LOve, LOve, LOve!!!!

:)

hmmm.... the suspense is killing me. What's going to change?

Short is find but the cliffy...aghhh!!!! Can't wait to read what this nite was all about and why Alice had insisited Edward go to the club.

Sometimes the wait is torture! I continue to love this story and this Edward and Bella. 

Now I can't wait til the next update. What will happen?

Wow, Edward just about lost it in the last chapter.  It  would seem that he became so overwhelmed by his feelings, and lost in the haze of lust for Butterfly that he got a little carried away.  However, in typical Edward fashion, he began chaistising (Spelling?  Damn I wish this review section had spellcheck.  LOL.) himself.  But in true Edward style, his thoughts quickly turn to the care and protectiveness for his Butterfly. 

Won't it be a surprise to him, when he learns that Butterfly has feeling for him that far transcend the role of submissive! 

The statement in the last sentence, seems rather ominous.  Does the club has something to do with her change?  Well I guess we will have to wait and see what transpires.

Truly, Noctural, you need to stop apologizing to your readership.  The frequency of the updates and  the length of a chapters is up to you--the writer.  I think most of us are grateful that you have shared your words with us. 

If you celebrate, Happy Thanksgiving. 

I SO GLAD SIR DIDN'T HURT BELLA TO BADLY.

OH SNAP!  I cannot wait for the next one ;)

"I’d also called her Bella, and I wasn’t yet sure if she’d noticed" Maybe she didn't but I'm sure the rest of us did::))
I have a feeling Sir is going to have to do a little more than this regarding damage control unless he wants to 'break' his butterfly's will:( difficult situation considering!

Is this the longest chapter? A good one:) Thanks

Oh man - I hope Edward turns up the romance a bit soon...  Don't get me wrong -- the D/s stuff is crazy hot -- but I can't wait 'til they get to know each other outside the playroom :)

But does Edward not "hear' her thoughts ? I thought that he could hear what she was thinking, so he must know that she loves him. no ?

Now you surprised me! I was sure that she got to taste his cum but no. Well, good writers are also good at surprising their readers!

:)

Oh pooey...I was hoping this would lead to a revealing somehow but he was able to use her disobeying as an excuse. Darn...I guess I will have to wait. I'm really impatient - this is too good!

I love the long chapter. I miss having a picture :(
Thanks for never forgetting your fans each morning!

I thought the gig was up.

thanks good chapter

Poor Edward and Poor Bella. I did not realize that his cum was venom. But I guess it makes sense. I guess that is another reason why he has not had sex with her. Oh, I just thought of something.......Is Bella still a virgin in this story or has she already had sex???????

thank you for the update.Edward just tell her

wooooooooooooow i mean i dont c wat the big problem was. and when is he gonna change her!!!!!!!!!!!!

ooops! well you can't blame a girl. what will happen now?

So hot. Did he really move her at vamp speed?  Did he call her Bella? Did he hurt her? He's really forgetting himself. What would happen if she had sucked his cum of her fingers?  

DID EDWARD REALLY HURT HER? HE STOPPED HER BECAUSE OF HIS VINNUM ( I KNOW I SPELLED THAT WRONG SORRY ) AM I RIGHT?

DID YOU SEE BREAKING DAWN? I DID AND I LOVED IT I CAN'T WAIT FOR IT TO COME OUT ON DVD

She must of been so lost in her thoughts and emotions cause she would have never regularly done that without being told. His reaction while quick was a bit to panic ridden but luckily she doesn't know that's the reason, I guess.  He is going to degrade himself over and over because of this, isn't he.  I can just see Alice doing a face plam right now & screaming LOL

Dear Edward, please don't run! Please don't run!!

Uh oh hope he didn't break her hand and he called her Bella instead of butterfly!! Wonder if she will question that! Has he ever called her Bella before I wonder? I can't remember if he has or not. I know he has at work but she doesn't know Edward is sir!

Author's Response:

He didn't mean to call her Bella, but it was not a typo... i meant for him to call her that. It shows how the D/s line is blurring with the real life world, how he thinks of her as more than a submissive.

Oh shit. Will she realize her called her Bella? But what will he tell her? Man please update!!! Shit that was good.

woah that was explosive!!!

thank you for the update.........oh sir!!!.what did you think would happen.......just tell her sir, she'll understand

Oh shit he hurt her he is going to freak out.

Uh oh! I hope he won't be to hard on her for disobeying. Or himself for hurting her. Excellent chapter.

UH OH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks good chapter

Ahhh! Don't blame Butterfly! 

Is there venom in his cum?! 

Can't wait for next chapter :))

WOAH WHAT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ALL SHE DID WAS TRY AND TASTE SOME OF HIS CUM WHATS SO WRONG WITH THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Poor Bella. Why did Sir tell her no???? She was sooooo caught up in the moment. Can't wait to find out why Edward reacted the way he did. 

Would it have turned her?

Damn. Edward is going to freak out now isn't he?  Not only did he hurt her but he called her Bella instead of Butterfly. See ya next time. 

So close! 

THAT IS ONE BIG COCK AND I WATCHED 4 TIMES

:D

HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!!! Loved the picture. Ok I have to ask. In the picture at first the whole looks so big that it looks like her pussy but then when she comes down on it, it looks like she ass hole. Which one is it??????

Ahh she's in love. As am I with this story. 

I am so glad that Emmett and Rose had fun. 

WOW, that's reaaly hot, thank you.

So damn hot...I know I say it all the time but it is true!!! You have a gift with words & thank you for providing me with a daily dose of hotness :)

This is what he has been waiting for right?? For her to fall in love with him...or was it Alice that was waiting for that before she told him to tell her about him. Crap now I can't remember.  Anyway...aren't we off to the club soon ;)

:)   wow.   I love that she is now in love w/ her sir too.  

Good lord, nice way to start my week.