Date: 03 Nov 2012 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 17
that sexy voice sigh
Date: 03 Nov 2012 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 16
ohhh finally!! Come on man!! faster!!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 15
sigh...how i miss being so cnected to someone like that :(
Date: 03 Nov 2012 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 14
When are they going to meet!! :(
Date: 03 Nov 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
me too... grrr I'll make milliones of mistakes for that man lol
Date: 03 Nov 2012 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 12
can't wait until they are together... Sir and Bella :D
Date: 03 Nov 2012 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 11
Tanya loves anything she can get...
Date: 03 Nov 2012 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 10
James can't have enough it seems...
Date: 03 Nov 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
well now i'm spechless..
Date: 03 Nov 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 8
O.o why does everyone think James and Laurant would be better has gay? never thought so many would put them like that...
Date: 03 Nov 2012 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 7
ohhh what's next!! :D
Date: 03 Nov 2012 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 6
wow his looking for someone unperfect finally!! noones that perfect even for a sub everyone makes mistakes...
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Date: 03 Nov 2012 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 208
Thanks good chapter
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Date: 03 Nov 2012 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
Tanya? oh well thats only my guess :D
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Date: 03 Nov 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
well that i was not expecting a vamp!! well now this got so much interesting...
Date: 03 Nov 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 208
alice is such fun! i cant wait to see how edward works his feelings out
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Date: 03 Nov 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait to know who he is!! wow he really likes her...
Date: 03 Nov 2012 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well that just leaves you hot and bothered lol now i'm intreged... :D
Date: 03 Nov 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 208
Love the pictures. Can't wait to read about Alice and Edward talk.
Date: 03 Nov 2012 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 208
They are a great family
Date: 03 Nov 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 208
SO amazing :) Cannot wait for more!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 208
Thanks for the update.
Yeah cute pix.. I think Ashley Greene is so gorgeous and K.Lutz is pretty easy on the eye too, if ya ask me, very fun photos.
Date: 03 Nov 2012 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 208
silly boys! lol
Date: 03 Nov 2012 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 207
WOW... that was just beautiful!!
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Date: 02 Nov 2012 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 207
Damn! It time to let her know who he is,isnt it? I think she will be happy that its Edward, cause I think deep down she already knows its him!
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Date: 02 Nov 2012 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
No I haven't heard anything, but honestly everytime I find a story I REALLY want to read that is a WIP, and I start reading it, the author walks away and that is so maddening, I have learned to either wait until they finish or ask. I have over 250 stories right now in my favorites list that I have read eacha dn every chapter of while they were posting and they have been either dropped, forgotten, walked away from, or just plain deleted and removed. I just hate the thought of getting caught up in another hot ass awesome story to be left hanging. Thanks for the response, it is much appreciated. Kasi~
Author's Response:
I won't leave you hanging. Although at some point I might turn this into a published fic, and it might be removed, but that is way down the road and i would only do it after it has an ending.
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Date: 02 Nov 2012 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 207
Please tell me that you are planning to finish this, it is such a wonderfula dn HOT to boot story. I really want to read the conclusion of it.
Author's Response:
why wouldn't I finish it? Did you hear something?...lol... I plan on finishing it at least as far as the one shot.
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Date: 02 Nov 2012 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 207
yes what will he do and soapy manups are awesome
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Date: 02 Nov 2012 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 207
Edward se pose beaucoup de question...
Date: 02 Nov 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 207
Alice .....there's a reason why I love that chick. Finally the man knows!!! Why does it take the men so long? Stubborn asses.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 207
Ah, the aftermath of a huge realization. Loved it. Thank you for the update! I was wondering how he was going to react to figuring that out.
Thanks!
Date: 02 Nov 2012 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 207
Let me guess??? Alice!!!!!!! Loving this story. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 207
OMG...you left me hanging. I love to wake up to a new chapter, but I do not like to be left HIGH and DRY!!! Please tell me there is another update TODAY. PLease oh, please....with a cherry on top! Please!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 206
fucking christ with the pictures!!!
I'm finally caught up...internet is off at my home. So I'm reading at work & soaking my chair!!!
xoxox
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Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 207
Finally he realizes his feelings for her. Squeel!
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Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 207
Beautiful chapter. How will this change their relationship? Can't wait to hear his response to Alice.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 207
I cant wait to see what he does
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Date: 02 Nov 2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 207
Thanks good chapter
Date: 02 Nov 2012 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 207
OMG I love it!!! please more!!
Date: 02 Nov 2012 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 207
Wait, what! He hasn't revealed himself to Bella, I'll bet that's Alice. Too bad I want it to be Bella, she's not ready yet though.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 207
Ah good old Alice!!
Date: 02 Nov 2012 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 207
Wow! Amazing doesn't even come close to describing this chapter!! I got a knot in my stomach and goosebumps on my arms! Wow, thank your Sir and Koalababy for the inspirations for this story.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 207
This should be interesting, I wonder what he will do about it.
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Date: 02 Nov 2012 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 207
Love. Great chapter. More please!!
Date: 02 Nov 2012 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 207
Alice to the rescue..at least, that's what who im betting it is.
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Date: 02 Nov 2012 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 206
It took him long enough lol!
Love the pics by the way!
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Date: 02 Nov 2012 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 206
J'aime beaucoup cette photo !
Il l'aime, qu'est ce qu'il va décider de faire pour la garder avec lui ?
J'ai hâte de savoir.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 206
But what is he going to do about it?
Great chapter
Date: 02 Nov 2012 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 206
Loved the picture!! Yay he finally realized that he loves her!!! :D
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Date: 02 Nov 2012 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 206
I really don't want this to ever end
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Date: 02 Nov 2012 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 204
That was tooooooo hot
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Date: 02 Nov 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 206
But, will he take that final step and change her?
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Date: 02 Nov 2012 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 206
Awwwww..... He loves her! What a nice end to a horrible week (Sandy did a number on my house). :)
Date: 02 Nov 2012 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 206
Yes please Sir !
At this rate I cant begin to imagine what will happen when he is inside her LOL !
Date: 02 Nov 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 206
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
Date: 02 Nov 2012 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 204
OH MY GAWD!!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Nov 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 206
PRAISE GOD HE FINALLY GETS IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 206
Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes!!!!!!!!! Men they are always so slow to figure things out! Excellent chapter, love the banner/pic. Kisses.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 206
Omg perfect picture. God he is so hot!!
Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 206
OMGosh!!!!! This was amazing!!!!!!! I could feel how content Edward was at the end of this chapter. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 206
Yes,Yes, Yes! This was absolutely the defining moment I have been waiting for. Obviously, only you knew when exactly Sir would come to this realization, but I must say, you definitely presented it as an "ahha" moment. The last statement simply summed it up beautifully. Not only is she his perfect human sub, but the realtionship had morphed into something much, much more. He finally realizes that he can love her as well as dominate her. Yeah that was beautiful!
BTW, I absolutely love this banner.
Author's Response:
I love the banner too, can't have it on the front though, cause of the nipples. And honestly, I didn't know he knew in this chapter till I wrote it. I feel what they feel when I write, and I knew, right then, that it was at that moment he fell for her, unconditionally, and irrevocably, (to quote an author I kinda like... j/k) um... anyway, thanks so much for the review!
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Date: 02 Nov 2012 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 206
Yes! Wonder if Carlisle knew that would happen? My guess is Hell Yes he knew. Great chapter and as always I look forward to more. Great pic also.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 206
Funally he lved her!! It took 206 chapters for him to realize.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 206
About fucking time!! And oh god that scene...Squirting and just unf
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Date: 02 Nov 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 206
YES HE IFNALLY REALIZED IT BUT WHAT THE HELL IS HE GONNA DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I MEAN IS HE GONNA TELL HER HES A VAMPIRE AND THE HES HER SIR AND LIKE HELLO HAVE TO KNOW LIKE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 02 Nov 2012 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 206
Thanks good chapter
Date: 02 Nov 2012 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 206
Sounds like from Alice's premonitions, he has even more to realize. But I love the I love you's he's thinking, i think he's hooked.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 206
A good pussy liking and it is all clear lol ;)
Date: 02 Nov 2012 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 206
I LOVED IT! That was absolutely the best chapter of all!!!!! That was perfect.. thank you
Date: 02 Nov 2012 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 206
Thank you! So freaking hot. This is what I had been waiting for since the beginning. You did a wonderful job with it too. It went way beyond my expectations.
The banner is flipping awesome too.
Thank you for the update. Did you do it just because I asked? :)
Date: 02 Nov 2012 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 206
Aww yaaaay! A little fluff..so cute..
Date: 02 Nov 2012 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 205
Nice update. I like how you vary up the POV's. It gives a look into both psyches.
Update soon, I love this story and I'm already going through withdrawls.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 204
So he finally did it! And he didn't bte her. They say we learn something new every day and well, Edward learned how to do Oral. Good for him!
When is he going to figure out she is his mate? I want to see his reaction!
Thank you for the update. It's great. Onto the next chapter!
Date: 02 Nov 2012 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 203
I just got a chance to catch up on the stories I read that updated and was so happy to see MC updated! I have a lot of catching up to do! I can't wait to hit the NEXT button, but I wanted to leave a review anyway.
Well written, good update. Thanks!
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Date: 01 Nov 2012 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 205
Fuck Noc!!! Every chapter leaves me wanting more!!!
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Date: 01 Nov 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 75
Finally!!!!! I need a drink and a nap now! With over 180 chapters left to read, I'd better make a run to the liquor store. I love it, Noc!!!!
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Date: 01 Nov 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 74
Yeah, drag it out just a little bit longer, big boy!
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Date: 01 Nov 2012 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 73
The man likes to PLAY, doesn't he? The poor girl may die if he finally gives her permission. I've never read a "death by orgasm" in a fic. Please don't let this be the first, Noc.
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Date: 01 Nov 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 72
It sounds like Isabella has more control than Edward does. You have created such a wonderful dynamic between these characters! I'm so looking forward to all the ways you are going to let them drive each other crazy!! Devious little Noc.....
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Date: 01 Nov 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 71
Oh, she had better be able to stop, right? My bet is on "NO". But I'm sure Edward will be happy either way. No such thing as fair in this realtionship... HE WINS!
Date: 01 Nov 2012 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 205
GAH! You are so close to killing us!
Date: 01 Nov 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 205
the fact that Edward warmed his tongue with a boiling water was hilarious! Only you can think of such a detail. And once again the session and the pics were sooo hot!
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Date: 01 Nov 2012 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 70
You've just got to give Edward a little more control over himself. The image in my mind of him like this: "I tore my pants off and had my cock in my hand almost instantly." is way more than I can handle. LMAO at him muting the phone before he did that!!!
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Date: 01 Nov 2012 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 69
Good lord, Noc. I'm going to have to stop reading this thing at work during lunch. I can barely swallow my food. Edward's vampiric thoughts of what he wants to do to naughty Bella are not good for my digestion.... but they sure are good for my love life!
Date: 01 Nov 2012 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 205
HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 01 Nov 2012 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 205
**winnie voice** I.WANT!!!!