Date: 22 Jun 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 34: Edward
Wow. I am in love with your story. I can't believe I waited so long to check it out. The banter between Edward and Bella is great. I was so disappointed when I read the last chapter - I kept trying to force more chapters to appear. It was sad to watch, but it happened. Truly, I am addicted and. I am eagerly awaiting more.
Date: 22 Jun 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 34: Edward
OH WOW...AMAZING :D
Date: 22 Jun 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 33: Bella
OH WOW...SO amazing :D
Date: 22 Jun 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 34: Edward
Squeal! Just caught up on last few chapters. So looking forward to seeing what they come up with the house to surprise Bellaway. Also a picture of those tight ends wouldn't be bad either!😉
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 34: Edward
Great update, thanks. I'm sure that Charlie will approve. Can't wait until tomorrow!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 34: Edward
Omg edward is so cute! I cant wait to see what'll happen next. This is getting better and better. Update soon
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 34: Edward
aww bless him.fab chapter.update soon
Date: 22 Jun 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 33: Bella
fab chapter wow they must be awesome pics.
Date: 22 Jun 2012 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 34: Edward
I still am hoping Charlie loves him!
Date: 22 Jun 2012 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 34: Edward
Can't wait to see what Bella decides to do for his birthday! Maybe another Skype?
Date: 22 Jun 2012 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 34: Edward
Can not wait for more! I'm hooked!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 31: Bella
um.hum...yummy pic of Edward in gear regardless, well it's just yummy....poor Bella, it's natural to feel like she could have done something sooner, it's not like she was disregarding him... like Edward pointed out she was feeding him and giving him concern and attention...he apparently has come to trust her too....
Date: 22 Jun 2012 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 34: Edward
I love you story and have to read it as soon as its updated but I've noticed a couple things. The first is both his parents died but then you put his dad has power of attorney and can sign papers for him on the land and house. The other is Bella asked him when his birthday is after she sent him stuff for his birthday. It's just a little confusing but I'm still reading and enjoying
Author's Response:
Hmm, I think you may be thinking of another story. We haven't mentioned his dad having power of attorney or anything, and Bella hasn't sent him anything for his birthday. :)
Date: 22 Jun 2012 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 33: Bella
This was a really sweet chapter.
I am going to have to check out the FB page.
Date: 22 Jun 2012 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 33: Bella
I love yall, I just don't face book. My husband does so I don't want him to get into this as this is something I have for myself. I have shared all things with him for many years. I just have fan fiction reading that I don't share. I enjoy this and he watches television or deer. LOL He is really into hunting and the funny part is he hardly kills anything anymore he just watches them. LOl
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 7: Bella
Really liking the story!!! I also must confest that I enjoyed your A/N as much as the chapter!! Yes - I love love!!
Thanks for writing such a great story!!
Elaine - sparkledamnu on twitter Sparkle Damnu Phillips on FB
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 5:28 AM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward
This is gooood!!!! Enjoying very much!!
Elaine -- sparkledamnu on twitter Sparkle Damnu Phillips on FB
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 5:14 AM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward
Love the story -- again, thank you for writing!!!!
Date: 22 Jun 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
OMG, I absolutely ADORE this Edward. I have a family member serving. He just finished his third deployment. He is currently back in the states. So that fear that Bella has, I know. Love this story.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 32: Edward
Hmm does she have a picture of him yet. I can't remember.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 32: Edward
OH WOW...SO amazing :D Cannot wait for more!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 32: Edward
Great chapter. It is wonderful that both Bella and Edward can talk/email, whatever, about their worries, fears, the little things. I wish some of my past relationships were like that, instead it was like pulling teeth to get them to talk to me. Now, I have a wonderful guy in my life who is a bit like the Edward in your story. He overly worries, but he's there for me -- through it all.
As for your end notes, of course I am bracing myself for something, but I am enjoying the ride. I can't wait for them to physically meet. I'm wondering what will happen. I like the pace of the story. It's not rushed, it's perfect.
Now for what I think Edward's sending Bella. First, I would hope he would be sending her a t-shirt, one that he recently wore, but not all stinky, more on the fresh side. I don't think he would be one to send a shirt like that. Bella did send him sheet music, so I wouldn't be surprised if he composed a song for her (he did say he could compose without a piano, right? I can't remember! LOL!)
Can't wait for the next chapters tomorrow.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 32: Edward
OMG that was so awesome!!!! THIS IS GETTING SO GOOD I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE MORE!! Please update soon I REALLY NEED IT!!!!!! LOVED THE CHAPTER.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 31: Bella
OH WOW...SO amazing :D I really loved it! Edward is amazing!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 31: Bella
'Thank you' was not what I was expecting at the end. I was hoping she would say those three little words, but it was still a nice way to end the conversation. Those three little words, would be better face to faca, anyway.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 32: Edward
More, more, more, I love it!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 32: Edward
Aww, he's so sweet. I want one...
The man is obsessed with cookies. He's probably gonna gain 50 pounds. Poor Emmett eating a scorpion..what is this..fear factor?? LOL! Thanks for the updates. Great job as always. Have I mentioned that I love this story...I look forward to tomorrow...
Date: 21 Jun 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 32: Edward
I,ll send a review, you send me his tight end!!!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 31: Bella
I will never understand why assholes burn children! One of those WTF things
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 32: Edward
hmmm not sure maybe a pic or a badge.fab chapter update soon
Date: 21 Jun 2012 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 32: Edward
I just can't say it enough, he is just so swoon worthy!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 31: Bella
awww bless her.fab chapter.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 31: Bella
He is so sweet!!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 32: Edward
i was gonna say....not much is better than his tight rear end...unless its his tight rear end naked! lol
Date: 21 Jun 2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 32: Edward
I love that he is sending her a package and that he feels like he can trust her with his concerns.. I really do love this Bella and Edward.. So open and honest, love it! ready for the next chapter!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 7: Bella
i would just like to say thank your for your authors note. today i was talking to my mom about going down to visit my boyfriend of four years who lives in georgia, while i live in minnesota. we met over xbox live and started talking. after about a half a year or so, we finally decided to swap facebooks. it was our first time seeing what each other looked like, but even before that i knew i loved hime. now four years later im eighteen and can finally travel to see him and its like people are trying to talk me out of doing it. saying that i really dont know him and that hes lying to me and all this other non sense. but reading your authors note really strengthened my resovle. i know my own heart and mind and i am so looking forward to finally seeing the love of my life in person in two months. so once again thank you soo much for your encourging words.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 30: Edward
Loved this story. Can't wait for time to go quickly and for him to come home. Please update soon!!!!! I think Edward is so freaking cute. Love him!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 30: Edward
He's just to sweet.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 30: Edward
These two are going to tear each others clothes off before they even say hi when they finally meet. Their chemistry is amazing which just tells me the two of you are perfect for writing a story like this. I love the story and get giddy when you update.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 30: Edward
i have to be honest...i kept passing this story up because i thought i was already reading it...i read a lot of stories-mostly on ff. now, with all the crap going on there, and so many of my stories disappearing, i'm trying to get here more often-searching for my lost friends! i stopped today and took a peak at this one farther, and i am soooo glad i did! i loooove it! read all 30 chaps todayt! (didnt get a thing done at work! lol!) i cant wait for your next update! (and i wish like crazy this site was easier to read on my phone!) i'll be waiting! :)
Author's Response:
Hehe We're glad you decided to look further! :) You can read us on FFn, too, if you want. We'll continue posting there, here, & Twilighted, as well as Deb's blog. So you can find us any of those places. And if we get pulled from FFn, we'll still be the other places. :)
Date: 20 Jun 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 30: Edward
Ugh!!! I want more!!! I am selfish and greedy and want more of this story.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 30: Edward
LOVE IT!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 30: Edward
awww bless christopher glad hes still got bella has his teacher too.fab chapter.their gonna love the pics.update soon
Date: 20 Jun 2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 29: Bella
OH WOW...I am DEAD ;) Poor Christopher, as a new teacher, that is one part of teaching that makes me so sad, to have to deal with it. I cannot wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 30: Edward
Aww, poor Christopher. I hope that the pics help cheer Bella up. I'm glad she's finally telling Charlie. I hope Edward can stand the heat...LOL! Thanks for the updates.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 30: Edward
Okay now Edward's E-mail was so comical! Quick give me there e-mail addresses...
Sex Ed, definitely Sex Ed was one of his favorite classes... Yea that boy could teach them all a thing or too in Sex Ed.... couldn't we all agree on that?!
Thanks again for the comic relief after all the last few chapters have dealt with such a serious and important topic... and we must find some humor.... Till tomorrow, all the best! Kathy
Date: 20 Jun 2012 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 30: Edward
These two are so cute and they haven't even met yet.
Are you going to have Tanya's reaction to all the photos Edward sent her? I thik it would be funny not to mention well deserved.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 29: Bella
OMG you two are too! Hilarious!!!! Seriously LOVED the little banter back and forth between you and drotuno... Loved this
Drotuno: Okay... Technically, SARGE did, but... Yeah, semantics. Damn...two hands... O.o Wait, what were we talking about? Oh, dead readers. It's surprising the level of pervs we have.
If you are are DitR (Diamond in the Rough) fan or reader then you will know what I am talking about when Edward tells Bella "ts just semantics," essica chimes in Yeah, it's just semantics... Like she even knows what the word means, after all it's not like she's some sort of "valedictorian" or anything close to that in this particular story. She's just not very smart, poor dear.
Okay the issue with Christopher, extremely sad, thankfully Bella did get him help. Personally I do not know what the legality of reporting somone is either, but I would hope and trust that having proof would be a better choice, yet at the same time perhaps the suspicion is better. I think it's a hard issue to address, if you do not have proof and only suspect, perhaps it would be harder on the child, but then if it goes without reporting perhaps something Fatal could happen. Not sure ... Just thinking out loud....
I love the closeness these two seem to share and the feelings are growing quickly and we here in FF world Love that.... Till tomorrow girlies... Lots of FF love, Kathy
Date: 20 Jun 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 30: Edward
I can't wait to get charlies reaction. great chapter by the way.. ready for some warp time so they can meet face to face.. keep the boys safe.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 30: Edward
Omg they're so cute together. I love the story please update soon.
Date: 20 Jun 2012 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 30: Edward
He is definitely in deep :-)
Date: 20 Jun 2012 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 29: Bella
I hope Charlie is supportive
Date: 20 Jun 2012 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 28: Edward
looking forward to tomorrow :
Date: 20 Jun 2012 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 28: Edward
OH WOW...that was amazing! I cannot wait for more! So...two hands? Cannot wait to see just how exact his measurements are! ;) I loved it!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 28: Edward
Love this story, keep it coming ladies this is fantastic.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 28: Edward
I just have one question...How much time has elapsed here? When thay started talking, I think Edward told her he had six months to go. So how much longer until they meet in person? I keep thinking thats it only like two months. Can't wait for tomorrow.
Author's Response:
You can see via the dates on their first letters that she wrote him for the first time in early March. Chapter 28 was the middle of May, so they've been writing for about 2 months. And in chapter 14, Edward told her he had AT LEAST six months to go. It could be longer. We can't tell you the exact time that they'll get to meet in person. You'll just have to keep reading to find out. ;)
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 28: Edward
i think i just melted into a puddle of goo!fab cahpter.update soon
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 27: Bella
wow thats one hot email!fab chapter
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 26: Edward
i think it will be instant combustion lol.fab chapter
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 25: Bella
awww bless em.fab chapter that was one hot phone call.
Date: 19 Jun 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 28: Edward
When does Sarge come home? I am so excited for them to meet it is not funny. You would think these were real people and not fictional characters.
Date: 19 Jun 2012 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 28: Edward
I really like your story :) I have to say I'm in love with your Edward, he' s just amazing :) Can't wait to read more, I read all 28 chapters today and now I'm waiting for more!
Thank you for sharing the story
Lucy
Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 28: Edward
Can't wait to see what Edward sends her back.
Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 27: Bella
OH MY GOSH!!! SO amazing ;) I think Edward may be speechless after seeing this ;)
Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 27: Bella
Whew is right. Whatever Edward's reaction it is bound to be good.
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 28: Edward
Awesome chapter... loving every chapter of it!! I truely love these two.
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 28: Edward
Mmmm Two hands!
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 28: Edward
Oh my gosh, that was hot!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 28: Edward
You know you like teasing us, Deb! Prob as much as Big Sarge likes teasing Bella! ;)
LOL!
Another great chapter! Glad he still has his piano.
He's such a lovely combination of sensitive and sexy. Love this Edward, Deb!
xoxo
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 27: Bella
Sarge is gonna stay very clean
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 28: Edward
I need more!!!!!! I'm so hooked on this story....I mean I'm a happily married woman but can I have a army Edward for myself?!?! Great job!! I'm so impatient for them to meet. Tell me is that coming anytime soon so I can prepare to have my house empty to do the 16 year old girlish squeal? And no I'm not 16 I'm 25 it was a joke lol.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 28: Edward
Deb, will Sarge get a leave before his time is up? Will he be re-enlising?
Author's Response:
This is Jenny, but I'll answer for Deb. ;) You'll just have to wait to see. ;) That'll be answered soon. :D
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 27: Bella
tee hee hee
Love, love, love this Bella! Jenny, you're awesome!
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 28: Edward
Omg this was so hot and hilarious! I cannot wait to read more and to see them face to face. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 28: Edward
soo good :)
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 26: Edward
yes yes, more Sarge, in the shower, out of the shower, naked, half naked, in uniform, dress or fatigues doesn't matter, just MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! baby i am in luvvvvvvvvvvvvv.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 24: Edward
ok, you are redeemed. i was worried there for a bit. thank you.
Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 23: Bella
i am afraid to go to the next chappie.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
oh dear heaven, don't tell us he doesn't make it back, if that's it, i quit right now. promise a HEA!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 26: Edward
OH WOW...SO amazing! So, Sarge in the shower?! SO hot! Question...unless you are going to address it later, how big is the "Junior Sargent", or whatever you want to call it? ;)
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 25: Bella
SO AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 26: Edward
I hope they have some major privacy for their next Skype session!! LOL
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 26: Edward
I think Bella needs to sleep in a shirt for a few nights, not wash it and send it to Edward so he can have her smell with him.
LOVE IT!!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 26: Edward
ahhhh visions of the sexy Sarge in the shower... OMG!!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 25: Bella
poor thing is right, first she was worried half sick for 17 days, not that she wouldn't want him a part of his life...but she did get very little rest while he was gone....anyway, then she is woken up by that sexy man, and just as she's "feeling" the carnaility of his lovely voice well it cut short...awhhhh.....sad day...awh......but such a sweet way to wake right!?!?!
Date: 18 Jun 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 26: Edward
Damn, cant wait till tomorrow.
Date: 18 Jun 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 25: Bella
Damn, come on some phone sex would be hot as hell!! Keep posting
Date: 18 Jun 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 26: Edward
I really love these two. This story is awesome, I love the way their letters started out and their relationship is blooming.. please keep him safe and bring him home to Bella soon.. can't wait for more chapters..
Date: 18 Jun 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 26: Edward
Wow! Not more I can say but WOW.
Date: 18 Jun 2012 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 25: Bella
Love this chapter and if they were interrupted.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 26: Edward
Damn! This chapter calls for a tall glass of water! Whew! Nelly's song, "Hot In Herre" playing in the background...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GeZZr_p6vB8
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 26: Edward
Oh MY! Breathing deeply, in and out... I hope they Skipe soon...I have a feeling they will be more than satisfied given the circumstances. Love this and the complimenting POVs. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 26: Edward
Sarge in the shower mmmm
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 25: Bella
UST at its finest :-)
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 26: Edward
That was so freaking hot! I cannot wait to see more. Update soon, please.
Date: 18 Jun 2012 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 26: Edward
Both chapters were just swoon worthy!! I can't wait for Bella to answer!! I so look forward to your updates!!
Date: 18 Jun 2012 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 26: Edward
omg! so hawt! love the soilder loving the soldier;) lol
he needs a two week furlough!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 26: Edward
Well, wow. Great updates thanks. I am loving this story.
Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 24: Edward
Thank God E is safe. I thought for sure he was going to go MIA or get gravely injured Ne Bella wOuld be a basket case. Love this story and so glad not to have to wait long between updates!