Date: 03 Jun 2015 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
what a creep! he roofied her! Edward was right about his dad....
Date: 03 Jun 2015 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 18
Ugh. You can't stop there. That's just cruel. Please update soon. I want to see Edward kill him so bad.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2015 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 18
I really want Bella to tell Edward what his father did. The man is so vile. I can't believe he is disrespecting Bella, and his son, this way. I really want justice for Bella.
Sherry
Date: 03 Jun 2015 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 18
He better not fucking rape her!!! Why the fuck is Bella even letting him touch her like what the fuck!! She needs to be with Edward and only Edward! Like the fact that she gives in way to easily is fucking bullshit! She needs to fight against this shit and learn that Edward isn't going to step out on her and I don't see why she is letting Edward's dad fucking rape her like it's no big fucking deal!
Date: 03 Jun 2015 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 18
I like you story and everything but in future if you're going to write a chapter that has anything to do with rape or sexual assault, please give us warning before hand. That way your readers will have the option of skipping or reading said chapter.
Date: 03 Jun 2015 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
ooooh Time for Daddy to die. Freakin rapist prick
Date: 03 Jun 2015 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 18
OK, Edward needs to get rid of the old man tonight.
Date: 03 Jun 2015 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
Edward really needs to shoot his 'father'. I hope Bella tells him as well as Carlisle & Ago so they can protect the girls
Date: 03 Jun 2015 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 18
WTF?? Shit I didn't expect that
Date: 03 Jun 2015 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 18
Greag chapter
Date: 03 Jun 2015 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 18
I hope that Edward came right on time and that Bella figures out soon that the best thing she could do his trust him and tell him everything.
Date: 03 Jun 2015 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 18
Ob my I didn't see that coming.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2015 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
Shit!!! Want to throw up now.
Date: 03 Jun 2015 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 18
hope she remembers and tells e
Date: 03 Jun 2015 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 18
Ugh seriously he raped her passed out I'm not liking this anymore
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2015 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 18
Need more
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2015 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 18
I would kill him
Date: 03 Jun 2015 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
I feel sick right now. If this is a story with rape in it please tell me so that I can stop reading this. I seriously can't deal.
Date: 03 Jun 2015 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 18
Please tell me Edward got home in time? That is really demented. I sure hope that she remembers and tells him after Daddy Dearest leaves. I cannot even stomach that. Edward better be taking out his Dad and Mother next!
Date: 03 Jun 2015 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 18
Really!!!!!! : (
Date: 03 Jun 2015 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
Please tell me he didn't rape Bella. Bella needs to remember what he did to her and tell Edward. I hope Edward kills his dad. Thanks for writing
Lisa....Gail Cullen
Date: 03 Jun 2015 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh my goodness he gave her a roofie! What a sick asshole. I hope Edward kills him.
Date: 02 Jun 2015 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 17
Edward needs to spend some time with Bella. They need to learn about each other.
Date: 02 Jun 2015 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 17
Bella was taking care of him so sweetly! His dad coming to her work is such a sleeve bag move.
Date: 01 Jun 2015 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
Ugh being sick sucks. His dad is a real piece of work
Date: 31 May 2015 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 17
I think Carlo is not here to dance or to see the girls dancing.
Great chapter, I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 31 May 2015 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 17
Something tells me new girl is gonna be trouble
Date: 31 May 2015 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
Helloooooo Carlo
Date: 31 May 2015 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
What is the deal with Edward's dad? Why did he send Edward out of town? Was it so he could talk to Bella? What did he really talk to Bella about? Who did Vicky really hire? CArlington is in for some trouble. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 31 May 2015 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter.
Date: 31 May 2015 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 17
The conversation with Edward and his father was hilarious! It almost made me laugh as hard as I did when Carlisle announced to Edward that he needed to take a dump. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Date: 31 May 2015 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
😍 Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2015 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 17
Ahhhh loved the update cant wait for more
Date: 30 May 2015 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 16
What is going on? Can't wait for your next update.
Date: 29 May 2015 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 16
Why cant except the fact that he loves Bella? Love it,more plz.
Date: 29 May 2015 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 16
READ YOU SOON ♥
Date: 28 May 2015 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 16
What his dad just wants him out of town. Edward is not willing to admit he is in love with Bella he will get there soon
Date: 28 May 2015 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
That was odd. Can't wait for more. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 28 May 2015 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
No wonder he has anger issues. Why was she so at ease or was that just where he mind goes when she is around danger
Date: 28 May 2015 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 16
Edward's father is up to something against his son, but what exactly ? Does he wants Edward arrested ? Or take Bella for himself ?
Great chapter, thank you for the update.
Date: 28 May 2015 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 16
Of course he dismissed the counselor. Don't trust his Dad either.
Date: 28 May 2015 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 28 May 2015 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
Going to see the therapist was a great idea! Now if he would only listen to her & give Bella some daddy time!
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2015 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ahhh more please
Date: 28 May 2015 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
She is afraid to make the wrong move
Date: 28 May 2015 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 13
She needs help lots of counceling. Edward means what he is saying but man he needs to work on his temper WOW
Date: 28 May 2015 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 12
she has been through hell and Peter is going to die
Date: 27 May 2015 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 15
They're both from messed up families. It is no wonder that Edward and Bella don't know how to handle a relationship very well.
Date: 27 May 2015 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 15
Wait a minute, Edward's dad slept with his wife's sister and got her pregnant And she had Edward? ?? Wow, Edward really does have a fucked up family.
Date: 27 May 2015 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 15
Please explain why Bella was so at ease with Edward's Dad
Date: 27 May 2015 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh this is amazing
Date: 27 May 2015 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 15
: )READ YOU SOON.
Date: 27 May 2015 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 15
Seems Bella could have bonded with dear old dad if he wasn't an abuser. I love that Edward is so good at protecting her or at least trying too. Thanks for all these updates!!!!
Date: 27 May 2015 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter. I love that his instinct is to protect her from the violence.
Date: 27 May 2015 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 15
wow His family is a real piece of work.
Date: 27 May 2015 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow! I can't believe Edward's Dad hit his wife like that in front of his new daughter in law; even though she was kind of asking for it. I hope that Bella doesn't fear Edward even more after seeing that.
Date: 27 May 2015 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 14
hmm Dinner with Mommy Dearest. This ought to be good. Child locks? Really?!?!
Date: 27 May 2015 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 14
I have to laugh at Bella and Edward's mom. Lol. Who is goon number 2? They are both starting to fall for each other. But neither one of them know how to handle their feelings.
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2015 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 15
Ahhh keep me addicted
Date: 26 May 2015 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 14
it's good to have Bella's POV. she's falling for him. how could she not? he's the ultimate bad boy. isn't that what every girl wants? this one does. good story. can't wait to see the fireworks at dinner.....
Date: 26 May 2015 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 26 May 2015 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter
Date: 26 May 2015 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
It always makes me laugh how combative she is.
Date: 26 May 2015 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 14
Looking forward to dinner at the parents.
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2015 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 14
It's about time Bella realizes she has feelings for Edward. So he's finally taking the wife to dinner with his mommy~auntie? Maybe he'll put her i her place once and for all. READ YOU SOON ♥
Date: 26 May 2015 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 14
I think both of them are falling in love with each other. I can't wait for the next update. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 26 May 2015 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 14
I love these crazy kids! Good to read a BPOV.
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2015 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 14
Ahhhh need more loved it
Date: 25 May 2015 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
Poor Bella...but she'll get over it with her man to help i'm sure....
Thanks for the chapter! T
Date: 21 May 2015 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 13
Of course Peter needs to die but Bella ' s father needs to be killed as well in my opinion. Any father who treats their child that way doesn't deserve to continue to breath.
Date: 20 May 2015 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 13
I didn't see that one coming. Great chapter, as always. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 20 May 2015 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 13
Something needs to be done with both Peter and Charlie. They are horrible people. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 20 May 2015 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 20 May 2015 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 13
I am so glad that Bella told Edward her story.
Date: 20 May 2015 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
what Bella went through was just awful. the betrayal by her own father must have hurt worse, though. he was supposed to protect and love his daughter! how can she ever learn to trust Edward? thanks for the chapter!
Date: 20 May 2015 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 13
Yea Peter needs to be taken out. I'm with Rose. Bella needs to let people help her.
Date: 20 May 2015 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
That SOB Peter! He needs a special cocktail of fresh squeezed lemon juice(with the pulp), Cheyenne pepper, salt, and black pepper distributed evenly over the open wounds that i would carve on his useless penis. I would make sure that the mixture gets inside of his pee-hole as well and let it get infected.
Let me know if you need any ideas for this aholes torture scene. I've got plenty. Lolololol
By the way, this was a great chapter!
Date: 20 May 2015 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
Peter and Charlie are dead. It was much worse for Bella than I expected. I'm glad she opened up.
Date: 20 May 2015 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
I hope he men's it Bella has been thru to much, but can Edward really change that much?