Date: 27 Oct 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 196
sweet bring on another chapter please
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Date: 27 Oct 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 196
Oh, we are all still here and if anyone left they REALLY missed out. Great chapter and I don't think I need to say anything about the pic and gif. Thanks.
Date: 27 Oct 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 196
I'm still reading. This story is great. Pictures are too. Can't wait until she finds out her Sir is Edward. Waiting patiently, for the next chapter to find out if she does find out or if she goes to club with him?
Jad
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Date: 27 Oct 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
Ooh, I may be feeling a little sorry for Tanya now. James doesn't sound like someone I would want to be given to. But I'm not going to worry about her. I want more Bella.... soon.....
Date: 27 Oct 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 196
Hey! I'm still reading and I still love it! Keep up the good work.I like the various different perspectives on the situations.
Great writing as usual. and the visuals were unexpected, but very much appreciated. Thank you!
Date: 27 Oct 2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
Hummm. Is he giving Tanya to James? You do know that all my questions are rhetorical.... just talking to myself here. (And at the same time, I'm giving you another review to help up your stats)
Author's Response:
awww thanks... im headed for #1 for most reviewed story on TWCS
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Date: 27 Oct 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 8
I have absolutely no idea what James is asking Edward if he's sure about; so I'm off to the next chapter to find out.
<3 this story.
Date: 27 Oct 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 196
Yes yes, still reading, AND watching too, OH MY ROB, that's fucking hot.
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Date: 27 Oct 2012 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 196
totally still here with you, still reading, still loving it, and totally STILL looking and watching for updates!!
xoxox
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Date: 27 Oct 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm glad Tanya is going quietly into ex-sub status. She is, isn't she?
Love this little story of yours, Noc.
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Date: 27 Oct 2012 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow, how convenient to be a vampire submissive. Would they even feel the pain? The instant healing sounds great, but the 24 hour marathon sounds even better!
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Date: 27 Oct 2012 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 5
Strawberry blonde... Tanya, I'm assuming. Or maybe just some random girl... his current submissisve?
Date: 27 Oct 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ooh, she sounds like me. I need to start breaking some rules. Like sitting here reading this instead of doing the cleaning and laundry that are on my agenda for the day.
Date: 27 Oct 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 196
Gah, SO amazing! :D
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Date: 27 Oct 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
Thank goodness he wasn't a super hero. *blows kisses to Noc* The thought of this man in tights and a cape... ugh... just NO.
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Date: 27 Oct 2012 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm assuming Sir is a vampire since he can watch her 24/7.... or else he is a super hero. Please don't let him be a super hero... vampires are much sexier!
Date: 27 Oct 2012 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ok, Noc, I have succumbed to your many teases, and all the great comments I've heard. Even though my reading time is really limited right now, I figure I can handle a drabble. But after this first chapter, I'm rethinking that. I have a feeling I may be reading all day and night just to catch up.
Love it already!
Date: 27 Oct 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 196
I bet Edward sees a vampire Dom fuck a human on Wednesday and realize he can take Bella.
Author's Response:
You are very close!!!!!!!! wishing we were friends on fb so I could pick ur brain :)
Date: 27 Oct 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 196
Wow loved the pics lol XD
Date: 27 Oct 2012 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 195
Emmett wants to get he's ass kicked by Edward lol XD
Date: 27 Oct 2012 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 196
Still reading!! Love emmitt.
Date: 27 Oct 2012 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 196
Of course I'm still reading i constantly check for updates. Emmett is such a bad boy teasing Edward. Can't wait to find out why Alice needs Edward to be at eclipse
Date: 27 Oct 2012 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 196
holy shit, those pictures. My ultimate fantasy....
Date: 27 Oct 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 195
Poor Edward having a hard on all day, but he does bring it on himself. Love the picture and the gif with the arse squeeze is beautiful.
Date: 27 Oct 2012 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 196
yep, I'm still here =)
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Date: 27 Oct 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 196
thanks good chapter
Date: 27 Oct 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 196
I freaking LOVE the visual aids here! My favorite!
Date: 27 Oct 2012 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 196
Great hearing Emmetts pov.. wow what is gonna happen at the club that edward neecs to be there???
Date: 27 Oct 2012 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 196
Girl, of course I am still reading. How could I ever leave Sir ?
BTW, the photos you attached are fuck hot. (as long as I am reading behind the back of my hubby lol)
Author's Response:
let him see!
Date: 27 Oct 2012 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 196
That's a hot pic. I wonder what's going to go down at Eclipse next Wednesday?
thanks for the update
Date: 27 Oct 2012 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 196
I just love Emmett's pov! So I wonder why Alice says edwrad needs to go to the club. What going to happen?
Date: 27 Oct 2012 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 196
Wonder what's going to happen at the club? Hummmm.... :-)
Date: 27 Oct 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 195
Sir better hurry up and fuck his Butterfly.
Author's Response:
that's where the fic is supposed to end... i might continue on a bit, idk...
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Date: 27 Oct 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 195
I kinda hope that you dont have him share her.
Author's Response:
He might at some point, maybe in three or four decades... but not in this fic :)
Date: 26 Oct 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 195
Even better reason for Edwards outburts!!!! Emmett and his dirty mind :) Love the visuals too!!
He needs to get a grip or he is going to kill Emmett right there...nevermind that he will be fucking butterfly by the end of the day if he doesn't get out of that room...
Love him...
Date: 26 Oct 2012 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 194
Emmett cracks me up...I can only imagine the type of club they are going to next week...BDSM perhaps!! And Edward reaction LMAO
However, after the rubbing the butterfly nipples I'm not sure he will be able to not take her right there!
Date: 26 Oct 2012 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 193
So funny that she likes Emmett more but only in a brotherly way...and Edward keeps asking her out, why??? Checking to see who much she wants/needs her Sir?
Date: 26 Oct 2012 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 192
Are his family trying to do an intervention??? Yeah, he is way to far gone with his butterfly to see reason at this point. Wonder if they will finally tell him that she is his mate?
Date: 26 Oct 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 195
hih hii.... Edward is starting lose his control with his moaning! That's good news!
Date: 26 Oct 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 195
Hahahaha......man. he needs to say something to her already.
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Date: 26 Oct 2012 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 195
damn that is some hot pics.. love a hot and bothered edward
Date: 26 Oct 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 195
Watch out emmett rose will kill you
Date: 26 Oct 2012 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 194
Where can the giving thanks fic be found? Is it posted yet?
Author's Response:
Giving Thanks is part of the Stand up for Katarina charity compilation. You had to make a $5 donation to get the 100 fics. Giving Thanks is one of those. It will probably be available another way in January. Sorry, she asked me to write that for her.
Date: 26 Oct 2012 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 195
Lol the ending was funny.
Date: 26 Oct 2012 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 195
Damn I forgot about the pictures!!! Guess I can't read this at work anymore!
*blushes*
xoxox
ba
Date: 26 Oct 2012 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 195
HOLY CRAP WHAT VISUALS FIRST THING IN THE MORNING MUCH MUCH BETTER THAN COFFEE ;)
Date: 26 Oct 2012 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 195
Wow, making up for the missing pic in style:-)
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Date: 26 Oct 2012 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 195
Aww man I sooooo in to the story right now
Cant wait for the next update
Date: 26 Oct 2012 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 195
Naughty, naughty Emmett!!
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Date: 26 Oct 2012 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 194
“Mother fucker!” Edward yelled. “She is not going to that club!” Oops::))
Date: 26 Oct 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 195
sound like a good time lol
Date: 26 Oct 2012 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 195
Gotta love it! Make your Sir sweat Butterfly! (Figuratively speaking of course.). Kisses to you. Love the chapter as usual.
Date: 26 Oct 2012 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 195
jesus fuck. no pics and then you slam me with this?! Reader cruelty!
Date: 26 Oct 2012 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 195
beyond hot!! love u
Author's Response:
OMG..... love u too baby! Thank u sooo much for encouraging me to write tonight!
Date: 26 Oct 2012 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 195
Oh I love Emmett and Edward losing it like that was priceless. I hope Bella goes exploring the club anyway!
Date: 26 Oct 2012 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 195
OMG... sooo hott!!!
Date: 26 Oct 2012 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 195
Hmm, does she recognise her Sir's growl?
Date: 25 Oct 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 194
I wonder if Edward's outburst will get her mind opening up to Edward as her mystery Sir?
thanks for the update, and wow, pretty hot intro to Giving Thanks.
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Date: 25 Oct 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 194
J'ai l'impression que Bella a des doutes sur Edward !!!!
Merci.
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Date: 25 Oct 2012 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 194
:) it sound like Edward's worlds are starting to collide.... Yeah!
Date: 25 Oct 2012 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 194
Gah, that was amazing and HOT! LOVED IT!
Date: 25 Oct 2012 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 194
Where is the new story not on ur profile
Author's Response:
the original is birthday spankings..... the new story is available if you donated to katalina's cancer charity. I linked it in the chapter. I hope that helps.
Date: 25 Oct 2012 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 194
Oh Noc, this is what I'm talking about!!! LOVED this chapter. There is nothing better than waking up to your words. I wonder if your hubby goes to bed hearing some wonderful words from you while I wake up to a different set of beautiful words...hhhmmmmm
Thanks.
Date: 25 Oct 2012 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 194
ooo edward going to out himself lol
Date: 25 Oct 2012 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 194
Amazing chapter. Is Bella finally going to figure out Edward is her Sir?
Date: 25 Oct 2012 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 194
Finaly some action. It has became bored to read constantly about his demanding.
What can I say? I just adore jealous Edward.
Date: 25 Oct 2012 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 194
That old emmett just love to mess with Edward!
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Date: 25 Oct 2012 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 194
Thanks good chapter
Date: 25 Oct 2012 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 194
Wow what a outburst from Edward.... oh what a hot teaser that was!! can't wait for more!
Date: 25 Oct 2012 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 194
WOAH! Damn, wonder what club Emmett was thinking about... And dayum that was hott... him looking at her knowing what was beneath her blouse.
Date: 25 Oct 2012 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 194
Edward is losing his mind Bella should be getting the hint that he is sir??? Cant wait and I love the sneak peak
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Date: 25 Oct 2012 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 194
Damn! Edward almost blew it with the club explosion. And he might blow it anyway with the visual perusal of Butterfly if he isn't careful. See ya next time.
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Date: 25 Oct 2012 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 193
I figured she would have trouble concentrating. Wonder it Sir, I mean Edward, is having as much trouble?
Author's Response:
next chapter
Date: 25 Oct 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 193
lol...Funny how she thinks her Sir and Edward smell alike. lol hmmm
Date: 25 Oct 2012 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 193
Oh wow, that was amazing :)
Date: 25 Oct 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 193
I'm loving the story, but I am really enjoying reading about Bella comparing Edward and her Sir. I can't wait til she starts realizing they are one and the same.
Author's Response:
she never does... realize i mean... it just seems so, unrealistic for her.
Date: 25 Oct 2012 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 190
I oove your pics but reading the story is worth more.
Date: 24 Oct 2012 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 193
Emmett, you are giving out clues that Edward may not appreciate.
Date: 24 Oct 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 193
Loved the fact you went back to show them working together in a public setting.
Thank you for the update. I know you've been uuber busy. If you need a day off of writing and posting, go ahead and take it. I grant you permission. :)
Date: 24 Oct 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 193
Does she like Emmett better because she doesn't want to be attracted to anyone but her Sir, and Emmett is safe?
Please show them flirting, does she really not respond to him?
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Date: 24 Oct 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 193
Ah oui elle aime bien Edward quand même !
Date: 24 Oct 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 193
Emmett always cracks me up
Date: 24 Oct 2012 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 193
Thank you...Perfect, just like you!!!!!!!
Date: 24 Oct 2012 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 193
Emmett knows full well who Bella is thinking of!
Date: 24 Oct 2012 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 193
Edward is going to kick Emmett in the ass lol
Date: 24 Oct 2012 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 193
Loved seeing her back at work. Loved that Emmett is teasing her. lol.
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Date: 24 Oct 2012 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 193
Thanks good chapter
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Date: 24 Oct 2012 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 193
damn if you had sir touching you wouldn't you think about him