Date: 05 Jun 2020 8:37 PM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
Oh my! This story needs to come with a warning: Do Not Drink Coffee while reading because your screen will be sprayed on during the reading of this story. I have laughed so hard and chocked on my coffee during my enjoyment of this story. Jason is a hoot! Thank you for your great writing.
Date: 23 Sep 2018 8:57 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Now, tis chapter made me cry. It explains a lot This needed to be shared and unburdened. An therapist needed to be able to hear and addres and help this suffering man understgand that none of this was his fault.Holy crap. That poor 15 year old boy. Thank you for making your readers see a whoe new dimension of Christgian. Great insight.
Date: 23 Sep 2014 7:25 PM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
LOVED LOVED LOVED THIS STORY, THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING, I'm being greedy but I STILL WANT MORE , ;-) but I guess it all great things has to end some time :-( sooo sad to see it end . But the good news is that I can now move on to yr other stories, again thanks a bunch for yr fab view of Taylor & Gail xo
10 STARS ALL THE WAY XO
Date: 22 May 2014 7:06 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
i cant believe what christian did
i cant believe that you could write something like this
when you love somebody you cant possibly do the thing tat you know will cause her the worst pain
personally i would never forgive him, because anna always told him that she wasnt enough, that he has special needs
and after 2 kids and 7 years together he decides to do this????????
i know i am angry on a book but the situation made me so mad .....
i would put him through hell and back for this and pay him with the same coin in order to feel what she felt
Date: 24 Nov 2013 11:26 PM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
I can't beliveve this story has come to an end!! U did an amazing job in writting this beauifully capivating story & thanks for all the time u investined in writing for u s ur avid readers!!! Thanks again!!
Date: 24 Nov 2013 5:27 PM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
I've loved every chapter of this story and I can cofess that I've never read 50 shades but loved MotU -your story had me reading some chapters side by side to see it from all sides-you have a real talent that I hope will take you far x Thank you xx
Date: 23 Nov 2013 2:04 PM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
Thank you! You've made me laugh, cry and be shocked! Well done.
My favorite line this chapter... "every potential problem from Ana feeling unwell, to some sort of apocalyptic future where Seattle is plunged into darkness, hospitals are without power, and flesh-eating zombies stalk the streets. ". I was giggling mindlessly before my first cup of coffee this morning.
Date: 23 Nov 2013 7:56 AM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
I got 4 alerts for chap. 40. TWCS must have problems.
This said the chapter was good. You know I am not particularly drawn to Taylor, but I loved the side glimpses of Ana and Christian I got.
Are you continuing the other side stories? I hope so.
Yes, sorry about the multiple alerts - the site kept telling me it wasn't loading. Grr! Yes, I'll be getting back to the other stories now. Thanks for staying with me, Camilla : ) jx
Date: 23 Oct 2013 7:54 AM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
This is such a beautifully breathtaking story!! It truely leaves me captivated sitting on the edge of my seat!!! This story truely leaves me most assuredly intriguied leaving most definatly impatienly awaiting the next update so I can begin reading these amazing flowing words to once again appear on these pages again!!! I give this a 10 star rating!!
Thank you for that! I really appreciate it. Hope you enjoy the end of the journey, too : ) jx
Date: 19 Oct 2013 7:51 AM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
This was a great, great chapter. It is good to learn that Christian (and Taylor) realized quite soo that Ana was acting under duresse. And, btw, I have just discovered TheGame of Thrones, my son gave me a memory stick with the first 3 seasons. I have bought the books, so Ican know what happen next. It is not -for-kids fantasy, not YA, thanks God.
Oooh! You have a treat in store. It was just something I imagined Barney watching : ) jx
Date: 05 Oct 2013 2:35 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
I thought my heart was going to pop out seriously ....I thought it was happening to me ........Christian is an ass wipe x
Hang in there. It gets a lot better. they have a great love going on.
Date: 27 Sep 2013 2:50 AM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
Yikes! I like to think that he would have stepped in had Christian been to drunk to use good judgement... I'm glad he didn't have to. This next chapter should be a doozy...
Sorry I'm only replying to this now! Hope you've enjoyed the ride : ) jx
Date: 26 Sep 2013 6:29 PM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
Excellent update. It is interesting that although I know what happens next from Ana's POV the story still seems fresh when it comes from Taylor. You should be applauded for that.You might want to go back and change the name of the beauty salon where Mrs. Lincoln works and manages...you call it Escala (their home).
Rats! I HATE making mistakes like that! Noted - thank you ! jx
Date: 10 Aug 2013 3:26 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Tring to submit review for whole story.
Nuwriter, this is chewy, yummy, worth reading beyond all the lemons. In the begining I was leaving review for each chapter. The words breathed MOREinto each character. I could not pause. I felt I may miss something. Silly hugh?! The sex, passion, absolute primal needs, and love obtains massive erotic frequencies. Wet, needy, breathless....
Wow. Thanks. Glad you are enjoying it. You've got a lot more to go. The ride is just beginnng.