Date: 20 Aug 2015 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
really cool o/s ;) i love it when edward is 'masen' but you had bella call him cullen twice when she was the cullen? i loved the pictures ;) thanks for sharing ;D
Date: 28 Jul 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really love your story's and pics sexy steamy ...twice you called Edward Mr Cullen instead of Mason.
Date: 23 Jun 2014 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great little story.
Date: 23 Jun 2014 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a wonderful story, but I'm not sure if it's a mistake or meant to be, Isabella called Edward Mr. Cullen. Here: "So Mr. Cullen you've been hiding in your home all of this time?" and here: "Okay then Mr. Cullen, take me to dance," she said her hand extended.
And it's not "cummed" but came, if I'm right. English is not my mother language but I read stories in English for about 4 years now. I don't want to criticize, but help. I hope that's ok
I can't contact you, so it's the only way I know.
Great story again and really nice pics ;)