[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 52
She fooled me.... she was only turned on by his attitude of authority. Please tell me this isn't the end of the conversation for tonight.
Btw, I hope you aren't reading all this drivel I spew out. I'm just talking in my head, and letting you know by the number of reviews you have how truly awesome this story is!
Author's Response:
I read every single one... twice...lmao :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 51
That "devil man"... only telling her she could call him "Sir". I think she may have wanted a little more info than that. Methinks that will both turn her on and piss her off!
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 50
Ahh, the window.... you are good, Noc. What a visual!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 49
How long is Edward going to torture us before he makes his move? I'm dying here. I NEED physical interaction between these two. Greedy little reader, aren't I?
Date: 29 Oct 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 199
shit I'm happy I didn't open up this chapter at work. The pic is hot!
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 48
So he is aware of her secret fantasy about her ass! Can't say I'm surprised. This man doesn't miss a trick. She's going to have a hard time trying to get anything past him.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 47
He's already wondering what she would look like as a vampire... always a good sign!
But the thought of him sitting there stoking himself while watching her is just... GAH! You're killing me!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 46
She can't ever seem to get enough sensation, huh. Well, he may just be able to fix that little problem for her. (that is if you solve the issue of no intercourse) ;) The jury's still out on that one. Love you and this little story, Noc.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 45
Awww, Noc, don't tell me this.... no intercourse with a human.... this is cruel... for me and especially for Isabella!! You are going to work this out, right?
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 44
Shaking her ass and going for the rabbit... she's good, isn't she? I hope he's dying over there across the street.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 43
He is watcing tonight, right? He had better be, because I have a feeling she is going to put on a good show for him.
Date: 29 Oct 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 199
And you cut it off there? Evil!
Update soon, but only if you have the time. I'll forgive you if you don't have time.
I like the long chapter.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 42
Whoa, she's bringing out the big guns... the sexy lingerie. This vamp is going to be drooling venom all over the place!! I love this Isabella!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 41
Edward may be a big, bad vampire Dom, but this girl is going to have him tied in knots without even trying. I LOVE it. Can't wait until tonight to see how her "date" goes.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 199
thanks good chapter
Date: 29 Oct 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 199
Funny chapter. Gotta love when they all can pull something over on Edward! Awesome, reminds me of a few days earlier for me and my hubby.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 199
How has he not thought of that before? Maybe Tanya just turned him off it lol!
Date: 29 Oct 2012 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 199
Oh mY Lordy THAT PICTURE IS HOTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Oct 2012 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 199
Now Edward is going to have a lick of his favorite flavor!! Nice pic!!!
Date: 29 Oct 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 199
yeh why not Edward silly man not wonder he wound so tight love Carlisle lol
Date: 29 Oct 2012 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 69
I kinda want him to lose control, but not kill her*~}
Date: 29 Oct 2012 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 199
loving the visual ;)
Date: 29 Oct 2012 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 199
Oh Bella what do you have coming.
Date: 29 Oct 2012 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 199
GAH, SO amazing :D
Date: 29 Oct 2012 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 199
OMGosh!!!!!!!!! Fantastice picture. Maybe Carlisle needs to sit down with Edward and have "THE TALK" with him. LOL!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 198
I'll always wait. And I love this story. This is my first one of yours and now I'm hooked on the latest one!
Author's Response:
the latest one?
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 198
Merci pour ce chapitre !
Date: 29 Oct 2012 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 198
I hope she gets to find out who he is :) joined wreck room ;)
Date: 29 Oct 2012 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 198
Good advice, Carlisle. On your pet, not in a scratchy, unfeeling tissue. :)
And thank you for making me join the wreck room. It's freaking amazing. My jaw still hasn't been picked up from the floor yet. I don't know what I was expecting, but it wasn't that.
Thank you for the update. I look forward to each and every one!
Date: 29 Oct 2012 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 198
Sometimes I do wish I fb'd
thanks Bec Rose & N.E. for yor amazing writing:-)
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 40
I think Isabella has the right idea... a date with her midnight caller. Can't wait to see how Edward handles this. I'm not sure who is going to have the upper hand here. He may think he does, but my money is on her.
I'll be back for more tomorrow.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 39
Isabella's little temper tantrum just makes Edward want her that much more. They are both in such trouble. Wonder who is going to drive who crazy first. I can't wait to find out.
Date: 29 Oct 2012 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 198
Nice Carlisle, good advice. I think Edward is just not seeing what everyone else is seeing.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 38
Damn he's tough. No phone call for Isabella tonight, since she didn't perform to his standards. Oh well, I have hope for next time.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 37
Please let him call, please let him call. He'd better call, after she did what he asked. I'm off to find out. I'm so glad you wrote this in drabble format. I can drop in, read a quick chapter, and not get tied up with a long chapter. It's perfect for how busy I am right now.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 36
Oh, damn, he just gave her his first command! I'm dying to know if she knows him. Noc, seriously this is just so good. You are a genius.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 198
it'd be really interesting if Sir had His butterfly at her workplace. I'm not sure how that one would get pulled off, but I'd love to see what you come up with
Date: 28 Oct 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 198
Glad that Carlisle talked to Edward. Why did Edward make the comment about giving Bella up in a year??????
Date: 28 Oct 2012 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 198
lmao... omg... the advice from Carlisle cracks the hell out of me!!! LOL... cum on her, not into a tissue!! BWAHAHAHA omg LOVE this!
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 198
So happy to see Edward finally admitting that Bella is something special... :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 198
thanks good chapter
Date: 28 Oct 2012 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 198
He is getting all the clues he just needs to pay attention to them.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 35
Well, Ms. Noc, this chapter just about insured that I'm going to be up late tonight reading. He finally took the next step... telling her to open her curtains. I'm melting here. Your writing could be dangerous. Now I don't know whether to read as fast as I can to catch up, or to take only small doses so I don't faint from sensory overload. I'll get back to you on that.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 34
I LOVE Edward.... he's such a perv!!! I'm sure he IS using his imagination about her in the shower. And Isabella has been moaning in her sleep..... these two are going to have such fun together. How much longer do I have to wait to get to the good stuff? Remind me to never start reading one of your stories as soon as you start posting. I could never wait for updates.... I am not a patient person (do you need a pre-reader, Noc?) Your stories are addicting.
Author's Response:
prereading wouldn't help, im writing and posting almost instantly now... like a 12 hour turn around, though tonight I hope to get ready for the rest of the week!
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 33
I FLOVE this Isabella. She isn't going to knuckle under to this unknown caller.... well, we all know you are going to make her do just that. What fun!! It's a good thing she doesn't know what you are going to do with her character, not that I know either. But I'm sure it's going to be gooood.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 32
So, now he's going to interact with her as Edward first. But a wrestling game..... I'm not sure where you are going, but I'm coming along with you. Thanks for the fun!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 31
Isabella would never call the police about the phone calls... she's just as intrigued as I am. Do they work together, or is she just doing some work in his office? Either way, has she noticed him? We all know he isn't the kind of man to go unnoticed. Just talking to myself again.....
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 30
I don't think I've told you, but I absolutely adore Edward's name for Bella... Butterfly. One of the best names I've heard for a sub in fan fiction. You got it going on, girl.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 29
Just the thought of Edward on Alice's whipping bench made me giggle. I already love this Alice.
Date: 28 Oct 2012 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 198
Great talk with Carlisle. Someone needs to give Edward a little more of a push because for someone so smart, he sure is slow when it comes to figuring out that Isabella is his mate. You'd think with all the mated couples around him and the whole mind reading thing he would have put it together. I guess denial isn't just a river in Egypt. ;-)
I love this story. See ya next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 28
A new toy for Edward. That means a whole lot of fun for us!! I'm glad to see Edward interacting and laughing with Alice. I don't want him to be all bad.... just a LOT bad.
Date: 28 Oct 2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 198
Thanks for another great chapter. I love surpises :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 27
I'm hugging and kissing you for putting Jasper in your story. I am a hugh Jasper h00r. (but I'd rather see him as a Dom) Alice must be tough, if Edward said she was the toughest Domme he knew.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 26
So he's rented the penthouse apartment in her building and the one next door to her. How very convenient. And isn't it nice to have that much money? I love how you described it as an "obscene" amount!!!!! Love how your mind works, Noc.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 25
She's scared and thrilled... not a bad combination. Lucky girl.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 24
This is going to be such fun... watching him try to train feisty little Bella. She is going to give him a real challenge, isn't she?
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 23
See, I knew he was watching and wanking. Oh, his soft whisper is so sexy. I'm so glad Bella isn't a coward like me, or you'd have to change your story... and it would be so boring.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 22
Another phone call from Mr. W&W. When is he going to make his move? I'm off to find out. Loving every chapter, Noc. :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 21
I bet Mr.Watching & Wanking enjoyed that last little display. Keep it up and I have a feeling he be there soon.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 20
You like a bit of pain, huh? Well, Noc knows just the person to help you out with that, little Ms. Bella.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yeah, it's safe to masturbate with the curtains open, Bella; because "no one" can see you. Oops, did you not tell her about that vampire that lives across the street? I'm having the best time just tripping through your story, Noc!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 198
Im intrigued as to why Alice wants him to go to the club? What is she hoping to achieve?
Date: 28 Oct 2012 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 198
gota love charlise
Date: 28 Oct 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 198
So no one is going to clue him in as to why he feels the way he does? Do they think he will panic or something?
Gotta love Carlisle's advice at the end ;) I'm pretty sure Edward would much prefer to cum on butterfly then in a tissue in his work bathroom!!!
I will definitly let Bec know how much we appriciate all she does to help you get this awesome fic out to us!!!
Date: 28 Oct 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 198
Great chapter love Carlisle.
Date: 28 Oct 2012 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 198
I really like hearing edwars interactions with his family. Seems like they all know what Edward doesn't! When will he figure it out I wonder
Date: 28 Oct 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 197
Edward only does it missonary in fantasy land...just wait little butterfly!!
Poor Edward I'm sure was going to bust so he had to leave for the day...he walked himself into that situation, silly vamp.
My husband plays hockey & my best friend & her three children play, so I know how much time goes into that...it's crazy!! Don't stress we will wait for ya :)
Date: 28 Oct 2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 196
Ugh...loved the visuals!!! Emmett is fun to hear from but the idea of Rose putting on a strap on and fucking Jessica to death had me laughing in my seat!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 197
Great chapter. I loved the reflections Bella had on here day at work and how playful her afternoon working with Emmett and Jessica turned out to be. I look forward to hearing what Sir has to say since I'm sure he will be calling her very soon.
No worries on the chapters. Keep posting when you can and I'll be here (and over at your other stories) reading.
Date: 28 Oct 2012 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 197
Am still really enjoying this. Updates make my day or night!!
Date: 28 Oct 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 197
Poor Jesica, the butt of jokes, he he;-) that guidon the previous chapter just got XXX'd!
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 18
This Bella is one cool chick. If I had gotten that call, I might not have fallen asleep so easily.
Ok, Noc, I managed to get 18 chapers read and reviewed today. You don't want to know how much of my housework I DIDN'T get done. But I had a really good time. Thanks for all the entertainment. You ROCK!!
Author's Response:
I had to clean my entire house yesterday because someone from around the world is coming here to stay for a week. Sadly it's not Bec :( I did interview a cleaning person so that I can keep writing and never have to do that again!
Date: 28 Oct 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 197
I love Emmett.
Date: 28 Oct 2012 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 197
where did Edward go and that was to much fun to make fun of Jessica
Date: 28 Oct 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 196
WOW!!!!!!! Pictures!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
O.M.G. If that happened to me, I would freak out.... unless I knew that hottie was on the other end of the line. ;)
Date: 28 Oct 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 197
Thanks for the new chapter. Worry about yourself first. If we don't hear from you in a few days, though, I reserve the right to pester you until you answer. :)
Those nipples must be begging for some release!
Date: 28 Oct 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 197
That was amazing :D
Date: 28 Oct 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 197
LOL...Loved this chap! I also love how she thinks Edward is so "vanilla"! :)
Date: 28 Oct 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 197
Loving this story!!!!!!!!
Date: 28 Oct 2012 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 195
Emmett is living dangerous!!!!!!! LOL!!!!!!!
LOVE the pictures!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 197
Thanks. As always such a crowd pleaser. Please don't ever stop writing your fic. I LOVE all of your stories!!!
Date: 28 Oct 2012 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 194
OMGosh!!!!!! Poor Edward!!!!! lol!!!!!!! Edward is going to kill Emmett. lol.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 16
Thank goodness I waited to start this. I'm not sure I could wait every day for updates. Now I have to pace myself so you are always a good bit ahead of me. Keep writing, sugar, so I never catch up.
It amazes me how you get so much in each little chapter.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
This is just HOT, Noc! Six sentences and you manage to make it hot. Now all I can picture is him watching her .....
Date: 28 Oct 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 196
ok ... I was cracking the hell up at Emmett's pov until I got to those gif's... DAYUM. Let's just say I was no longer laughing. UNF. That... just oh yeaaaaa. :) I'm in my happy place again. :)) wait... those shoes on her are just God awful. lol sorry... I digress!
Date: 28 Oct 2012 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 196
lmfao jessica sucks we all know
Date: 27 Oct 2012 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh Edward... how we all love a vampire voyeur.
I'm loving this, Noc. (in case you couldn't tell)
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2012 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
I just noticed you had changed to EPOV. So Edward wants his sub to make punishable mistakes.... have you warned Bella of this fact?
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2012 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 12
While Sir isn't interested in how the contest between Laurant and Tanya turns out... I am! But I'll bet you're moving on to Sir's plans for the evening, huh?
That's ok, I'm more interested in that!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2012 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 11
I guess that is one way to get rid of a submissive. And I guess we found out something about Sir... he's not into blow jobs from a man.
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2012 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 196
If I wasn't still reading, I would still at least login just to check out the pics. Hot!
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2012 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 196
Jeez,,,my screen is now covered in coffee!
That was some chapter end note!
Of course we're still reading