[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 249
Thanks good chapter
Date: 12 Dec 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 223
WAY TO GO!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 249
what was the cracking sound? the glass dildo?
Date: 12 Dec 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 220
mmmmm Get him Rose!
Date: 12 Dec 2012 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 248
Holy Moly!
thanks for updating.*~}
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2012 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 248
What a way to go to sleep. I know what I'll be dreaming about tonight.
Date: 12 Dec 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 218
BAHAHAHAHAHAHA Emmet you're so gonna get it!!
Date: 12 Dec 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 216
OH Noc!! Could you do something with Kellan and I...I mean Emmett and I. I FLOVE that picture!!! This is gonna be hilarious!
Date: 12 Dec 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 248
Shit!! Is that real!!!
Date: 12 Dec 2012 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 206
YAY Finally!!
Date: 12 Dec 2012 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 204
Pussy lickings are great! XD
Date: 12 Dec 2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 198
HAHAHAH Carlisle totally knew!! Edward I agree with him! Cum on her, not in a tissue!
Date: 12 Dec 2012 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 193
OH Emmett!! LOL
Date: 12 Dec 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 187
Smooth Sir!
Date: 12 Dec 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 248
How's she going to react to it? I wanna know! You can't just leave me hanging there! How evil! It's so not fair! I hate cliffies!
As for the pictures/Gif's, in the first one, holy hell! How much further down does that thing go?
Date: 11 Dec 2012 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 179
Lovely NOC! I swear!! XD
Date: 11 Dec 2012 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 178
DEAR GOD, Noc!! mmmmm I'm having a hard time breathing and I'm sure I need to go change my panties.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 162
At least ten! hahahaha
Date: 11 Dec 2012 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 153
I like the flower safe words!
Date: 11 Dec 2012 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 149
hmmm Though butterflies aroma will still be on that chair!
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 248
Whoa! I think I just came a little myself! That was soooo HOT!
Date: 11 Dec 2012 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 145
Is Serving Mistress Jane still available? The Playroom!!
Date: 11 Dec 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 144
I'm actual hurt by this...not sure why but the word punishment just seems so awful to me...I wish there was another word to use. Maybe it's my mindframe and that I've punished myself before in many different ways. Crazy I'm almost in tears.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 143
If only I had my own place Noc, Mine and I would be doing so much, I would be able to breath or walk straight for weeks. I just know it!!
Date: 11 Dec 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 142
Hard limits - nothing pertaining to me calling him daddy....ugh*shudders* anything that I feel would degrade me such as the diaper thing. I'd love to try being tied up but not sure if I could be tie in the pictures that I've seen with several wrappings around the body. Things I want to try but are a little scared....hhmm....I don't know yet. I don't like having my nipples pinched so nipple clamps are out of the question, though I enjoy them being played with. There's a lot, I know, so I'm not going to fill this whole thing in with them. Ask me in the Wreck Room or private Noc, Bec too. hehehehe
Date: 11 Dec 2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 138
mmmmm Yes I know how that feels...Mine does that quite often and I am always looking at him or he's behind me. And I just imagined him behind me smelling my hair, breathing on my neck...oh god! TONIGHT!! I can't wait. hahahaha
Date: 11 Dec 2012 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 136
I want to wear a blindfold for mine!
Date: 11 Dec 2012 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 130
DUH!! You don't ever want to send your butterfly to work smelling of sex it arouses other men/vampires! Silly Edward. Eddie boy, I would've do the samething, sorry but a girl washes her hands and all after she's sat on the potty. OK so even if she didn't, the stickiness would be something that was bothersome anyway. Dear Sir I hope you think things through better. The whole thing with Emmett could've been avoided if you had just let her clean up or take that shower. XD hehehehe
Date: 11 Dec 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 128
Instant erection. hahaha though I'd have to put on some other smell good so others wouldn't smell it and get the wrong idea! People can be mean.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 126
Candlesticks...really...hhmmm.. I would have hesitation on that as well...not sure I'd go through with it.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 123
Orgasm before work!! YES PLEASE!
Date: 11 Dec 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 248
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 11 Dec 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 248
This is one of the best so far. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
The best of the best.
I loveeeeeeeeee love this fanfiction :)
So obssesed with it.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 248
awesome chapter.. does he realize that he called her babygirl??
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2012 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 248
Great chapter Noc! And I'm finally caught up! (LOL) I can't wait for more! Dana
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2012 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 248
That was fantastic. Noc you are a genius.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 248
I am so glad that he did not hurt her. Can't wait to see what Bella thinks about receiving his cum and what her reaction will be to his venom. I get so excited to have your update in the mornings when I get up. Thank you for sharing your wonderful story with all of us here.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 247
she lokes her new toy ;)
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2012 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 247
Mmmm... if only it really was vanilla and hazelnut!
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2012 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 206
Yea! Finally he knows Bella's his mate! Dana
Date: 11 Dec 2012 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 246
Oh yes at last she gets to taste him. Love the pics
Date: 11 Dec 2012 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 245
Oh I love the way he talks to her and tells her what he's done to her body. Soapy Mayhems pic is great.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 247
Give it to her sir please!!!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 247
Okay so I only have like one complaint and that is that these chapters are really short and it is a pain to go through all 200+ of these. Other than that, it is good...I skipped ahead to see if it continuted and sadly it does with the shortness. I will read the rest of this in time. Keep it up thought, it is delicious.
Author's Response:
Yes it is. But people don't want to wait for me to finish writing it to read. I do plan on making it all into one document and publishing it at the end. It will be a bit different, as authors tend to edit each time they publish. It is my first drabble, and even though it is nice to get a chapter or two a day, it is a pain that the chapters are so short, although my original chapters were 100 words and the more recent chapters are 300 to 500 words. Sorry you find it frustrating. Perhaps you will like it better when it's complete. Involuntary Rapture has nice long chapters :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2012 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 247
Edward Bella but probably still good!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 247
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 247
Will he or wont he? That is the question.
Thanks for the update, it's amazing as per usual. Congrats on getting the highest number of hits and reviews on this site, you deserve it.
Date: 10 Dec 2012 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 247
ohhhh myyyyy god!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 247
Yes!!! this has got me squirming in my chair! So hot!
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 247
Love this and can't wait for more! I have read alot of stories on twsc and fanfiction, but i have to say of the thousands I have read this is by far my favorite.
Author's Response:
this review makes me soooo happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2012 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 247
CONGRATS on the number 1 spot! It is well deserved!
Dont break me heart! Let him come down her throat! That perfect cock deserves the full treatment!
Author's Response:
You must not be in the wreck room... i kinda spoiled it i think when i requested pics of men cumming in women's throats yesterday... not just on them, but literally down their throats... giggle...
Date: 10 Dec 2012 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 247
Love love love the pic & gif!!!
She seems to be drinking staight from his cock...he must taste soooo good!!! This whole chapter does things to me...tingly good things ;)
Date: 10 Dec 2012 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 247
I bet Bella sounded like she was so full of lust and want. I have to say that I think it would have been so funny if Mr. Claim, Cool and Collective Sir would have cum right in her mouth as SOON as she took all of him in her mouth. HAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 247
Great chapter! I think our boy likes it!!! hehe
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2012 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 247
Thanks good chapter
Date: 10 Dec 2012 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 247
You are amazing my love. Congratulations, and it's a title completely worthy of this story
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2012 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 247
Wow! The last three chapters were absolute iPad melting perfection! I can't wait to read more and hated that I couldn't read this weekend. Thanks for making my iPad smoke so bright and early this morning. ;)
Date: 10 Dec 2012 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 247
I BET HE WILL GIVE IT TO HER!
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2012 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 174
Noc, I would like to try it! ;) Dana
Date: 10 Dec 2012 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 246
Looks like a good time he will have his dick in her mouth all the time lol
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2012 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 246
*faints dead away*
Date: 10 Dec 2012 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 245
yessssss!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 244
good god!
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2012 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 242
oh love the pic :) and boy i can't wait!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 241
oooh let's hope that edward can succeed :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2012 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 240
LOL naughty emmett!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2012 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 184
Love these! where can i find a set?
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2012 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 170
Sir smells musky, like sex with a little bit of old spice thrown in there! Dana
Date: 10 Dec 2012 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 246
gahhhh need more!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 246
Ughhhh love the photos!!!
She is going to get high from his delicious cum but I think we would all think that Edwards cum would be the best thing ever!!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 245
Awesome manpic!!!!!
I've said it before but I love being inside of Edwards head...
Date: 10 Dec 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 244
Funny how Edwards voice at work is reminding her of Sirs LOL
I am not into pain (or I don't think I am) but this scene made me wonder seriously what it feels like to have the spanking followed by the flogger...to be able to let go and give it all up to him cause that's what he wants.
Date: 10 Dec 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 243
Love the idea of him taking a hot shower to soften and warm up his skin. Ummmm, the chat during his inspection of her, had me whimpering...
Date: 10 Dec 2012 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 242
From walking threw her office after being eatten out, to knowing she is going to the playroom, to the anticipation of his arrival...so freaking hot!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 241
Emmett is such a ball buster!! Love that he and Edward are always giving each other shit...well Emmett gives it more but it's still funny to see :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2012 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 246
Damn!!! Vanilla Hazelnut?!!!! If only. UNF. waiting impatiently for the next chapter!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 246
GAH, you are trying to kill us, I know it. Question, for all of us visual learners, do you have a specific size for Edward? ;)
Date: 10 Dec 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 246
Poor guy, I can't imagine how desperate for this he is. Happy days for Domward.
thanks for the update.
Date: 10 Dec 2012 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 246
finally!!!! she's a happy gir now!!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 245
OMGosh!!! Some how I missed this chapter. Sorry!!!! LOVED IT!!!!!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 246
I am so happy that Bella finally gets some Sir!!!!!!!!!! Love the pictures.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 246
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2012 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 246
Vanilla and hazelnut flavoured cum...mmmm, wouldn't that be nice?
Date: 10 Dec 2012 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 246
Wonderful. Thank you!!!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 246
She finally did it! He finally let her! I can't wait to see how she reacts to his cum. Will she be tired like Charlotte or will something else happen? These are the things we gots to know as readers, girlie. :)
Thanks for the wonderful update! I hadn't heard from you in a few days and I was starting to get worried. Everything okay?