Date: 18 Oct 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 31
Well that makes good and bad news. Now maybe things will get better for Bella, but they could also get worse. Nice cliffy too- patiently waiting the next chapter. Great Job on this story so far!
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 31
*aaah* << sounds of dispair =) Loved the chapter, oh, what action, and who would have thought James could be bargained with? and Edward to the rescue, at least he found her *sigh* longing for the next chpt.
best wishes, Linda
Date: 18 Oct 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 31
ahhhh!!! oh man oh man. ok. so Edward will hide, Charlie will track the call and they'll be saved and live happily ever after? maybe? update soon!!!!
Kristi
Date: 18 Oct 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 31
Mean, mean, mean, mean!!!!!!! That's NO way to end a chapter!!!! Please, please, pretty please hurry with the update!!!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 31
OMFG I am having a heart attack here. What the fuck hit that bastard in the head take the keys call the FBI, CIA, NBC, ABC, CBS, and who ever else to break this shit wide open. OMG please hurry need to know what the FUCK is going to happen.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 31
AWWWWE!! Really? Seriously? come on!!! more... need more... so much more!!! stat!!! going through withdrawls... must have more...
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 31
I can handle a cliffy... Please don't make me wait too long? Will Charlie be able to trace the call? Will Edward be able to get out of there? Will James rat him out? Oh, the questions! You are both diabolical and totally pwn me..
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 31
Well at least if they die, they die together...
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 31
GAH you're killing me here!
and what the hell is up with james and aro? a little man meat lovin, huh?
please update immediately! lol
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 31
Damn this is a good story! I really hope Edward will be alright.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 31
Loved it! Can't wait to see what's next!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 31
Yes, I'm guessing. What I'd like to read next is Edward grows a pair and fricking bashes Aro's head in. Arghh And what about Edward noticing the perverted stuff Aro had all over his walls & the flogging cross or whatever it was I thought I remembered he had in his room?
Hope you'll update soon;)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 31
wow awesome chap. though poor edward
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 31
Thanks for the update. Another cliffie, really?
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 31
wow, great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 31
That Aro is one cool cult leader. And hey... it's lonely at the top. It's probably hard to meet a woman who would just love him for who he is and not what he is. Yeah, chaining a 15 yr old girl to your bed and beating her into submission is entertaining but it is also exhausting. Nobody really gets him, ya know. The punishments, the berating, the beatings, the belttling, having to make all the decisions for everybody, not to mention all the hymen breaking. He is a busy, lonely little man. Has he tried eHarmony? Oh that's right, they match personality profiles... they probably would not accept somebody with his unique personality.
SWM looking for a woman between the ages of 15 and 18 who enjoys canings, whippings, and shunnings. Must have intact hymen and also enjoy public humiliation. I own my own Ranch with armed guards on duty 24/7. Once you arrive you won't be able to leave!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 31
ugh. you suck so bad with your evil cliffies. I say the "father (fucker)" is alone and eddie beats the crap out of him.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 31
You don't need cliffies to keep me comming back for more. I was so off in my guess as to who walked in the door LOL
Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 31
Oh no!!!!...please...no raping....please!!!...especially of Bella!..I wouldn't be able to handle it!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 31
I can't tell you guys anything, besides the fact that I jumped like a three year old when I saw that you guys had updated! (:
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 31
OMG what a way to string us along. i am thrilled that edward was able to figure out where bella was. now we know aro swings all ways. man that man is such a freak. james wants aro it seems. poor edward is giving his life for someone he loves. i am hoping i understand that he tells aro he doesn't believe and he is shunned. i am hoping they kick him out but i am thinking that is me dreaming and they will kill him. but if by chance they kick him out of the commune then he goes into town and finds charlie and gets the help for bella that she needs. but what will happen to his family. man i wish he would confide in them and they could all work together.ahhhhhhh it is painful
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 31
SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 31
I never do this, but PLEASE update soon! I really want to know what happens next.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 31
Loved it amazing not a big fan of cliffies lol but amazing can't wait for the nxt chapter
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 31
i'm so mad. my nose was almost to the screen lmao. i was cheering edward's slow ass!! James is a fucking fool. i love how edward is finally comming ot his senses, but i can only imagine how those other Bitchtards are going to act once they find out he decoded himself. oh i just wanna kick Aro in his wrinkled balls. i can't wait for more!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 31
OMG DUN DUN DUN!!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!! OMG OMG OMG!!!! I hope that someone stops Aro from going into the room!!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 31
wow good chapter. hope charlie can trace phone
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 31
S.O. & Foot
Pardon my french. Oh mother fucking god!!!! These cliff hangers are waaaaay toooooo much for my blood pressure!!!! (hee, hee) Damn what a good chapter!!! I hope James gets what's coming to him too!!!!
Any hints as to when the next chapter might be ready???? (Cory starts pacing the floor!!!!)
Cory
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 31
AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! Im bloody hyperventilating over here!!!!!! I feel like I'm the one who is about to be caught!!!!!! I'm praying that the lock is jammed, or the floor spontaneously gives way under Father Aro's feet and he falls. Freak, at this point, I'm hoping Carlisle from TSS pops in to deal with him, just long enough for edward to make that call!!!!!!!!!!!!!
When is the next chatroom date? I need reassurances to tide me over till the next update!!!!
Thanks for the great chapter guys. You are legends but you know that and if you dont you should by now! :-)
All the best.
Greenaway
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 31
Please update this soon--I keep reading, and reviewing, but I really need to read more of it!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 31
EEEK!! More ... give us more!! Don't rush the next update. Good cliffys don't count if the calvary saves the day too soon.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 31
Holy cow...what on earth has happened to Bella since the last time we left her? Why did she try to run away? Obviously something struck her memory...but what was it? And what has she had the endure due to trying to escape? Yall aren't going to just leave us blind on this, are you?? That's a HUGE GAPING HOLE. I feel so bad for Bella...and I'm freaking out for Edward and Bella. Please tell me they are going to find a way to escape this crazed psyco!! I freakin love this story, as always!! Please update soon!! Xoxo :)
Author's Response:
Hey there SouthernBelle!!! How are ya.
I think you may have missed a few chapters. Go back to the chapter when Bella sees her mom in the kitchen. That explains her escape attempt... Hope this helps. Glad you liked it. Have a great week.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 31
I so hope someone saves them both loved it update when you can thanks....
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 31
Not a cliffy!!!!! Great chapter, my heart is breaking for these two.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 31
I blame Renee for this whole mess, what a selfish, flaky bitch!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 31
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[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 31
So excited for this chapter! I can't imagine how they're going to get out of this one.
Date: 15 Oct 2010 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Interesting story...yeah that about sums it up for me. :-D I'm guessing/hoping that the person coming in is Edward or Carlisle, it would be too much to hope that it's Charlie or Felix come to take her away. Wonderful writing, and I find your Aro sufficiently creepy and entertaining, though I definitely think he's gone off his rocker in recent chapters! I look forward to reading more!
Date: 14 Oct 2010 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
The chapter was well- written, very nice to read
Date: 14 Oct 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
I WANT THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! LOVE THIS STORY!!!
Date: 10 Oct 2010 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
oh you left me hanging ... hurry and update ... I'm enjoying your story so very much
Date: 10 Oct 2010 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Life
I love this story but it's deeply and truly disturbing too. Keep up the good work :)
Mina<3
Date: 10 Oct 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
this is such a deeply disturbing but engaging story. I really like it
Date: 07 Oct 2010 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
oh god what a sick bastard...I hope that some one can save her and get her the hell out of there!!!!
Date: 06 Oct 2010 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Creepy.
I would ask how you come up with this stuff, but . . . . . . I don't really think I want to know.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
aaaarrrrgggghhhhh
Date: 05 Oct 2010 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
That so better be Edward ...
Date: 05 Oct 2010 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
I hope for Bella, that her father will find her - but I guess Charlie needs some help - might from Edward? So go on - you did a great job!
Best whishes from Germany
Bussy
Date: 05 Oct 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Loved it but OME that was really creepy,sick & twisted...at one point I almost gagged at it & not to mention the shiver this chapter sent down my spine but still it was really well written & I can't wait for the nxt chapter
Date: 05 Oct 2010 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
oh lordy! that is just disgusting... eeewww. I hope she gets outta there soon...
Much love!
Date: 04 Oct 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
The tar treatment is still my favorite revenge for Aro.
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2010 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Wow Aro is mad as in crazy. I wonder who entered the room, maybe Felix?
Date: 04 Oct 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Great job, thank you for writing.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
god the man is truly a mental job so sick, somebody help bella please!!!!!!! thanks tracy
Date: 04 Oct 2010 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Seek the First
great chapter thanks tracy
Date: 04 Oct 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
<3
Date: 04 Oct 2010 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
All I can picture is that creepy Aro from the movie - with the mullet - in those pictures. . . all scrawny and nekkid. Sooooooooooooooo nasty.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Sick...perverted...bastard! That is all...great job as always!
Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Thank you for not sexually molesting her, though it was close enough. I'm very much hoping this is her only beating and it's either Edward or Carlisle walking into the room.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Oh my fucking GOD what a camera whore.. WHY?!?!?!?!?! *PUKES* lol hmm don't let her get raped... that wont be kewl :/
Date: 04 Oct 2010 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Wow!! Aro is one sick fucker!! gross!! I hope it is someone else at the door so they can save Bella!! Can't wait for the next chap! hang on Bella Charlie and Edward will save you!
Date: 04 Oct 2010 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Aro has lost it all the way. Carlisle has to find Elizabeth and get her and his familey out of there. Edward needs to tell Carlisle about the flyer. They don't have much time left.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
not gonna stop reading, im hooked, but i really hope she gets saved soon
Date: 04 Oct 2010 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
OMG! this just gets more intense - Aro's so needs to get his! And I hope Edward is the One to send him oneway to Hell......
Loving this Story :0)
Date: 04 Oct 2010 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
S.O. & Foot
Oye vey!!! Tough one to read through. But, somebody is rescuing Bella at the end. I think????
Thanks for putting the non-betad chapter out for us readers. I appreciated it muchly!!!!!
Cory
Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Ugh! Aro literally makes me want to vomit!!! Oh Please, let that be Edward who is coming in to save her! Awesome update! Thanks!
LindyP :)
Date: 04 Oct 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
I must say that that was insanely disturbing! LOL And no, I won't stop reading because now I absolutely have to know who opened the door! ;)
Thanks for writing. You pair are awesome!
Date: 04 Oct 2010 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Oh my.. sick sick. Not sure if I am going to keep reading this.
Father ARO.. is soooooooooo sick. UGH
Date: 04 Oct 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
oh please for the love of God please tell me that's Edward or Carlisle or Esme! Aro is so friggin sick. can't wait for the next chapter!
Kristi
Date: 04 Oct 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Loved it!!! Very hard to read!! God I hope that is Edward at the door...
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
My God! I'm sorry for her at the moment..How horrific! to be stuck with that pervert...
How will she ever get out of there?!
This is so devastating right now...
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2010 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Oh wow! I'm hoping its Edward that is coming in the room. Thanks for the update.
Date: 03 Oct 2010 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Please let it be Edward at the door!
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Oh my God! This was so sad! Who is it at the door? Did Edward find her or is that too much to hope for too soon?! This is going to drive me nuts until you update again. Lovely job ladies! This one had my skin crawling!
~Jessi
Date: 03 Oct 2010 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Oh excruciating cliffie, is Edward at the door or did he get Charlie? Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 03 Oct 2010 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Aro is a sik bastard and I was almost expecting worse from him. I just hope sheLs being rescued now. Plus edward knows who she really is and I think he still loves her. More when you get the chance.
Date: 03 Oct 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Come on!!! At least let it be C or E and then they can shank Aro prison style.
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Seek the First
Loved the chapter, =) as always, love the progress and EPOV
best wishes, Linda
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Y'all are some CRAZY girls!! Love it, keep it up!!!
Date: 03 Oct 2010 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
oh my freaking god...he is one sick puppy. ugh! making me shudder...yuck! i'm think or rather hoping that is edward coming in the door....
Date: 03 Oct 2010 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Gosh I can't wait for the next update!
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Ugh! Poor Bella! Aro is so seriously disturbed! I'm hoping that someone rescues her ~ I don't get how everyone just conforms to his ridiculous whims! I know it's a cult, they are brainwashed and beaten into submission...it's just so creepy and scary!
Date: 03 Oct 2010 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Oh I wonder who it is Edward, Charlie, Charlisle, Felix, or another evil asshole to torture her or maybe even Esme. The choices are endless. Can't wait to see where it goes.
Date: 03 Oct 2010 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
:)
Date: 03 Oct 2010 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Oh my that was horrible! Speaking of stopping reading this story, my dear Footroza, I hope you're still reading mine, I wouldn't know because you haven't left any comment since July. Anyway, I wanted to tell you that in a few chapters my Bella will get beat up by Aro and I don't want you to think I stole your idea. I wrote the chapter I'm talking about last May in French and only at the end of this month will I post it in English here, so...
Date: 03 Oct 2010 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
oh, that had BETTER be edward opening the door at the end! he needs to open a big ol' can o' whoop-ass.
i knew aro was a sick fuck, but sheesh! *shivers* you gals are a bit too good at writing this shit, you know that, right?
thanks for the suspense!
btw, are you planning any kind of halloween outtake from aro?
Date: 03 Oct 2010 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Freakin' Nora!!
Dear me, how the heck did Bella survive, poor cow.
He tasted her blood - (hehehe like what you did there) sick, twisted, pervert.
He's got a sound proof room?? Oh my life.
Please, please be Edward coming in the room.
x x
Date: 03 Oct 2010 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
OMG Poor Bella. I wonder who walk in at the end? Aro? Or is it Edward? Someone else?
Date: 03 Oct 2010 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
OMG.....I hope Edward finds her soon and rescues her!!!!
Date: 03 Oct 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
oh poor bella, i hope someone finds her before aro gets back.
Date: 03 Oct 2010 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
OH hell no - that is one evil f*cker! I thought he was bad before but now he has her all to himself with no "monitors" - please let it be E/C/Esme coming in that room opposed to Aro - he makes my skin crawl!
And everytime I read a chapter I am reminded of the similar "cult" down in Texas - a very real reminder how something like this can really happen! Can I lock my 13 year old daughter up so Aro can't come after her???
Date: 03 Oct 2010 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
UGH, ugh, ugh, ugh, ugh, ugh! What a sick bastard he is.
I hope it's Edward or Carlisle on the other side of that door. Poor Bella.
I also hope that by the end of this fic Aro gets a taste of his own medicine. Death is too simple and easy for him... ugh.
And his camera... eeeeeewwwwwwwwwww. Nuff said about that.
Date: 03 Oct 2010 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Oh crap, I hope to God that's Edward or someone who can help her, because if he's going to start on her front she's not going to survive. This is a horrifying story, but I am so hooked I can't stop reading, damn you!
Date: 03 Oct 2010 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
He has really lost his mind. What made him like this? You gave us background on how Carlisle came to the family but what made Aro form the family to begin with? How did Esme come to the family? Was she born into it? The more we get into this story the more questions I seem to have. GREAT GREAT story.
Date: 03 Oct 2010 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Father Aro is truly a perverted, disgusting man who deserves to be restrained while a small blunt guillotine is used to remove his dick from his body. Then he should be placed on a medieval rack and stretched until his shoulders dislodged from their sockets. After that a hammer should be smash against each one of his bones until all of them are broken, the skull being the final blow. Is that enough hatred for him? :)
Even though it was quite a bit disturbing and dark I did enjoy it. It shows how evil Father Aro is and how sick and demented he truly is. But you kinda left it on a cliffy seeing as it doesn't mention if it actually is Father Aro returning. Please don't let it be! Let it be someone who can help Bellabeth. *realises my thoughts are probably only wishful thinking and you two are going to make me want to cause Father Aro much more pain*
Great chapter as always!
~Anna-Margaret
xx
Date: 03 Oct 2010 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Wicked! Brilliant chapter. You two are sick! And I mean that in the nicest way possible and very much as a compliment. Jeez! Thank you for sharing. Greetings from Denmark.
Date: 03 Oct 2010 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Seek the First
Another fine chapter. Thank you for sharing. Blessed Be.
Date: 03 Oct 2010 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Yes you should call father Aro & his camera so there is photografic evidence against him
update soon
Date: 03 Oct 2010 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
hoping whoever it is is there to help her