awesome!!!
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[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 23: Bella
Wow, she's calling him babe!!!! Squee!!!!
Bella's intense, heartfelt feelings are very tangible in this chapter. It's written perfectly and her emotions simply jump off the page!!!
Thank you for writing for our fandom!!!
Elaine -- sparkledamnu on twitter Sparkle Damnu Phillips on FB
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
This chapter brought back so many memories for me!!! I lived through something similar with the Viet Nam war. A year of letter and taped conversations. The not knowing part is the hardest thing to endure. Yeah, I'm older, sooo. You guys are doing an amazing job telling this story.
Thanks for the gift - a wonderful story - better than cookies!!!!
Elaine - sparkledamnu on twitter Sparkle Damnu Phillips on FB