Date: 18 Dec 2012 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 253
Good point Carlisle...push him, he needs to know she loves him for him!
Date: 18 Dec 2012 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 252
I really love his chats with Carlisle and the little insights into his sex life with Esme. So he finally knows he loves her, time to step up his game and see what she thinks about him
Author's Response:
I have thousands of words written about Carlisle and Esme's sex life. Their first time in a bdsm club, all of it. Hoping to work on it and have it out by spring on amazon!
Date: 18 Dec 2012 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 251
That would suck wondering if you are the only one he plays with. I thought she actually signed paperwork but maybe it was just her limits. It would drive me crazy not knowing and without her being able to look in his eyes she really doesn't have a clue to his feelings. Well, except for his word changes lately
If Edward could read her mind at work he also would never let her leave the playroom!
Date: 18 Dec 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 250
I guess Peter did tell him about the strength thing...I remember the talk about her being very tired after. He is just the sweetest vamp around! Love to snuggled up and fall asleep.
Date: 18 Dec 2012 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 249
Hummmm, she moves fast and seems to be stronger now...vamp cum have some extra ingrediants perhaps!!! These might be things that Peter should have mentioned so he doesn't have a heart attack. LOL
Date: 18 Dec 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 248
I love that he called her Mine! That was so freaking hot :) And Edward owes Peter a couple shots of blood!
Date: 18 Dec 2012 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 254
Damn, that was a really hot diary entry & photo manip
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2012 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 254
I'm not sure I understand Edward's logic in the idea that if he takes the blindfold off Bella he'll have to change her. She's been looking at him almost every day for months (I'm guessing). Obviously just by seeing him doesn't means she'll know he's a vampire. Altho if the blindfold comes off in the playroom he won't be able to wiz around like before:)lol
Author's Response:
He feels that he will endanger her by revealing himself. It's really a protection for himself as well. In the past, he would be with women for about a year, find them a new Dom and go on.
Date: 17 Dec 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 254
Loved it!! :D
Date: 17 Dec 2012 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 254
she thinks so little of herself so sad ;
Date: 17 Dec 2012 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 254
Oh lord I love him!!
Date: 17 Dec 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 254
All caught up dear, Noc. Such excitement!! I am enjoying this. Thank you!
Date: 17 Dec 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 253
hhmmm ponder that Edward!!
Date: 17 Dec 2012 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 250
Lovely!! :)
Date: 17 Dec 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 254
things are going so good
Date: 17 Dec 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 239
OH dear god I would so love this!!
Date: 17 Dec 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 254
Gah, yes! I really loved it! I cannot wait to see the next part of training ;)
Date: 17 Dec 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 254
yep.....and that is one of the reasons your are the top favorite on the writers coffe shop reading list ....way to go ....
Author's Response:
awwww thanks :)
Date: 17 Dec 2012 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 254
This was wrote with great feelings on both Edward and Bella's part. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!!
Date: 17 Dec 2012 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 254
this was a great chapter! I loved to get into Bella's mind through her journal entry. Please continue with that!
Date: 17 Dec 2012 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 254
great chapter... its getting closer to the dday...can't wait until the reveal!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2012 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 254
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 254
Great update. Thanks Noc!! Can't wait or her to see him!!
Date: 17 Dec 2012 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 254
GOTTA LOVE SOAPY! I WONDER IF SOMETHING HAPPENS FOR HIM TO CHANGE HER SOONER THAN HE WANTS?
Date: 17 Dec 2012 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 253
Huh I wonder that too lol :d
Date: 17 Dec 2012 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 252
Aww poor Edward :) if he would just ask lol :D
Date: 17 Dec 2012 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 253
She is going to see him soon????
Date: 17 Dec 2012 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 252
It is not going to matter to her she loves him just like he loves her
Date: 17 Dec 2012 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 253
OH YEAH! GO CARLSILE :D
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 253
Oooooo I can't wait!!! Is she ginna freak when he finds out its Edward.
Date: 16 Dec 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 253
OOOH!!! SQUEEE
Date: 16 Dec 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 253
Thanks for the update, I'm so enjoying reading this story.
Date: 16 Dec 2012 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 253
So glad that he is talkin to Carlisle. Love the picture of Edward and Bella, very intimate. Can't wait to find out Edward's answer.
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 253
I can not wait to tell her that Edward is.
Carlisle gives good advice.
Thank you.
Date: 16 Dec 2012 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 253
Could this mean a big reveal soon?? Really hope so!!
Date: 16 Dec 2012 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 253
For sure, between Edward and Bella, it's not love AT FIRST SIGHT ! LOL !
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2012 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 253
Yeah!!! Great point Carlisle! Oooh - I'm so excited to see where this leads :)
Date: 16 Dec 2012 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 253
Push that poor boy Carlisle!!! Sometimes that's all you need.
Date: 16 Dec 2012 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 253
I hope that Bella writes about her love to her Sir or about her mixed feelings towards Edward in her journal.
Date: 16 Dec 2012 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 253
Oh hell yeah, we're getting close!!!
Date: 16 Dec 2012 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 14
Not sure about this! The picture......?
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2012 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 253
Thaniks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2012 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 252
aaaw... poor broodward. He totes needs to hear Bella's profession of love.
Date: 16 Dec 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 252
SWEEEEEEEEEEET!!!!
Date: 16 Dec 2012 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 252
Aww.. he finally realizes that he loves her! Sweet!
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2012 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 252
1 million reads! Wow, that's incredible:)
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2012 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 252
Damn it Edward. Let her see who you are. Doesnt Alice have a vision of Bella hoping it Edward or something?
Date: 15 Dec 2012 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 252
Yes, so you should tell her!
Date: 15 Dec 2012 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 251
I know exactly what she means, Edward as Sir and I would never leave the playroom either.
Date: 15 Dec 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 250
So sweet him taking her home and kissing her forehead. Will the increased effects wear off?? And how soon?? Wonder what she thinks about her increased strength does she even realise?
Date: 15 Dec 2012 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 252
Oh Edward...she loves you too!
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 77
I am!!! I've been reading on my phone, which for some reason doesn't allow me to review on this website but I had to hop on my computer after that and let you know how much I'm enjoying this.
That was super freakin hot. Unf.
Date: 15 Dec 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 252
SOOOOOOOO, it's time for Bella to discover who or what Edward is, and then what she really want with him. Thank you for the regular updates.
Date: 15 Dec 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 252
Glad he is talking to Carlisle. Hope he continues to tell the truth about the situation.
Date: 15 Dec 2012 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 252
HE NEEDS TO TELL HER THE TRUE BECAUSE IT WILL CHANGE HIS LIFE.
Date: 15 Dec 2012 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 252
He has to tell her who and what he is? Will it be. While yet?
I love this story!
Author's Response:
I took a poll and almost everyone said they wanted to know all the info, and not for me to skip over any scenes... sorry
Date: 15 Dec 2012 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 252
She may not know everything about him but she's loving everything so far!
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 252
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2012 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 252
Good chapter! Edward and Bella really need to talk to each other! It's not like she's not figuring it out on her own, fast! LOL! Dana
Date: 15 Dec 2012 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 252
THen its time to tell her!!!!
Date: 15 Dec 2012 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 252
Ask her you big oaf! Lol
Date: 15 Dec 2012 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 251
Well she's totally in the right path lol :D
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2012 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 251
Great chapter and I love the pics. They are sooooooo hot.
Date: 15 Dec 2012 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 251
oooh soo glad she is thinking of Edward now!
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 251
Thanks good chapter
Date: 15 Dec 2012 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 251
Sweet dreams indeed;-)
reality is just as good....in fanfic land;-)
dang that's a hot pic manip
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 251
Love the pics! I think she needs to "accidently" let her mask slip! I really want her to find out its Edward lol
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2012 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 251
Bella dreams that his master is like Edward!
I look forward she discovers that Edward really is.
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2012 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 251
I wonder if Edward will consider actually fucking her after she's consumed some of his cum and has taken on vampish qualities....
Date: 14 Dec 2012 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 251
The picture just looks like Emmetts hand :) soo big.
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2012 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 251
his chapter is such a tease (and I mean that it the best way possible!) How much longer 'til the blindfold comes off...? I'm dying!! Please don't tell me that'll be the end of the story -- I need at least a couple of chapters where Bella gets the full Dom-Edward experience!
Date: 14 Dec 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 251
Umm...yay! I cannot wait to see what happens next.
Date: 14 Dec 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 251
finally she realized that she's in love with him! ; ) And those pics suit the chapter perfectly.
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 251
Naughty naughty Bella! But who can blame her! If Edward was my Sir, I would think just like her!
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 251
Here here I would be doing the same never leave playroom if it was him lol
Date: 14 Dec 2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 251
That is how I see him in my sleep too!!!!!!!! lol!!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Dec 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 251
ughhh I hope he reveals himself!!!
Date: 14 Dec 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 251
Yess! She's finally putting it together!
Date: 14 Dec 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 251
I'm so proud of you, and cannot stop bouncing in my seat. I've never wanted to be there more than at this very moment. Congratulations on 1 million reads, and it's only the beginning, I know it. Love you always.
Author's Response:
I love u too, and i want u here more and more!
Date: 14 Dec 2012 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 251
Great chapter
Date: 14 Dec 2012 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 251
Well, Bella, you wish can come true! Still loving this story. Thanks!
Date: 14 Dec 2012 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 251
She's catching on.... can't wait for the reveal!!!
Date: 14 Dec 2012 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 251
Oooo a little insite. I think things might be starting to click.
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2012 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 251
so when is he gonna reveal himself??????????
Date: 14 Dec 2012 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 251
LOVE THE PICS! I CAN NOT WAIT UNTIL BELLA FINDS OUT THAT SIR AND EDWARD ARE ONE IN THE SAME.
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2012 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 251
When will he reveal himself to Bella?