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Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

OMG, I really want to Bleach my eyeballs and my brain out from that cerimoney, oh man what a way to loose your verginity, oh man such a private moment. How sick is the Father? How did Esme and
Carlisle end up in this cult? I am to assume Carlisle has been in the outside world for his schooling, so he must realize this 'religion' is diffrent and possably wrong (abduction,brain washing, molestation, abuse)... Oh sh#t!! Anyway, this is a great story, all your work is great, love it all and cannot wait to read the next chapter and definatly will be purchasing Training School when it comes out in book form! You Girls ROCK!!

Reviewer: Alexanya Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

This wild, crazy story just keeps me wanting more!

Reviewer: Wombat Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

you guys rock

Reviewer: xosummerxo Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

WOW good chapter (poor Bella- having to see Alice/Aro sceen) she starting to remember. Please continue

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

ahhhh this chapter so clears up alot. i honestly thought he have sex with each one of the girls and wondered how the men where okay with that. so now i know carlisle injects the sperm in each one of the chosen ones. man what a wedding. you would think you would know before hand if you weren't a virgin why put your self through the cermony as having the person your to marry slit your throat. that is wrong on so many levels. omg poor bella she is finally coming out of her training. it took so long to break her and it seems the brainwashing did not stick because we are rembering grandma swan and knowing this does not feel right. but where to f=go from here. she needs to confide in esme but i fear that puts esme at risk. oh bititng the finger nails down what to do. I love it. thanx for writing

Reviewer: ecsc Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

Well, what can I say, at least Aro don't have sex with the girls. That's good, but at the same time is twisted as hell, I mean really as Bella thinks that is just not right. losing your virginity in that sadistic way for sure must be very traumatic.  OMG and making the future husband hold a knife to the girl's thoat, I don't even have workds for that. Can't wait to see how Bella and Edward get out of this mess, because they are going to get out before Bella's ceremony aren't they?

Reviewer: patch138 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

wow, I was worried how that whole event would go...Now whats gonna happen to Bella?

~Tiffany

Reviewer: eitak Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

This story is unlike anything I've ever read before...and I  can't stay away. Its too evil and twisted and just sucked me into it. But I will take you up on that group therapy...

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

Great job!

Reviewer: NinaD Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

Groupcouncilling, very good idea! I just read your storie from the beginning and it's very eerie feeling, like the banner... You really captivated me from the get go and this last chapter chilled me to the bone, It's a good thing Bella woke up!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

Thank you for this wonderful chapter. I hope Edward does n't have to put a knife to Bella's throat.

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

Happy Belated Anniversary. I'm still trying to figure out how I missed that the first time??? Ten years? That's great!!! I've been married to the same man for a little over 26 years now. It's not so bad. I did tell you he is pretty much comatose ddn't I?? I kid, I kid. Surprisingly we are both still alive and fully functional. I'm not so sure about our mental state? But hey...not everything is perfect. LMAO.

 

I was so relieved that Father was not having sex with these women. Not that what he is doing is right by all means. But geez....even the thought. Ick....I will say the whole dagger at the throat thing was a little much.

 

I really hope Charlie finds them before Bella looses her shit and everyone knows that her memory is back. That will be bad for Edward and his family.

 

Thank you for sharing your twisted tale with us. Take care, be safe, and peace. T.

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

creeptastic chapter, god thankgod he dosent have sex with these poor girls but poking them apart upon threat of death uggggg, i assume this is what happened to tanya, but bella can not be brainwashed she is remembering more and more but how will she ever escape? look forward to more and staying tuned for the training school publishing details, thanks tracy 

Reviewer: lluvy Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

CREEPY. But good. Can't wait until the next update =)

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

Oh how cruel :(

I am glad that Bella seems to remember ^^

Reviewer: Shante17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

ohmy!!!

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

Oh my Gosh... This chapter left me speechless... You did an amazing job writing it! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next! 

I have to say it (Like always): I hate Aro!!!

Please, update soon ;)

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

Oh crap... Bella's in trouble *sigh*

I'm glad father doesn't have sex with the girls.  That would be freaking disgusting.

I wonder what Bella will do now.  I thought everything was finally gonna be okay :(

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

Holy Crow! "Father" is one sick puppy. I would love to take that poker thing and shove it up his hiney hole. See if he's still has his virtue. Anyways great chapter, wonder how Bella's going to deal with her revalations. I was wondering though, shouldn't she have run into Renee or Phil by now? Or was Renee the one who was punished a few chapters back, I can't remember. Oh well guess I could go back and see, huh? Excellent job ladies, keep it up. ;)

Reviewer: padalf2510 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

Disturbing!! But I can't wait to see what happens next!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

that was wow... just wow... Aro is one sick fucker!! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

Blessed be you are fucking amazing and I would love more of the training school or anything else you write.  This story has some sick shit and I love it.

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

I'm glad Bella realized she is being manipulated. Poor Alice, what a horrible ordeal she went through.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

OMG I was tweeting about this chapter and they people who follow me were like what has you reacting like that I told them Volutri Order no one still reads it which is a damn shame or maybe they do and don't want to admit that's doubtful okay I just want someone to talk about it with I'm link them asap lol. I'm also recommending it on my blog and fanfiction profile. I thought I had already but I didn't want the ... Yeah I'm shocked too. I'm still waiting for my daddy's little girl fix I'm just saying. Until next time ladies. I really shouldn't have read that while listening to the eclipse score on repeat. Holy mind fuck batman! I can't wait for the next chapter. Bella's like neo lol!



Author's Response:

Aww thank you.. and yeah TWCS isn't as popular as FanFiction as yet.. but give it time LOL and yeah we will talk to you about it until the sun comes down.. ha ha ha.. we are loving writing this story.. it is coming so easy! That is a little bit scary admitting that..

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

Aïe!  Elizabeth se réveille...

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

If they think you're crazy for being married to the same person for 10 years, they'll think I'm downright committable!  My husband and I will be married 19 years this October.  It went VERY fast.  Loved this update!  You took what I thought it might be, convinced myself it might be and put it on steroids!  Mindblowing comes to mind!  The consequences of a flaw in some, and in this case -  Alice's abuse, pushes Bella's memory forward.  Bravo for making us all read, bite our lips and nails and cringe!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

J'adore...

Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

Phew... I thought that Aro was going to perform the ceremony the good old fashioned way. This way was disturbing enough. Poor Jasper with a knife held to her. Doesn't Aro know that not every woman bleeds? I wonder how many innocents have been killed because they didn't bleed.
I wish that Edward and Bella were allowed a little more interaction. He seems so absent from the story.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

damn  I knew it was fertility....... at least he doesnt have sex with them.   Guh   nrrd councelling and group hugs.

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

J'adore...

Reviewer: SnowyHedwig Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

OK. First, let me say how bloody thankful I am that Aro's rotting, disgusting, putrid, shriveled up, puny, sorry excuse of a penis did not go anywhere near Alice.

But I have to say, that "ceremony" nearly made me lose my lunch. In front of everyone? Face covered? With that areshole invading her? And the threat of instant death should it not go the way expected? What the fuck?! I can't blame Alice for sobbing, that is just horrific!!

And Bella had a rather major epiphany, didn't she? That's not going to go very well, is it? Brilliantly done, ladies. I had more than one nightmare of this chapter, and I'm glad it didn't go the way I thought it would, and truly icked out at how it DID go. Bravo!

Reviewer: RpattSinner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

ugh that was disturbing!  that shit must have hurt

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

Excellent. Little freaked out on how Father takes their virginity & am assuming Carlisle comes next with the turkey baster.
Is Aro going to do something to not have Bella bleed or will her suppressed memories resurface and she disappears?
So scared for the Cullens.

Reviewer: Shaelove Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

Can you imagine if we all wished you happy anniversary and Jenny hadn't put it in the AN? We'd be a whole new level of stalkerish. <3

 

OMG THE CEREMONY. aahhhhhh. excuse me while i go have some freaking weird nightmares. 

and.... Bella. er. Elizabeth. whoever she is. OMG SHE KNOWS. well, knows something. what is going to happen? i. what? ahhh. 

 

basically. 

 

love you both. <3

 

hope you're doing better. Can't wait to see whats in the works next. 

 

xoxo

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

loved it

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

Omg! What the hell did he put in her vag? sounds like scissors to me with the description you gave lmao!!! omg ritualistic murder....holy shit! lmao i loved this chapter i can't wait until it is updated soon!

Reviewer: Brickgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple

oh shit!!!!! Now what??? OH MY GOD MORE!!!!

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Happy Anniversary Mandy - mine is on Saturday (17yrs) Oh boy, doesn't time fly!

Hope you enjoyed celebrating 10 yrs :) ... wink, wink... LOL

July is always a wonderful month to get married in Sydney!!! 

We have so much in common... us Aussie girls :)

 

Loved APOV - looks into this "weird & wacky" world from another perspective! 

Awesome chapter once again girls!

T2M x

 

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Happy aniversary Amanda!!! i wish you all the happiness in the world!!
so it was Jasper, whew! but damn that was harsh, I really hope she doesn't get pregnant with that awfull man's baby, eeeeewww
just ew...
much love!!!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

loved it can't wait till it's edwards pov

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

It's getting so good!!!

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Congrats on the anniversary! And great chapter as always!

Reviewer: JessiCllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Wow, this was an interesting chapter. Aro still gives me the creeps. He wasn't even in this chapter, and he still did. I can't wait for your next chapter ladies!!
~Jessi Cullen

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

oh I think I get it. He has sex with all the girls at 16 before marriage. and if they get pregnant then they are considered to be the chosen ones. is that correct? kind of like a higher anarchy of some sorts. do they get any preferential treatment? i highly doubt it. i am curious if there was someone else besides Jasper. Part of me believes there was someone else in the woods.  i so love the story thanx for writing

Reviewer: LindyP Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Ugh! I am so worried for Alice & what it entails for her in her "ceremony". I am sure Aro is ready! Are they injecting them with drugs to make sure they get pregnant by Aro on their wedding night? Ugh! Poor Alice! Jasper seems awesome though! Looking forward to your next posting!

LindyP :)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

great chapter.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

I first amd most important question is....When Alice and Jasper have their ceremony will Aro take Alice and have sex with her first?????

Why will Alice be moved to the maternity building? What is this injection that Alice is having to take? They are preparing Alice for what she needs to do to wed Jasper. Will they prepare Bella also to wed Edward? When will she find out what is expected of her? Bella is in the complete dark about what is going to happen to her.

I am so glad that I have had a chance to get caught up on my reviews for this story. I am loving this story.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

I am glad that Alice and Bella got this chance to talk but I am scared of who saw them. I hope it is not Aro.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Desperation

I feel so sorry for Charlie. I sure do hope that Felix will help Charlie find Bella.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 18 - The Family

We finally get to meet Alice. Boy, "Father" really punishs harshly doesn't he. That is awful.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Discloser

OMG!!!! I knew Aro was sick. I am sooo glad that Esme is finally telling Carlisle about it. I hope that they can help Bella.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Confession

I am so glad that Bella listened to Esme and did not tell "Father" what she was thinking about. Esme knows that Bella was thinking of her pervious life.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

I am getting caught up on my reviews for this story so I can ask a question about chapter 21 beofre you update again.

Father Aro creeps me out. I am soooo glad that Esme was there for Bella. Esme will keep her safe. Love Carlisle. He is sooo sweet trying to make Bella comfortable. I hate that Esme did not get to give Bella her bath.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Admonishment

I can not believe that I am this far behind on my reviews. I am sooooo sorry.

I felt so sorry for Bella having to make that choice. I am glad that Edward really seems to be interested in Bella.

Reviewer: jenie16788 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

i love this story, and i cant wait to read more of it

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Im gonna cry if I dont get my Aro fix LMAO- Great update - Im glad it was Jasper and not anyone else.. I can only imagine how that could have played out *whew*

Cant wait for the next update!!

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

oh the place they live has more strange rules, the maternity wing there has to be more than what we all expect, and what is a chosen? great chapter and love this story, thanks tracy

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

I really like this story.  I squeal like a little girl when I find that you have updated!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

I hope that Jasper was the only one that saw them.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Another great chapter.  I hope that Elizabeth and Edward making to their ceremony.

Reviewer: Fates-Love-Queen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

What the fuck... The smashed her hand? Oh wow, I feel sick...

So, I'm guessing that they killed Tanya? *shudders*

I hope to god that that wasn't Aro who was watching them... I couldn't bear it if something happened to Alice... *sob*

Reviewer: Fates-Love-Queen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Desperation

No, no, NO! Felix, you are supposed to be the good guy that helped Bella!

God, I hope he grows a pair and actually tells Charlie where she is...

As you know, Charlie is one of my fav characters, and to see him in such pain... *sob*

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Now why does everything tomorrow seem so threatening suddenly?  Great job!  All is not Bella, and you're filling in her world this way!

Reviewer: Charmie Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

okay so i'm a little confused....but excited to see where you take this.

Reviewer: newmoonaholic Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Such an original concept.  I haven't come across anything like this before.  It fascinates and frightens me at the same time.  Great story!

Reviewer: unicorngirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

aro going to take her virginity isn't he update soon please.  happy anniversary.

Reviewer: Saphira Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

The story you write is creepy, like realy realy creepy, but i like it a lod even if it gives me chills... prrr

Anyway I'm waiting for new chapter... :P

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

great chap! can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Why they are so naive and let Aro do this to them? Gosh... Even if he was absent in this chapter, I hate him even more!

Please, update soon ;)

Reviewer: silver Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Congrats on 10 years! Thank you for the update!

Reviewer: Hitchy Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Happy anniversary TSO. 

Chapter was great.  i'm very interested to see what's involved in the "ceremony".  Can't wait for next chapter.

Reviewer: london spam Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Happy Anniversary!

 

OK, so what physical preparation does Alice require that Bella might fear? Waxing? It doesn't seem to be that kind of society. Also, does Jasper need to be strong for Alice by remaining calm as Aro takes her? Is this done as part of the wedding ceremony in front of everyone? Ewww!!

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Moving along nicely. Great job. 

Reviewer: Wombat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Wow... great chapter cant' wait for more

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Loved it amazing can't wait for the nxt chapter

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Happy 10th anniversary! I loved the chapter omg is Jasper going to be able to deal with Aro having sex with Alice? Edward's back and APOV super yay. Until next time ladies.

Reviewer: AnaCullen159 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

okay i am speculating here. if she gets pregnant with aro's child she will be a chosen one? so confusing. but good don't get me wrong it's just not where i thought u were going with this story.

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

 whoa 10 years with the same guy i applaud her lmao! just kidding! i hope she's very happy! but back to the story! omg i can't wait for the next update i feel so much better now that i've cought up lmao

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

FELIX!  or noooooo maybe it's that rotten scoundrel aro with his wide ass forehead i hope someone takes a hit out on him lmao. question: Is it true that noone is allowed to leave the compound? well woman wise?

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Desperation

alright!!!!! lmao i hopesooner than later bella gets rescued

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Thank you for this update. I wonder how Elizabeth is doing when she is without Alice? I can't wait to find out;)

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Discloser

alrite esme!!! get in there! help bella ouuttt! yes!

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

uh oh..her memories are comming back slowly but surely.  this shit is so good! lmao

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Atonement

ooooh so he has a problem with her being handed off to edward lmao! i can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Embrace

i hope i really hope she doesn't bear aro's kid. but let me tell you if it was edward's i wouldn't mind bearing 20 of them lmaooooo

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

first off....she's good. cuz i be damned if somebody took a damn brush to my bits lmao. it would've been some screaming, so biting and some fighting lmao if i had to go down. someone was going with me lmao

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

i hope bella doesn't get pregnant by that asshole. Depo shot! lmao. or i hope edward puts his foot down and says he doesn't want any one touching her.

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 9 : Rebirth

i don't understand. so in the message is he saying that technically. even though bella gets married that she will bear aro's children?

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Salvation

awwwwwww i now like felix lmao he's no longer a bastard and i'm so pround my baby lasted that torture for 5 weeks she's strong i know she'll remember

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

oh no! i hope she remembers i hope she fights it. does felix have a soft side? i couldn't picture that. have you seen him in person . that asshole is built like a two ton truck lmao

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow

now see if it were me. I'd have agreed to anything they said. but once i got to the nearest phone or weapon phil's ass would've been mine. lmao he would know better than to go to sleep at night. i would've plotted against his ass until i got my bella back. lmao i love this !

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self

Bastards! i'm glad bella has a strong mind. where is charlie. i hope he comes to the rescue. i hope edward doesnt' turn out all crazy religious lmao

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Sins of a Mother

oh my god..... lmao oh dear they take that shit seriously don't they lmao! great chapter i am totally addicted!

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Blessings

i just had a problem with fanfic! i uploaded my chapters and two were missing for two days and then reappeared and the email links were not working! those bastards...anywho. renee needs help. serious help. i hate women like that i can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Happy Anniversary and wishes for many more!

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Life

Phil...that bastard! i hope bella is as much as a fire cracker as i am! i hope she puts that foot down and show those bastards that can't break her!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

best wishes I just went to my Aunt and Uncles 40th it was great to see people together that long and still be in love.  I hope no one else seen Alice.  She has excepted the fact that she has to give her verginity to Aro???  She doesnt have a problem with this??? 

Reviewer: joice84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Amanda happy 10th anniversary!!!

 

I´m so anxious for the next chapter !! Bella will see Aro and Alice??? oh my god *giggles*

Reviewer: patch138 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Happy anniversary! Spent teh day at my cousins wedding...must be a good day to get married!

 

I am a little nervous for the next chapter...ok, maybe more than a little...

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: SnowyHedwig Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Happy Anniversary! That's awesome, 40 years!

Ok. I'm glad it was Jasper who saw them, I hope no one else did. And I'm really anxious about this ceremony. I get the impression that being a "Chosen" means being pregnant with Aro's spawn? I cannot imagine that being a good thing...

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