very freaky

poor bella

in the next chapter let her remember her name and say it by mistake

Loved it but aro is disturbed it freaky & creepy ***shivers***but I hope Charlie gets to her on time fingers crossed but chapter reli well written & so is the story

Oh urgh, I have to go have a long hot shower with scrubbing brush and bleach, I feel so dirty having been in Aro's filthy mess of a mind.

What a sick, sadistic bastard. Taunting Jasper like that, he is obviously jealous, not ever going to find the love that his flock shares together.

I am so glad the last chapter Elizabella showed signs of remembering and fighting for her past, she needs to get the frak out of there with Edward before Aro can personally implant his seed *shudders*

S.O. and Foot

WOAH!!!!! It's all I got after that chapter!!!!

More when it's ready!!!!

Cory

wow aro is sick update soon please

aro is one sick perverted Nutter!!  hehehhee  i'm sure he will gets whats coming to him

The more I read of Aro the more I realize there will not be enough that could be done to him. However, I would like to try. I'm racking up thoughts of what I wish to do to him.

Omg Aro is a psycho weird freak! I knew Jasper wasn't gonna go out like a punk! Yeah he kicked Aro's ass and is heading towards the cellar be he's a man who stood up for his woman you go Jasper. Jasper is the man that's all I'm saying! I'll check out the story you mentioned as well it sounds interesting I'll tell her you sent me their way. Until next time, Blessed Be!

ewww. super creepy. what an asshole. i have a feeling that edward will find a way to prevent it, though!

Author's Response:

We are glad you are enjoying it.  He is a nut.. but would the story be the same without him... lol..

New law my ass! Omg aro is a lusty bastard  his wrinkled peen would'nt get within ten feet of me lmao i can't wait to see the reaction Edward has, i bet he won't take it laying down lol! Loved this chapter can't wait for more!!!

Awwwwwwwwwwwww thank you for the fic rec i am very honored that you like it !*smiles widely until Father Aro Spots it*

this man is a creep, hate him, can't wait for the next chapter.

He is one sick bastard. I don't even want to think about him basically raping Bella. *shivers* Someone needs to put him down like a rabid animal.

Author's Response:

HA HA HA HA.. I am calling animal control as we speak.   Thanks for the review.. See you next Saturday.

Ahahahaha this story is soooo crazy!! He is so creepy!! How do yall come up with this stuff? I feel like a perv for loving it and drinking it all up! This story is too good...Holy cow I couldn't believe Jasper hit Aro! Do I suspect some people are starting to not "respect Aro's authority?" Lord...hopefully so with the plans he has for Elizabeth/Bella. I just want to push the flash forward button on this story so badly! I'm dying to see Edward and Bella interact with each other more...and see if Aro is going to try anything with Elizabeth/Bella like he did with Esme. There's just SO much to cover in this story! I'm all for two updates a week. Just sayin' ;-) (Ahem...hint hint) Kidding. Kinda ;) I'm just freakishly addicted to everything yall write. Is it next Saturday yet? :-)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much.. We love reviews like this.. GOD.. aren't there those stories that you sooooooo want to just read the last page to see who is still around.. GAH.. it's madding.. so WE FEEL YA.. and we love that you are enjoying it.    The problem with Edward/Bella time is that Father Aro keeps her under constant watch.  Sick Bastard.  BUT... I bet they MIGHT be able to sneak something in sometime.  HAHAHA..

I loved this Jasper. I was mentally cheering on Jasper. Im gong to go check out that story you recommended. Great chapter :)

diiirrrrttttyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Come on Edward, don't fail me.  Hurry up Charlie!  Good chapter.

I knew Aro was sick, sadistic & cruel but this went beyond even that. To purposely inflict pain, emotionally & physically was horrid.
We all know his obsession with "Elizabeth" is obscene so I'm hoping they ALL escape his clutches before it's too late.
Just the thought of all first borns being Aro's and his intent to physically be with Bella is sick!

Author's Response:

He is a deviant bastard.  Thanks for the review..

already reading it , good story

Oh my god.. fucking creep!! Haha, geez.. i knew he was fucked up in the head.. god, can you say pedophile??! Haha, i can't wait for the next chapter. Hurry, hurry!

<3

Aro is so creeptastic. I knew no matter how freaking horrific Alice's experience was, it was too clinical for Aro's nature. I hope Elizabeth/Bella will stop taking her "vitamins". She could easily palm them or hide them under he tongue.
With so many "chosen ones", isn't their family going to start being horribly inbred at some point? It would be freakin' awesome if all this was for naught and Aro was sterile or something. All his chosen ones actually not his at all. Or maybe, Carlisle could have been substituting his seed with the actual seed of the new husbands.

Author's Response:

You are wonderful.  I love your passion... Yeah.. he doesn't implant his seed in his own daughters.. and his children are not allowed to marry each other.  But once the couple gives birth to Aro's child.. they are free to have more children.  So there will always be more for him... ewwwww.. That was even hard for me to write.. hahaha.  Thanks

"One way or another, Elizabeth will lay beneath me as I push into her frail body."

I may have just vomitted in my mouth a little... Haha. Seriously though, what a sick fucker! I hope Bella knees him in the balls and runs like the wind out of there. Either that, or Charlie comes in guns blazing before the ceremony! : (

Oh...My...fucking...god...

I literally cringed when he took Alice's virginity like that. BUT, it was better than what I thought was going to happen... *shudder*

And Aro lingering on Bella during baths? I felt so sick to my stomach, he needs to be arrested! *violent shudder*

You two ladies are pure evil... And, I love you both for it! So, does that make me evil also? *wink* xoxox

good chapter.

Thank you for this update. Aro is one sick and twisted b*stard! I can't wait for more;)

Jasper should have used the knife he held against Alice's throat.   Ugh   I SOOOOO wanna kill him......and if he takes Bella's V,  I'm coming to australia........

You make us feel a little bit good by saying his seed is planted, then you whip it away by his lustful thoughts!!! mwahahahaa

x x

Well i dont know what to think, Are they using Aro's seed. And the men of the flock dont seem to happy with the rules....great chapter update soon

good chapter!

Gross... I seriously just vomited in my mouth. I'm ready for Charlie to find her already... and for Felix or whoever it was (can't remember) that he ran into to lead him there.

I also would love more Edward/Bella interaction- we've gotten teases so far, but I would like to see them interact more.

I would have also loved to get into Aro's head in terms of how he started this cult and everything... obviously, he's a sociopath,  but how did he begin it? How did he originally convince his first followers? You've cleared it up for me that  he knows he is crazy, instead of really believing every single thing he is putting out there.

Yup, he's one sick little puppy. I would love to see Edward beat the crap out of him. Maybe huh? Anyways, excellent job as always. ;)

OH MY FREAKING GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you for not letting him have sex with Alice. It was bad enough the way she lost her virginity but at least she did not have to have sex with "Father". That would have been gross. Thank you for letting Carlisle and Esme always rescue Bella from "Father". I am glad that Edward got to escort Bella. I am really really scared for Bella because she is remembering and that can't be good.

As always....you leave us wanting more and more.

OMG!   Yep, when can I set up my appointment for counseling???

wow this is so good i cant wait to read whats next

Ok, big sigh of relief since it was Jasper watching them.

So, I'm wondering if Carlisle is injecting Alice with fertility crap or is he injecting her with birth control so she won't be one of the chosen.  Is he totally sold on Father Aro and this chosen crap?  I understand that he's brainwashed into this whole cult but I'm just having a little faith that Carlisle sees the wrong in all of this and is just in too deep to do anything about it.  Maybe he is just trying to help his family survive the best they can.  He's shown signs of compasion that Father Aro does not show.

Love you ladies for continuing this great story.  Mwah!

Oh my God, this Aro is really SICK! Thank God Alice was truly a virgin! Now I am just worried that Bella will tip the other's off that she remembers her past! Great, great update!

LindyP ;)

WTF! I want Charlie to find her please, this is so messed up.

Oh boy... Blessed Be - you've got to be kidding me!!!!!

What a total & utter freak show... I think I say this EVERY review :)

Glad you got so many wishes for your anniversary!

Ours was good too (17 yrs remember) Yes, I agree - could be dead within 3 years for me!!! And no, I don't know about WiFi in jail!!!!

Sydney jails aren't that nice... hehehe - I'll visit you thou!!! LOL

Poor Jenny - with the Father - oh YUK!

FINALLY Bella is working through her issues that she isn't meant to be there & all isn't right in that wacky world... *jumping for joy*

Just hope she gets Edward out with her & Charlie is on the outside waiting for her... 

Yeah right - as if you guys would make it THAT easy!!!!!

Thanks for another freaky wacky crazy update - get onto the next one lovies!

T2M xxx

Wow, this is just so... wrong. Yet, I have to know what happens. I knew Bella was going to snap at some point. Great job ladies!
~Jessi

I hope if she manages to get out edward goes with her and possibly even esme carlisle jasper and alice.

So this story continues to baffle me in SO MANY ways....but i will keep reading.

Very disturbing.  Your minds are in a very dark, twisty place and I DIG it!

Love it. I have a quick question. Has any of the chosen ever had twins? I'm thinking if the answer is no then maybe Bella should be the one to because it seems like Father is obsessed with her becoming a chosen. That was all. I'm loving the story and can't wait for next weekend to get her so I can read the next chapter of VO. Keep up the good work guys.

Good chapter!

I would have been killed!  I'm freaked out because I would have been KILLED.  I never bled.  Cringe-worthy but addictive!

S.O. & Foot

WOAH!!!!!! Jasper had to hold a knife to the throat of the woman that he loves and possibley kill her???? Not nice at all gals!!!!

And now you two have me scared s**tless that Bella is going to be in big trouble because she's remembering things!!!!

When will this madness end????? Maybe you better sign me up for those shrink sessions!!!!

I can't stop reading!!!! More please!!!!

Cory

Fantastic chapter! I'll definitely be seeking a therapist first thing Monday..I help with this, man..!

I agree with Elizabeth/Bella though, it is unfair and downright fucked up that Jasper wasn't the one to take Alice's virtue, it should have be her gift to give to him..

But shoulda, coulda, woulda doesn't fly in this demented world you girlies have created, does it?! And oh shit! Liz/Bella is having an epiphany, she better do her best to keep it hidden for now...

I get what that demon just did to Alice but what did he mean she's now ready for his seed? Not what I'm thinking, right?!!

Damn you're good! Da Bomb!!

Thanks for the update on the originals, If and whenever I can get my hands on the original to TTS then I know I'll be as hooked as I was reading it here...

Have a good one...

Great chap!...Really liked things through Alice's eyes..

Good Golly! I don't think I've want to very slowly want to put someone to death. Well, crap, can't say that. The Training School and The Perfect Wife cause me to want to kill to! Long slow painful death, not fast, not with a bullet. Aro with a rod up his penis until blood was drawn and then up some more. Yup, that ought to be a good start.

Your imaginations are... interesting.  Guess I should have known after reading TTS huh?  LOL.

I think group counselling might not be a bad idea.  That was warped. 

Question for you.  Why was Edward allowed to escort her to the ceremony?

A/N news is extremely exciting, well done ladies.

Thank goodness Belizabeth is finding her marbles - but will she lose Edward? *sigh* Reflection time for Jenny may prove to be of huge benefit to us Sisters.

x x