Date: 28 Jan 2013 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 290
squeel. excited much .... hell yeah.
Date: 28 Jan 2013 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 290
She finally gets to see him
Date: 28 Jan 2013 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 290
Ahhh, getting closer...
Date: 28 Jan 2013 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 290
Thank you! May I please have another?
Date: 28 Jan 2013 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 290
Damn you are a Mistress of keeping uo suspension and all your readers on their toes! This was great as always but I. Want. The. Sex!!!! ; )
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2013 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 290
Oh for shitssake! You. Are. Killing. Me. The slow burn is fucking excrutiating! Sooooo cloooose! But not quite there! Pleeease, Mistress! Pleeease let her see his face tomorrow!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2013 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 290
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So excited!!!
-jonzie
Date: 28 Jan 2013 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 290
Yes, finally. Been a long time coming.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2013 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 290
She found the sexy feet, collar he likes as I wait for her to see his master.
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2013 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 290
Wonderful chapter. I'm glad I was up late and could read it tonight. Thanks for writing such any amazing story and providing all the erotic, beautiful pictures. See ya next update.
Date: 28 Jan 2013 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 290
I cannot wait until she see's it's Edward
Date: 28 Jan 2013 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 290
GAH, YES!!! I accept you, Master :D
Date: 28 Jan 2013 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 290
Gahh!! The wait. is. killing. me.
But that good type of pain. That if you hold off, then good things will come--you'll be rewarded. :))
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2013 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 290
luv it will you post again tonight !
Date: 28 Jan 2013 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 290
ughhhhhhh hurry!!! I want her to see him!!!
Date: 28 Jan 2013 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 290
oh SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE He said LOVE! Did she catch that????
Date: 28 Jan 2013 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 290
Aaaahhhhh. More please.
Date: 28 Jan 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 289
Im begging please update. I've been waiting all day. Please please sexy spanking please. Lol
Author's Response:
hey, thanks for the review and the gentle reminder... sorry sweetie... was wrapped up in re-writing midnight caller :)
Date: 28 Jan 2013 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 289
Wow the pics are buitiful.... The human body is Truly a work of art, a blank cavas!
Good chapter noc keep them cumming even if its HARD lol ;)
~wascas
Date: 27 Jan 2013 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ok we are on the edge of our seats....you have us in the palm of your hand....please share....soon
Date: 27 Jan 2013 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 289
Keeping us waiting huh
Date: 27 Jan 2013 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 289
So good can't wait for more
Date: 27 Jan 2013 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh yes - yes - yes!!! I can totally see it!!
- The step sisters & stepmom subject Cinderella to humiliation, even though that's a hard limit for her
- "Prince Charming" is a tounge-in-cheek ninckname - because in reality he's a cold, demanding Dom that's unsatisfied with his partners
- At the dance - the other princesses are scared at the thought of his punishments - but Cinderella gets aroused
- Instead of a glass slipper -- it's actually a glass dildo that's nicknamed "slipper" --> because it feels so good to "SLIP-HER in" (can you just see the King's messenger traveling from house to house asking about the glass slipper and everyone pulls out a shoe -- except for Cinderella who runs down the stairs with a huge glass cock)
- Cinderella lives happily ever after with her Prince Sir - who makes her wear butt plugs / anal beads under her fancy gowns...
Please consider writing it -- it would be so fun!! :)
Author's Response:
It sounds like you have it all planned out! Why don't you. Message me on fb and I'll help you with it. I promise :)
Date: 27 Jan 2013 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 289
Great as always !
Date: 27 Jan 2013 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 289
MORE....MORE...MORE PLEASE!!
Date: 26 Jan 2013 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 289
oh yes at last make her yours. lovely pictures.
Date: 26 Jan 2013 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 289
Oh yes please!! :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2013 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 289
thanks good chapter
Date: 26 Jan 2013 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 289
YESSSSS omg omg I can't wait! CLAIM HER SIR!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2013 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 289
Oh man -- can't wait for the next chapter!! They are so close to their fairytale ending... Okay well, maybe not the traditional, "Disney-esque" fairytale ending -- but you get my point... :)
Although, now that I think of it, Cinderella sounds like a born submissive ;)
Author's Response:
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm now that I think about it... that would be a really fun fic to write... step sisters Domming her, and then Sir taking over... :)
Date: 26 Jan 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 289
I knew when Bella said what she did that Edward would fall more in love with her. Can't wait for more and more and MORE!!!!! SOON PLEASE!!!!!!
Date: 26 Jan 2013 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 289
Yes...it's time!!!! In tomorrow's update, maybe, possibly, please!!
Thanks for sharing.
Date: 26 Jan 2013 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 289
Time its time ;)
Date: 26 Jan 2013 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 289
What a cliffy
Date: 26 Jan 2013 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 289
Thank you Jesus its time
Date: 26 Jan 2013 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 289
damn great chapter cant wait for more.
Date: 26 Jan 2013 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 289
He's about to tare that thing up!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2013 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 289
Wow! I don't know what you were apologizing for the the author note because the chapter and the pix were hot as Hell. Loved it all.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2013 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 289
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
GAHHHHH!!! YOU END IT AT THE WORST POSSIBLE PLACES!!!!!
god, if I didn't fucking love you, I'd HATE YOU!!!! grrrrr!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I love your reviews :)
Date: 26 Jan 2013 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 289
Beautiful chapter and beautiful pictures, thank you.
Date: 26 Jan 2013 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 288
Ooh! This is it...the final countdown to the big reveal. I'm so excited to read the next part...the anticipation is killing me!
Date: 26 Jan 2013 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 288
Oh Bella I think you just gave him the answer he needed to hear!! :D
Date: 26 Jan 2013 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 288
OMG ! time for Sir to show himself ! please next chapter I cant wait!
Date: 26 Jan 2013 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 288
Wow this chaper is really beatiful and for some reason seems heartbreakingly sad, but in the good romantic gooey kind of way ;)
~wascas
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2013 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 288
thanks good chapter
Date: 26 Jan 2013 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 288
OMG .... YESSSSS can't wait can't wait can't wait!!!
Date: 26 Jan 2013 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 231
Ok this was nice
Date: 25 Jan 2013 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 288
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 25 Jan 2013 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 288
The sincerity in Bella's words have to move Edward's "heart", I'm sure he can feel that discover him to her it's the right to do now.
Date: 25 Jan 2013 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 288
He really needs to put her are of her misery and mine. I want to rsd her reaction when she sees it is Edward.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2013 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 288
Excellent chapter, as always thank you for the update
Date: 25 Jan 2013 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 288
Wow, that was wonderful!
Date: 25 Jan 2013 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 288
Almost there - I'm dying....
Date: 25 Jan 2013 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 288
awhhhh!!! it's so close but so far!!!
Date: 25 Jan 2013 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 288
take off the blind fold right now !!!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait any longer, CRYing
Date: 25 Jan 2013 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 288
Now those are the kind of hands I like.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2013 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 288
What a beautiful chapter. I can't wait to read his response.
Date: 25 Jan 2013 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 288
it's happening, it's happening! she's going to see him!!!!
found the wreck room btw :)
Author's Response:
lol... it's not hard to find. If you type in Nocturnal Emmisions Wreck Room, its the only one! So who are you in there? have you friend requested me and messaged me yet?
Date: 25 Jan 2013 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 288
Well there it is... all of her heart and soul on the line Sir...
Date: 25 Jan 2013 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 288
Glad that Bella is being honest with him. I meant to ask in the last chapter. Since Edward can hear bits and pieces of her thoughts right now, will he be able to hear more after they have sex??
Date: 25 Jan 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 288
Aaaaah!!!! You're killing me! I need her to see him almost as much as I need to breathe. Excellent chapter as usual!
Date: 25 Jan 2013 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 288
Fucking stunning bitches!!!!!
Date: 25 Jan 2013 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 288
So do it, do it now!! This build up is killing me...in a good way, of course!
Date: 25 Jan 2013 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 288
ACK!!! I can't take it... Gotta read the next chapter!! Although I have a feeling it's basically EPOV with him doing an internal happy-dance :)
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2013 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 288
I love that Bella was honest with him. I get a feeling Edward is very nervous about the moment.
Date: 25 Jan 2013 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 288
Aaaahhhh. More. Please. :D
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2013 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 287
YES IS HE FINALLY GONNA SHOW THAT HES EDWARD AND THAT HES A VAMPIRE AND THAT SHE IS HIS MATE AND THAT HE LOVES HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH AND HAVE SEX WITH HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????????
Date: 25 Jan 2013 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 287
i loved the picture at the end of chapter!!! the suspense is killing me, even though i already know what's going to happen, i want to know what he's thinking, what he's feeling! gahhhh...
will you be writing about how he changes ehr too? (please says yes!)
Author's Response:
Nope... I'm only taking it to where I took it in the one shot... On the other hand, I am writing a sequel! :)
Date: 25 Jan 2013 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 287
Oh Edward yeah show her u want her :)
Date: 25 Jan 2013 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 285
okay....the pics at the end made it ALL for me on this chapter! love it
Date: 25 Jan 2013 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 287
Wow even though there wasent nessarly a ton of "action" in this chapter it's still very forfilling and a lot happened :) i cant wait for more noc
~wascas
Oh and what is this i hear about "coming to an END soon?"
Outrageses roumors i hope....
Author's Response:
ur kidding right... it's got like 12 chapters left... then all done! Its all written. I am working on rewriting it, adding some then writing the sequel... that will be in a few months. Are u on fb? you could get ur info first hand u know.
Date: 25 Jan 2013 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 285
thats so sweet. :))
Date: 24 Jan 2013 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 287
Is this a renesme story or is it a neutral story
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2013 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 287
U NEED TO UPDATE LAST UPDATED DATE BECAUSE IT IS SHOWING U HAVEN'T UPDATED SINCE JAN 6 2013 PLEASE CHANGE SO THIS STORY WILL SHOW UP AGAIN UNDER MOST RECENT AGAIN. Trust me many people think this story hasn't been Updated in 2 weeks due to it not showing up there. Please fix!!!
Author's Response:
i was wondering why my reader numbers have gone down to like 6 readers instead of the usual 8...lol...
Date: 24 Jan 2013 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 287
He is going to have to convince her she is his
Date: 24 Jan 2013 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 287
that shit was feral. loved it. oh did sugar spank you? sent his ass a message!!! oh btw it's leelou...lol
Date: 24 Jan 2013 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 287
Aww..can't wait!
Date: 24 Jan 2013 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 287
i think chapter was my absolute favorite so far.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2013 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 287
Poor Bella. He needs to put her out of her misery!
Date: 24 Jan 2013 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 287
I'm speechless..that made me umm *swoon*
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2013 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 287
Great chapter and really amazing photos. He was finally able to hear her thoughts so he knows she loves him and can't live without him, anymore than he could live without her. I look forward to more tomorrow.
Date: 24 Jan 2013 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 287
Holy smoke, this build-up is killing me!! Can't wait for the finale.
Date: 24 Jan 2013 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 287
I'm so glad he can hear her. Now claim her already Edward, don't chicken out.
Date: 24 Jan 2013 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 287
For some reason when I read this I felt that it was so much emotion in it. Loving this whole story and pictures. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2013 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 287
That was AMAZING. LOVED THE FABULOUS PICS