Date: 08 Sep 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
S.O. & Foot
WTH???? Where is Bella?????
Oh god, more questions in my mind after that chapter!!!!! (thud)
More when you can please!!!!!!!!!
Cory
Date: 07 Sep 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
It's gettin soooo good!!!
Date: 06 Sep 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
at least the doubt has been planted and Edward can find out the truth.
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Loved it :)
Date: 06 Sep 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
When I first saw Edward's new job, I thought he was going to see Bella in seclusion. Now I'm just racking my mind to figure out what they've done with her.
If Aro is corruptm why doesn't he just keep Bella locked away as a sex slave. Obviously, I'm not voting for that, but is he really planning on killing her given his infatuation with her? Ugh, he is so disgusting!!
Date: 06 Sep 2010 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Oh no another cliffhanger. On pins and needles again. I really hate Aro!
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
génial!
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
un bon chapitre comme toujours
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 26: Free Falling
Passionnant
Date: 06 Sep 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
oh no this was chapter was great
Date: 06 Sep 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
I am with Carlisle. I am worried about Bella (Elizabeth). It is no telling what he will do to her.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
I am a bundle of nerves! The intensity keeps being ramped up and I get the feeling the coming explosion will be such that no one will escape the fallout. Great job! Thank you so much for writing and sharing, especially with all you both have going on in RL.
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
DunDunDun! Whoa I had forgotten about this little piece of information. GAH! I can't wait to see what happens!
~Jessi
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
LOVE this chapter!! It was totally worth the wait :-) I can't wait to find out what is going on w/ Elizabeth and where she is.
And I just feel the need to tell you guys how much we appreciate everything yall do. Whether a chapter comes out within a week, a month, or whenever...yall need to know that we know how busy yall are and how much hard work yall put into not only this story, but also your fans and more so this site. I'd just hate for this story to start feeling less like something fun you enjoy writing, and start to feel more like a task you have to get done so you can put that "check" on your to-do list. Because when it becomes something you feel you HAVE to do rather than something you ENJOY and WANT to do, you know you've run into a problem...and it's unfair to you guys. I simply adore this story and am so glad yall are so intent with continuing it and finishing it. But I think at the same time yall need to know how appreciated yall really are. Because it's TRUE!! :-) This story gets better and better and I can't wait for more to unravel. Just know your true fans will stick with you and wait patiently for life to settle down a bit. :-)Thanks for the awesome chapter!! Yall rock as always! God Bless :-)
Author's Response:
Aww how nice was that! Thank you... Jenny and I appreciate hearing that..
We do feel guilty for not updating as we don't like letting people down.. there is just so much going on at the moment.. My to do list is a mile long.. but writing with jenny is actually our down time.. we have a lot of fun writing together.. it really is easy for us to do when we can actually find the time to do it. That is the hard part. Once Jenny finishes her studies, once and for all.. it will be so much easier.. and once the publishing house goes live for me I will be able to breathe again! I THINK.. but then I keep saying that and something else happens LOL Our site has a long way to go...
Jenny and I were saying we don't think we will stop writing FanFiction.. the subject matter and book/movie might change.. but we enjoy writing it so much that it helps with writers block on our original work and this is so much easier than original as well.. It takes 1/4 of the time to write this than it does to write original. So yeah don't worry we are here to stay :)
Thank you again.. it was so nice of you to say that
Mandy xxx
Date: 05 Sep 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Oh my word, I feel so bad for Charlie! Renee, I hate, but Charlie... I hope he finds Bella or has some word on her soon. It's killing me that it's killing him.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
oh, fuck, that's not going to go over well huh?
Much love!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Dun dun duuuuun.... it seems you like to leave us in a state of confusion, wanting more. I love these little twists, they make the story so good. And the flier! That was a perfect addition.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
That has to be the most evil cliffy ever!!! Great chapter- completely hook on this story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Brillint chapter as ever. Thank you so much for sharing. Take your time on updates...and no need to explain. Your story is very much worth the wait. Greetings from Denmark.
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Well, it was not what we expected but hey - we accept our fate and suffer. Don´t you worry about us. Just update whenever!
Could you just let us know what -ARO- DID- TO- HER???????
And talk to Edward and tell him that he should trust his parents. Thank you!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Oh Crap!! What did they do to Bella??? The suspense is killing me! Awesome chapter! You'll have me on the edge of my seat until I find what happens next!
LindyP :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2010 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Ok....it's time. Edward HAS to tell Esme and/or Carlisle about the flyer, Carlisle has to call Charlie and Charlie has to come in with enforcements & liberate those who want to be liberated. My fear is they have removed Elizabeth/Bella so she has to be found as well.
Shades of Waco....it's getting too scary and it's bubbling to a head!!
Great job ladies!!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Ooooh, getting good, not that it wasn't good before just...ah hell never mind. Great job, keep it up. ;)
Date: 05 Sep 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
oh wow i wonder what they have done with bella update soon please
Date: 05 Sep 2010 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Thanks for the update. A flier, it's nice to think that maybe they do work, for all the families & the people themselves that go missing everyday.
I hope Carlisle fesses up to his true identity and history so they can get a better picture of Aro, the raping narcissist with the twisted version of Hitlers racial cleansing.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Darn that was an awesome chapter!!! My eyes nearly popped out of my head when I saw the missing poster, brilliant! :)
x x
Date: 05 Sep 2010 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Alright Charlisle should put sleeping pills in everyone's coffee so they can find Bella and disappear.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
ooh, yet another exciting cliffie!
thank you for the update -- i personally do not mind a long wait between chapters. in fact, it makes me feel better that i do not update my own story as fast as i should!
i continue to be in awe of all the balls you guys are juggling. it blows my mind. keep up the great work, ladies!
Author's Response:
yeah we need it to slow down a tad.. LOL won't happen though for another few months at least.. and then we have to have our original stories finished... NEVER ENDING.. but hey... it is fun for the most part so that is the main thing huh?
Thanks for the review as always :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2010 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Wonderful!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
<3 <3
Date: 05 Sep 2010 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Oh no...please no rape...and no torture...oh no!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
great chapter. glad he is questioning. hope they can all get away.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
I knew when Edward left the compound that he was going to see one of those signs. Now what?
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2010 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Thank you for this update. I hope Bella is ok. I hope Edward gets a hold of Charlie. I can't wait for more;)
Date: 05 Sep 2010 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
:)
Date: 05 Sep 2010 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
OME epic stuff seriously at least Edward is starting to question things & is starting to think for himself..go Edward loved it can't wait for the nxt chapter
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2010 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Loved the chapter and Edwards epiphany, wonder what happened to Bella..
best wishes, Linda
Date: 05 Sep 2010 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Might not have been the chapter we were expecting but it was important nonetheless. We now know what has been happening with Edward and he found one of Charlie's fliers... awesome! Wish he'd showed it to Carlisle right away though.
Author's Response:
Oh she just knows the plot and what is happening in the story and is insisting I hurry up with the chapter she wants.. I hope she doesn't read this but she is going to be waiting for another 2 chapters LOL we just worked out what is happening for the next 2 chapters and it is the 2nd chapter.. LOL oh well... :)
Thanks for reading.. :)
Date: 05 Sep 2010 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Life
I hope Edward won't let Aro fool him again... And I'm begging you, let next chapter be Bella's POV! Please!!!
Please, update soon 'cause I love this story!!! ;)
Date: 05 Sep 2010 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
missing what has aro done to her?????????? thanks tracy
Date: 05 Sep 2010 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
completly agree carlisle history is horribly sad, thanks tracy
Date: 05 Sep 2010 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 26: Free Falling
oh my god phil is just as bad, thanks for the great chapter tracy
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
I'm sorry RL is busy for you both. Good luck on completing your masters, Jenn, that's awesome! Hopefully things settle down for you both soon. I won't hound you, I'll be as patient as I can. But I am dying to know what Aro is doing to poor Bella! And I'm glad that Edward is questioning things. For all that he is going through, at least he has a picture of Bell to keep her close to him. What does she have? I shudder at the thought of what she must be dealing with...
Great chapter, ladies!
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2010 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Wow, elizabeth is MISSING. yes she is
man oh man edward what will you do. you need to know that you can trust your parents. he needs someone to trust.his whole family is at risk. i am sure esme and carlisle have figured out by now that aro wants more from elizabeth. so where did she go. oh dear i am so afraid for her. too much too many questions. what to believe when everything you thought to be real is turning out to be a lie. and you all accepted it all on blind faith. love it
Date: 05 Sep 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Hasn't it been one week since she disappear, then?
Date: 05 Sep 2010 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
So no one knows where she is but Aro and Phil are they trying to reprogram her again.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
oh man. i wonder what they're doing to Bella. i want to punch Aro in the jugular.
Kristi
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Oh my.... cant wait for more
Date: 05 Sep 2010 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
major cliffy!!! I'm loving the direction this story is taking! (:
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Great chapter. This is getting better and better. Can't wait until Edward and Bella are together again.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Gah. You guys are seriously killing me with your cliffies and general effed-up VO debauchery!
I knew Edward would find a flyer. I knew that Aro would make Elizabeth suffer for her behaviour and I knew he would try to prove his power to every person in Carlisle's family (especially Edward).
But this is keeping me on pins and needles. Great work. RL is a pain in the arse... sorry to hear that you guys are so bogged down. Hope things lighten up for you soon.
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Damn! I was really hoping for the other chapter, but this needed to come first. Poor Edward is finding out that things are not what they seem.
Love you both!
Mic
Date: 05 Sep 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Missing my arse. Scumball has her in the dungeon again.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
great chapter, more and more people are begining to realise aro is way out of control, thanks tracy
Date: 01 Sep 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....
oh what does it say? must read on thanks tracy
Date: 01 Sep 2010 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey
agreed he need to be in the nut house, thanks tracy
Date: 31 Aug 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
I started reading this story this morning and have found myself unable to stop. Its taken me a little over ten hours to read and I have absolutely loved every minute of it! Its a really intriguing concept if not slightly horrific. Cults and their 'brainwashing' is a fascinating subject and you've portrayed it wonderfully. I just hope Elizabeth/Bella is okay and that Charlie/Edward/Felix/Esme/Carlisle/ANYONE (lol) can save poor Bella before Aro can have his evil way with her or even take her baths a step further.
It truly is an amazing story! Please update soon.
~Anna-Margaret
xx
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Carlisle must really had been really out of mind if he thought that he could go around killing people because he wanted revenge and thereafter join his dead family in heaven. Something doesn't fit ah yeah you can't go to heaven if you kill.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Where's the story?
Date: 29 Aug 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Brilliant reasoning for an insane society! Kudos! I often wondered how Carlisle got involved in Aro's insanity. There's going to be some fur flying soon. Brilliant!
Date: 28 Aug 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
OMG, I just started reading this a day or so ago and didn't realize it's not complete. For some reason, I thought it was... so now I'm on the edge... must know what's going to happen next... please keep writing!!!
Date: 28 Aug 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Amazing what brainwashing can do.
Date: 27 Aug 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
That was bad. Poor Carlisle. He needs to rescue his family from Aro.
Great chapter!
Date: 26 Aug 2010 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Ok..umm...yeah, that was horrifying. But at least Carlisle's involvement in "The Family" makes more sense now. I'm loving this story. Thanks for another creeptastic chapter!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Thank you for this chapter. I wondered how this all got started. I can't wait for more;)
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2010 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Damn..what happened to Carlisle was horrific indeed..
My God! to watch the bastards walk..that would drive anyone over the edge.
I have to admit that I'm still suspicion of how that happened to his family. I was thinking he was targeted and planned for somehow. It just seemed off..Especially the ways the killings were done..hmmm..
And in comes Devil Aro to mislead and deceive in Carlisle's moments of stress and confusion...how perfect for the bastard..
Now my questions, Where is Elizabeth(Bella)? What has been done to her because of that asshole Phil the devil's spawn? Why is Edward withdrawn and jumpy? What happened on his trip? Why exactly are they being targeted?
So much to learn....
Loved it! Loved hearing from Carlisle..
Date: 25 Aug 2010 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
<3
Date: 25 Aug 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
I really can't wait till Bella knocks the crap out of "Father" Aro!! Please don't disappoint me!!
Date: 25 Aug 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
ok,yeah, I have a feeling bella isn't going to be "fine" when she returns from wherever the hell she is.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Poor Carlisle, his past is such a tragedy, but it seems he's headed towards yet more drama... I hope Elizabeth won't live hell on earth.
Date: 24 Aug 2010 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Now if Carlisle can only meet Charlie ......
Date: 24 Aug 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Holy crap! That kind of history would make anyone want to join a cult. I like the bit of Carlisle's POV. It helps to realize why they are all such a messed up society. I wonder what will happen next!
Btw, this line is exactly what I have been feeling like this society is for the last couple of chapters: "It was a twisted version of Hitler’s racial cleansing."
Date: 24 Aug 2010 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
God, poor Carlisle. I now see why he doesn't have a clear view of things...I just hope Bella & Edward are together again very soon. God only knows what Aro's doing to the poor girl. Looking forward as always to the next instalment! Thanks for the update!!!
Date: 24 Aug 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Can't wait to see what happened to "Elizabeth"
Date: 24 Aug 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
S.O. & Foot
Why do I have this feeling that something VERY bad is going to happen soon???
Great to get some back story on Carlisle, even though it was pretty graphic!!!
Looking forward to more when it's ready!!!!!
Cory
Date: 24 Aug 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
this story is great!!
Although i don't get any message alerts when a new chapter is posted up and I'm not to sure why
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
I'm almost afraid to read the next chapter - almost! My mind boggles at the stories that roll around in your heads....frighteningly scary....
Loved the chapter
xoxo
Date: 23 Aug 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
wow i can't believe he went through all of that. I wonder where they have bella and what they are doing to her. update soon please
Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
I knew it had to be something tragic for Carlisle to follow this stupidity. He is too good of a man. He will figure a way out for his family. Some how he will get to Charlie and they will get out of this mess.
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
get out of there
what will Alice do?
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Oh, my goodness! This was an intense chapter. Yeah, I knew it had to have been bad, but still! I had little tears in my eyes. Excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more!
~Jessi
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Fantastic update :) Again, don't worry about a chapter being "late". Life gets crazy...I don't see how yall are able to post the way yall can! (I love it though!!) I'm thinking about you guys and praying for yall that things will calm down for yall! Again, excellent chapter! Xoxo
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Poor Carlisle. They really need to catch a break and soon.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Oh, dear Carlisle, what a mess you're in! And what in God's name are they doing to Bella - I'm so afraid to find out. (It would be crazy if they broke her hymen and sent her back to the Family just so she would die at Edward's hand in the ceremony.)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Poor Bella & Edward;(
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
I loved it especially how Carlisle met Aro in prison ironic but funny yet sad. I can't wait for Edward's POV and what's happening to Elizabeth? Where is she? Does Aro have her somewhere trying to brainwash her again? Is Felix going to help Charlie find Bella? I know he left the note but will it be enough? I love this twisted story so much! Until next time.
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
I wonder what Aro has done to Elizabeth aka Bella. He wants her so I do not think thathe will kill her like he probably did with Tanya. I just pray that Charlie can get there before Aro rapes the poor girl. He might think that sex is dirty, but he felt lustful feelings towards Esme and now Bella. I am glad that she remembers everything now, but there is no way for her to get out. I want to know what Felix left for Charlie.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
great chapter
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
I feel so sorry for Carlisle. He's been through so much in his life. And now he has to deal with this sick bastard!
Please, update soon ;)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
OMR!!!! I was wondering what happened to Carlisle to make him believe in the ways of that psycho. Now I realize he was completely broken and once sanity came back it was obligation that kept him there.
I can't believe you teased us with this chapter. We all needed this info but you are making us wait another week to hear about the little road trip that Edward took and finding out what happened to Bella. Will she be coming back? What are they doing to her? Better yet....who is doing it???? Is Carlise going to take his family and make a break for it? Is Fleix's guilt going to consume him to the point that he tells Charlie everything? It might work out to where he has outside help and inside help.
But somehow, with the way your two twisted minds are....I doubt it. LMAO. Thanks for sharing your twisted tale with us. Until next update. Be safe and take care. Peace. T.
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Are we up for Carlisle being brainwashed again and put in a box next?
Can they fight Aro within the premises? Guess not, but Edward was able to leave and run an errand for Jane. Maybe someone can escape and inform the authorities? Not that we want this just yet.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
OMG... What is that pervie freak doing to Bella/Elizabeth?
It always confounds me how smart, seemingly normal people can get sucked into a cult. I know brain washing is a huge part of it... I guess since I've never experienced it, it seems unreal.
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....
Well, I don´t have a lot of sympathy for Felix. He is in too deep. He could have informed the police a while ago! He has destroyed a lot more lives than the one from Bella...... And a lot of the people who work for Aro and / or are part of the Family are more than happy to continue. Difficult…
As for the note. Giving away the address would be too easy. I think Felix will disappear and safe himself. Haunted by beautiful brown eyes…
Date: 23 Aug 2010 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait to see what happened to Elizabeth (Bella)!
Date: 23 Aug 2010 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey
How could Jasper act so disrespectful to the Father after all Aro has done for them?
So it seems Aro is threatening Carlisle and his family to be able to have some fun with Bella in the end….? He is so clever! :)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Loved it but I teared up during this chapter what happened to Carlisle's family is so sad god I feel so bad for him but loved the chapter can't wait for the nxt one
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple
Holly mother of God! I´ve been reading this chap smirking and laughing and if you could see my husband – group counseling is not on his mind to help me out of this but a hard core exorcism! LOL. YES I´M BACK - and I still LOVE you know who ……. And yes you still owe me the extended *Aro talks to Heidi chap from TTSS!*
As to this story: great work and I am honestly at a loss to understand how your brains work.
I am well aware that this might be reality for people but please – I sometimes need a break from the real world. That’s why I enjoy your stories so much even though it is not good for my sanity sometimes……
When I started to read ff´s I found it difficult to read about the characters from the Twilight stories being transferred into an “alternative universe”…….until I found some gripping and exciting stories. Yes, you made me open my eyes and be more ….open minded …..Blessed be.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Blimey! Poor Carlisle. I hope he's successful in keeping his family safe.
Where the heck is Elizabeth, hat's the sleaze doing to her? Will Charlie find them all in time?
Brilliant story ladies.
x x
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Very interesting. Wow what tale do you weave for us. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Oh boy - I'm so glad Carlisle is smart & wise enough to know something is going on in that "Blessed Be's" weird head!!!
I just so hope Bella/Elizabeth is ok - sounds like her Mum is off with the pixies & thanks to Phil, she'll never get her back :(
Just hope Esme, Carlisle & Edward with the rest of their family can get out!
I'm actually hoping for all of them to be ok now... now we know the truth behind those walls!!!!
You guys are wonderful with your constant updates - don't worry too much, we all know that your busy with the website & your other stories etc...
Love that you can keep up with it all... Blessed Be! (ha, yeah right!!!)
T2M x