[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2011 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
*wow* looove the chapter, the rescue, wonder how Carlise & co will survive now that Aro is on the lose =/
best wishes, Linda
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2011 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Redemption
Love the chapter and the progress, =)
best wishes, Linda
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2011 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us
Love the chapter and the progress, at least they have each other =/
best wishes, Linda xoxo
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2011 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega
*wow* he sure has gone over the deep end =/ have to hurry along to the next chapter, =)
best wishes, Linda oxxo
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2011 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Love the chapter and the progress, =) and the answers Charlie´s getting,
best wishes, Linda xoxo
Date: 07 Apr 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
What about Alice? She's pregnant with a psycho's baby!
Date: 07 Apr 2011 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
I'm on the edge of my seat. Keep writing!!!
Date: 02 Apr 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
oh man that goodbye was sad i hope carlisle kills aro and burns down the whole damn village
Date: 30 Mar 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Waouh amazing work ! It's such an excellent story very original and full of horror, anxiousness and hope. I love it !!!!!!!!!!!!! I couldn't stop reading it once I started ! The subject is very serious and well treated. I pray the escape will go well ! I hope this story could get an HEA ending !
I can't wait to read next chapter very soon !
Date: 21 Mar 2011 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Great chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
SO GLAD U GUYS R BACK!!! hope all is well with much success...
Date: 20 Mar 2011 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Well I'm glad that they got to Bella and Edward, I just hope the others can get out as well. Excellent job. ;)
Date: 19 Mar 2011 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
It's like I've been getting telepathic messages or something, for the last couple of days I've been thinking about this story, not knowing the update was sitting in my junk mail... What a cheek, fancy filing it there!!!!!
So much is still on the line - and they're no where near home and dry.
Til next week ladies.
x x
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2011 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Wow, glad you ladies are back I forgot how much I missed this story.
Thank you for sharing it.
Date: 19 Mar 2011 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
CAN'T WAIT FOR FATHER ARO TO GET WHAT HE DESERVES.. OH YEAH & BLESSED BE....LOL
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2011 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Awesome:)
Next update can'y come quick enough!
Date: 18 Mar 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Life
Definately worth the wait. Thanks. More please...
Date: 18 Mar 2011 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
I am so glad for the update. I think Edward will have lots to adjust to!
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2011 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Amazing update.
The control Aro has over the Elders and others is truly frightening. I'm scared for the Cullens. Poor Alice and Jasper. And Carlisle-- taking that punishment.
Date: 17 Mar 2011 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Oh damn! Thank you so much for not leaving this on an evil cliffie! I'm so glad Bella and Edward are getting out - if they actually do make it out, which I suspect they will. Aro is clearly going to announce the power change at the meeting, but that will also come with a show of power. Surely his plan was to make an example of Edward and/or Bella.
The news about Alice and Jasper is rough too. I hope Alice miscarries just so there is less of Aro's evil out there. I can't really think about how Aro can go down without pulling a Jonestown on the rest of the people.
Also looking forward to more DLS, but I would rather wait for an update there until you can post in some regular schedule. It's easier to get back in the story once everything else settles down. You ladies have certainly been busy!
Date: 17 Mar 2011 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
I hope they come back for Esme, Carlisle, Alice and Jasper. They then need to kill Aro and free the rest.
Date: 17 Mar 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
I am glad to see you back and to get some further developments in this story. I am glad that Felix seems to want to get more people out, little by little. I am sure that Carlisle and Esme won't want to leave without Alice and Jasper both. It will take a little time.
Date: 17 Mar 2011 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
YEAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
Okay i forgive you.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2011 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Oh my goodness! I think I fell off my chair and died. This was an amazing chaprer. Fantastic job ladies!
~Jessi
Date: 16 Mar 2011 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
oh how i have missed this story,,, so very glad you have updated,,, cant wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2011 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
I loved it as always thank for the extra long chapter aka as our reward. until next time poor carlisle you really got the short end of the stick.
Date: 16 Mar 2011 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Aro is such a liar. Blessed Be. So glad that they got them out and hopefully off the compound safely.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2011 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Thank you SO much for not ending it with the familiar voice. I didn't think it was Aro - he's more of a "beat to a pulp first, then announce yourself" kind of bastard, isn't he?
How the he'll did he get the Elders so pumped up about his new plan? And how will Carlisle rescue his family?
I'm very glad you'll be updating a bit more regularly now, and am very impressed with all you've accomplished in the publishing side of things!
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Man you guys can search get someone blood pressure up. wow what a chapter. carlisle man i feel for you. i am surprised you are walking. but you are a family man and would do anything for them. i am so hoping or can't wait until we get to hang or throw stones or gut and beat aro within a inch of his life. man that man needs to die a slow death. maybe we make a whole and stick him in it and put snakes and deadly bugs in the whole cover it up while he is still alive and let them bite him. then let him whither away in the hot sun. maybe give him some sort of drug that makes it so he feels everything but can't move or speak so noone can hear his cries. oh i want this man dead. he is one sick mutherfucker. i love that carlisle wants felix and charlie to get edward and bella out. that was smart. in the meantime someone on the outside knows the shit is about to go down big time and they can help carlisle get his family out of this sick cult. maybe take over the compound. oh looking forward to the future. poor alice and jasper. they all have so much to ge through so much therapy to go thru as well. love it
Date: 16 Mar 2011 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
glad yall r back and spoilt i was wonderin how ur family was after everything that happened down under a while back. Hope u both r well.
Date: 16 Mar 2011 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Crappers! I knew it was them! But oh God, I thought you all had planned something WAY worse for C! Blame my deviant brain!
Now get them the fuck out of there!!!
Date: 16 Mar 2011 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
oh thank God they found them. i hope Carlisle, Esme, Jasper and Alice make it out. great chapter, can't wait for more :):)
Kristi
Date: 15 Mar 2011 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Yeah!! Charlie and Felix to the rescue!!! Brave Carlisle! Poor Jasper and Alice. Esme please keep safe! Aro is sooooooooooooo strange and psychotic! Love this story!!! Glad you're back!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2011 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
wow i have been reading this story for over two hours and it dosen't feel like it was that long i cant wait for the net chapter
thank you
angel
Date: 15 Mar 2011 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
OMG it's gettin sooooo good!!!!! Please don't take too long to update again!!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Ha ha! I loved your little intermission in the middle, lol. Well this ended better than it started. There is hope after all.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
I was so happy to see this updated!!! Great Chap!! I can't wait to see what is going to happen next! I hope they all get out of there quick!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
I hope to God Charlie and Felix can get Edward and Bella out, but clearly Carlisle can't leave without Esme, Alice and Jasper, and that's going to be a lot more difficult, particularly as Alice is carrying Aro's child and Jasper is in seclusion. And what the hell is Aro up to? Whatever his plans, which I assume will be revealed at the gathering, they are going to make it a lot more difficult for Carlisle to get his family safely away, let alone help other members who will inevitably suffer under the new regime. I really hope you are able to update soon, as this is getting darker and more perilous as the story goes on.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
:)
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2011 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
love it!! Always worth the wait!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
yippee! happy alice bouncing clap!
i'm ecstatic that you updated, but also amazed at the speed with which the PH is taking off. way to go!
seee ya soon!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
S.O. & Foot
Glad to have you back!!! I had to giggle that the notification system sent me 13 notices of the new chapter!!
Now that was a tension filled chapter and we still don't know if they made it out yet!!!! GULP!!!!
Can't wait for the results, which is hopefully is in the next chapter!!!!
Cory
Date: 15 Mar 2011 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
oh my gosh guys I almost had a heart attack up there!!!
thanks for not leaving me hanging in that horrible cliffy!
I'm so glad you're back :)
Much love!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Thanks for the "Not Cliffie"
James is gay!!!!! Hilarious.
Thanks for writing,
Lots of love and congrats for your publishing house, I just had a look and I am thrilled about some of your coming books.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
HA! James is gay!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
oh aro. what koolaid u have fed these people. sigh.
welcome back ladies
Date: 15 Mar 2011 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
So glad you are back. We have missed ya'll. GREAT GREAT job as usual. Can not wait to see what is going to happen on the compound and with Aro. I wished that Edward would get better quickly and come back and knick the hell out of Aro. lol. I am worried about Alice. Poor thing. I know she misses Jasper greatly but to also know that you are carring around Aro's demon kid. That has to be hard. Poor Alice. And I am sure that Jasper is going crazy not being able to see Alice and to make sure that she is ok. CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!!!!!!!! GREAT JOB LADIES!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2011 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Thank you, thank you, thank you!!
I see a little light at the end of this nightmare. Just hope the rest of the Cullen family makes it out okay & there won't be another Waco or Guyana tragedy.
Excellent as always!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Huuuhuu I almost can´t believe when I see it!!! wow is so good to have a new update and I loved this chapter!!! now is my new favorite!!! ;D please come back next week
Date: 15 Mar 2011 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Apparently the Library's alert system was so shocked it sent out 12 alerts for your update. LOL!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
oh yeah!! the rescue... thank god bella didn't raped by aro!! i hope they can get the rest of the cullens out too... i hope that felix and charlie bring it all down!! yeah!! thanks for the update!!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Thanks for the extra long chapter. I think I help my breath during most of that chpater.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Next week? I certainly hope so! I got 13 (yes 13) alerts this morning in my inbox about this update! LOL! Even the server is excited that you're back.
So now, the shit hits the fan. Let's see what/who comes out of this alive, shall we? Oh, and can we please get rid of Alice's spawn baby? EEwwwwwwww.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
i hope they get out okay. please update soon i have to kow what happene
Date: 15 Mar 2011 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Another great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2011 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
I hope Aro's 'little paradise' falls apart without too many innocent people getting hurt. I am glad you are back and I can't wait for more ;)
Date: 15 Mar 2011 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Well, that just seemed to easy. I won't breath easy until they are truly safe away from the compound. Glad you're updating again-I've been so worried about Edward in Bella in that cell for sooooo long... ;). I hope Carlise and crew can get out of there also. Just wondering if Jasper is in "seclusion" down there with Bella and Edward? Mayhaps he can go with them to help? Of course, he would probably not go anywhere without Alice. Also, please please tell me that Carlise was smart enough to use Jasper's spunk in the incemination process and that Alice is really pregnant with Jasper's child.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
My heart is pounding out of my chest now. Okay so Edward and Bella are going to make it, but I am worried about Esme, Alice, Carlisle and Jasper.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Wow...I'd forgotten how much I loved this story. So glad you updated!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
good to see a new chapter. hope they all make it out, the sooner the better.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
thank goodness they are starting to get out i hope they make it. please dont wait too long before another update i was beginning to think you had abandoned this story
Date: 15 Mar 2011 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
i was so glad to see this update....and they better do something to stop that horrible evil aro before he really kills someone.....but i guess the mental stress is worse then anything...anyway welcome back ladies and i'm soooooo looking forward to the continuatipn of daddy's little girl....woohoo!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Yay!! I hope they get out alright- though I wouldn't mind at all if Aro himself caught them and Charlie got to kill him!!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Yay, welcome back guys! You've done an awesome job with the publishing house - I'm surprised you managed to write at all!
Thank you for not ending it at the tease point, I think I would have cracked! Yay, Charlie & Felix to the rescue! And finally Carlisle gets to his breakikng point and decides to do something about, but will he survive the fallout once Aro discovers Edward & Bella missing? Hmmmm! I admired the fact that he was quick to demande his death in Edward's place, I think i cheered "yeah Carlisle!".
Poor Jasper, we just know Aro ensured he was told, just to torture him. Poor Alice, carrying that evil man's spawn. Urgh.
Great work as always guys!
xSimone
Date: 10 Mar 2011 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Redemption
okay but hurry up! i knew the light was a big huge tease!!!! AGH!!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2011 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us
who is it?!?! you are teasing us it can't be anyone good!!
Date: 10 Mar 2011 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega
okay i told you not to hurt edward and look what you two did!!! you need to be punished by the father!!! and ASAP!! flogger or whip?!?
Date: 10 Mar 2011 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
yeah go charlie go charlie loved your a/n about the review it is quite funny.. sick bastard... dont' kill ed don't kill bells....
Date: 10 Mar 2011 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 31
damn don't get ed dead wow i made a rhyme!! hahah this is soo not good and ed has gotten himself in a world of hurt!
Date: 10 Mar 2011 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
okay that just sucks ass... you just had to go do it..... sick perverted bastard. please say ed finds her don't rape her in any orifice please!!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2011 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
i hope he will see the flyer charlie has put out...
Date: 10 Mar 2011 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple
oh oh bella your going to be in toruble... well it could be worse he could be really f-ing them in front of everyone!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You
ed, father, felix? not sure but grab her quick!!! not you father..
Date: 10 Mar 2011 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Desperation
okay he better help her this time go charlie go charlie i don't know how you will do it but please hurry you are running out of time!!
Date: 10 Mar 2011 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Discloser
funny you are soo funny.... i loved your a/n!! haha situation is not funny though.. please please save bella.......
Date: 10 Mar 2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others
ok they think he is funny.... well i wouldn't really call him that at all... sick crazy, bastard, is more like the terms i would like to use...
Date: 10 Mar 2011 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Admonishment
yuk! as i said who is going to save her or is she ever going to be saved? do you guys ever write anything normal?? haha
Date: 10 Mar 2011 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Atonement
yeah she gets to see him get beat wonderful she is going to be scared shitless now and be over the top because he will be hurt
Date: 10 Mar 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own
crazy is beyond crazy especially if edward is one of them who is going to save her?
Date: 10 Mar 2011 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 10 - In My Hands
yuk you are kidding me yuk not him poor bella he is one sick mother f-er!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2011 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Salvation
yuk they why didn't he save her i really really hate weak people
Date: 10 Mar 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name
why is felix being so "nice" relatively speaking....
Date: 10 Mar 2011 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow
damn they don' t play do they? poor bella
Date: 10 Mar 2011 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Sins of a Mother
oh boy renee you are in for it too!!
Date: 10 Mar 2011 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Promises
oh no i am so not ready for this.l.. my stomach is in my throat!!! poor bells you better rescue her soon i don't know if i can take this... if carlisle is with them where is ed is he one of them too?!?!?!?
Date: 10 Mar 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Blessings
not cool he doesn't want renee he wants bella yuk i am not really sure i am up for this so don't get upset if i flake out
Date: 10 Mar 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Life
not good and i hate mothers who put their female parts ahead of their children... i can see that i am going to hate renee....
Date: 31 Jan 2011 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Blessings
Sneaky bitch, luv your story(ies)!!!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Life
So far so good, gonna give it a try even with all the pre-warnings, haha! I'm a nosy bitch, what can I say, oh yeah I like this catchy starter chap.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Redemption
All this stop when it gets to the best parts... hahaha.
though i am a fan of TSS this is actually the first time I read VO and i didn't stop until i finished all the available chapters,
this is also my first review for VO and all i want to say is both of you never fail to give great storylines, great conversations and great lessons in life...i'm amazed by what i read here, and i hope you all make more great stories..
i'll be waiting for the next chap... tooddles :D :*
Date: 21 Jan 2011 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Redemption
The fact that I read your stories ( this one and The Training school) in only two days speaks for itself. I'm more than impresssed by how much darkness you ladies have inside of you. It's remarkable how much effort you put into your stories to make the readers jump in their seats when a door busts open or a particulary scene is described. I can't explain why but dark stories just seem to have an unexplainable pull for me. I like them and after reading your stories I'm not ashamed to admit it *grins*.
I used to work as an critic for a local paper here in Vienna/Austria, although I quit my job a while ago, because frankly I wanted to have more reasonable hours and wanted to write myself. Needless to say that it's easier said than done. It always came very easy to me to explain to writers what their stories were missing, but writing my own stories is not as easy. My point is I could point out a few remarks I have regarding your stories on the spot but I think it's rather unfair (something I started to think after I began writing my own stories) Still I hope you forgive me for pointing out something to you. I know you two ladies are pretty good at what you do but I think you should try a little harder to think as a man when you're writing from a male's point of view. Do you really believe a man would go on and start crying so easily? Would a man who's been very proud of his life (Edward in TTS or Edward here in VO) start crying? I may be a little biased because frankly I hate men who cry but truth is I noticed in many of your Chapters that these are the sentiments of a woman not a man. I'm not saying your Chapters are bad ( I pointed out before how captivated I was by your stories) I'm just trying to tell you to be more objective when you write a man's point of view.
To end my review on a lighter note: I love your site I love that you allow dark stories and how much work you put into it! You're really great and I#m looking forward to yur next Chapter!
PS: I usually don't like reading unfinished stories, because I hate the waiting for an Update but after reading TTS I just couldn't resist! Keep up the unbelievable great work!!!!
TheRani
Date: 15 Jan 2011 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Redemption
Still waiting for an update.
Date: 15 Jan 2011 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us
Good chapter again.
Date: 15 Jan 2011 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega
Good chapter.
Date: 09 Jan 2011 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Redemption
oh that son of a bitch!!!! he better get them to the kids soon!!! please girls don't leave me like this for long *pupppy dog eyes* pretty please
Much love!!
Date: 09 Jan 2011 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us
oh holy shit!!!! what is it now?? how are they going to get out of there and how is he going to heal of all his injuries in there??
Much love!!!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Redemption
Yes and Happy New Year to you, too! Now, at least I know that Charlie has a chance to succeed because he finally has an insider to help him. And I trust that if he can get to Bella, she will insist on taking Edward with her.
Thanks for the update and I hope to have more and better news on this story soon!
Date: 04 Jan 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Redemption
Let's hear it for Felix's latent humanity. I somehow knew he would be the key to Bella's rescue. As always, your eye for detail is perfection. Marvelous!
Date: 03 Jan 2011 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Redemption
Oh my... poor Charlie!!!
happy New Year´s!!!
Date: 03 Jan 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Redemption
Another good chapter, but such a slow setup...I feel like I have been waiting forever to see how Bella and Edward will get themselves out of this mess, so I hope Felix has a plan with Charlie to get in and get out of there. Can't wait to read what happens next.