[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 240
Fucking love the way Emmett teases the shit out of Edward! If Bella knew he could smell her she would die on the spot lol!
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 240
thank you for the update.......Edward can't wait to deep thoat Bella or atleast make love to her
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 240
hahaahaa...poor Emmett
xoxox
ba
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 239
a fantasy of mine
xoxox
ba
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 236
i love giving head upside down
xoxox
ba
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 235
amazing .gif
i can't look away
xoxox
ba
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 234
sharing is so exquisite
xoxox
ba
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 233
one day I'll be brave!
xoxox
ba
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 232
Love my piercings!
xoxox
ba
Date: 03 Dec 2012 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 240
Emmett is evil lol
Date: 03 Dec 2012 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 240
I love Emmett.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 240
Is Emmett getting Edward back for what he did to him in the playroom???? I can not imagine sitting in a busy office place and having Sir lick my pussy and finger fuck me till I cum, with all those people around. I bet Bella about died when Emmett walked in the room with Sir doing all those wonderful things to her. WOW!!!!!
I am loving this story. I hope you update your other stories soon. I sent you a message through fanficition. Love your writing and all your stories.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 240
Oh I see Em didn't learn his lesson about messing with Edward... haha
Date: 03 Dec 2012 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 240
Mean Emmett
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 240
Nice.... I love Emmett. Never as much as Sir.
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 240
Fucking Emmett.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 240
LOL...Emmett is such a brat!!!
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 240
Yeah, he is, ornery too.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 240
I REALLY HOPE THAT EDWARD KICKS HIS ASS FOR WHAT HE WAS DOING. POOR BELLA.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 239
And here I thought he was talking about making it back during her lunch break. Silly me.
The link to the youtube video says the video is private. Is there someway to gain access?
Author's Response:
sorry, I had to pull it down. I'll put up the new link
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 239
Yes, please! That's my kind of lunch break!
Date: 03 Dec 2012 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 239
That's what I call a nooner.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 239
Sir is a bad bad boy!!!!!!!!! How exciting would that be!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 239
I have absolutly love reading this most amazingly beautifully written story!! This story is truely captivating & intriguing!! I most definatly rate this story as a #10 out of #10!! Thanks 4 all ur hard work & dedication in writting this amazing story!! Trust me I understand how much time & effort it takes to write a story. U truely are a talented writer to be able to write one of such length!! The only recomendation & advice I could give would be to request longer chapters if possible. However I absolutly love the progession of the story line/plot!!
Author's Response:
the chapters are so much longer than they were at the beginning. I'm writing the prequel now, and it will just be one book. I also hope to rewrite this as a book and not a drabble
Date: 02 Dec 2012 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 239
OMG!!!! yESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS this..this...omg...this!!! yessssss
Date: 02 Dec 2012 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 239
love the video... can you update tonight? please (on hands and knees like a good little girl)
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2012 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 239
He takes risks!
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2012 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 238
I look forward to even set myself.
Date: 02 Dec 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 239
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Dec 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 239
Congrats on the 900K views of this story! So exciting!
Now, I REALLY need to find a desk job! Do you think they'll let me put this in my work contract to have at least twice a week? Oooooo, that would be so amazing!
Great update! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 239
LOL.. How does she not realize that Sir must be a work colleague?? Then again -- all that oral sex is probably making her a little fuzzy-headed ;-)
Date: 02 Dec 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 239
Looks like a great fun
Date: 02 Dec 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 239
hmm.... would love to spend having lunch like this!
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 239
oohhhh wow!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 237
well now the possibilities have opened up :)
Date: 02 Dec 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 239
I tore through this and of course here I am at the end of what you have posted and haven't reviewed. Whoops.
I am definitely enjoying it. *fans self* very, very hot.
But overall, I think I preferred just the BPOV. I understand why you went with alternating POVs but I think in the one shot, keeping it with BPOV built the anticipation so much more. I found I kind of got out of Bella's headspace when it flipped to EPOV, and it was hard to get back into it.
Still really enjoying it, and I'm definitely looking forward to reading more as you post! I can't wait to see what Edward does with all this new knowledge. :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 239
soo when is he gonna reveal who he is to her!!!!!!! and that hes a vampirea nd that shes his mate!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
in the original he just revealed who he was to her in the last chapter.
Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 239
Yup, she is the luckiest bitch around!!!
Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 238
Is he going to reveal what he is to her soon??? He has to know by now that she would stay with him...can he not feel that she loves him??/
Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 237
Poor Alice has to see every thing Edward decides lol Or maybe she kinda gets off on it ;)
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 239
thanks good chapter
Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 236
I bet Edward will be running back to find butterfly and demand that she meet him in the playroom.
;)
Date: 02 Dec 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 235
Oh that pic does things to me...
This is going to be fun to see what Edward gets out of this demonstration :)
Date: 02 Dec 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 239
Gotta love the possible getting caught in the act orgasm! Love this chapter.
Date: 02 Dec 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 239
I WANT A JOB THERE!
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2012 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 239
Great chapter and video! I wish I had lunch breaks like theirs.
Date: 02 Dec 2012 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 239
Love this story. Can't wait for more.
Date: 02 Dec 2012 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 239
Wow , exhibitionism to a new level. Which considering how this all started, it must be total turn on for Bella.
Date: 01 Dec 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 238
Ummm....YAY!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2012 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 238
Cant wait for next chapter! He is in for a warm mouthwatering treat isnt he lol?
Date: 01 Dec 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 238
Aww love the picture!! :D
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 238
She doesn't know who he is or what he is. He's assuming that she will agree to being turned when she does find out.
Date: 01 Dec 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 238
Finally gonna get him a blowy!
Date: 01 Dec 2012 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 238
I LOVE IT!!! This is awesome.. and to think he will not have a problem changing her.. when its time. I hope he tells her soon about being her mate and him being a vampire..
Date: 01 Dec 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 234
A human submisssive demonstration with a vampire...interesting. This is what will change things for Edward?!?!
Date: 01 Dec 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 233
The secret door in the fridge was perfect!!!!
Date: 01 Dec 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 238
Ready for EXB time
It's been too long
Date: 01 Dec 2012 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 238
Oh my, lunch time delight.
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2012 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 238
teehee llooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove the picture!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 01 Dec 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 238
I LOVE THIS PICTURE! I CWN NOT WAIT FOR EDWARD TO GIVE IN A LITTLE MORE.
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 238
they are beautiful
Date: 01 Dec 2012 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 238
Love it!!!!!! Hope Edward can relax and enjoy their time together a little more. I know he enjoys it but I feel like he always has his guard up which I understand why he has to.
Date: 01 Dec 2012 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 236
Ohmygod Noc! That first gif? Stunning, love it, love the where the story is going!
K
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2012 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 237
Edward will then do the same to Bella and maybe tell him what he is.
Thank you for this great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2012 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 236
Thank you for this chapter.
Date: 01 Dec 2012 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 237
It seems Edward is going to enjoy he's new discovery!! :D
Date: 01 Dec 2012 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 236
Oh damn the pics!!! O.O
Date: 01 Dec 2012 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 237
It seems that we will not have to wait long for Edward to REALLY meet Bella after that. She will know who her master is soon.
Date: 01 Dec 2012 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 237
I want the answers to the questions! Soon! You solved the issue with the venom very nicely!
Date: 01 Dec 2012 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 237
ahhh good questions! He's intruiged! :)
Date: 01 Dec 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 237
hmm... Edward has options now!
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2012 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 236
Guess Edward's been shown what an old lady Dom he is::))
Date: 01 Dec 2012 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 237
Can't wait to learn what Edward will do with this new information.
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 237
Thanks good chapter
Date: 01 Dec 2012 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 237
What??? We do not get to hear Peter's answers. One of your pictures did not load when I opened this chapter. I can see the one with Peter and Charlotte but not the other one. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.
Date: 01 Dec 2012 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 237
Sweetness an Extra chapter! I love it.. umm question does Bella still wear a blind fold? I don't remember if she know its Edward or Not?
Date: 01 Dec 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 236
Wow! the first gif.. that guy's is HUGE!.. its going all the way down her throat! Lol.. thanks for fixing the chapter..Can't wait for Edward do that to Bella.. :D
Date: 01 Dec 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 237
Oh, the eye opening Edward is going to get from Peter and Charlotte. I can't wait to see how well he takes all this new information and what happens with him and his butterfly.
Thanks for the new chapter!
Date: 01 Dec 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 237
All shall be answered.
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 237
Damn again. Next chapter we get Peter's answers right?
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2012 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 236
All I can say is DAMN!
Date: 01 Dec 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 237
Good intro. More please.
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2012 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 236
Thanks good chapter
Date: 01 Dec 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 236
I love this story im like an addict. I hope you can start uploading more chapters at a time. I absolutley love the story
Date: 01 Dec 2012 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 236
235 and 236 are the same chapters just different pictures....huh?
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 235
good thing...edward may learn something :)