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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2021 12:51 AM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

Love love loved this story. You are an amazing writer.  Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2021 12:33 AM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

Love seeing into their future.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2021 10:40 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

So glad they are back in the playroom.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2021 1:18 AM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

I'm so glad that the delivery went well. Glad everyone was healthy.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2021 1:18 AM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

I'm so glad that the delivery went well. Glad everyone was healthy.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2021 10:25 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

I am glad Esme finally decided to talk to Edward.  It took her long enough.  3 babies!!!!!!! Wow. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2021 7:48 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

Well, that was interesting.  Carmen was jealous of Esme. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2021 7:18 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

What in the world was in that envelope that Charlie gave Esme?????? I can't wait to read Esme's pov. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2021 5:22 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

So much fun in the new playroom.  Thomas was definitely having too much fun with his phone call to Edward.  I can't believe Esme invited Tanya and her mother.  I'm glad Bella was honest with them. Hopefully NOW Esme will see her mistakes and apologize to Edward and Bella.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2021 2:08 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

I hope what Emily said to her grandmother really opens Esme's eyes. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2021 8:13 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

Their lives are coming together and they are closer to Happily Ever After.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2021 3:34 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

Beautiful wedding!!!!!!!!!! Edward is the best. 

Oh no, how did Esme find out they were returning from their trip.  She didn't even know they went. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2021 1:03 AM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

Boy Tanya and Esme both are a piece of work.  Tanya I'm not surprised, but Esme, I definitely am. Does she not think Edward is lovable??? I just don't understand.  Loved that Bella had Edward's back when it came to the school  board. Also, loved the grocery store scene. Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2021 2:02 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

Wow, Esme must really have a problem with Bella even after her dad came and talked to her.  Front page news. I would definitely say the cat is out of the bag now. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2021 4:16 AM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

Who was in Bella's apartment and how did they get in????? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2021 3:32 AM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

So glad the kids were happy about Edward and Bella being together.  I can't figure out what is Rose and Alice's problem.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2021 1:58 AM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

Loved this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2021 9:19 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

Wow, what a scary situation for the kids.  Love little Evan. Glad Charlie was as understanding as he was.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2021 4:20 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

So much going on in this chapter.  Loved Bella's pay back from Edward.  Lol. Glad Edward got legal custody of the kids. Still don't like Tanya gets them 50%. The only reason she wants them is to hurt Edward.  So  glad Bella and Rose are there for Emily.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2021 3:50 AM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

Loved Bella playing with Edward.  I am worried that James is going to cause problems.  Will he and Tanya help each other?  That could be bad. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2021 5:00 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

Love the cottage.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2021 2:38 AM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

I am glad that Emily feels so comfortable talking to Bella about those sensitive subject. Bella gave him very good advice about handling Tanya.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2021 4:33 PM Title: Be My Master - Head Master?

Bella had everything thought out. 

Reviewer: Bellnedward0 Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2021 11:23 AM Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Im rereading this story so I can see if the storyline is as good as i remember it being .

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Reviewer: Bellnedward0 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2021 11:23 AM Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Im rereading this story so I can see if the storyline is as good as i remember it being .

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Reviewer: Bellnedward0 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2021 11:22 AM Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Im rereading this story so I can see if the storyline is as good as i remember it being .

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Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2021 9:06 PM Title: A Taste of Honey

Wish this story was finished. You only made it to chapter 27!

Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2021 9:05 PM Title: A Taste of Honey

Wish this story was finished. You only made it to chapter 27!

Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2021 4:36 PM Title: A Taste of Honey

Why isn't this story finished? I've enjoyed it and it's leaving me wanting more.

Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2021 4:36 PM Title: A Taste of Honey

Why isn't this story finished? I've enjoyed it and it's leaving me wanting more.

Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2021 4:35 PM Title: A Taste of Honey

Why isn't this story finished? I've enjoyed it and it's leaving me wanting more.

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2021 8:44 PM Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

What is Edward planning! Poor Bella! I don't like Lauren!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2021 6:45 AM Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Loved it! They are so good together!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2021 6:02 AM Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Loved it! Go Bella! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: Edwardlov3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2020 11:01 AM Title: Diamond in the Rough

Please update this story soon it is wonderful so far and you are a fantastic writer and hope you keep nurturing your creative gift!☘

Reviewer: Edwardlov3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2020 11:01 AM Title: Diamond in the Rough

Please update this story soon it is wonderful so far and you are a fantastic writer and hope you keep nurturing your creative gift!☘

Reviewer: Darkxgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2020 9:55 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

I originally found this story on FF and I loved it. The story has been in my bookmarks for a long time. I probably re-read it once every year or so and always secretly hope that there will be a new chapter every time I come back to it. I'm sure I'm not alone when I say that I would love to know how the story ends!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2020 3:23 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

I think this is my third time reading I Loved it but sure wish you had finished

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2020 1:55 AM Title: Diamond in the Rough

I think this is my third time reading I Loved it but sure wish you had finished

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2020 12:02 AM Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2020 10:26 PM Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2020 4:39 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2020 2:54 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

Loved it

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2020 2:24 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2020 1:46 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2020 6:02 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2020 6:30 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2020 6:15 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2020 5:57 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2020 9:36 AM Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2020 4:52 AM Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2020 4:52 AM Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2020 3:22 PM Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2020 9:25 AM Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2020 4:15 AM Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2020 11:10 PM Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2020 10:31 PM Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2020 9:22 PM Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Jacob is a jerk! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2020 7:41 AM Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Loved it

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2020 7:05 AM Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2020 6:42 AM Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2020 6:22 AM Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Loved it!

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2020 5:48 AM Title: Diamond in the Rough

I absolutely love this story and hope you start posting again.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2020 5:47 AM Title: Diamond in the Rough

I absolutely love this story and hope you start posting again.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2020 5:47 AM Title: Diamond in the Rough

I absolutely love this story and hope you start posting again.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2020 5:53 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

That van he saw while running has always been in the back of my mind.  Shit maybe she doesn't remember.  Poor Emmett I feel so bad for him having to just sit by and watch.  Bella and her tantrum hahahahaha.  Loved it. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2020 5:52 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

That van he saw while running has always been in the back of my mind.  Shit maybe she doesn't remember.  Poor Emmett I feel so bad for him having to just sit by and watch.  Bella and her tantrum hahahahaha.  Loved it. 

Reviewer: Happy2beme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2020 6:09 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

Did you quit writing this story? It is so good.

Susan Neumann

Smn46@roadrunner.com

Reviewer: Happy2beme Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2020 6:08 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

Did you quit writing this story? It is so good.

Susan Neumann

Smn46@roadrunner.com

Reviewer: Happy2beme Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2020 6:08 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

Did you quit writing this story? It is so good.

Susan Neumann

Smn46@roadrunner.com

Reviewer: Happy2beme Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2020 6:08 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

Did you quit writing this story? It is so good.

Susan Neumann

Smn46@roadrunner.com

Reviewer: Happy2beme Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2020 6:08 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

Did you quit writing this story? It is so good.

Susan Neumann

Smn46@roadrunner.com

Reviewer: Happy2beme Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2020 6:08 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

Did you quit writing this story? It is so good.

Susan Neumann

Smn46@roadrunner.com

Reviewer: Happy2beme Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2020 6:08 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

Did you quit writing this story? It is so good.

Susan Neumann

Smn46@roadrunner.com

Reviewer: debnin Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2020 11:34 PM Title: A Taste of Honey

Is this story complete?

Reviewer: debnin Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2020 11:34 PM Title: A Taste of Honey

Is this story complete?

Reviewer: sweet little cannibal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2020 5:12 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

Love the story, the writing, wow! Did you turn it into a published book? If so I would buy it, please share the title! Hope you're doing well.

Reviewer: sweet little cannibal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2020 5:12 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

Love the story, the writing, wow! Did you turn it into a published book? If so I would buy it, please share the title! Hope you're doing well.

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:44 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:44 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:44 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:44 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:44 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:43 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:43 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:43 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:43 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:43 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:43 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:42 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: Funsizedwitch Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2020 3:13 AM Title: Diamond in the Rough

Please update!!! I'm on the edge of my seat!!! I adore this story so very much! Much love!

Reviewer: vfloyd Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2019 8:00 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

Just wondering if this story has been updated somewhere because we got so close to wrapping it up and getting all the answers, then nothing here for over 5 years. Is it going to be completed?

Reviewer: Misty Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2019 11:40 PM Title: A Taste of Honey

Amazing story, please say that you are planning on continuing this.

Reviewer: Misty Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2019 8:35 PM Title: A Taste of Honey

Amazing story, please say that you are planning on continuing this.

Reviewer: Twins storms Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2019 9:14 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

I was just wondering  when will you finish  this story.  

Reviewer: Twins storms Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2019 9:14 PM Title: Diamond in the Rough

I was just wondering  when will you finish  this story.  

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2019 7:34 AM Title: A Taste of Honey

I Hope Edward makes Jacob pay.

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2019 7:34 AM Title: A Taste of Honey

I Hope Edward makes Jacob pay.

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2019 7:34 AM Title: A Taste of Honey

I Hope Edward makes Jacob pay.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2019 8:03 PM Title: A Taste of Honey

LOL free but unfinished

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