Date: 23 Nov 2015 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 28
Thanks for the update, great story
Date: 30 May 2015 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really like story so far! I am fearing that she is going to put herself in a tough spot here. I hope not but it seems like time for turmoil and the ILY is enough to scare her ?
Date: 19 Jan 2015 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 27
oh no....i bet she is running scared by saying she loves him and is hooking up with another guy when walks in, but i REALLY hope im wrong. I think you are doing a fantastic job writing the story and putting up the pins is an added cool touch. but i would like elliot and kates story to get some more time. no more 4 ways or sharing please. i love the story line, the teasing and esp the sex. i think it is so romantic the special things he does for her and i REALLY hope she is letting down her walls. they hv found their perfect match in each other and i really think she is getting cold feet...but i hate that they aren't exclusive.
PTMinor
Date: 18 Jan 2015 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
this is sooooooo my favorite story and too bad fanfic took it down---jerks!!!!! that was a very very hot hot hot chapter
PMinor
Date: 18 Jan 2015 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
well i loooooove FSOG and NASCAR so I am sure I'm going to love this story.
Thanks again for leading me to this story Frisky75!!!
Trish Minor
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hated it. ! I thought it was horrible, even their hair color is wrong, you could of kept hera brunette and Kate blonde, just everything about this story was so WRONG.. you ruined a perfectly beautiful love story and turned it into a joke called yr story.. Sorry just my opinion... If yr going to keep in line of the story of AG & CG at least follow the original characters... 0 rating from me :-(
Off to read some realistic stories on TWCS about AG & CG
HAVE A GREAT DAY
Author's Response:
I'm sorry you 'hated it' and yes you are entitled to your opinion however the idea of AU stories is to go outside of the box, make the characters what you want them to be, invent story lines that fit your creativity. Changing a characters hair colour or age or job title is part of your imagination. Hope you find the story you are looking for and you have a great day!
Date: 30 Sep 2014 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 27
Thanks for the updated chapter and the entertainment. I am glad that she kind of gave him some sort of hope of their future together. I was surprised that she said "I am fond of you".... kind of hurt him I am sure.
Date: 30 Sep 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 27
Oh the supense, nice chapter. Good luck with your venture but I hope you can update soon, have missed this story!
Date: 30 Sep 2014 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 27
omg what an amazing chapter poor christian at the beginning but i think they will get more serious, loved it all xx
Date: 30 Sep 2014 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 27
It was fantastic plus ana said the love word . I can't wait to read more xxxx
Date: 30 Sep 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 14
Boy are the tables different in your story.
Date: 30 Sep 2014 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 13
I did not expect that at all.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 26
whens the next update?
Date: 03 Sep 2014 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wow, thanks for the updated chapter and the entertainment. I wonder what her answer will be to that particular question. :-D
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2014 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 26
Great story,thanks for sharing your work
Date: 02 Sep 2014 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 26
Awesome! Can't wait to see what Ana's answer is!
Date: 02 Sep 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 26
A bit...hell yeah it's a cliffie. But it's fabulous. Can't wait to see how this goes.
Date: 02 Sep 2014 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 26
Good chapter again
Date: 01 Sep 2014 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wonderful, I hope she is happy!
Date: 01 Sep 2014 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 26
Omg I can't believe he asked her . I love it xxx
Date: 29 Aug 2014 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
When will yhe next chapter be up? Missing his!
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Another great chapter. Looking forward to commitment from them or a declaration of love.
Date: 08 Aug 2014 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 25
How will they cope with the distance . I really want her to tell grey soon she loves him xxx
Date: 08 Aug 2014 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 25
Boy she is falling hard. Thanks for the updated chpater and the entertainment. :-D
Date: 08 Aug 2014 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 25
Awesome as always! 😊
Date: 07 Aug 2014 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 25
Good chapter again
Date: 05 Aug 2014 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 24
can't wait for your next update!!! really enjoying this story!
Date: 04 Aug 2014 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 24
Good chapter again
Date: 03 Aug 2014 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thanks for the updated chapter and the entertainment. :-D
Date: 02 Aug 2014 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 24
Wow, what a chapter. Great ending too. Looking forward to more chapters.
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thanks so much for the hot and steamy update!!!
Date: 02 Aug 2014 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it as always . When will ana say i love you to christian xxx
Date: 02 Aug 2014 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 24
Air balloon, what a nice touch. The elavator sex, so much emotion. I then thought there was another chapter but to my disappointment 25 is empty, please update soon!
Date: 20 Jul 2014 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow, wonderful updated chapter. That Carla is a real piece of work, almost worse then in the original story. I love how CG stood up for her despite feeling the same way in the beginning. The relationship is changing to something special, as it the one between Kate and Elliot. Thanks for the entertainment. :-D
Date: 19 Jul 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 23
Carla is horrible and was a brilliant chapter thank you xx
Date: 13 Jul 2014 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 22
Naughty sassy Ana strikes again!
Date: 08 Jul 2014 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 22
Yay another chapter. Thanks for that. Even though she says that they are not "dating", she seems to be falling also, like Ray said. Excellent update.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2014 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 22
Absolutely fantastic! Just love this story. Cannot wait to read more
Date: 07 Jul 2014 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 22
Brilliant loved it can't wait to read more xxx
Date: 29 Jun 2014 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 21
HMm it always ends up the same way them hooking up and having delicious sex:-)
Date: 29 Jun 2014 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 21
Good chapter again
Date: 28 Jun 2014 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 21
Should have known that Ray knew about them. Great chapter. Thanks for updating.
Date: 27 Jun 2014 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 21
So glad you are back can't believe ray know,s .looking forward to more xxxx
Date: 23 Jun 2014 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great to read this again......
Update real soon, please :))
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2014 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 20
I just love this story! And im so glad i decided to pop over from FF to see what else your writing! Out of all the Fifty Shades stories im reading right now this is by far my favorite! Thanks for the update!
Date: 16 Jun 2014 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 20
Well, well, Ana got her claws out and her back up. Claim your man girl
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm enjoying seeing Christian deal Ana and the fact that she is getting a bit jealous if another woman is hitting on Christian. He is happy with this insight. Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thanks for the chapter!!! Have a great vacation !
Date: 15 Jun 2014 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
So good to see this chapter, nice one, enjoyed as usual......
Date: 15 Jun 2014 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 20
Enjoy your hol hun i hope you have a good time . Really good chapter and i think ana is starting to have strong feelings for him xxxx
Date: 14 Jun 2014 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh boy I have a feeling that the next chapter is going to be hot hot hot hot!
Date: 14 Jun 2014 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 19
A bit of a cliff hanger. Thansk for the updated chapter
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2014 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 19
oh wow amazing loved it all, have a great holiday xxxx
Date: 13 Jun 2014 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
Lovely Jubbly, I hope Ana is getting Hooked. Have a nice holiday!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2014 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks Toni have a lovely holiday!!!! Dinner and Dancing ....yes!!!
Date: 12 Jun 2014 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 19
it was nice chapter you have here..i love it! a comfy one. the best of the best is underwater blowjob!! lol i'm looking forward for next chapter. take care. xo
Date: 12 Jun 2014 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love it!😊have a great holiday! Can't wait for chapter 20
Date: 12 Jun 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 19
Cg blushing what is going on and enjoy your holiday . When is ana going to realise that she wants a relationship with cg ? Xxx
Date: 11 Jun 2014 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 18
I am loving the story line. You have me hooked and wanting more.
Author's Response:
Great. I am glad you are enjoying it. There is plenty more to come yet. The adventure is just beginning.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2014 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 18
Glad I've rediscovered your story here. Loving your take on Ana. Please keep writing this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Always great reading feedback.
Date: 09 Jun 2014 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 18
Good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading :)
Date: 08 Jun 2014 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
Brilliant and if only I could win a million pounds xxx
Author's Response:
Yep, if only. Thanks for reading :) x
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 18
oh wow what a great chapter love reading this story you are such a good writer xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Author's Response:
Thanks Donna xx
Date: 08 Jun 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great chater :-D
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading :)
Date: 08 Jun 2014 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it like I usually do. You never disappoint! Keep up thegreat work.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind words :)
Date: 08 Jun 2014 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh I so want to go to Vegas. Nice chapter, can we have the next one now as well, want to see the world move......
Author's Response:
Vegas is Awesome :) thanks for reading :)
Date: 06 Jun 2014 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 17
Fantastic!😊
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 06 Jun 2014 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 17
Another great chapter, when are the going to confess to daddy Ray?
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 17
Toni
Your story is on FIRE!!!!! Great chapter!!!!
thank you,
Gwen
Author's Response:
Thanks Gwen :) x
Date: 06 Jun 2014 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 17
Well they seem to be quite monogamous... will it stay that way. And... when will Ray find out and.... what will be his reaction... hhhmmmm
Thanks for the entertainment.
Date: 05 Jun 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
Thank you for the update looking forward to more xx
Date: 02 Jun 2014 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thanks for the updated chapter. Maybe she can try the monogomous route...hhhmmm Iguess we will have to wait and see. I hope that her race goes well or she may ban CG from attending.
Date: 02 Jun 2014 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh boy Christian is so in love but Ana is not quite there yet. What will it take for her to be there and why is she so distant and cold in the love department?
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2014 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter!!! Loved it!!!
Gwen :)
Date: 02 Jun 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter Toni!!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2014 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love this story, glad it's got a new home and as for embedded images, that would be cool, I'm not really a Pinterest fan. I can't wait for race day to come around and Christians charms to eventually get Ana submitting to his will....(if you take it there, if you don't that's cool too!)
Carrie x
Date: 31 May 2014 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
It is so nice that CG is smitten, staying the night helping Ana to relax was perfect. Good luck for your race Ana!
Date: 31 May 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 16
Just fantadtic as always. The lemon is way hot....
Date: 31 May 2014 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 16
I can't wait till ana realises she wants a relationship I love ana and Christian together xx
Date: 29 May 2014 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 15
Well friends with benefits for now I guess.
Date: 29 May 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 14
Poor Christian he's falling in love with Ana but she's the one with committment issues. But what surprises me the most is that she is happy with multiple lovers at once. Hmm this story is getting very interesting.
Date: 28 May 2014 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
Well, he runs the risk of her finding someone else to love and him getting hurt. Yes we have all done it.
Careful CG :-(
Date: 28 May 2014 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 14
Again didn't expect to express his feelings this early, but there you have it. So he is on the otherside of what his subs usually wants with him "more".
Interesting
Date: 28 May 2014 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well, while is seems to all about sex with Ana, I thought that it would bother CG to see Elliot have sex with her and am shocked that he actually screwed Kate.
Very surprising.
Date: 28 May 2014 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 15
Think he is breaking her down...she wants him and is just realising it.. ;)
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 15
great chapter just wondering if their is any way to get email alert for when u update