Date: 24 Aug 2018 1:54 AM Title: Outtake 1
Great story!! Wish I knew what happened those 2 yrs and what happens now.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oooohhh good one on Edward!!! Shame on him!! Yuck Tanya.
:)
Date: 02 Oct 2012 12:03 AM Title: Outtake 1
Loved it
Date: 08 Jul 2012 9:02 AM Title: Outtake 1
I love this story
Author's Response:
Awe, Thank you!
Date: 19 Jun 2012 8:14 PM Title: Outtake 1
awwwww.....goodness goodness goodness....
Author's Response:
Right I have to say that made me cry the outake... *SIGH*
Date: 19 Jun 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 34
goodness...what an ending... "Momma"... oh my!
you've constructed a masterpiece here dearie.... a masterpiece!
thank you for sharing this!
Date: 19 Jun 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 33
oh wow...i wanted to review each chapter but couldn't...the backstory, everything coming together was just too much...i was sucked in and finally came up for air.
Date: 19 Jun 2012 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 25
heart sinking...slowly...i'm watching bubbles form and float up while i'm going down down down :(
Date: 19 Jun 2012 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
i can't remember if i've already reviewed this chapter or not...but every time i read it i feel punched in the gut (that's a good thing)
Author's Response:
Well thanks for reviewing even if I just punched you with my words
Date: 15 Jun 2012 9:14 PM Title: Outtake 1
I dont like Alice anymore, and its your fault, btw thanks for making me cry.
Author's Response:
I don't know how to take this... But thanks for reviewing.
Date: 15 Jun 2012 3:59 PM Title: Outtake 1
Oh, that so had me in tears.
Brilliant!
Trip
Author's Response:
Thanks, sad you have tears but I'm happy it moved you. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 15 Jun 2012 12:24 PM Title: Outtake 1
Really enjoyed this story and loved all the pictures. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
you're welcome and thanks to you for reviewing and reading!
Date: 15 Jun 2012 7:11 AM Title: Outtake 1
Just saw the outtake later commented that the last chapter, which was good because at least two opinions let me to you.
I found it interesting to tell Evan who was the true mother. I think part of it felt like she could be more human and so she was asking for clemency for Bella that she had done. As I wrote in previous comment, a story was fantastic and wonderful, congratulations once again (laughs).
Date: 15 Jun 2012 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 34
Wow .... that guy was a great ending. I end the chapter of the letter with a rage cried Alice ..... urgh more in the last chapter I smiled at the end with the "mommy." Great, great story congratulations. I found your story today and just stopped reading the perfect ending. Really brilliant, congratulations.
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking a chance on my little story. I hope it made you laugh, cry and even be a bit angry as it did me. I would have beat Edward, flipped alice off and kept my boys close. Thanks for your reviews!
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:36 AM Title: Outtake 1
omg im so tearing up!
Author's Response:
I hope you enjoyed the ride and I am so happy you stayed loyal through it all. Thanks so much!
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 34
WOW ...chills again! Incredible story!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you stayed for the long haul and enjoyed it.
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 33
OMG this chapter literally gave me chills....
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 24
Aww thanks for the shout out...I am glad i could help you see how epic this is just as it is written <3
Date: 15 Jun 2012 1:06 AM Title: Outtake 1
what an amazing story!
Author's Response:
Awe thank you. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 15 Jun 2012 12:22 AM Title: Outtake 1
I'm glad he knows his mama! Xoxo
Author's Response:
Me too, glad you enjoyed the ride and it ended on a semi happy note even though it was a cliffed ending.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 34
Awe, how could I not like that? They taught their little boy that B was his momma and of course I B ends up with J after all he has done there is always ways for jasper to redeem himself.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your reviews Beck!
Date: 14 Jun 2012 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 33
I hope B can get closer from the past two years Of heart ache with Alice's post-its!
Author's Response:
I think she does...
Date: 14 Jun 2012 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 32
Who was the kissing couple? Jasper and Bella?
Author's Response:
On the rocks? yes. the one on the beach, it just looked good but had been for Sam and Emily.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 31
Gah! So I wonder if B was telling her she wanted to keep Evan an Alice said those aweful thigs to her?
Author's Response:
Yep, she just couldnt give him up...
Date: 14 Jun 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 34
How does he kno Bella ??
Author's Response:
*whispers* I have a outtake for you... be patient I will add it soon. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 30
I bet she didn't want to even look at a newborn after she gave Evan away :(
Author's Response:
I think if I gave up my baby I would feel the same...
Date: 14 Jun 2012 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 33
Some of the pictures in this story are beautiful ! Did you take them yourself?
Author's Response:
Sadly no, I found most all of them off of Favim.com Try it its a great image gallery.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 29
Grr... Good luck B
Date: 14 Jun 2012 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 28
I wonder if alice realized how much these photos would have hurt her when she planned this. Maybe this was selfish of her too.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 34
Ooh, I just loved that!
Thanks for sharing that with us.
Trip
Author's Response:
You're welcome and thank you for reviewing and sticking with me...
Date: 14 Jun 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 31
Even though Bella slept with her boyfriend, broken up or not. The second she had second thoughts about giving up her child Alice should have given up. There are adoption laws where the birth mother has time to change her mind. Sorry wouldn't cut it. Although jasper being the father would still complicate things. Unless they did a runner with the baby. But then the Brandon's wouldn't have a leg to stand on with a restraining order. she has shit luck with guys. I know karma is a bitch but damn.
Author's Response:
I even researched these things but I wanted it to seem like a shitty situation... And the next chapter which isnt as much a chapter as the Letter will clear up alot...
Date: 14 Jun 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 27
She was just doing what she felt was right at the time, guilt for betraying her BFF.
Author's Response:
Make sure you re read this chapter as it wasnt fully added the first time. Thanks for your review.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 26
Yeah... Kill the evidence, Keep it a secret and don't let Alice know he truth. Heavy sarcasm.
Author's Response:
May be heavy in sarcasm but it made me giggle. thanks for reviewing...
Date: 14 Jun 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 25
Damn, I'm so pissed as him for taking her V card and running back to her.
Author's Response:
I'm glad someone saw that she had given him her most precious gift... MWAUH!
Date: 14 Jun 2012 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 24
So it sounds like her BFF was selfish from the beginning taking her lover away from her? And then jackass locked her out after fucking her. My heart aches for B.
Author's Response:
I think everyone is a bit selfish but yes she is just one of those cute selfish types.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
Oh Bella, what did you do? I assume he went back to his girlfriend the very next morning....
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 24
It's tomorrow here now!
Author's Response:
I've given you two more... YAY!
Date: 14 Jun 2012 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oh Lordy!
Author's Response:
I hope that means you enjoyed it, Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wow, I need to take my son to school but I have to catch up firsrt!
Author's Response:
I was having this same problem with needing to finish up the chapters for you'll
Date: 14 Jun 2012 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 21
0.o !! Now you've really thrown me in a loop!
Date: 14 Jun 2012 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 20
Can Bella give him a slap or three? She'll feel better for it!
Author's Response:
I'm sure she would if she could...
Date: 14 Jun 2012 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 19
Well someone has to hand Edward his arse and who better the big brothers (even if one is a wanna-be!)
Author's Response:
I love that she has her own brother and others to try and make things easier for her... that type of support is amazing.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 24
So looking forward to see how this winds up.
Great stuff,
Trip
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review...
Date: 14 Jun 2012 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 24
i've burned through these last chapters, i honestly can't read them quick enough.
Author's Response:
It makes me happy to have you like it!
Date: 14 Jun 2012 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 23
ahhhh!!!!!! this is one of the best chapter ending/ cliffy ????? that i've read. cannot wait for more.
Author's Response:
I know I left you in a horrible teetering place... how dare I!! *grins and skips away* Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 23
oh gah!!! you left me hanging!! I am gonna die!
Author's Response:
I know... I am horrible. On the brighter side, I will most likely click the complete tomorrow... All the answers are coming.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 18
I dont care about the errors, I feel the same way when I write..I love this story just as it is
Author's Response:
Awe, thanks for the honesty. And, I may just give another chapter because of it. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 23
:(... More! I'm a greedy bitch today! I might just have to hack into your docs and gobble it all up... Bwahahahaha J/K... Maybe
Author's Response:
your greedy but thats an amazing trait!
Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 23
Had a feeling there was a baby involved somewhere. Beautiful photograph. And may I say how pleased I am with the exception of kellan lutz how pleased I am that the photographs are not of the movie actors. My pet peeve. Hate the movies, and I still see my version of the characters in my head. I love when authors keep their characters generic.
Author's Response:
I dont persay see Emmett like that it just fit... So I used it. I like to have them be different. Everyone see's their characters different, although I am using them I dont see them as the actors who portray them. Thanks for your review and I hope you like it so far.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh my god! This is driving me crazy! In a good way, although I have to keep hiding my phone when my boss comes in my office. My two cents...her best friend ran off with the guy she loves, now said best friend is dying and wants Bella to take care of him for her. Or something like that???
Author's Response:
I want to say ding ding you got it but its so much more complicated than that. Some of what you said is right, some not. I hope your enjoying this and thank you for the review.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 22
Keep Em coming!
Author's Response:
Last one for tonight is up... Hope you enjoy it.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 21
She loves someone else? Hopefully not the person that has died or is Dying. Because you said WAS!
Author's Response:
And Maybe their are circumstances that made her say was that have nothing to do with death!
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 20
Tell him to go away he has no right to touch her! Xo
Author's Response:
Riight, I really wanted her to slap him but that was me coming out not her.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 19
Ha! You must have posted just as I was begging for more on FB! So miss B a photographer like me? I try to stay away from weddings, they're not my cup of tea.
Author's Response:
I made her a photographer for you... *smooches* I've added bits and piece for others too but not as easy to pick out.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 18
Or maybe it's not something as cruel As suicide and she died of a horrible disease.
Author's Response:
Continueing on is the only way to find out.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'm Dieing here! Xo
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 16
That is soo Em! Maybe Alice has already commited suicide and had these ready to be mailed after the fact.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 15
Love that Rosalie!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I love her too!
Date: 13 Jun 2012 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
That Stupid fucker! Dont you dare let them get back together! ;)
Date: 13 Jun 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
Still not getting updates grr...
I'm ready!
Date: 13 Jun 2012 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 18
The pictures you use always compliments your words, they blend together seamlessly.
Author's Response:
Thanks.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 17
I need to know more about Sam & Emily; and actually you happen own a fuck awesome story! (IMHO)
Author's Response:
They are minor characters in the sceme of things but I will try to fit a bit more of them in. Also, thanks for your opinion.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
Need more! Living it
Author's Response:
More coming... thanks for reviewing. xoxo
Date: 13 Jun 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
This has to be my favourite photo so far, Emmett looks awesome!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I knew I had to use that one. I will have more chapters today...
Date: 13 Jun 2012 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
I hope Emmetts' photo brings back happier memories for Bella.
Author's Response:
Oh it does... *smooches*
Date: 13 Jun 2012 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 14
Definitely like!
Author's Response:
YAY!
Date: 13 Jun 2012 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love it so far. Even though Edward ever cheating and Tanya's name in any way is usually a hard limit for me. I almost stopped, but I'm too curious.
What is the time line in this story? How old are they? Can you at least say that. One mi ute I think it's been many years then you mention two years. Just wondering. And I love the photos!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad your sticking with me... Thanks.
Okay with the events that have happened the timline is as follows:
Two years ago bella was in the hospital (mentioned in one chapter but also in another of how long it's been since she has talked to him.)
The many years of being broken up is so I didnt have to put a set time.
Bella is about 24, 25ish...
I hope this helped you, and thanks for the review.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 15
i'm not even sure where to start...you already know how much i love your writing...
this piece is incredible...i want more and yet am perfectly satisfied with short chapters and antidotes....
the photo/post-it idea is incredible
you have a talent for weaving past and present seemlessly...
i want to continue gushing.... :)
ps.. i'm sure you rocked your writing final!
Author's Response:
Gosh, JR, you always have a way of making me blush!
Thanks for reading and reviewing. xoxo
Date: 12 Jun 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 13
Someone who takes no enemies when telling the truth........... this story just keeps me wanting more!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I am trying to write more while I am studying. I have it almost finished so YAY!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
Will all their pictures reveal more of the story? I certainly hope so! Good Luck with your writing final
Author's Response:
Yes, Almost all of the images will reveal a piece or two...
Date: 12 Jun 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
I"m intrigued by this.
Keep 'em coming!
Trip
Author's Response:
Awe, thanks. I will try to put more up today but with this final kicking my asp... I dont know. Def. more tomorrow if not most of what I have.
Date: 12 Jun 2012 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 11
More characters are coming in to play, there's still a few of the usual suspects though!
Author's Response:
I hope your still enjoying this... and yes there will be a nice bunch of people!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
Does that mean Edawrd is there too or just that she was reminded of him? I'm thinking the first. Xo
Author's Response:
He's there. I may give you one more before I study more!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
Her brother!
Author's Response:
yep!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 9
Yay update! I have a plot bunny for you because I'm sure as hell not writing it!
Author's Response:
Well you know how to get at me woman...
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 10
Emmett? Sad that this is the last one for now, but at least I won't be distracted for a few hours!
Author's Response:
You are very smart... Yes! Emmie poo the over protective brother from hell.
Date: 12 Jun 2012 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 9
It's 4am here but yep, I'm ready for more!
Author's Response:
I will give you more tomorrow. Its only 8pm for me, so... good morning from me as it is my good night. *snuggles in bed*
Date: 12 Jun 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 8
I can't wait to find out who, what and why!
Author's Response:
Riight, I just loved writing this!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 8
Police? Wow whoever this person is must have done something extra bad to deserve a call to the police!
Author's Response:
Emmett is the son of a sheriff what would be his go to? Either call dad or police... I think if he said either jacob would of said why call the police!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
Yum!!
My theory is that the mystery person (Alice?) is about to commit suicide and wants her "friends" to remember her this way or whatever that one postit note said.
Author's Response:
That would be too easy! I can say with this and the last review you are fitting clues together just not all! xoxo
Date: 12 Jun 2012 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
Cancel date night and call the "others", I need more!
Author's Response:
I may give you two more tonight. I hope you continue to like!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
....a new chapter and a new picture clue, not that it help's my theories any!
Author's Response:
About to add two more... So I hope it doesnt help your theories... *grins and winks*
Date: 12 Jun 2012 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 6
Keep Em coming!
Author's Response:
About to add two more... ready for it?
Date: 12 Jun 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 5
I wouldn't mind a B and J pairing ;) not getting notifications so I'll check my account setting after I catch up!
Author's Response:
I say kick it and... *runs out of author's responce before I kill the suspence*
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
Good luck (again) with those pesky finals! My mind is whirring with different theories!
Author's Response:
I don't think anything actually informative happens until ten or so chapters from now just alot of filler! *smooches* you're awesome!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 4
Good luck on your finals today! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks becka.
I can't wait to give you more!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
Jacob must know something...
And why the hell didnt I get a notification?
Maybe I need to change some settings...
Author's Response:
Jacob always knows something... isn't that always the case?
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
First congrats on your final projects & test and good luck with the rest of them.
I keep looking at the banner for extra clues and now I have so many theories going around in my head, I'm in danger of confusing myself! I think I'll just wait for your updates!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I have been mega scared over these finals. Sadly Ive only taken one of three. BOO!
Yes, the banner has many clues and they're EPIC! xoxo
Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
.... and so the questions begin...... I'm looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
You're welcome to ask as many as you like and I may even answer a few but not enough to have an aha moment. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Here is another coming, since I did so well on my first final of the day!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 2
Short enough to leave you wanting more!
Author's Response:
YAY, thats what I am going for.
Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
The banner caught my eye and I couldn't resist peeking in; I was't disappointed!
Author's Response:
Awe, thanks... I know my errors are annoying but I'm trying to learn and this is my trial and error. Glad you liked it!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 2
Looks great....Thanks for writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading...
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 2
The past has now returned to the present. Wonder what you have in store for us? Xo
Author's Response:
Isn't that what past always does? Comes to bring the memories back you didn't want!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hi! Not gore? Ok!
Love that you can ad pics to the notes. Xo
Author's Response:
No gore in this one, I promise!