[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2015 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm so glad Peter is dead! Hopefully he won't be in jail for long. Is edward's mother wanting a hit man for Bella?
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2015 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 23
Peter got what he deserved
Date: 28 Jun 2015 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter.
Date: 28 Jun 2015 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 23
yikes, hpefully there are no traces of blood that will get him in trouble
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2015 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 23
Love loved this story can not wait for more to read.
Date: 28 Jun 2015 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 23
Ooo bellas gonna freak when she finds out hes been arrested. Something tells me that when he was dancing with bella, his moment was realizing he loves bella
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2015 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 23
Ah holy shit need more
Date: 28 Jun 2015 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 28 Jun 2015 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 23
His mom and dad really need to be taken out. Arseholes. Wow Charlotte really has a death wish or something.
Date: 24 Jun 2015 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 22
I feel so bad for Bella.Your wring is so good that i honestly hurt for her. Thanks for updating so often. LOVE YA
Date: 23 Jun 2015 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wow was not expecting Uncle Charlie! XOXO,Cheri
Date: 22 Jun 2015 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 22
I can not believe that Renee dropped a bomb like that on Bella at Charlie 's funeral. Wrong just wrong. Where is Charlie's brother? I wonder if he has anything to do with Edward's business. Can't wait for more.
Date: 22 Jun 2015 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wow Renee is a real piece of work. Wonder if the real father is going to cause trouble now.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2015 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 22
Sorry, just getting through my stories today! So Charlie really wasn't her Dad, wonder if scum bucket Peter knew? No matter, he's a dead man walking too! Now Anthony, hum. .. can't wait for Bella to meet him! Loved the chapter
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2015 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 22
Her parents are just the worst! For as hard headed as Edward is Bella makes him just a wee bit squishy every once in a while.
Date: 21 Jun 2015 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 22
Please Edward, tell her you love her too!!!! Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 21 Jun 2015 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter.
Date: 21 Jun 2015 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 22
wow. just. messed. up.
Date: 21 Jun 2015 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wow Renee just keeps on getting nastyer . Bella was going to rip her apart. I am glad that Edward is still there for her even when he is pissed.
Date: 21 Jun 2015 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 22
So the family plot thickens.
Good Chapter. Love it.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 21 Jun 2015 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved the lemon...one day edwards gonna shock vella and say the L word back.
Date: 21 Jun 2015 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 22
Hmmmm! So the plot thickens. READ YOU SOON ♥ hopefully
Date: 21 Jun 2015 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 21 Jun 2015 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 21
Aww edwards in love even if he doesnt see it
Date: 21 Jun 2015 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 22
So Bella has a new game to play... its called
"Who's Your Daddy??!!" hosted by Renee Swan....
Poor Bella, Renee is a nasty P.O.S! Man..
Looking forward to more :D
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2015 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 22
Ahhhh keep me begging for more
Date: 19 Jun 2015 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 21
Bella can be so stupid.
Date: 18 Jun 2015 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love love love what you have written thus far!
how is it possible that you have written such a ruthless mobward yet
make us love him so much!
that is what makes you such a great writer..to make us love the man
who thinks nothing of killing and doing things illegal and someone
who has never loved! Of course, he does love Bella..he just hasn't realized it yet!
Cannot wait for you to continue!,
Date: 18 Jun 2015 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 21
Love this so much. Thank You for updating so soon. Love ya!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 18 Jun 2015 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 17 Jun 2015 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter, thank you for the update
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2015 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 21
Is this a trick from his father or from jake?
Date: 17 Jun 2015 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 21
Bella has got a huge case of Dumb Ass. I don't know whether she is gonna get over it, or not.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2015 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 21
Good update
Date: 16 Jun 2015 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 21
His sperm donor really need to die. WTF was the purpose of the sitdown? to follow E to find out where they are living?
Hmm wonder who set up the hospital thing
Date: 16 Jun 2015 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 21
Ok, what is Carlisle deal with these diamonds? What is deal with Edward not wanting Bella at the hospital? As always, you leave me wanting more.
Date: 16 Jun 2015 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter
Date: 16 Jun 2015 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 21
Edward is trying hard to be a bad guy but Bella is breaking him down. What is going on with her dad.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2015 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 21
Ahhh need more loved it
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2015 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 21
Mercy, I love this story
Date: 14 Jun 2015 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter please update soon!
Date: 14 Jun 2015 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow he is in shock but I think it is because he feels the same way love it
Date: 14 Jun 2015 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 19
He is going to take care of her so sweet
Date: 14 Jun 2015 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 18
I don't trust him either he is up to no good
Date: 13 Jun 2015 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
Good thing he is ok. What is his dad trying to do
Date: 13 Jun 2015 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 20
Glad that they are talking and getting along. Think E was right talking to Caroline and I think Bella does too.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2015 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
I love these long chapters! He is such a jerk but then sweet in the very next breath. It really is comical!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2015 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 20
This chapter was really good. I'm glad Bella's in love and Edward is too, even though he hasn't admitted it.
Date: 11 Jun 2015 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 20
How cute. Edward needs to warn her about the FBI. She needs to be prepared.
Date: 11 Jun 2015 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 20
That was so sweet!!!!! Thanks for updating so soon!
Date: 11 Jun 2015 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 20
So edward only gave her the wedding ban? Wonder if hes gonna give her the engagement ring by reasking her to marry him? He wears his wedding ring yet these hoes dont see it, grrrr. I hope he lets bella put on his new wedding ring and i hope she starts wearing hers everyday. So bella admitted she loves him, edward i dont think has admitted it to himself that he loves bella, hopefully her declaration knocks him out of his denial. I see the change in him, hes grown i kove it
Date: 10 Jun 2015 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 20
And I think that he is in love with her too, but he has to tell her now. Excellent chapter, as always. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 10 Jun 2015 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 20
this chapter was syrupy... LOVE IT!!!
Date: 10 Jun 2015 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 20
I hope he knows he is in love too!!! Please don't let him ruin it for Bella. Thanks for writing,
Lisa....Gail Cullen
Date: 10 Jun 2015 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh boy!!!!!!!!! She just made Edward speechless . I hope he does not screw up with his response to her.
Date: 10 Jun 2015 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 20
hope he doesn't freak out
Date: 10 Jun 2015 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter.
Date: 10 Jun 2015 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 20
: ) That was sweet of Edward and Bella finally realized how she felt about Edward. READ YOU SOON ♥
Date: 10 Jun 2015 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2015 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
Ahhhh cant believe you stopped it there
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2015 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 19
Love your story can not wait for more.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 07 Jun 2015 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 19
While I'd want to kill his sperm donor too, glad Carlisle got him to think.
Date: 06 Jun 2015 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
Carlisle will have to pay!!! I'm glad Edward is being loving toward Bella. I think she loves him too. Thanks for writing.
Lisa....Gail Cullen
Date: 06 Jun 2015 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thank you for not letting him rape her. Although he did touch her. For that the grabby hand bastard deserves to die a slow and extremely painful death. Maybe you can have Edward peel his skin off of him and pour salt on it, then leave him to die.
Still curious as to the identity of the guy that came to the door. Plz give us a hint next chapter.
What the heck is with Carlisle greedy ass and always scrounging around the people house for food. He needs to tell Rose to feed him. On second thought never mind that because she might shoot his ass.
Who doesn't love (Edward and Bella) great makeup sex :)
Thanks for putting my mind and ease. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Date: 06 Jun 2015 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thank you for this update! This was probably my favorite chapter so far!
Date: 06 Jun 2015 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter. Glad she told him what happened
Date: 06 Jun 2015 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm glad he listened to Carlisle. The time will come, but it's not now, while he's under investigation, I agree. Sex in the hotel room was friggin' hot!
Date: 06 Jun 2015 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm glad she's letting herself feel. READ YOU SOON ♥
Date: 06 Jun 2015 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
Phew so glad that moron didn't rape her passed out! Loved this chapter and their closeness it was heartbreaking and beautiful .
Date: 06 Jun 2015 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
Edward is learning to be caring. With Bella it is coming natural with him because he loves her.
I can not believe that his father did all that to Bella. I don'tblame Edward for being pissed. Can't wait to see what Edward plans for his father. Glad Carlisle talked him out of just going over there and shooting his ass.
Date: 06 Jun 2015 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter, Edward's father have to wait, but sooner or later, he has it come to him. Trying to rape his son's wife, he must have some death wish, or he is insane.
Thank you for sharing.
Date: 06 Jun 2015 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
So good. TY for updating.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2015 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 19
Cant wait for more loved it
Date: 06 Jun 2015 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 19
Awww bella sorta got used to the nicknames, at least during the heat of the moment. Loved the lemon :) and im glad bella told edward everything senior did and said, esp him threatening her. Im glad edward realized bellas changing him :) i love the character growth....another great chapter.
Date: 06 Jun 2015 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh no poor bella. I have faith that edward walked in before edwards dad could do anymore than take her clothes off. I hope she tells edward what he said and did and that he threatened her friends.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2015 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved the chapter! Yes kill your Father when the time is right! He's definitely crazy! Protect Bella now and making her feel secure is the right course of action!
I just wanted to add for all those haters out there of this complex story, move on to someone else's stories if you don't like this, but NO MORE BASHING!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2015 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
I cried when I read the part with Edward's perverted father and Bella. I hope he didn't rape her - she put up a good fight considering the circumstances. She better tell Edward and quick, although the way most stories go she will be afraid for her friends and not say anything right away, which will anger Edward even more when he finds out the truth. I hope he gets her to talk....he can pretty much read her and now she most definitely should trust Edward and tell him what she remembers. I think Edward's father planted Charlotte in his club to cause problems between Edward and Bella. He should do that background check on her ASAP. Great story by the way...my emotions were all over the place!!! Can't wait for update!!!
Date: 04 Jun 2015 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 18
That sick man. I hope Edward got there in time.
Date: 04 Jun 2015 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh that sick bastard
Date: 04 Jun 2015 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Holding my breath for the next chapter!
Date: 04 Jun 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh Edward was right about his father. Oh Bella!
Date: 04 Jun 2015 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 18
Please don't let him have done anything to her. Edward is going to kill his own father of she tells him.
Date: 04 Jun 2015 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 18
How sad for Bella that while she's being drugged and assaulted in the worse way her husband is watching his new stripper. My heart breaks for her. I hope she tells Edward and he realizes what he was doing at the time of his wifes rape or attempted rape. I have a feeling Charlotte is there for Peter or Charlie. Even if he doesn't cheat AGAIN she will never believe him and no one could blame her. Poor Bella should run far far away and never look back. I read this chapter 1st on ff and you received some nasty reviews where you was personally attacked. I'm sorry you have to deal with that when your not being paid to do this. I'll check back after a few more chapters are posted and see if this awful situation with Edward's dad is resolved. Please let Bella finally have someone in her corner that will love and protect her even in this case if its not Edward. After what she witnessed in his club I don't know how she can ever trust him. I know she can trust him with her safety but I doubt she can with her heart. This poor girl makes me want to cry and I don't know anyone who deserves love and acceptance more than Bella.
As far as the nasty reviews try to remember in order for someone to feel that strongly they lash out at you that they are so into your story that they take it personally. A good book is never all sunshine and roses. But PLEASE let Bella start having some happiness she's had enough grief for all the characters in this story. I look forward to see how you resolve this. As for myself I will certainly not tear you down personally when I'm not brave enough to write my own story.
I'm a huge fan of Carano and Sexilexi's mob stories but go through and read her a/n she also had people saying they wouldn't read anymore because they thought Edward was wanting to hook up with a stripper when all his friends was partying or others thinking Bella was in love with Aro. I'm sure they didn't leave the story after they saw they were predicting an outcome that didn't happen.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review Robin. I know I haven't created the most loving relationship for Edward and Bella but it's all apart of the story and I do promise they will have a happy ending.
Date: 03 Jun 2015 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
That is some cliffy! Hope she tells Edward what happened :(
Date: 03 Jun 2015 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 18
OMG! HE ROOFIED HER THEN RAPED HER!! PLZ DONT LEAVE US HANGING, UPDATE SOON PLZ I BEG OF YOU!!!!!! LOVE YOU