She got to touch his hair, is that the first time she got to touch him?

Yes, yes, yes! Love your story...can't seem to ever get enough! Thanks for continuing.

Wow!  Hot as Hell as always. A swear my iPad is going to spontaneously combust on day. Thank you for the chapter and the picture. So much better than caffeine to get the day started. 

I cant help with my big smile after seeing the pic you attached ! 
THanks for another good chapter

XD

hot damn a little lunch time special!! 

well, hot damn!  I wonder if is dom side will change since he loves her.

Love it! Need more, excellent as usual.

You rock!!!

I love all the fast updates!! Please keep them coming!!! Great story! 

Would you prefer me to go into details about some of the phone calls, or get to the part where they meet?  (your A/N note)

Do I really need to answer this question? Get to it, girl!!

*blows kisses to Noc for me being such an impatient, obnoxious reader*

Half of me wanted to rush over there right then. She was so close. I could have a mouthful of her juice within five minutes.

DO IT, Edward.... DO IT!!!  Right now! I'm expecting him to be there in the next chapter!

You're awesome - thanks. Getting closer to the intimacy I want - thank you, thank you, thank you. BTW - Bella of course will make an awesome vamp when he changes her.

Sir does indeed have a dirty mouth... wouldn't want him any other way. I'm glad to see Bella is learning a little control. We wouldn't want her to make Sir angry, now would we?

Wow, that was a hot, little chapter there. You know, Noc, I'm really going to have to stop reading this at work. I was doing payroll reports to send to the government.  Something tells me they won't be too impressed if they see the words "butterfly will suck all of her cum from my cock" on one of my reports. I'll just refer them to you if I get some kind of notice from them!

He liked hearing her call herself his little cum slut, didn't he? This boy is so DED. How much longer can he wait?  Well, Noc, how much longer?

Are you tired of me hounding you? 

damn!!!  The story + phot is hot!

HUUUUUU it becomes very hot here ! Nice, thank you.

Can I control my orgasms?  Pfffttt... I can barely control myself reading these chapters! I'll make you a deal. I'll answer your question as soon as you tell me what the favor was or you let Edward show up in Bella's room.  *mutters" that Noc's got some nerve.

I can't imagine what favor Edward wants to ask Tanya for. But I'm not going to hang around here talking to you... I'm going to read the next chapter!!

But you know I love your story, so pleae don't take offense.

So Alice has had a premonition of Edward's mate. That is a good thing... means there is hope for this situation. Good old Daddy C came through with some good advice. 

And btw, the image of Edward leaping from the rooftop into the dark night... that was HOT, Noc.

office sex with the danger of getting caught... a girl can dream!

what a surprise from Edward and we seem to get some office sex. Great! And those stockings are sooo beautiful and sexy!

Oh, poor Edward. He is really worried that he is going to hurt her. I guess this is the first human that he's wanted to have actual sex with. Poor baby, you are going to help him out with this situation, right, Noc? Or maybe Daddy C has some good advice. I'm off to find out.

Fhot!

Thanks for all the visuals. Keeps me coming back for more, that and the story of course.

More more more. Please!!!

Love seeing into Edwards mind!!

hot hot

Wow, is Sur gonna make Emmett watch?

Oh! Does she put it together that sir is edward yet? I mean that's bold to get it at work but its something i wish would happen to me daily! Lol

Yum Yum, great chap!

Someones hungry ........

omg!!! At work?! YESSSS

Well this chapter certainly was revealing.  I guess now that Edward has arrived at the conclusion that he definitely sees Butterfly as his other half, solemate, the one destined for him--however one wants to describe the two of them--he is obviously finding himself needing to spend more and more time with her.  I should not be surprised, that he would stage a scene at the workplace, but I was.  I mean I know that Edward could certainly craft the scene to enable the two of them to be together without being discovered, but it definitely seems it will be nudging Butterfly to begin questioning just who Sir is.    I really enjoyed the double entrendre with the reference to eating lunch and not sharing.  Yeah, I smiled at that.  I could be wrong, but I am beginning to suspect that you have obviously "added" many additional scenes than the one's you were forced to delete from the original O/S.  LOL  I do, if I'm not overstepping my bounds, think you are definitely enjoying the additional scenes.  It must be a relief to write without the confines of a contest.  I have to say, I truly love what you are creating as this story continues.

Thanks again. 

Edwards cracking me up.  Giving Emmett a hard time and then sending him home for 'lunch', loved his 'i don't share' comment :)

Love love love this pic

You can't control love Edward!!!

Do what you need to do Noc and when you are able to write, we will be here waiting for ya!!  Good luck with national novel writing :)

Making paper airplanes...such a guy thing to do :)  

<3 being a dirty little girl!!

The thought of him tying her up in while he is nude...ugh, such a hot picture!

Esme calls Carlisle 'Daddy' *gigglesnorts* of course she does!  Love the visuals btw :)   Edward needs to get on this pronto

Now we know why Jasper is so calm!!! Love it. Poor Edward has been left out of the yummy juices link 

Is she going to find out who he is????  Them are cute stockings

A little lunchtime delight at the office with Sir. What could be hotter?  I love that garter belt and stockings!  Where do I get it?  My husband would love it too. See ya soon. 

Well that is interesting.... so he is allowing her to know that he is at her work???? hmmm

Wow! A little afternoon delight, yay!!!!!!

thsanks good chapter

Can't wait for the next chapter! A great read, thank you :)

You never let us down Noc. You do what you have to and I (and I'm sure everyone else) will be thankful for whatever you can give us, and will be here waiting for you. Oh and great story. I like that Alice is giving Edward hope for the future. 

Why do I get the feeling that Tanya will be involved in Bella's "death"?
I hope if she is that Edward kills Tanya so she is no longer a threat!