[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2010 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 26: Free Falling
This gets better and better and more intense with every chapter. Gah I just love everything yall come up with. I'm terrified what is going to happen to Elizabeth to ensure that all memories from her prior life are officially washed away. I'm sure "Father" will love to have his fun partaking in taking care of that. I cannot wait until the next chapter! And don't worry about not getting everything up by Saturday. That's just a time line yall set for yourselves. Everyone can tell how hard yall have been working this week by how AMAZING the site looks. (I freakin love it!!) Can we still join club java? I'm JUST out of college and in the part of my life where I'm no longer a student, but still without an official job. So I don't know how much money I can offer, but yall work so hard on this site and it truly relaxes me after a tough day and I feel bad enjoying it and not giving yall anything for your hard work and time. If Club Java is still open, I'd love to donate. Anyways, I have you guys in my thoughts and prayers as things are getting hectic for everyone right now! Just know I can't wait for yall's next post - whenever that may be. Have a great week! Xoxo!!
Author's Response:
Yes you can still so club java but please don't feel you have to. It might only be $20 but we do understand this is a huge amount for some people. If you want to, wait until you can aford to do it.. it will always be there :)
And thank you for the review and support of the site. We hope you have a great week too xxx
Date: 16 Aug 2010 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 26: Free Falling
Arhhhhhh!!!!! Thank you for getting this mind screwing chapter out asap! bahaha
Darn Phil! Darn you pair having a life! hehehe
Can't wait, er actually, yeah I probably can wait for the next chapter 'cause Bella's gonna get her butt kicked. What will the Cullens/Whitlocks do? What did Edward experience while he was out? Will this affect his reaction?
x x
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 26: Free Falling
This is nuts! I can't believe this guy is for real!!!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 26: Free Falling
wow that is some chapter update soon i want to know what happens to bella
Date: 16 Aug 2010 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 26: Free Falling
Loved it!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 26: Free Falling
Oh poor little Bella. Phil is a giant fuckwad...but I am sure you already knew that.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 26: Free Falling
great chapter..xx
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2010 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 26: Free Falling
Thank you for this update. I wonder where Edward has been? I can't wait to find out;)
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2010 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 26: Free Falling
Omg I hate Phil so much that fucking bastard. I thought I forgot your update schedule for a moment but being the fangirl that I am of this story I was right but now I'm sad for Bella because Phil has her back against the wall well fence. I can't wait to see wait Edward sees or experiences in the city. This is like the fucked up version of the village with a dash of I don't know WTF issue/thing Aro has going on in his head. Real life comes first but this was a pleasant surprise. Until next time I love it! Renee is brain washed for real damn!
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2010 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 26: Free Falling
Loved it :) I wonder what's going to happen.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 26: Free Falling
OMG Poor Bella! :( Damn Phil!! I can't wait to read about Edward's day out! Did he run into Charlie?!? Oh I can't wait to find out!!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 26: Free Falling
that was a;most to stressful to read! Poor Bella
Date: 16 Aug 2010 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 26: Free Falling
ok now Phil needs to die too and Jane needs a good needs a good punch in the face.......since I'm sure she is just as brainwashed as the rest, just a punch in the face.
Author's Response:
LOL sorry honey.. yes she does........
Date: 16 Aug 2010 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Can't wait for the next update! I like it!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others
Very good writing. A very interesting story -- yes, Aro is creepy
Date: 16 Aug 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Salvation
Great POV From Felix, who has a heart
Date: 16 Aug 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Sins of a Mother
wow....you certainly have my attention
Date: 16 Aug 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Life
Interesting start...Phil sounds very overprotective...
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Please, please, please let him run into Charlien and/or see the flyer with her picture on it. I know it will probably be awile but I gotta say that I already can't wait until Aro is brought down. He is one sick mofo!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Aro is really a freak, I'm afraid of him. The ceremony is horrible.
I hope that Charlie will find Bella before the ceremony. Can he call the ATF, the SWAT, FBI, CIA, NSA or in France the GIGN, or in Israel the Mossad ???? Or everybody at the same time to help him free is daughter ???
I know I'm a little bit excessive.
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
How I've missed Edward!
That was great!
Date: 12 Aug 2010 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Desperation
So long since I've read from you ! So glad I've found this new story !
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2010 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Holy Shit!!! I can't wait to see....
Loved...
Thanks a million for chap...:D
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey
Oh I really dislike Aro. I hope that Edward sees what his father plans on doing with his future bride before its to late.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
<3
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Loved it :)
Date: 09 Aug 2010 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Love it... love it... love it... as always fantastic ch... thanks so much
Date: 09 Aug 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Aro is definitely enjoying the power he has. The Cullens will have to very careful now since Aro has noticed they don't fully believe in this anymore.
I think Edward will run into Charlie or maybe see one of the posters Charlie has.
Great chapter!
Date: 09 Aug 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
I hope he desides to leave with her :P this is too much for me sometimes :/
Much love!
Date: 09 Aug 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
hope you will update soon.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....
Good chapter again.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey
Good chapter again.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple
Good chapter.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us
good chapter again.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
merci, merci pour cette belle histoire.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....
enfin l'espoir!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Yay! I can't wait for Edward to step inside the real world. Oh boy it feels like the matrix in here lol! I love how carlisle, esme, jasper and Edward see aro for the nut case he is. Damn the dude is crazy. I'm glad Jazz kicked his ass. Until next time.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You
another good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....
poor charlie and felix but I loved it. until next time.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
OOO I hope he gets her outta there!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
he will find one of the posters of Charlie right?
Date: 08 Aug 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
ooh, i hadn't thought about edward going "outside" -- wonder if he'll see charlie, or felix, or one of charlie's posters...
i like how the cullen family is together on their doubt of Father, and would rather believe each other than blind dogma.
what is that saying from Hunt For Red October -- a little revolution can be a good thing -- or something to that effect.
hee hee, aro's gonna get it eventually!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Desperation
Good chapter again.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 18 - The Family
Oh my god this man is an evil.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Discloser
Hurry to see what going next
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Confession
Good chapter again.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others
Good chapter.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
What a tight spot the Cullen's have themselves in. How does E. get along in the outside world?
Date: 08 Aug 2010 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Is Edward going to see Charlie? Ugh.. The suspence is killing me !
Please, update soon ;)
Date: 08 Aug 2010 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....
It's good to know that Felix is a better man that I thought. I wonder what he wrote on this note... Anyway, I really like your fanfic ;)
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
I think Edward is going to see some pics of a pretty girl named Bella. Aro is crazy.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Admonishment
Another good chapter.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Atonement
Good chapter again.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Embrace
Good chapter...happy to see Edward but I hope he will be good to her and help her father to save her.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own
He is so pervert...good chapter.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 10 - In My Hands
This man is crasy...good chapter.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
The tension and "wirewalk" here is nerve-wracking. Nice job on that! Let's see, Edward in the outside...there ought to be a couple of eyes opened and maybe, just maybe, he'll encounter Charlie! One other thing though, what did you mean about another site? Are you moving this work? If so, please let me know where. I don't want to miss anything!!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 9 : Rebirth
Good chapter.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Father is fucking crazy! No wonder why the Elders are scared of him *shudder*
Anyway, I'm glad Elizabeth (Bella) didn't say what she was thinking. Please write the next chapter in her POV... please. Update soon :)
Date: 08 Aug 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....
Ugh, I really don't like Felix. I can't wait to find out what the note says
Date: 08 Aug 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Salvation
Good chapter again.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name
Good chapter.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow
Another good chapter.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
oh man. I hope the Cullen's are able to bring Aro down! great chapter!
Kristi
Date: 08 Aug 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self
good chapter again.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Sins of a Mother
Oh no not her too.
Good chapter.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Promises
I hope he will not raped her...oh please no.
Good chapter.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Blessings
It was a good chapter.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Life
Good first chapter...I hope I will like this story...let see what's next.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Hmm wonder what will happen. Maybe he'll meet Charlie. Great job!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Best chapter yet! Great job.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
S.O. & Foot
Firstly, what's this about a new site?? What am I missing???
Great chapter as well!!!!
Cory
Date: 07 Aug 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
:)
Date: 07 Aug 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
OOOOOO I wonder if he will run into Charlie!!! I hope so! :) Can't wait for the next chap!!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
oooh I wonder if there is going to be a "take over" of Father Aro... blessed be. hahaha
cant wait for the next chap!! Interesting that Edward will be going into town, maybe he will see it isnt so bad and leave with Elizabeth... hhhmmmm
Date: 07 Aug 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Carlisle seems to be intelligent and sensible. What the hell is he doing in this place to begin with? And will Edward save the day?
Date: 07 Aug 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Its nice to get an EPOV....I do wonder what/who he's going to run into when goes into the real world. It's totally different from what hes use to. Maybe he'll freak out. I wonder if he'll see the flier Charlie has been showing around.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
how many more chapters are left?
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
I don't know what it is about your stories but I swear, each update I enter with heart palpitations!
Aro is clearly insane & delusional. He must be
stopped but like all psycho's, he has his "flocked" so brainwashed, no one can see it.
I hope the Cullens and their entire family, including "Elizabeth" are rescued, saved, escape, whatever before Aro can do more evil. Talk about Branch Davidian, etc. all over.
Excellent chapter and look forward to more.
BTW - thanks for the key chain! I use it proudly!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
ohh, ed can meet charlie!
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Great chapter - really great chapter - besides the fact that Aro the As***** is still breathing!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
i wonder if eddie will come accross one of charlie's posters? maybe charlie himself?
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Love this chapter!! Edward's going to flip when he steps out of the box he's been living in and sees how life really is. Geez...I'm all in knots about Elizabeth and how creepy Father is getting with her. Can't WAIT until Saturday!! This was fantastic :) :) xoxo
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Oh man Aro is crazy! Maybe someone should find away to assasinate him (ahm Carlisle with a syringe and vile in the "meditation" room). As always looking forward to the next chapter and more of the do gooding Cullens and crazy Aro!!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
good chapter.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Aro is a sick bastard. Well I hope that Edward is going to run into Charlie when he goes to town and he will see that Bella was actually kidnapped.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
i think edward will get culture shock when he goes into the real world this happens to people who are leave cults they have grown up in all the time. update soon please
Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
This must not be the first time Edward has ventured into town. Is it the same twon Charlie and Felix are in? Does Felix know who Edward is? More questions...
Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....
Is Felix telling Charlie Bella is dea? That's what I'm thinking...
Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey
OMG, Aro just gets more vile and perplexing! Edward (and Carlisle and Esme, for that matter) is going to lose his shit if/when Aro tries to switch up Bella's ceremony. Will Aro want Edward to watch? Did Carlisle watch as Aro took Esme?
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Ooooh I can't wait to see what happens next. As always, great job. ;)
Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Exactly what I was thinking and to be in the car with Alex... Interesting my dear.
Lovely seeing EPOV. A four foot by four foot box, WTH?
People moaning about the length of your chapters, cheek!!! You girls are amazing and your updates are so regular, plus this is your pleasure not your flamin' job!! Post a 10 word chapter - go onnnnn do it. lol
Love ya guys.
x x
Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....
good job felix, way to man up and at least try to make up for your brian washing past. all we can do is pray that charlie can get in and get her out unharmed.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey
i am a good daughter, following the laws and making my father happy and proud by submitting my review. blessed be. - NOT
so i am just an addict saying thank you for feeding my addiction with your wonderfully fucked up take on this family - thank you :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Freaking hell! It's getting darker! Is Jane going to be a snitch?
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Temple
ok seriously not quite as creepy as sex with the father but to say either way she bleeds today! and then give jasper a knife to hold at her throat! holy fuck! i mean do they not realize that most girls have broken their hymen long before they have sex?!? and by doing seemingly normal activities. carlisle is a doctor! he has to know this, and yet he offered his little girl up as a sacrifice on the off chance her 'innocence' was intact.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Hmmmm Eddie will see Charlie or the fliers......
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
he goes to town!! it´ll be awesome!!!! I can´t see an exit for this story, so everyone seems to be on the control of Aro, I think that if didn´t freak out in front of them all will never believe it this insane ?!?!? lol
I´m anxious for the new site!!! hopefully all right ;D
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us
happy annaversary! may you be blessed with a long and happy life together, full of joy, love and family!
poor alice she was just trying to help both bella and herself (man it seems wierd to call her bella in this fic! lol)
next up the ickiness that is sex with the creepy father.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Can't Carlisle slip him some poison somehow?