Date: 05 Nov 2012 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 211
Wonderful. I can't wait to see why Bella is turned into a vampire.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 211
You do reallize that this is the same chapter as the previous one?
Author's Response:
yes and no.... it was, because I posted 211 as 210... go back and read 210 again it's different now
Date: 05 Nov 2012 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 211
Ummm.. did you realize 210 & 211 were the same chapter? Just checking!!
Author's Response:
sorry, 210 is now different!
Date: 05 Nov 2012 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 210
You wont be letting anyone down. You are an amazing writer and you have a lot on your plate, especially a very needy girlfriend, so they can blame me, I can become the Yoko!! Love u, and get done what u can. Your readers will wait
Author's Response:
OMG... you are not Yoko!!!!!!!!!!! I love you to pieces and I'm the needy one!
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 210
OMG HES GONNA CHANGE HER YAY SUPER EXCITED MORE CANT WAIT FOR AN UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 210
Great chapter. Alice would definitely come in handy when making decisions. Run it by her and make sure the outcome is the best possible one.
One chapter a day will be fine and even if you need to skip a day or two, we'll all be waiting for the next chapter. No worries. Take care of you, that's what's most important.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 210
thanks good chapter
Date: 04 Nov 2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 210
Love that he is not going to leave her.
I am sorry that real life is getting in the way of your writing but we will be here waiting for you. I am not leaving.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 210
Aww damn she's going to be a vampire soon and Edward LOVES her!!!! XD
Date: 04 Nov 2012 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 210
Post when you can. Your loyal readers will be here waiting. Everybody has busy times when they need to take a break. We understand. Love this chapter , by the way.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 210
I can't wait!
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 210
Bon chapitre !
Ne nous abandonne pas trop longtemps, j'ai hâte de connaître la suite des amours entre Edward et son papillon !
Merci et bonne chance pour l'écriture.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 210
take your time, it means we can go back and re-read and have a perv ;)
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 210
Love this story and no worries about the infrequent updates! The story seems to be drawing to a close and it's nice that the delay will draw it out a bit... I'll miss this story when it's done :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 210
No let downs. You do what's good for you. We'll wait. I understand I'm editing my novel and this is my escape :)
Date: 04 Nov 2012 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 210
Take your time and come back when you can. It will always be a pleasure to read more of MC.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 210
You are not letting us down. Please! if writing isn't fun anymore, I wouldn't push you to write. If you need to get your life a bit more organized and under control, then please do. All the loyal readers will understand and wait.
I'm doing NaNoWriMo too. I'm up to 11K words so far. You can do it. Keep going!
Thank you for putting this out to begin with and when you can, you'll update. We all get that. And if someone doesn't, they don't matter.
Thanks for the update!
Date: 04 Nov 2012 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 210
You do your thang chicken wing!!! :-) you'll let us down if you don't participate.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 210
Thank you for the beautiful story. Best of luck in all you do. Will continue to look daily.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 209
Everything's possible if you just believe! Great chapter! I loved it! I just got home and I remembered you had updated yesterday and I jumped on the computer and poof, there was another update too! I feel so special!
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 210
no fears, I understand.... we won't give up....best of everything with your writing....
Date: 04 Nov 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 210
OH WOW, that was amazing! I really loved it! Cannot wait to see how she is changed (what causes it). Take your time, we understand! After all, you have given us over 200 chapters in a short period of time. We can handle it.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 210
Oh, no let downs. I'll be missing the stories but happy for you and your other endeavors in writing. I really appreciate you offering up your stories. Thanks for writing.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 210
You never let us greedy bitches down. You are the best! You have the best helping you (Bec). You write when you can and we will take what we can get when you are able to give it to us. ;)
Date: 04 Nov 2012 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 210
we can be patient not letting us down just living your busy life
Date: 04 Nov 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 210
I am so glad he has made the decition to change her. When is he going to show her who he is????
Date: 04 Nov 2012 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 210
The only person you need to worry about letting down is yourself. I hope that you are able to tend to yourself and I will await new updates patiently.
Thank you for writing when you can!
Date: 04 Nov 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 210
Nocturnal:
As always another great chapter. I just love the way this story is travelling along. I am so happy that he has finally decided to change her, and it most definitely will be interesting to see what circumstances dictate the change.
I truly do not feel you that you need to apologize for the speed of the updates. I am following a story currently that has not updated since July, and another story that has not updated since April. However, in no way does that detract from my desire to continue to read these stories. When the writer updates, I will be there to read. Honestly, I'm not sure how you manage to update as often as you do. Between writing MC, IR, and now participating in another writing foray; well, kudos to you. By the way, I feel compelled to compliment you on the story you submitted to the ST4K compilation. It was wonderful. I cannot wait to read the continuation in 12/12.
Again, thanks for sharing your words and creative talents.
Author's Response:
Bec and I love this review :)
Date: 04 Nov 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 210
You are never a disappointment. Loved the chapter it was so sweet.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 210
WOOOHOO Edwards not being a dumbass love it :) And Noc you have a life out side of this I think we all will be fine I don't feel let down at all :)
Date: 04 Nov 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 210
Never worry about letting us down. The story is worth waiting for
Date: 04 Nov 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 210
Wow she's that close to her change. Will she find out who he is and that he's a vampire before or after her change I wonder?
Date: 04 Nov 2012 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 202
you know what? I really need to start reading your fic once it's posted. I love the a/n. always
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 209
Now if he will just stay calm and listen with his heart, Alice will explain everything. Never bet against Ailce.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 209
Que va décidé Edward ?
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 208
Ils sont plutôt mignons nos petits vampires.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 209
Alice wont let him give up before he begins :)
Date: 04 Nov 2012 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 209
* squeal* Doing my hapy dance now! Is he gonna go all angsty and ruin it? I hope not. Or at least not for too long.;0
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 80
Oh, Noc, I loved this chapter. To hear Edward rambling about Isabella to Carlisle was so adorable. It made me love this character even more. This boy is so screwed!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 79
Sounds like a really good relationship between Carlisle and Edward. And if Edward has been perfecting his techniques for half a century, he must be REALLY good at them! I hope we're going to see more of Daddy C.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 78
Oh, gosh, Daddy C is his Master. Now I'm really swooning. *whispers* I have a thing for Daddy C too. But I'm really glad to know he isn't still Carlisle's submissive. During training is fine, but I really didn't want to think of Edward as being one now.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 77
Whoa, Edward has a Master? You threw me a curve there, Noc. I'd love to chat more, but got to run and read the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 76
If things are this intense between these two when they aren't even in the same room, I am going to love seeing what happens when they finally get together. Btw, I'm really glad he let her cum. I was afraid he would make her fail. You did good, Noc!!!
Date: 04 Nov 2012 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 209
Noc don't leave it there. What will he do now?? I wouldn't like to be Emmett !!
Date: 04 Nov 2012 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 207
Oh he loves her. And I love the picture Soapy Mayhems pictures are amazing.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 87
mean!! making us wait!!
Date: 04 Nov 2012 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 83
his so confused...
Date: 04 Nov 2012 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 82
wow alittle more of edward history nice!!
Date: 04 Nov 2012 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 209
I can feel the love that Alice has for Edward in this chapter. Great job!!!!
Date: 04 Nov 2012 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 81
i want to know why can't he be with her like that!! :(
Date: 04 Nov 2012 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 80
awww sweet cncerned edward!!
Date: 04 Nov 2012 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 78
ohhh sooo sexy!!
Date: 04 Nov 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 77
:O amazing...
Date: 04 Nov 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 76
can we really do that? never heard of that before...
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 209
I love that the thought of what he might do to get Emmett back. That is going to be awesome!
Date: 04 Nov 2012 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 71
oh wow mmmm :D
Date: 04 Nov 2012 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 67
mmmmm now it has me non-stop reading!! now im excited!!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 209
thank u for the updates :)
Date: 03 Nov 2012 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 47
awwww that sweet there at the end...
Date: 03 Nov 2012 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 45
that leaves u all hot and bothered so mean!!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 209
It's not? Tell me more!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 209
Never doubt my bitch!!!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 39
mmmmm sweet dreams of an amazing pleasure-pain!!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 38
hard core Domward!! leaving no prioners!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2012 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 209
Is he going to like what she suggests?
Great story
Date: 03 Nov 2012 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 37
wow it was fast and exciting!!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 36
O.O... well so damanding sigh i want one of thoses lol
Date: 03 Nov 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 209
Yeah never bet againest alice!!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 34
well his very creative hisn't he!!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 33
oh the rebel!!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 32
oooooo.... cant wait for more
Date: 03 Nov 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 29
hehehe wow edward over qa bench mmmmm lol
Date: 03 Nov 2012 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 28
his going to have soo much fun!!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 27
ohh sub jasper now i want one!!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 26
wow thats fast..
Date: 03 Nov 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 25
i want them to meet already!!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 22
His soo mean!!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 208
Thank you for the update. I like the new POV. It's new and exciting and refreshing.
I havent checked my email just yet this morning, but i hope there's another update waiting for me in there.
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2012 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 208
Gotta love Alice. The pics are so cute. They did look like they were having so much fun. See ya next time.
Date: 03 Nov 2012 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 207
First, I love the pics you have for the story second, I am excited that Edward has fupinally opened his heart and mind to Bella. love this story!
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2012 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 208
GOOOO ALICE
Date: 03 Nov 2012 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 20
....O.O wow....
Date: 03 Nov 2012 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 19
at least thats what she thinks no ones looking in....
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2012 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 208
God I hope he doesnt pull an "Edward" and run off!
Author's Response:
that would be classic Edward, and he would have run off if they would have told him, but now, he's hooked... addicted... and he's a Dom, she's his responsibility... he can't leave her
Date: 03 Nov 2012 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 208
Awe! Great pics. Cool snippet, can't wait for the convo between Alice and Edward. Thank you.
Date: 03 Nov 2012 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 18
at least she check out her window...