Am I missing something? New Site? I am not a writer I'm just an addicted reader. Soooooo.........

Seriously...subordinate? I would like to show Aro a couple of new places to put that instrument. What an ass!!!!

I saw a line that said....."Remember, we will be watching. There are eyes everywhere." Is there house bugged? How does he know that Jasper has been visiting? What else does he know? Has Aro been drinking the Kool-aid?

OMG!!! I can't believe that Jane is sending Edward to pick up Alex. Will he see Felix or Charlie while he is there? What happens if Charlie shows him a pic of Bella? What happens if someone puts up a pic of Bella and it is listed as a missing person? Good lord. Maybe Felix, and Charlie will help them escape and together they will all bring Nut job Aro down.

Thanks for sharing your wonderful, twisted story with us. Take care and be safe in all your travels. Peace and love. T.

Woo whoo we are lucky this week. Two chapters. Wow. I have to say when I read the first three words I had to do a double take to make sure it was the story I thought it was. LMAO. I thought there was a mix up.

So Felix is ex-military. I wondered where he had been. There had been no mention of him lately. My bigger question is...what the hell did he write on that note to Charlie??? Is it an address or Stop looking for here. Or...Stop looking...danger ahead. OR better yet. Aro is a nutcase. :)

Great chapter. Thank you for sharing your story with us. Take care and be safe in all your travels. Peace and love. T.

OMG my first thought is that he will see a poster of bella and that her father is looking for her. it seems his family is not up for this life that father is instilling. i worry for their safety. i am hoping that others gather and just slit aro throat and move on. but where there is one monster their is another wanting to take over. they just need to get there family out of dodge.  i can't believe what he did do rose. it almost seemed as if he didn't want her getting pregnant at all. he is a cruel man. yes aro wnats elizabeth for himself. the cullens better be careful. theya re all endanger. love it

YAY!!! Edward doesn't believe in the father!!!, I'm so scared though, and poor Bella/Elizabeth... does she now know that this is not the only world??, can't wait for her POV!

I'm loving how creeped out this story is making me. ;)

is he going to see one of Charlie’s missing person ad? can’t wait for the next chapter

Thank you for this chappie. I wonder if Edward will run into Charlie or Felix? I can't wait to find out!

OMG - edward is going into the OUTSIDE!!!!!

Ahhh - not what shall this bring :)

Oh blessed be... could he just happen to run into Charlie or even one of the flyers that he has been handing around? Maybe see Felix & he'll fill him in on something!!!!

Oh I can't wait :)

Blessed Be oh great TSO & Footroza.... WE SO LOVE YOU :)

T2M x

I hope bella doesn't get into trouble because edward was talking to her. I have a feeling shit is really about to hit the fan. just  when i thought areo couldn't get worst you had to tell me he jammed a intrument into rosalie's uterus. Iswear there is so much i want to do......but if i was rose..i would so punch him in the balls

Love the chapter :)

At one point I think you mixed up the names Bella and Elizabeth, or was it intentional? It's in this sentence:

Even if we were not allowed to speak, I was very excited to be next to Bella again.

I'm really lovin' the story, I have to say I really appreciate the time all the authors take out of their daily lives to write for my (not just mine of couse) entertainment!!

Stop looking for her.. that my best bet.. but gosh, everytime you write a story from their point of view, i get soo depressed. Haha, but i still love the story. :]

<3

:)

I love this story!!!  Did Felix write the cult she is in down???  Wow aro is one f*cked up dude... love it. cant wait for the next chap

Poor Charlie. He just breaks my heart.

I'm glad Bella had an impact on Felix because it could lead to the end of Aro. I think Felix's note will help Charlie find Bella.

Pour Charlie, it breaks my heart to see him like that

WOW. You wrote Aro to a T once again here! Amazing job ladies!

~jessi

Sweet Jesus!!!

He's so fucking demented!!!

Damn good chapter...

Well written...

Poor Charlie, Felix should do the right thing (for himself) then dissapear, after all Aro is crazy and the Athorities will just get people(inosent people) killed. Sounds like a nice big rock and a hard place! Sounds like Charlie should just sit back and wait for the fall of Aro which will be coming soon (maybe?!?) b/c he's in a no win situation. Love this story, cannot wait for the next chapter, you girls always keep the readers on their toes!! :)

I think the note says : EDWARD & (NOT A WORD) BELLA TOGETHER FOREVER!!!

LOVED IT!!

S.O. & Foot

Oh god!!!! Whom is Felix writing a note to???? Aro or Charlie????

These cliffhangers kill me!!!!! (thud)

More when it's ready please!!!!!

Cory

Father Aro is an extremely disturbed man. And for some reason I am just as disturbed I guess because I love this twisted mess. 

blessed be...

ouch thath would not be nice

love it! I can't wait for the next chap!!

I hope the note is directions to " Crazy Town ", where Charlie can find Bella and kill Aro~ really that's an animal that needs to be put down!

I can't imagine what the note says, maybe don't give up hope she's out there. Maybe, "cults suck." ha

Thanks for the update!

Yall made my day with the extra update! Next time, I should wish for a thousand dollars or something. I had no clue my wish for the extra update in my last review would come true. Yall = total rock stars :-) SO I have no clue what this note could've said. My guess is that it might mention Aro or The Family? I'd be the worst detective ever. I should note my guesses range as far as Felix writing: "Don't worry, be happy". Yeah, why do I guess I'm NOT the big winner this week? :-) I'm totally counting down for Saturday to find out what's in that note!! Gah...I'm so impatient! This story is fabulous! :) I just wish we had 80+ chapters up already. Haha...by then we MIGHT start getting to the heavy stuff. There's just so much to cover in this story! I don't see how yall have come up with something so outstanding. There's so many important parts that must be covered that all make up this intricate web that we're JUST starting to build! Just watching yall's writing process is kinda fascinating to me, haha. I could never come up with this stuff and place everything exactly where it needs to be like yall have done. (Granted, yall drive me crazy with suspense!! Saturdays have a whole new reason for existing now, lol) Loving the extra update. Feel free to continue with that if you feel like it :) Anyways, I'm shutting up & I'll see you ladies Saturday!! Keep up the fabulousness!!

I feel so bad for Charlie. I even feel a little bad for Felix. I think that he needs to be honest, which means tell Charlie what Aro has planned if the authority arrive at the compound.

Thanks for the update. I hope Charlie will be ok:0

"She's alive. Be careful" or "Aro Volturi. Very dangerous" or something like that.
Felix did a good thing. Just hope Charlie can get to Bella & the entire Cullen family before it's too late.
Great chapter. Thank you so much.

Hoping Felix's conscience gets the better of him and he does the right thing before he disappears.  No clue what the note says, but I bet it is good  :)

J'ai hâte de voir Edward et Bella se révolter...

I think it says "Your daughter is safe." or "Your daughter is alive." I don't know why, but I just have this feeling that he would want to give Charlie hope in a way. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

OMG first I would like to say thanks for the update so soon love ya second I am dying to find out what Felix wrote to Charlie I cant wait for more

what a SUPER treat!  thank you!  and felix pov -- is it my birthday? 

seriously.  i mean, i was in a funk and decided to read MOTU again, went onto her site and discovered a new EPOV outtake... THUD.  then my email dinged that you had updated VO.  flatline!  oh, you ladies.  you wonderful, devious ladies!

here's a big wet kiss to each of you!  *puckers loudly*

i LOVED THIS AND IT'S REALLY SAD THAT HE FEELS NOTHING CAN BE DONE.  I HAVE A FEELING ARO WILL fall because of his own doing.  even thought felix is technically not really responsible for bella's disapperance, it still makes me want to do this to him.

poor Charlie, yay for Felix's conscious getting the best of him

the name of the group that has her. That way chalie can look it up himself, and decide what to do from there. That's my guess.

Love this story. Keep up the great work. Talent running amuck! lol You guys are so talented on this site. SHould have your own books out there.

You continue to suck me in as always. It's such a guilty pleasure to read this story. I can't wait to read what next messed-up thing is about it happen, all while hoping nothing bad happens. It's crazy and I can't stop. By the by, thaigher sends her Blessing :)

he is one sick fucker, isn't he.

Ah, if we all just found cults to satisfy what we want most, Robert Pattinson (and all the other hot Cullen actors), might not be alive anymore...

And, just because I might never forget those details, and feel quite strongly about them still, what Carlisle perfoms is not an IVF (in vitro fertilization) but an IUI (in utero insemination). The latter is a little less invasive, as no surgery is needed to harvest the eggs grown by the fertility drugs prior to the transfer :)

O.K.  I am eeekked out over this one.....  Edward will flip-out... or he just might love the idea... This life is all he has ever known after all.   I'm not entirely sure about what you two crazy effen perverts might end up writing next.  However, I am extremely excited to read what ever twisted shit comes next.

Now see, I knew the sneak had something up his sleeve.  Poor Jasper!  On the other hand, he's goin g to extremely pissed when he gets out of the cellar and that could spell trouble for Aro!  Great update!

I hope that somewhere down the line Carlsile will perform an act of righteous castration on Father Aro in front of all the family!

Thanks!

This is just more proof of how sick Aro is. I really hope that he doesn't have sex or do anything to Bella. I feel so bad for Alice and Jasper being separated already.

Still loving this story!

I am so happy Bella seems to be remembering and she knows that this place is just wrong.

I am glad Aro didn't have sex with Alice, but still cringed over how he took her virginity.

I'm so relieved that Carlisle and Esme are looking out for Bella. And I hope Charlie finds her soon.

I am finally catching up with this story. I am so glad Esme is helping Bella.

I feel so sad for Charlie. He really loves Bella and is determined to find her. I can't believe he met Felix. He was so close to finding Bella. I think Felix will somehow help Charlie reunite with Bella.

Aro is getting creepier and creepier, can we do away with him now please.

Aro gives me the hibby jibbies. It gets worse every chapter. This dude needs a swift kick to the dick, then it should be cut off. Just saying. This motherfucker is craaaaaaaazzzzzzyyyyyy! And CREEPY. And PSYCHO. And a motherfucking pedophile! Bella is only 16 and he's having these thoughts about her. Alice is only 16 and he feels cheated?! Sick Fuck.

I want to kick the shit out of him damnit.

Loved the update. Can't wait for more. I want to see Father Aro (i say his name with a sneer) get his comeuppance.

I don't know how do you do this, but you make me hate Aro even more with every chapter! Ugh... I hope Edward will protect Bella...

Please, update soon ;)

Aro is definately one sick bastard...but this was a great chapter. Thanks for the update!