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Date: 06 Jun 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward
Okay...um...first, yay she sent him a care package and told him a little about herself.
Second...:( poor Edward. He really is all alone.
I hope that Bella tells him that even though he has no family that he has her...;)
Great update. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! :) You'll see Bella's reaction today!
Date: 06 Jun 2012 6:10 PM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward
I really do like this story. I just wish your chapters were a little longer. Until next time....
Author's Response:
Thank you. :) As they get to know one another, the chapter lengths will grow.
Date: 06 Jun 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward
Good Chapter......
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 06 Jun 2012 3:20 PM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! :)
Date: 06 Jun 2012 1:04 PM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward
I really like your story so far...it's really cute and I like the itneraction via email. They are quirky!
Poor Edward though....tough break with his parents :(
I'm waiting patiently to read the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! :)
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Date: 06 Jun 2012 12:56 PM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward
soo good :) also happy to learn it wont all be written in letter form !
Author's Response:
Thank you! No, while Edward is still deployed, they will email back and forth a lot, but we'll have some chapters of phone calls and stuff like that. :)
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Date: 06 Jun 2012 2:02 AM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward
Awwww. I want a Sarge!! He's so damn sweet:)
Author's Response:
Hehehe Thank you! :)
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Date: 05 Jun 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward
I am in love with this story already. Since I am a Vet and am working at Fort Jackson as a civilian and named Deb. This rocks even more. LOL
Author's Response:
LOL Thank you! ;)
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Date: 05 Jun 2012 9:06 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward
I'm glad that the easy banter is going to be present with these two. One question..Are we going to get to 'see' their reactions to each other's words?? I am loving this by the way...Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) Not for a little bit. Eventually we'll wander off from the written word alone. But for a bit, it's solely going to be emails. And as their relationship grows, you'll see the reactions more and more in the emails themselves. :)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward
I'm pleased you guys are over here too. Love your story
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
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Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:39 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward
awhhhh!!! Must send him some dunkin coffee, I was always a Starbucks coffee lover but recently have gone to the dark side! Loved the easy banter yes, loved his reasoning behind his love for Dumas's works, sometimes we can see that this Edward is very easy going, not your typical soldier, but then again, I am sure he is different in action .... so excited for more tomorrow...TY again for feeding my addiction for your works Deb.... Jen and Deb your outstanding together as well as individual authors....TY Laters BB Kathy
Author's Response:
Hehe Yeah, totally different person when he needs to be. :) Thank you from both of us!
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Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward
loved the first communication between our two, it was perfect... but I fear I would be like Edward, if I made homemade cookies....not a single crumb would survive to be shipped...yum yum...LOL!!!!! Yes, I Loved what Edward did back to Tanya...
Author's Response:
LOL Yeah, I'd be the same way. ;) Thank you!
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Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:16 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella
Great, I'm gonna love this Bella....alot....she is kind and considerate, and resourceful....fresh baked cookies are the best... those baby wipes are highly coveted in deployed areas like the middle east....yeah Baby!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I loved coming up with her this story. :)
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Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:08 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward
phew! what a beginning! love to hate on Tanya, that''s for sure! Seriously' women that could do something like this are scum.... looking forward to more...Happy to have your new joint venture to read!!!!
Author's Response:
Hehe Yeah, we decided to pick on her this story. :) Thanks!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next update! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:35 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward
love it
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:34 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:32 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:20 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward
Can't wait for the next chapter.. I was getting kind of bored with stories and none caught my attention but I'm really addicted to this one! I find myself wishing it was updated more then once a day lol
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you! :)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:36 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward
LOVE IT !!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:03 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
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Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:15 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward
think I might prefer it over here than on ffn. even better cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
Oh? Why is that? If it's because the chapters are posted together, that won't always be the case. I am doing it like that here because I'm having to do it like that on Twilighted, since they don't allow chapters shorter than 500 words, and at least the first handful of letters/emails are. :) We're glad you're enjoying it! :)
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Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:13 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward
soo good :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:02 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward
I love this and can't wait to see where you take them!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 10:13 AM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward
Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for the next update! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:20 AM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response:
Hehe Thank you again!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:14 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you again! :)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:04 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
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Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:46 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella
Bella is such a sweetheart :) Never had cinammon sugar shortbread but now I want to try them, sounds delicious :) Another amazing chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! :)
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Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:42 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward
really enjoyed the chapter :) Tanya is a whore but Edward is better off without her. On to the next chapter :D
Author's Response:
Thank you! LOL
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:38 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward
i like this cant wait for u to post more
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) We'll be posting 1-2 chapters a day, so... :)
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:01 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward
this is a cute story!! So glad that I found it. Please post soon
Author's Response:
Thank you! We'll be posting a chapter or two a day, so... :)
Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:34 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward
hahahaha, love it!!
Author's Response:
Heh Thank you! :)
Date: 04 Jun 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward
How soon before they Skype??? LOL.
Bella's letter was good- showed her sense of humor and protectiveness and Edward's reply was just sweet**sigh**
Thanks
Author's Response:
Hehe Thank you for the review. :) Just a handful of chapters. ;)
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Date: 04 Jun 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward
Great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 04 Jun 2012 3:08 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward
That was great. I loved how he got his revenge. I would loved to have seen Tanya's expression when she recieved all of those pics. Update Soon!
Author's Response:
Hehe Thank you! :)
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Date: 04 Jun 2012 2:37 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward
soo good
Author's Response:
Thank you! I edited it after posting Bella's chapter to add chapter 2 to it, so if you only read Bella's letter, go back & read Edward's, too! :)
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Date: 04 Jun 2012 2:31 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward
Loved it
Author's Response:
Thank you! I edited it after posting Bella's chapter to add chapter 2 to it. If you read it before that, make sure you go back and read the 2nd half! :)
Date: 04 Jun 2012 6:22 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella
I love these military pen pal stories! Can't wait to see Edward's reaction to the surprise care package
Author's Response:
Thank you! We're glad you liked it. :) You'll see Edward's reaction soon. :)
Date: 03 Jun 2012 11:35 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella
I love it so far. I always enjoy getting both B & E's POV;)
Cant wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you! We hope you continue to enjoy. :)
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Date: 03 Jun 2012 10:22 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella
Love the story.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
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Date: 03 Jun 2012 10:01 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella
so good
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)