Date: 24 Nov 2014 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
Poor bella, she catches him cheating her (which in my eyes sucking another womens tits and getting a blow job by another women is cheating). How would he feel if she was getting licked by another man? I wanna smack edward for bella. He is full of condirdictions, he doesnt have feelings for her yet her wont divorce her, poor guy doesnt realize his soul needs her. I cant wait till bella makes him pay. Is it wrong that I sorta hope she gives him a taste of his own medicine.
Date: 24 Nov 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 8
All I can say, is as soon as he turns his back I would be gone and anything I can take with me guns or money and leave. Die my hair cut it off wear mens clothes and be gone.. No Edward, No charlie, No Peter.
Date: 13 Nov 2014 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
Now that's a cliffhanger! Great action and chapter. I have to wonder at this point if Bella doesn't see Edward as the lesser of two evils. The other evil being her father. One way or another, he has just put a tremendous amount of faith in her. Thanks for the update!! I love the story and Edward's inner monologue is a riot at times!
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2014 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ah, another fabulous chapter! Thanks again for posting! Love this plot!
Date: 13 Nov 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
Bella protected edward :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2014 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 7
Shocked that she went ahead and buried the body!
I love that she called him a bitch!
Date: 12 Nov 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 7
He just doesn't know what to do with her;)
Date: 12 Nov 2014 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
loved this chapter
i think bella knows who he is and will be ok about it even help him
well done
Date: 12 Nov 2014 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 7
I cannot form a proper response to this chapter because I went on one heck of a roller coaster ride of emotions. First, I thought that Bella was being a bit of a bitch. She got herself in this marriage so she should take responsibility for her actions. Then he goes and scares her straight and I am like, what a monster. But then I thought, well it worked. But the end went so fast and their emotions were not explained so I am left wondering if there was a truce or what they think.
Date: 12 Nov 2014 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 12 Nov 2014 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
Bella is all in it seems. Thanks for this update! I was sooo happy to see it!
Date: 12 Nov 2014 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 7
why does he think she'll do what he told her to... what precedence does he have for hoping that... lol. thx for the update.
Date: 12 Nov 2014 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 7
that breaking into homes at night. I hate that. If you need to arrest people why not as they get up in Daylight?
Date: 12 Nov 2014 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 6
well he can not hide this much longer.. It will come out. She needs to Meet Google.
Date: 12 Nov 2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
hmmm . . . wonder what b is thinking
Date: 12 Nov 2014 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 7
you're back with a vengence! this is no nice guy Edward. he's a real bad guy and I think Bella loves it! so why are the cops arresting him? i bet she already gets who he really is....
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
Dang... did daddy decided to be an ass. I admire bella more for what she did. I hope you can update again soon.
Date: 12 Nov 2014 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
Ooooo ok. So she is pissed at Edward but she buried a body for him. Edward was pissed at her then was horny as hell because she buried a body so he would not get in trouble. So he fucked her on the hood of the car. Now his house is getting raided. Can't wait to see what else is going to happen. Loving this story.
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 7
Have we already learned who Mike is? Cuz I forgot!
Date: 12 Nov 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 7
Can't blame her for being a biatch to him.
Date: 27 Oct 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 6
Can't wait for more!
Date: 29 Sep 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
PLEASE BE PROMPT WITH POSTING I CAN'T WAIT!!!!! READ YOU SOON.
Date: 25 Sep 2014 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 6
Tempestuous
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
To continue (see FF.net review) Great chapter, really like the way you have drawn Charlie, he is a dick, "I think he has every right considering his fiancé spent a weekend in Vegas with her tramp friends and came back with a husband.", shes married, how can she be Peter's fiancé.
Date: 24 Sep 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 6
I see she went from one controlling asshole to another. This Edward is not so likable but we'll see how things go before I completely write him off. I think Bella is stubborn enough to find out who he really is for herself. Then we'll see what happens. It's a very entertaining story!
Date: 24 Sep 2014 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 6
Charlie is a prick and there is no way he will be able to keep who he is a seceret for long.
Date: 24 Sep 2014 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
He can't let her in the dark forever, she will find who he is and what he does fast.
Bella's father is a prick, seriously.
Good chapter, as always, thank you.
Date: 24 Sep 2014 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
She a bitch???? Maybe if he were'nt a dick, she wouldn't be a bitch. hmm Charlie sounds like a real piece of work. E is an idiot if he thinks she's not going to find out who and what she is.
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2014 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love this story.can not wait for more.
Date: 24 Sep 2014 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
Just another day the office. Haha! I love that Edward is this big bad crime boss but all of his men back talk him consistently! Then you add Bella to that mix & it is constant turmoil. Very funny & steamy!
Date: 24 Sep 2014 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
How in the world does he except her to not find out. All she has to do is Google him. Are ask her father. Charlie surprised me the way he acted toward Bella. Wow Bella was engaged. Oops.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great Mobward !!!
Edward is so fierce and hot ... Bella is also a good match for him.
I loved it.
Date: 09 Sep 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
Surprising twist
Date: 06 Sep 2014 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 5
ok the daddy thing is just creepy. And of course she's not acting like a wife.....she doesn't want to be married moron
Date: 05 Sep 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
Hot and steamy! Thank you!!!! Although Edward is toying with Bella and the Daddy - thing, I can almost put money on the fact that if he ever finds the video of Charlie beating Bella, or maybe just because he knows, he will see to it that Charlie pays....big time for hurting her!!! He has a code. Loose yes,but a code nonetheless. I predict great chemistry and more for these two. Thanks for all your hard work! I look forward to your update!
Date: 05 Sep 2014 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow! I was not expecting that. Great chap
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2014 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
Excellent update. I want these two to get along.
Date: 04 Sep 2014 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love Edwards inner monologs. They make him so much more funny without him actually seeing it. I also like that you make Bella a strong character that matches Edward. Thank you for your update :)
Date: 04 Sep 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
So good, and hot and sexy, thank you so much for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2014 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love your story can't wait for more.
Date: 04 Sep 2014 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well Edward got what he wanted in the end. I did not see the whole "Daddy" thing coming.
Date: 04 Sep 2014 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
wow go edward
great chapter well done
Date: 04 Sep 2014 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
He's found the magic key to unlocking Isabella!
Date: 04 Sep 2014 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
He could be my daddy lol. So Charlie is a bad cop??
Date: 04 Sep 2014 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
So in the end he gets everything he wants! So deliciously cocky! Thanks for the update!
Date: 04 Sep 2014 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 4
well that chapter ended better.
Date: 04 Sep 2014 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 5
I do not know why he wants to stay married so bad, but it is a bit endearing. I also think it is hilarious what he was thinking while the Daddy business spilled from his mouth.
Date: 04 Sep 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
That was hot not gonna lie...but i think with charlie and her. Ex using her as a punching bag, she does not need another man discipling her. Is daddward here to stay (its hot)? Or will bella be pissed and fight it?
Date: 04 Sep 2014 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 5
ooh some daddy kink! I like it...
Date: 02 Sep 2014 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
More updates please. Love this :)
Date: 18 Aug 2014 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
love this story!!!! cant wait to read more. i hope when edward kills peter,he shoves his gun up his ass and pulls the trigger.and maybe her father too!!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2014 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
All right. Together again.
Date: 12 Aug 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 3
Hmmmm I dont like when they are not cannon couples. :(
Date: 12 Aug 2014 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hmmmm I cant wait til he catches her.lol
Date: 12 Aug 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
Men! LOL First they dont want to get married then bam. They are married. LOL. Bella doesn't seem too happy though.
Date: 08 Aug 2014 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 4
She is so confused .
Date: 07 Aug 2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well it looks like Bella could warm up to her situation even if it is to only piss her ex or daddy off.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2014 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well that ended well!!!!
Date: 06 Aug 2014 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 4
wow he really is an asshole, but you know what? i'm loving his caveman tactics anyway! hmmmm..... this looks like it might be a match made in heaven! ...or hell! very entertaining!
Date: 06 Aug 2014 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am thinking that it was Bella's father on the phone. Thanks for the update. Can't wait for more.
Date: 06 Aug 2014 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 4
Aaah! The mood swings! Edward certainly has his hands full, and Bella's background sounds painful. Maybe she needs someone who won't use her and throw her away. Edward doesn't seem the type to do that toa woman like Bella. I'm looking forward to reading more! Thanks for all your hard work!
Date: 06 Aug 2014 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! IT'S TORTURE WAITING. READ YOU SOON.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2014 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
wow seemed her father pushed her into edwards arms
Date: 06 Aug 2014 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love this story so far & can't wait to see what kind of trouble these two get in to. :)
Date: 06 Aug 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
He needs to stop f'ing drunk bella. Wonder who called Mummy or Daddy?
Date: 24 Jul 2014 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
OMGosh, what is Alice doing at Edward's naked on the stairs? ???
Can't wait to find out more about Peters story.
Date: 20 Jul 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
Update soon, please.
Date: 11 Jul 2014 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow what a way to say welcome home lol. Alice must be a peice of work lol. Edward has his work cut out for him lol
Date: 11 Jul 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 2
He was not perpared for that lol she is a fire ball and he likes it.
Date: 11 Jul 2014 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds great Bella is shiting herself poor thing
Date: 11 Jul 2014 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loving it, More Please :)
Date: 11 Jul 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow-- I love how action-packed your chapters are! Fantastic story! Can't wait for more! :)
Date: 10 Jul 2014 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
MORE PLZ!!!!!!!! I BEG OF YOU!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2014 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
Edward is my kind of Mobward, cold and mean!
He will remember the words of Alec now that he has found something he wants, but love will soften your heart?
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2014 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
okay this is new, alice waiting for edward naked. can't wait
man peter is a big prick and needs to be dealt with and fast,
love this group they are awesome
Date: 10 Jul 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow!
Will Bella ever come around? And who/what is Alice to Edward?
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh dear Lord, this is good