Date: 25 Nov 2015 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 28
Glad bella stood up to him. Def a psychopath.
Date: 25 Nov 2015 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
Oh bellas pissed, never seen her this mad not even at peter. She would be super pissed if she knew what antonio did to edward. Can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2015 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 28
Ahh need more please
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2015 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 28
That went well.......
Date: 25 Nov 2015 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 28
He should be proud she is her fathers daughter lol
Date: 25 Nov 2015 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 28
wooooowwww.... I love badass Bella
Date: 25 Nov 2015 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 28
Great chapter. Good for Bella
Date: 25 Nov 2015 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 28
It has been so long since this story updated that I really have trouble following it or remembering who is who. I'll try to catch up before you post another chapter. I remember that I really liked it in the beginning and am trying to hold on to that. Why so many months between updates? It makes it very difficult for the readers.
Date: 20 Oct 2015 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 27
Cnt wait to see what happens next x
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2015 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 27
Who is coming to see her? Is it her father? Mother? His mother? More soon please!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2015 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 27
Uncle/Daddy dearest coming to visit
Date: 10 Oct 2015 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 27
Excellent chapter, as always. I enjoyed it a lot. I can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2015 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 27
OMG!!!!!!!! please do not leave us to long ...... LOVE LOVE YOUR STORY.. Can not wait to read more of your great book. Wonderful writing.
Date: 09 Oct 2015 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 08 Oct 2015 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 27
Can't wait to find out who it is.
Date: 08 Oct 2015 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 27
Why would someone be coming by to see her? Is it her real father? Is he in the mob too? Why will Edward not let her give him head?
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2015 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 27
More please
Date: 08 Oct 2015 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 27
Is it Bella's father? Thanks for updating this story.
Date: 08 Oct 2015 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 27
OMG it is her father right? So glad to see your update thanks so much.
Date: 08 Oct 2015 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 27
My guess is its her Dad? Always love the updates!
Date: 08 Oct 2015 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 27
These last two chapters have been stunning! Finally, Edward has opened up to Bella and Bella is relaxing a bit with him. The idea of Bella meeting her real father makes me a bit nervous though! Thank you for giving us such deep characters on such a rich canvas! It reminds me of a very classy gangster flick. Kudos!
Date: 08 Oct 2015 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 27
I wonder who it is? Maybe her dad? Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2015 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 27
Well, Bella has learned she'll pay to play. Edward was being a bit harsh with Bella. Ya gotta love Larissa.
Yikes!! She's not gonna be happy about her visitor. Wonder why Edward has no control over it?
Sherry
Date: 08 Oct 2015 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 27
hmm . . . her real father??
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2015 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 27
Is it her uncle aka father? Thanks for the update! I'm always so excited when you update!
Date: 08 Oct 2015 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 27
Damn he is bipolar who is coming to bug her now
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2015 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 26
Awww.....our big bad Mobward finally said it!!! Now, to get that bitch Elizabeth outta the way!!! I wanna know what was up with her and what all she said to Bella!!! More soon please!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2015 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 26
About time ..... Now this is a chapter worth waiting for I can't wait for more, maybe in his mind everything will fall into place now, hopefully he won't be to stressed out
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2015 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 26
thank you for the updacte...well done...I wonder what Ma is up to?
Date: 12 Aug 2015 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 26
They will be great. Edward just needs to get some sleep, so he can think clearly.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2015 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 26
Addicted to your story! I couldn't stop reading... it's 2:17am as I'm writing this review, i just couldn't but your story down.
Love it and I can't wait to read more!
Date: 12 Aug 2015 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loving this story. Can't believe Bella said that to Edward. Can't believe that he did what he did. Also can't wait to see what happens next. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 11 Aug 2015 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 10 Aug 2015 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 26
Finally! !!!!!!!!!Edward told her. I am glad that Edward has his uncle for some support.
Date: 10 Aug 2015 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 25
OOMGosh! !!!!!!!!! He did it.
Date: 10 Aug 2015 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 26
About time he figured that out lol
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2015 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 26
OMG, Loved this story and chapter csn't wait to read more. Great story.
Date: 09 Aug 2015 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 26
About time crustina loved loved it
Date: 09 Aug 2015 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 26
YESSS, he said it.
Now, the after, after the death of Ed, will be a huge mess. There is some cleaning to do before Edward could be the new don of the family.
Great chapter, thank you for sharing.
Date: 09 Aug 2015 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2015 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 26
He did it!!! Hip hip hooray!
Date: 09 Aug 2015 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 26
: ) thanks for the update it well worth the wait. READ YOU SOON ♥
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 26
A roller coaster of a chapter, but well worth each and every rise and fall. I kinda feel bad for Edward. He's struggling with a lot, more than I think he realized he'd have to when he decided to take out his father, the Don.
Will there be a ceremony to formally induct him in as Don?
With everything he's gone through, I'm glad he finally confessed his love to Bella. Together, they can do anything. She has stepped into the role of a Don's wife, effortlessly.
Sherry
Date: 09 Aug 2015 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 26
Sounds like Frankie D has signed his own death warrant. Wonder what his mother is up too now. Bella was a saint dealing with her and all the other stuff.
Date: 09 Aug 2015 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 26
Yay!!!! He told her. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 09 Aug 2015 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 26
Finally, he says the words. I think he really means it! Sorry I rarely comment, but this chapter moved me. I enjoy this story but don't want to say anything to offend you.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review, I really appreciate it. Don't worry about offending me. Trust me, it takes a lot. I understand that everyone has their own likes and dislikes and that Vegas may not be to everyone's taste. Nevertheless, I do like hearing peoples opinions both good and bad.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2015 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 26
Ahhhh excellent
Date: 20 Jul 2015 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 25
It had to be done.
Date: 18 Jul 2015 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 25
Ding dong SR dead
Date: 18 Jul 2015 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 25
Sometimes you just know when it's time to let go. : ) READ YOU SOON ♥
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2015 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 25
Finally! He did it! I'm glad he has his uncle on his side too! His dad definately had a plan with Stefan too. I don't think Edward is in the clear just yet. Thanks for all the recent updates.
Date: 17 Jul 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter
Date: 17 Jul 2015 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 25
oh dear. he did it! is Stephan going to be blamed? what comes next? i should have expected this in a mafia story....
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
I still think his dad set him up with stephan... Or could it be Edwards mother. I find it odd she was out of town when this all went down. Maybe his mom is with stephan. Ok Can't wait for next update.
Date: 17 Jul 2015 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved this chapter , but I gotta say I'm desperately waiting for the next chapter of firefly with baited breath .
Date: 17 Jul 2015 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 17 Jul 2015 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 25
In this particular case, Bella is being an unreasonable whiny biatch.
Yea time for Ed to go. Sounds like Stephan needs to also.
OMG Carlisle really?? the Fridge?? Hopefully Edward did get all the cameras disconnected.
Date: 10 Jul 2015 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 24
I am a little worried about Edward and this meeting with his dad and the others.
Date: 10 Jul 2015 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 24
He needs to make his father disappear and frame his mom, so he can be finished with them. He has Bella to love.
Date: 10 Jul 2015 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2015 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 24
Yes it's time to kill daddy!
Date: 09 Jul 2015 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 24
Yes, please kill this Carlisle off, slimy effer!
Date: 09 Jul 2015 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 24
Oh no Sr. Is trying to kill edward...i hope Sr. Dies. Where is the scene that edward says he should of let her go, im thinking next chapter. Loved this one.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2015 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 24
OMG ,Love. Your story can not wait to read more.Can't wait to find out who Bella's father is like.
Date: 09 Jul 2015 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 24
Bella has yet to realize that she is Edward's equal. She's just as thug as he is. : ) READ YOU SOON ♥
Date: 09 Jul 2015 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
Finally!!! Are we taking out the Mother too for extra credit?
Date: 08 Jul 2015 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 24
Oh wow whats his father up to that shaddy fucker
Date: 08 Jul 2015 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 24
Bella is very smart.
Date: 08 Jul 2015 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 24
Go Bella for calling Mike. All this false arrest will only hurt the cops if they did actually get something. Glad they didn't do a strip search. That would have been bad.
Date: 08 Jul 2015 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 24
seems like e and b are working well together ;)
Date: 08 Jul 2015 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter! I agree with them. Sounds like something bad is going to happen. Thank you
Date: 08 Jul 2015 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter.
Date: 08 Jul 2015 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 24
I hope Edward can take out his dad before his dad can hurt Bella or him. thanks for writing
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2015 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 24
Can't wait for more loved it
Date: 05 Jul 2015 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 23
This is such a good story. Thank you! I can't wait for the next chapter...
Date: 02 Jul 2015 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 23
Good story, but damn why a cliffie?
Date: 29 Jun 2015 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 23
Glad peter is gone .
Date: 29 Jun 2015 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
lol im loving it so far
Date: 29 Jun 2015 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 23
Glad Edward finally realized his feelings for Bella. Glad Peter got what he deserved.
Date: 29 Jun 2015 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 23
OMG!You left it there.Please update soon like you have been. LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2015 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 23
Shit, still has blood on him.
Date: 28 Jun 2015 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter update soon
Date: 28 Jun 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 23
Oh ow Cristina wow
Date: 28 Jun 2015 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 23
WOWOWOW ! Impressive chapter, I so like it ! Thank you for sharing.