[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2012 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 234
ooh! loved it :)
Date: 30 Nov 2012 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 236
Love this chapter! Did you intend to repeat it
Date: 30 Nov 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 236
its the same chapter as 235????
Date: 30 Nov 2012 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 236
You did this chapter already but love the ff any way
Date: 30 Nov 2012 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 236
Same chapter,, different picture?
Date: 30 Nov 2012 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 236
This is the same chapter as 235 just with a different picture. I am glad that Edward now has someone to talk to that has a human mate.
Date: 30 Nov 2012 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 236
Um.. noc this is the same as 235.. did u mean to do that?
Date: 30 Nov 2012 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 235
That was amazing :D I cannot wait to see what happens during the demonstration ;)
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2012 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 235
Ooooh... Can't wait 'til Sir & Butterfly take it to the next level :)
Date: 29 Nov 2012 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 235
Aha so he's going to learn something lol :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 235
OK... you're right, Noc, it is WAY better here on TWCS than on FF. Hopefully I can actually review, though... I've had trouble with that here....
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 235
Fuck I love the pictures you post with the story!
Open your eyes now Edward so you can see what you can do to Bella! I hope he show Edward he can do more with her!
Date: 29 Nov 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 235
Hahaja.....see Edward it is possible.
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2012 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 235
Thank you for this great chapter.
I think it will give ideas to Edward!
Date: 29 Nov 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 235
Love your picture
Date: 29 Nov 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 235
that is an eye opener
Date: 29 Nov 2012 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 235
Love Alice!!!!!! I hope Edward takes the time to talk to Peter.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 235
Great writing. Would love a look into Edwards mind tomorrow about the human mate.
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2012 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 235
thanks good chapter
Date: 29 Nov 2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 235
Ah! I was wondering where you were going with the whole human thing. Good job, I like it.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 234
Alice is about to show him something he can do with his butterfly. Making finally sticking his Dick in her?!
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2012 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 234
Excited to see what the surprise is. Thank you for the update.
Date: 28 Nov 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 234
Very Very interesting!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 234
Im hoping that the Dom is going to fuck her in front of everyone, so that Edward can see that he will be able to fuck Bella as well without hurting her!
Date: 28 Nov 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 234
its like bleeding to death a drop at a time ...I just want to keep going on reading and reading its just never enough....please tell me that they are going to show him it is safe to have sex with his butterfly ...that alice is wicked evil but she is smart
Date: 28 Nov 2012 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 234
WHATS THE BIG DEAL? THERE ARE MANY HUMANS THERE WHY SHOULD THIS ONE BE ANY DIFFERENT?
Date: 28 Nov 2012 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 234
it can be done :)
Date: 28 Nov 2012 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 234
OMG I'm so loving your story. Your interpretation of Edward and Bella is amazing. I have never laughed so hard in regards to Emmett. I can not wait for your next update now that I'm all caught up.
Date: 28 Nov 2012 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 234
Very sexy pic. I'm so curious to find out what's next...
Date: 28 Nov 2012 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 234
Is this how Edward met Bella?
Date: 28 Nov 2012 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 234
I love the image too. Nothing sexier than a mans dressed in a suit with his watch showing with great hands.
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2012 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 234
Thanks good chapter
Date: 28 Nov 2012 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 233
Great story. Jacobs ladder looks amazing but poor Jasper that must hurt like hell to have done. Can't wait to see why Alice wants Edward at the club
Date: 28 Nov 2012 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 233
Very interesting. Especially the pictures.
Date: 27 Nov 2012 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 232
Great Chapter! I think the Pierced Nipples look really Sexy!! But piercing Jasper's Dick looks Super Painful.. Poor Jasper
Date: 27 Nov 2012 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 233
Interesting place :)
Date: 27 Nov 2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 233
Wow that likks uncomfortable.
Date: 27 Nov 2012 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 233
More mystery...:-)
Date: 27 Nov 2012 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 233
VERY INTERESTING! I WONDER WHAT HAPPENS THAT CHANGES EDWARD?
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2012 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 233
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2012 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 232
"Jacob’s ladder" Ouch!
Date: 27 Nov 2012 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 232
;[
Author's Response:
is that a sad face?
Date: 27 Nov 2012 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 232
OH WOW...does this mean that Edward (or Bella once she is turned) will be pierced eventually?! PLEASE?!
Date: 27 Nov 2012 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 232
Oh damn :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2012 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 232
I always wanted to get my nipples pierce too
Date: 26 Nov 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 232
Alice and you are funny!! I can't imagine those piercings on a cock...they look so damn painful and wouldn't the ring tear during sex?? I may just be naive though :) However, barbells like Alice imagined would be sweet to feel at least for me, probably not for the guy ;)
Can't wait for more! I'm planning on looking for some pics today to go with some of your previous chapters :) cya
Date: 26 Nov 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 232
Thems some nice boobies
Date: 26 Nov 2012 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 232
pain but ibteresting lol
Date: 26 Nov 2012 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 232
great chapter... its hard to imagine Alice as the domme.. Love the piercings!!
Author's Response:
You think so? I see her always as a Domme. Do you think that she would really be a submissive????
Date: 26 Nov 2012 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 232
That looks reallt painful for Jasper. I feel sorry for Jasper
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2012 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 232
thanks good chapter
Date: 26 Nov 2012 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 232
Nice tits !
Date: 26 Nov 2012 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 231
I will have to admit, this chapter confused me a little bit. I had to go back and read the A/N again and then re-read the chapter. Loved the pictures.
Date: 26 Nov 2012 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 230
Thanks for Alice's POV!!!
Date: 25 Nov 2012 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 231
SO amazing! I cannot wait for more!
Date: 25 Nov 2012 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 231
Well this should be interesting.
Date: 25 Nov 2012 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 231
WOW!! See that was awesome! And I surely wasn't kidin when I said I'd love to visit your mind, Noc!!!
Author's Response:
come on in...
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2012 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 231
mmmm i think you could have posted the pics only and made many happy
Date: 25 Nov 2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 231
Loved this section!! Glad you were still able to have this chapter in with your pet :)
Date: 25 Nov 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 230
I know you were worried that this chapter would be boring but I think you needed to have the back story on the club. Cause would there really be a BDSM club for vampires in the city?? It needed the explanation :)
Date: 25 Nov 2012 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 231
So good love the pics u have
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2012 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 230
I love your story sorry I have not left a review tell now but it is great !
Author's Response:
I so love that you've written a review! Thank you so much. :)
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2012 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 230
you could always make the club real
Author's Response:
Wouldn't that be amazing...
Date: 24 Nov 2012 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 230
shit the picture are getting to be my favorite part ....just have to remember not to open the page at work ...that was terrible i was so red faced when everyone saw what i was reading ...well they try to read over my shoulder now ...lol
Date: 24 Nov 2012 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 230
So far I love it! More info... I would love visiting your mind for awhile Noc!
Author's Response:
ur kidding right????? I cut that chapter in half cause i was told it was too much info and too boring...
Date: 24 Nov 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 230
sounds like an interesting place
Date: 24 Nov 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 230
:( (pic wise)
Author's Response:
gimmie a suggestion for that chap and I'll add it :)
Date: 24 Nov 2012 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 230
So I am presuming that since this a club that was established for Vampires, that somehow Edward will introduce Isabella to this club, or in some way Isabella will find her find her way to this club. Of course, it is only speculation on my part, but I am surmising that a Vampire or a human dominant will make a play for Isabella that will possibly require Edward to change Isabella to save her life?
Well, Noctural, I am only guessing; however, I cannot wait for the reveal. This journey for Midnight Caller that you have taken me, as one of your readers, has far surpassed that of the original O/S. I loved the O/S, and now with the added chapters, I just don't know what to say. I do; however, hope that you continue somewhat beyond the change. So much that you could further reveal to us. LOL
BTW, I have finally begun reading IR, and damn you! I find myself so engrossed in that story, that once again I am not accomplishing much beyond going to work everyday. LOL
Date: 24 Nov 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 230
So I wonder why they wanted Edward to meet them there?
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2012 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 229
Short but amazing. Thanks for writing
Date: 24 Nov 2012 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 229
Oh Noc don't leave it like that what is gonna happen at the club??
Date: 23 Nov 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 229
LOVE LOVE LOVE this!
Date: 23 Nov 2012 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 229
Where's the new chapter?
Date: 23 Nov 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 229
Poor thing, Edward needs to fess up. She has totally given herself over so he needs to do the same.
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2012 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 229
Qu'est ce qui se passe ?
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 229
Damn I really want to know what has happened at the club! Is it good, bad? Shit dont leave me in suspense please!
Date: 23 Nov 2012 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 229
I am terrible at reviewing but I love this story
Date: 22 Nov 2012 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 229
I hope you can get this review...have you been getting my other ones? I'm finally back at home for the holiday, (I'll be returning to my friend's house tomorrow) and using my own computer.
So much has gone on the past couple of chapters! So exciting and scary at the same time, thena gain, all change is kinda scary. I love the writing and the ideas behind each chapter. The overall layout is great and the main idea is amazing. I dont know why nobody had thoguht of this before.
Thank you for the new chapter, i'm very thankful for it. Happy thanksgiving! Gobble gobble.
Date: 22 Nov 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 229
I cant wait to find out what happened in the club
Date: 22 Nov 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 229
Ughhh, she might have written that she loved him in the journal!! This situation is making my heart hurt, Noc! So, everything will change after the club...your such a tease with this...What is at this club that will help Edward??!?
Date: 22 Nov 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 228
OMG I totally didn't register that he had called her Bella! I was a bit into what was happening lol
I knew he was going to use the fact that she thought she had disobeyed to fix this scene but it make me so sad that he thinks she doesn't love him yet that is why she did it. :(
Nevermind poor Bella having a huge moment & then it's gone and she can't say why...well she can say why but they are both stubborn & scared
I love them