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Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward

Okay...um...first, yay she sent him a care package and told him a little about herself.

Second...:( poor Edward. He really is all alone.

I hope that Bella tells him that even though he has no family that he has her...;)

Great update. Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! :) You'll see Bella's reaction today!

Reviewer: Sparta Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 6:10 PM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward

I really do like this story. I just wish your chapters were a little longer. Until next time....



Author's Response:

Thank you. :) As they get to know one another, the chapter lengths will grow.

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward

Good Chapter......



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 3:20 PM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward

looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 1:04 PM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward

I really like your story so far...it's really cute and I like the itneraction via email.  They are quirky!

Poor Edward though....tough break with his parents :(

I'm waiting patiently to read the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: gracefish21 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 12:56 PM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward

soo good :) also happy to learn it wont all be written in letter form !

Author's Response:

Thank you! No, while Edward is still deployed, they will email back and forth a lot, but we'll have some chapters of phone calls and stuff like that. :)

Reviewer: RPatzonly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 2:02 AM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward

Awwww.  I want a Sarge!!  He's so damn sweet:)



Author's Response:

Hehehe Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward

I am in love with this story already.  Since I am a Vet and am working at Fort Jackson as a civilian and named Deb.  This rocks even more.  LOL



Author's Response:

LOL Thank you! ;)

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 9:06 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward

I'm glad that the easy banter is going to be present with these two. One question..Are we going to get to 'see' their reactions to each other's words?? I am loving this by the way...Thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you! :) Not for a little bit. Eventually we'll wander off from the written word alone. But for a bit, it's solely going to be emails. And as their relationship grows, you'll see the reactions more and more in the emails themselves. :)

Reviewer: madgerama Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward

I'm pleased you guys are over here too. Love your story



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:39 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward

awhhhh!!! Must send him some dunkin coffee, I was always a Starbucks coffee lover but recently have gone to the dark side! Loved the easy banter yes, loved his reasoning behind his love for Dumas's works, sometimes we can see that this Edward is very easy going, not your typical soldier, but then again, I am sure he is different in action .... so excited for more tomorrow...TY again for feeding my addiction for your works Deb.... Jen and Deb your outstanding together as well as individual authors....TY  Laters BB   Kathy



Author's Response:

Hehe Yeah, totally different person when he needs to be. :) Thank you from both of us!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward

loved the first communication between our two, it was perfect... but I fear I would be like Edward, if I made homemade cookies....not a single crumb would survive to be shipped...yum yum...LOL!!!!! Yes, I Loved what Edward did back to Tanya...



Author's Response:

LOL Yeah, I'd be the same way. ;) Thank you!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:16 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella

Great, I'm gonna love this Bella....alot....she is kind and considerate, and resourceful....fresh baked cookies are the best... those baby wipes are highly coveted in deployed areas like the middle east....yeah Baby!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I loved coming up with her this story. :)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:08 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward

phew! what a beginning!  love to hate on Tanya, that''s for sure!  Seriously' women that could do something like this are scum.... looking forward to more...Happy to have your new joint venture to read!!!!



Author's Response:

Hehe Yeah, we decided to pick on her this story. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: CourtneyLeighCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward

Great chapter! I can't wait for the next update! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward

love it



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:35 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:34 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella

love it



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:32 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward

love it



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: redbedroom82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:20 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward

Can't wait for the next chapter.. I was getting kind of bored with stories and none caught my attention but I'm really addicted to this one! I find myself wishing it was updated more then once a day lol



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you! :)

Reviewer: shea1223 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:36 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward

LOVE IT !!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:03 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: charlieD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:15 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward

think I might prefer it over here than on ffn.  even better cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

Oh? Why is that? If it's because the chapters are posted together, that won't always be the case. I am doing it like that here because I'm having to do it like that on Twilighted, since they don't allow chapters shorter than 500 words, and at least the first handful of letters/emails are. :) We're glad you're enjoying it! :)

Reviewer: gracefish21 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:13 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward

soo good :)

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Sparta Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:02 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward

I love this and can't wait to see where you take them!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: CourtneyLeighCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 10:13 AM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward

Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for the next update! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:20 AM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Hehe Thank you again!

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:14 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thank you again! :)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:04 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Reviewer: TaniMar Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:46 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella

Bella is such a sweetheart :) Never had cinammon sugar shortbread but now I want to try them, sounds delicious :) Another amazing chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: TaniMar Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:42 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward

really enjoyed the chapter :) Tanya is a whore but Edward is better off without her. On to the next chapter :D



Author's Response:

Thank you! LOL

Reviewer: twilightmom96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:38 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward

i like this cant wait for u to post more



Author's Response:

Thank you! :) We'll be posting 1-2 chapters a day, so... :)

Reviewer: Sparta Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:01 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward

this is a cute story!! So glad that I found it. Please post soon



Author's Response:

Thank you! We'll be posting a chapter or two a day, so... :)

Reviewer: Sparta Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:34 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward

hahahaha, love it!!



Author's Response:

Heh Thank you! :)

Reviewer: RPatzonly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward

How soon before they Skype???  LOL.  

Bella's letter was good- showed her sense of humor and protectiveness and Edward's reply was just sweet**sigh**

Thanks



Author's Response:

Hehe Thank you for the review. :) Just a handful of chapters. ;)

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward

Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 3:08 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward

That was great. I loved how he got his revenge. I would loved to have seen Tanya's expression when she recieved all of those pics. Update Soon!



Author's Response:

Hehe Thank you! :)

Reviewer: gracefish21 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 2:37 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward

soo good

Author's Response:

Thank you! I edited it after posting Bella's chapter to add chapter 2 to it, so if you only read Bella's letter, go back & read Edward's, too! :)

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 2:31 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward

Loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you! I edited it after posting Bella's chapter to add chapter 2 to it. If you read it before that, make sure you go back and read the 2nd half! :)

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 6:22 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella

I love these military pen pal stories!  Can't wait to see Edward's reaction to the surprise care package



Author's Response:

Thank you! We're glad you liked it. :) You'll see Edward's reaction soon. :)

Reviewer: RPatzonly Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 11:35 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella

I love it so far.  I always enjoy getting both B & E's POV;)

Cant wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you! We hope you continue to enjoy. :)

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 10:22 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella

Love the story.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: gracefish21 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 10:01 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella

so good

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

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