So that explains why Carlisle would stay with them but now his eyes are seeing things clearer now.  What are they going to do when they find out about Bella.???

:)

wow thanks for giving us a look into Carlisle life before! I can't wait for the next chap to see what happened to Bella!!

This story is so crazy. I love it...but the thing is, you wonder how people can fall for this type of life. Yes, we all wish at times that life went a little slower like in the older days..but, since that is impossible, being in a cult is not the answer. I can't imagine someone telling me to drink koolaid and I would. But then again, I wouldn't have been in that group at all to begin with. The sad thing is, there are people right now in that same situation. Living in cults that feel they are right and almost walking on heavens streets. I don't understand. Your story makes me think beyond this story. It makes me ask questions to myself that I have to answers for. It takes a great writer to make someone question life and those around us. Keep up the wonderful work!

                                Mary

Wow. Just... wow. I knew it had to be bad, and the thought of Aro wanting to go back to the old ways? *shudders*

I think, for me, the most horrific line in this chapter had to be: "when I watched as Esme cried with each thrust" - Aro is one sick, depraved, evil fucker!

Oh Bella is been missing for two days, I'm afraid to know where she is.

I wonder if Carlisle is really using Aro's 'seed' with invitro ;)

Aro is pure evil. To prey on the sad, depressed & distraught under the guise of counseling & anger management is disgusting.
I fear for Elizabeth/Bella. Aro is too obsessed with her and Phil is another psycho.
I hope Carlisle is able to find a way to escape with all of his family & Bella. Maybe a les brutal Waco?

Still not enough for me to forgive Carlsle totally...... but its a little start.

I'm scared what's happening to Bella right now.  You know it has to be horrific

footroza!!!!!!!!!!!  *squeeeeeeee* lol'

omg. they are torturing bella...dick head. somebody should've cunt punched Jane's ass. I can't wait till next chapter!

THAT is one hell of a cliffhanger!  Amazing!  Sooner or later Bella's emotions were bound to come to a head.  You can cut the tension witha knife when she realizes she is fenced in!  Stunning!

Loved the chapter, the progress and their stolen moments =)

best wishes, Linda

Loved the chapter and he really is deranged LOL

best wishes, Linda

Loved the chapter, the progress and Happy Anniversary wishes, even if it´s a little late, =)

best wishes, Linda

Did I mention the NCIS ?  The Marines ?  CSI, Las Vegas, Manhattan, and Kojak too. Maybe Kojak could help Charlie to find his daughter ? Or Colombo ?

The GI'S and GI Jane ? Seeley BOOTH ? Buffy the Vampire slayer ??? Who could help Charlie ? I want Bella back to her father, the real Charlie father. What can I do to help ?

Jesus!...I'm edge for what happens to her next..

I am on board for this crazy ride til it ends..

Where is Edward though and became f his day out?...hmmm..

Great job..

Oh dang. I have no more nails. They're gone. I can't wait to see what will happen next!
~Jessi

OME epic stuff poor Bella I hope she does get out soon & Phil is jst evil OME amazing can't wait for the nxt chapter

Wow, I really want her to trust Edward, but i know she doesn't know she can.

Oh man!! That evil, evil Phil. Such a great chapter chock full of twistedness. She was sooo close. Or not I guess. 

Woah! They kill girls who try to leave, but Aro probably has something specific in mind. It would be so disgusting if Aro used this to somehow justify inseminating Bella the old-fashioned way. Ewww!

Phil is one EVIL b@$!ard!!! Poor Bella - she really needs some Edward time to help lift her spirits once again. Thanks for the update...as always, looking forward to the next installment.

I hope he meets Charlie!

ahhh i cant wait to see what happens to her so intense i love it

Of course I forgive you! Although, after a chapter like that, I'm really not liking you very much. Damn Phil! And where was Edward? What happened to him when he went into the city? The suspense is killing me!

I knew Bella was going to get caught when she decided to try and find a way out.  I hope nothing bad happens to her.  

Update soon :)

hope it was an address or a name or something!

I knew Jane wasn't as nice as she seemed. And Phil is just as evil as Aro. I'm scared for what is going to happen to Bella now.

Another awesome chapter! My heart is pounding! Can't wait for more! Thank you for writing!

Ughh, please! Kill him off at the end!!

oh no. oh no. what's going to happen?! update soon!!!

Kristi

This is the worse thing that could have happened to Bella, seeing her Mom and trying to escape. I hope you have a way out for her.

ooh, this gave me goosebumps.  and i don't care when you update, just as long as you do.  eventually, that is. 

S.O. &  Foot

Ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!! (thud)

Cory

oh no poor bella

this getting really excited and i cant wait for the next update

Jesus. Effing hormone injections and shit! Her own father? Tell me they leave this place!

This was all kinds of fucked up for bella. But she shouldn't have been so stupid. i knew as soon as you wrote about Edward no longer delivering the fruit and the randomness of rene that aro had something to do with ed and phil rusty dusty ass had something to do with setting bells up after the whole mashed potatoe incident. <--did i spell potatoe right? lol.

It's sad that she's going to most likely be tortured or dealt with of some sort. however maybe this will bring Felix back. and at this point. i don't even care if bells and ed get together i just want her ass back with charlie lmao!

But since phil has never liked her i couldn't find it in him to keep quiet. then what pisses me off about bella is this bitch really tries to run. at least get a feel of your surroundings first. It's called self preservation. you know when to run and when to fold lmao. she should've been more observant then maybe her kooky ass wouldn't have gotten caught. I won't go into details about how many times observation saved my ass from some hard time with the parentals when i was a little bit younger lmao i loved the chapter i was very excited when i saw you updated. * blessed be my ass i'm going find my taser for their crazy asses lol*

Oh no....poor Bella. 

I knew it was him! How could that fucker not tell Charlie?!

Makes me think of "The Lottery" w Kerri Russell I think.

Well you know I loved it.  I knew Jane wasn't as sweet as she pretends to be.  I'm scared shitless for what's going to happen to Bella now.  I know Aro won't just get rid of her for remembering.

too bad she didnt have a fork to stab phil in the snarglies and deflate them contaminated suckers. as crazy as this fic drives me i cant wait for more. 

oh my word... heart fail

Grrrrrrrr!

I have to say this chapter made me sick. The headgames played by the lunatics are awful. Where is the cavalry? Where is Charlie? C'mon someone has to know that there is a cult of loonies there...

Aghhhh! So freaking creepy. I was wondering when Phil and her mother were going to turn up again, and sure enough...

But I wonder what's happened to Edward in the meantime? :)

Oh God !!! Poor Bella... She won't be able to trust the Cullens now...

Please, update soon ;)

I usually don't feel much either way towards Renee. I want to fucking throttle this bitch! What kind of fucking pos mother is she?!

Jesus. So she's happy and doesn't have insane, blaring red warning lights going off? Oh, good mommy.