Date: 10 Jul 2014 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
And the plot thickens! I love all the mix matched couples.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hahahahaahahahaha!!!! Great , just great.
Date: 09 Jul 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
Update soon please!!!
Date: 09 Jul 2014 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oops!
awesome update, thank you.
Date: 09 Jul 2014 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love Carlisle and Rose. Never a dull moment with these two in the same space. She threatens him with a black eye to go with his bloodied nose, and all he took away from the threat is that she call him a "pretty boy." DWL.
One of my many favourite lines from this chapter...Edward "My past experience with those who fight back, they usually end up in the boot and not in the passenger's seat."
Oh E (shakes head) you "kidnap" your wife from her crazy ex, only to bring her home to what is probably your crazy ex tsk tsk. Can't wait to hear you explain your ass out of this one. Good luck with that. Hopefully Bella doesn't make a run for it again.
p.s
plz don't keep us waiting too long (insert pout face) Love it as usual :)
Date: 09 Jul 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
Well he knows about Alice obviously she must be his Fbuddy or gf. Bella does not want him so annulment and let her go like she asked. If Peter beats her to death she will have to accept she could not stop him.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2014 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
Omg,love your story so. Far can't wait for more.love this Bella .
Date: 09 Jul 2014 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
I loved the ending on this chapter! After so much intense drama up to now, the humor in the end here simply cracked me up! Kudos on that! I look forward to finding out about Bella's life and why she has such a problem with nicknames and being touched. I also look forward to what's coming!
Date: 09 Jul 2014 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
oh oh.....naked Alice, huh? guess she is not his sister in this story! I guess Peter doesn't know who Edward is, I mean that he is obviously connected. Is he the boss? So many questions I have, but when I ask, I know that I need to keep reading to get them answered. It is my process to write them out here......so, may I ask how often you update this story?
Date: 09 Jul 2014 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 2
So they all live in NY, huh? Great! Can't wait to see what comes next. Where is Emmett??
Date: 09 Jul 2014 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
A lot of humour in this chapter, it's a good one, thank you for sharing.
Date: 09 Jul 2014 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good opening chapter! Caught my attention. Edward seems to be a sociopath, albeit a very attractive and sexy one! I'm glad he had Maria suck Carlisle's cock, and not his, before he killed her. He looks like he will have his hands full trying to deal with Bella!
I'm just wondering why your spelling of his last name is Mason and not the usual Masen as it is in most other stories. No criticism, just curiosity.
Date: 09 Jul 2014 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow you are mixing up the couples huh. LOVE Rose giving Carlisle all sort of crap. Lemme guess Peter works with here Father?
Date: 09 Jul 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love B not taking any shit from them. Rose too. LOL
Date: 09 Jul 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
LOL another drunk Vegas wedding.
Date: 09 Jul 2014 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait for more Eddie Eddie eddie
Date: 17 Jun 2014 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
So it seems Bella isn't close with her dad. Will Edward being in the mob make her happy bc it will make Daddy mad?
Date: 17 Jun 2014 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well, I can't wait to find out more.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2014 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hilarious. I am so looking for more.
Date: 17 Jun 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
Update please!!!
Date: 16 Jun 2014 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
k Im in love. Update quickly please?
Date: 16 Jun 2014 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm going to like this story :)
Date: 15 Jun 2014 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 2
Lovin this story so far! Please update soon!!
Date: 15 Jun 2014 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
OMGosh! !!! This is hilarious! !!!!!!! So are Rose and Carlisle getting together in this story? ? Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2014 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 2
oh god they are all like oil and water
they are a hoot and i love it all
i can't wait to find out more about bella and her dad. its seems they are estranged but yet she is using him as her get out of jail card with edward
man this story is gonna be fun. look forward to more.
love it, thank you
Date: 14 Jun 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 2
Bella and Edward here should be a real kick in the pants! They both talk, but neither one wants to listen. I also have a feeling that Bella's father is not in contact with her. A falling out maybe? I love the acerbic humor and the fiction and look forward to more!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2014 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
These guys are a riot.....Edward's met his match only for her to run off in a taxi and leave him lol. But not very smart thinking on Bella's part though. If she really wants that annulment, then she'll have to go right back into the lion's den.
Wonder what's going on between Bella and Charlie, something seems off. Hope you update soon. Loved it as usual.
Date: 14 Jun 2014 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is going to be great! I can't wait for the next update.
Date: 14 Jun 2014 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 2
I enjoy this second chapter a lot. It's funny and light. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 14 Jun 2014 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
Let the games begin - yeah!
Date: 14 Jun 2014 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well she hates him, but she married him?
Date: 14 Jun 2014 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
yes let the games begin.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2014 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
So good, thanks for the chapter
Date: 14 Jun 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
LOVE.LOVE. LOVE. THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Jun 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 2
great chapter can't wait for more.
Date: 14 Jun 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 2
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 2
I am loving this so far!
Date: 12 Jun 2014 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
LOVE IT! MORE PLZ!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2014 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it....... Keep it coming :)
Date: 06 Jun 2014 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great storyline! Can't wait for your next update! :-)
Date: 06 Jun 2014 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
OOOhhh. Sounds like a very good start to a very interesting story. Edward sounds a little too mean though. It felt like he was going into abusive terrirtory. But it was good for the most part. Keep on writing, and I'll keep on reading.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2014 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh goodness the bad man and the cop
bella what did you get yourself into
look forward to more
Date: 04 Jun 2014 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my, this is going to be soooo good! You write the best controlling Edwards & always so graphic! I love how you started the story out too. The stuff with Carlisle and them watching was very surprising! I'm excited to see where you take this story!
Date: 03 Jun 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good start, I always like some good Mobward. I will follow your fiction with pleasure. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 02 Jun 2014 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love love love it!!! Absolutely fantastic!! Cannot wait for more!! :)
Date: 01 Jun 2014 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please post soon have to know what happens
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2014 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please tell me you are updating soon :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2014 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, heck! This is looks so good! I love your writing and your wonderful imagination! Looking forward to hearing more from you! Again, this is wonderful.
Date: 01 Jun 2014 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
LOOOOOOVVVVEEEEE IT! Please continue!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2014 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
After Alec's warning I thought he'd be running from her. Good job. You surprised me.
Date: 01 Jun 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting do far.
Date: 01 Jun 2014 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is getting good!
Date: 31 May 2014 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is really good. Please update soon
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2014 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
You, have a gift in writing that I enjoy; however, just wish you could up date sooner. ;) tell next time...
Date: 31 May 2014 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Bella all worried about being married to a stranger. Bit Charlie will be more angery Bella a tramp.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2014 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the start!!
Date: 31 May 2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this! Please keep posting! I'm anxious to see how this relationship works and how there other lives affect it. Again, marvelous in its tail of character. Thanks for all your hard work!
Date: 31 May 2014 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
You always suck me in with your amazing stories. Great beginning.
Date: 31 May 2014 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Impulsive much.
Well this is so damned fabulous I just want to read it again. I hope you can update soon. Awesome!
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2014 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like the story.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2014 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
loved this first chapter. Looking forward to reading this story
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2014 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
i can't wait to read more of this great start
Date: 31 May 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
well what a start.
Date: 31 May 2014 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow...this is going to be bery interesting! Great job...thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2014 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
FUCK IS RIGHT!!!!! (LOL) GREAT START I HOPE YOU UPDATE FREQUENTLY. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 31 May 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds like Edward and Bella are in for a fun ride. Lol!!!!!! Edward may have met his match. Lol
I am a little worried about Bella in this story. With what Alec said about loving someone and watching them die. Hope she does not die in this story.
Hope you update soon.
Date: 31 May 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it! Can't wait to read more!! How often will you be updating this story?
Date: 31 May 2014 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
well this is off to a fantastic start, Edward is a little rough around the edges and needs to watch how he talks to her, you will never win her over with abuse, you must be romantic
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ha! That is priceless. Great first chapter.