[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 24: Edward
LOVE IT!!!!! Thank you so much!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 24: Edward
that sexy a$$ Sarge...Can't wait to get his hands on her...um hmmm!! Holla!!!! we as readers can't wait either.... **big girlie grin**
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 23: Bella
Ladies, Ladies....awesome example of how hard it is to wait ... especially in such a volitile situation like life in the Army and for our soliders deployed and their loved ones...great chapter...
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 14: Edward
hell, i am afraid of hell. not the dying part, but the paying for my sins part!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 9: Bella
pictures, pictures!!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 24: Edward
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THE STORY PLEASE UPDATE SOON I NEED MORE!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 8: Edward
hey where's the pic, we want to see him toooo!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 12:50 AM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward
old cheese and curry??? yuck!!! send that man some FABREZE!! quickly!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 12:45 AM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward
i would love to give Sarge some coffee and cookies!!! bless him and ya'll for sharing your talent. it's great.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 12:39 AM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward
yes, luvin' it all
Date: 17 Jun 2012 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 24: Edward
OH WOW...SO amazing! I loved the end ;) Cannot wait for their Skype dates now ;)
Date: 17 Jun 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 23: Bella
OH WOW, she is missing him. I miss him too!
Date: 17 Jun 2012 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
OH WOW...SO amazing! YAY!!! I am sad that he has to go back, but I hope he returns safely :D
Date: 17 Jun 2012 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 21: Bella
OH wow, SO amazing! I really loved it! YAY! I wonder what the CO wants...maybe he can go home early?!
Date: 17 Jun 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 20: Edward
OH WOW...amazing :D YAY!!
Date: 17 Jun 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 24: Edward
Bring it on babe, bring it on!!! love it and keep it coming!!
Date: 17 Jun 2012 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 19: Bella
OH WOW...YAY!!
Date: 17 Jun 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 24: Edward
Can I just say that out of all the stories I've read where Edward or Bella is in the military, this is one of the best. Great job.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 23: Bella
Wow! I can't wait to readt the next chapter. This was amazing.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 24: Edward
I can't tell you how much I love this story!!!!
Date: 17 Jun 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 24: Edward
Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for the next update! :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 24: Edward
So glad he's back safe!!
Date: 17 Jun 2012 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 24: Edward
LOL Bella sent pictures! I think Edward will have a big problem while he's over there surrounded by smelly men, all wearing camo...*snicker* love this mental picture!!!
Till tomorrow
Cheers
Tina
Date: 17 Jun 2012 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 24: Edward
He better hide the photos! JS
Date: 17 Jun 2012 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 23: Bella
Phew! The 2 weeks are up...now what :-)
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 24: Edward
fab chapter glad hes ok.emmett n jasper too.update soon
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 24: Edward
Thanks for the updates. I'm glad that he made it back. Time seems to be passing quickly now, I hope that means he'll be home soon...
Date: 16 Jun 2012 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
Loving the start to this. Looking forward to more.
Date: 16 Jun 2012 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 15: Bella
It is snakes for me. Ever since I was little girl and thought I was reaching for a sticking not paying attention until it hissed. I have been scared since.
Good story so far.
Date: 16 Jun 2012 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
Do you make it habit of reducing me to a puddle of goo???
AWESOME!!!
Can't wait till tomorrow!
Cheers
Tina
P.S.: I'm a lazybones concerning writing reviews and you get one every day...sooo, don't let your heads swell ;-)
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
it just struck me that your writing is just extremely reflective of honesty...does that make sense?! Okay, I mean when you wrote B&G Edward and Bella are very honest in thoughts, feels and ethics, same thing with Broken Angel "they were the same, in character traits"
So with our ever so "In charge" Sarge, who shows such vulnerabilty and pure carnal sexuality in his words "that's so not fair Bella, I can't even begin to tell you where I'd like to lick you" **swoons and fans self** that is just a resounding show of the honesty regardless of the cost to his heart, telling her his fears and how he now has something to live and fight for... see pure honesty...She is the same with him....especially when she told him that it wasn't even a choice she HAD, in regards to logging into Skype for their date and more importantly she Has No Choice in how she feels, althought I don't think she has put it out there to him yet like he has to her....I will re-read but I don't think she has, especially since she just figured it out herself tnat she is in love with him right before the skype session....and that was cut short....
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 21: Bella
Ladies - I am so thrilled to have 4 chapters today to read, TY TY both very much....now our girl has it right....put his needs top of the list...having that email there for him when he has the chace at the computer time is perfect, he needs that contact from here....hum...on to see what Capt wanted with Sarge!!!! Loved how Jasper and Emmett popped in, after all they do know her....perfect!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 20: Edward
LOL!! sweeter than lips after two, not one but two snickerdoodles being shoved into his mouth... OH Sweet Jesus, that's perfect.... were they not so adorable with their shy innocence for this new relationship....the realism came in when you pointed out the sounds in the background for Edward and that is the harsh and very accurate reality of this couples every day life..... great writing....
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 19: Bella
great pics... I love that pic of both of them as a matter of fact..
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
awww that was so romantic.fab chapter
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
2 weeks. Dam.
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 21: Bella
They at least had a few minutes
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:34 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward
Ist a great story, funny, sexy, need some more pls. Hugs
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 20: Edward
Mmmm Sarge's lips!!
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
OMG I loved their skype session... It was beautiful and the emails... Please keep them all safe. I can't wait for more
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
Good Chapter......
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
This chapter was my favorite of the four posted today. There's just something about Edward's raw honesty...
Hopefully after his excursion to Kandahar, he and the guys will be offered some leave.
Are there any outtakes planned? Maybe from another's POV?
Author's Response:
Outtakes at the end, yes, but no other POV, sorry! :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 20: Edward
awww.fab chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 19: Bella
think their both gonna be impressed.fab chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 18: Edward
yey saturdays here.fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 17: Bella
awww bless her shes in love.fab chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 16: Edward
wow they were some hot words.fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 15: Bella
fab chapter their defo getting to know each other inside and out its so sweet.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 14: Edward
hmm defo getting flirtier.fab chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 13: Bella
fab chapter.can't wait for saturday
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 12: Edward
awww fab chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 11: Bella
hmmm getting flirty.fab chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 10: Edward
awww bless him that was so sweet.fab chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 9: Bella
fab chapter.bless him
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 8: Edward
i think he bella will think hes hot!fab chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 7: Bella
awww what a beautifull romantic story.fab chapter.
Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
Amazing as always!! The song For You by Keith Urban makes me think of this story in some ways.. just sayin lol
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward
awww poor edward.fab chapter
Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 19: Bella
:-) :-)
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward
love it the wicked witch of west!fab chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:16 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward
lol fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:15 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella
awww bless her.fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:13 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward
fab chapter poor edward.
Date: 16 Jun 2012 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
Oh my gosh, that is so sweet and sad!! I hope they all make it an can't wait for their phon call!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
Yay! They tallked and they both fell. I think its great. I hope we don't have to wait until Monday for more, but it is Fathers Day on Sunday so....
I am so glad that these got up before I had to go to work. Now I have to get ready. Thanks girls...Loved them!
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 15: Bella
Enjoying this story so much i'm glad i got weekend off to catch up on it as for fears its Dolls those weird ones in dresses that you put on your shelf of in a glass cabinet those beady eyes follow you everywhere cringing thinking about it
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
Sigh..... I love this man!! Nuff said;)
Author's Response:
LOL Thanks. So do we! ;)
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
I check for this story first every day. Even before I obsess over mine, I read yours. Love it!
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you! :)
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for the next update! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! :)
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
Awesome! pleasekeep him safe! :-)
Author's Response:
No promises. ;) *laugh* Thanks for the review!
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
Awe.... more, more, more and thank you for the extra chapters!!
Author's Response:
Hehe Thank you! :)
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 21: Bella
Excellent but, why why the interruption? keep posting
Author's Response:
Hehe You jumped the gun. ;) TWCS was taking FOREVER to upload. Ugh. LOL :)
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 18: Edward
OH WOW! AMAZING :D I am SO happy for them! I cannot wait to see/read their first words face to face
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you! :)
Date: 16 Jun 2012 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 18: Edward
OMG!!!!!! What a cliffy!!!!!
LOVE IT!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! :)
Date: 15 Jun 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 18: Edward
AHHHHHHHHHH!!!! Tomorrow can't cum soon enough!!! ;)
Author's Response:
LOL Soon! :)
Date: 15 Jun 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 17: Bella
YES!!! Squeal!!!!
Author's Response:
Hehehe Thanks! :)
Date: 15 Jun 2012 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 18: Edward
Woohoo!!! love and cant wait to read more!!!
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you! :)
Date: 15 Jun 2012 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 17: Bella
Woohoo!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL Thanks! ;)
Date: 15 Jun 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 18: Edward
Well, I knew Bella would make the right choice!
Keep writing I want to read how big the rock is that just fell off Edwards heart ;-)
Cheers
Tina
Author's Response:
Haha Thank you. :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 18: Edward
You are so flipping funny Deb - Skype session for Saturday actually fell on Saturday....LMAO!!! poor darling boy and our sweet ever endearing Bella... You know I must admit the Gravity Series Fan in me finds myself comparing Sarge to EC and how sad EC's life must have been too during his time in action, ahh sigh*** just love your writing and Jen's .... ladies you astound me as a reader and look forward to the remainder of the story.... You always leave us dying for more.... Laters BB Kathy
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 17: Bella
sqee!!! is right! OMG! come on we all are -- **giggles** seriously in our dreams we are at least!!! LOL!
Author's Response:
Hehehehe Yup, definitely. :)
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 17: Bella
OH WOW...YAY!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
Date: 15 Jun 2012 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 18: Edward
I love it!! Does he realize he is falling in love too? I can't wait for their talk tomorrow. Will Bella tell him honestly how she feels? Can't wait!!
Author's Response:
Oh, I'm sure he does. :) Soon, we promise! :D
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 18: Edward
Ahh, man! I can't wait until Saturday...how ironic is that. I am so excited to read tomorrow. I hope that it's up before I go to work...
Author's Response:
Hahaha I'll try to get it up early! :)
Date: 15 Jun 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 17: Bella
Yeah! I knew that was happening!! How could it not?
Author's Response:
Hehehe Exactly. :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 18: Edward
Love the story!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 15 Jun 2012 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 18: Edward
here is the thing in a bar looks are all about the connection. In this manner he got to know her first. The looks now are a plus not the whole thing. Same for her. men are all about the visual. SO.
Author's Response:
Exactly! :)
Date: 15 Jun 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 18: Edward
O No! Another day away fr. skype!!
Author's Response:
Hehehe Tomorrow, we promise!
Date: 15 Jun 2012 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 17: Bella
that is something she did not plan on but happened none the less.
Author's Response:
Yup, definitely. :)
Date: 15 Jun 2012 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 18: Edward
I really love this story. can't wait to see how the skype session goes!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 15 Jun 2012 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 17: Bella
Love! Imagine that :-)
Author's Response:
Hehehe I know, right? ;)
Date: 14 Jun 2012 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 16: Edward
Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for the next update! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! Two new chapters coming up!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 16: Edward
Great updates. They are opening up more and letting those feelings out. I hope that it doesn't hurt them in the long run. However, if this is based on Jen's life then I think that all will be okay.
On another note, I just read An Island in the Sun and let me just say, WOW! That was one of the best stories I have read in a while...
Till tomorrow ladies...
Author's Response:
Hehe No, it won't hurt them in the long run. ;) And it's not really based on Jen's life. ;) Her husband wasn't military...just in a different college in a different state! :) Thank you very much!
Date: 14 Jun 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 16: Edward
I can't wait!! Bella is strong and will let him know she is in for the long haul!
Author's Response:
Of course she is! :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 16: Edward
he is so sweet, it makes my heart skip a beat. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 14 Jun 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 16: Edward
So so good, the more I read your fiction the more I love it.
As for the alerts, it doesn't work. But I'm willing to come every day to see if a new chapter had been posted. Till next time, take care of you.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Here's the steps to do the alerts:
Click on the story title. Right above the Story Notes box, there's links for Add Story to Favorites and Add Author to Favorites. Choose whichever one you want. Add Story is story alert. Add Author is author alert. So click one and on the page that comes up, there is a Comment box. You can just leave that blank, and then under that, click Submit. That submits the author or story to your alert list. :)
Date: 14 Jun 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 16: Edward
Awe sweet Edward! So sexy and honorable. Looking forward to more!!
Author's Response:
He is, isn't he? :) Thanks!
Date: 14 Jun 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 15: Bella
Love it, keep on writing
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D
Date: 14 Jun 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 16: Edward
Holla die Waldfee ;-) You know that one, don't you?
He's incredibly sweet! You brought tears to my eyes with this last sentence...
I really hope you update soon because I'm smiling most when I see that there's an update.
Keep writing, you two do an amazing job!
Cheers
Tina
Author's Response:
Hehe I didn't until I looked it up last time. :) Thank you so much!
Date: 14 Jun 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 16: Edward
OH WOW...AMAZING :D
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. :)