Date: 13 Feb 2021 3:01 AM Title: Chapter-19: Epilogue: The Best Kind of Perfection
Another great one! You always take us on such an amazing journey with your words. I look forward to reading more from you.
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2015 10:33 PM Title: Outtake: Man of The House
i LOVED these characters in this little story ;) including this o/t ;) thanks for sharing it on here with us ;D
Author's Response:
Thank you. They are pretty close to my heart too. :')
Thanks for reading.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 24 Jan 2015 5:46 AM Title: Outtake: Man of The House
That was so nice and so sweet, thank you for sharing it with us!
Date: 24 Jan 2015 5:39 AM Title: Chapter-19: Epilogue: The Best Kind of Perfection
It sounds like everyone is getting that wonderful happy ever after, especially Bella and Edward! This was great story, having all the elements, action, adventure, romance, danger and HEA! You can't beat a deal like that!
Author's Response:
Aww ... thanks. :D
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks you for reading.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 24 Jan 2015 5:29 AM Title: Chapter-18: Light Up My World
Bella's mom and Edward's parents were pretty happy about them finding each other! I feel as they do and will miss "Carlise", the friendly ET! I thought it was neat that he learned a few things from us humans while he was here!
Date: 24 Jan 2015 5:14 AM Title: Chapter-17: When The Levee Breaks
Neatly and humanely finished, too! Did a tiny dance over what happened to Jerkob and Newton!
Date: 24 Jan 2015 4:00 AM Title: Chapter-16: An Exchange
Black is the slimiest, although Newto is a fast second! I'm sure glad Carlisle/Tanya showed up to help! I think Rosalie is about to rescue her son!
Date: 24 Jan 2015 2:59 AM Title: Chapter-15: Black Hearts and Misplaced Trusts
As soon as I read the POV, I knew it was her Uncle Mike! The bastard killed her father and now wants to kill her! What she ought to do to him isn't going to bother my peace of mind at all!
Date: 24 Jan 2015 2:45 AM Title: Chapter-14: A Light In The Darkness
Not only kick Jerkob's ass, but punch out his lights, too! How someone can be so stupid and greedy is beyond me!
Date: 24 Jan 2015 2:35 AM Title: Chapter-13: Where All Roads Converge
Jasper is getting on board with Edward and Bella. Having seen Alice again probably doesn't hurt, either! Finding his twin sister would be a clue, also!
Date: 24 Jan 2015 12:52 AM Title: Chapter-12: The One That Got Away
Obviously Jasper and Alice have a history and we are about to hear it! ET Carlisle has been a big help and so has Alice!
Date: 24 Jan 2015 12:39 AM Title: Chapter-11: Losing Control and Finding Myself
This should be fun, as Edward meets Bella's best friend. They better come up with a plan to derail Jerkob and his minions. They are still in danger, so I hope "Carlisle" has some advice to get them safe!
Date: 24 Jan 2015 12:14 AM Title: Chapter-10: Cranking Up The Heat
Thanks to "Carlisle's" help they got out, now they need to get away and not get killed!
Date: 24 Jan 2015 12:03 AM Title: Chapter-9: The First Ray of Light
I'm impressed by their ingenuity at escaping from their temporary prison! I also really like the growing feelings between them!
Date: 23 Jan 2015 11:47 PM Title: Chapter-8: Secrets Revealed
Brave words, Miss Swan, but what the hell do you think you can do against these assholes? No battery in your phone and "Carlisle" has no way to contact you, probably no one knows where you are or that you're in danger! Jake will kill them without breaking a sweat!
Date: 23 Jan 2015 11:32 PM Title: Chapter-7: Black Hole
Now the son-of-a-bitch has gotten his grubby hands on both Bella and Edward! This definitely not a good thing!
Date: 23 Jan 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter-6: A Tangled Mess Of Truth And Lies
Trust Jakcob Black to screw up everything, royally! It's good that there may be a little help from the good aliens, in countering the bad ones.
Date: 23 Jan 2015 10:58 PM Title: Chapter-5: Teacher’s Pet
So, we meet, Emmett, Jasper and Rose, though briefly. As they say, the plot thickens! I would love to get a peek at the file Captain Whitlock just read!
Date: 23 Jan 2015 10:47 PM Title: Chapter-4: The Phone Call
Ooh, somethjing spooky has taken over Carlisle, the computer program one! I sure don't care much for Jacob Black threatening Bella, either! Now Edward's going to help Bella investigate, so this should be really interesting!
Date: 23 Jan 2015 9:11 PM Title: Chapter-3: The Crazy Scientist
Though Bella was probably disappointed by Edward's refusal to help with her theory, it didn't disuade her much. Now I'm curious as to what causes him to call her, when she thought he wouldn't bother!
Date: 23 Jan 2015 8:36 PM Title: Chapter-2: The Truth Junkie
Those jerks she works with have got to be put in their place! I can just imagine how Bella will gloat when she finds proof of her theory. Hope she takes care to keep safe as it could be dangerous to mess with the slimy aliens, for sure!
Date: 23 Jan 2015 8:14 PM Title: Chapter-1: Prologue
Hey, no worries! I love slimy things from outer space taking over the bodies of criminals, NOT! This is going to be a lot of fun to read, I can tell!
Date: 12 Jan 2015 4:03 AM Title: Outtake: Man of The House
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[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2015 3:44 PM Title: Outtake: Man of The House
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Date: 31 Dec 2014 2:29 AM Title: Chapter-19: Epilogue: The Best Kind of Perfection
This was fun. Thank you
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2014 6:27 PM Title: Chapter-19: Epilogue: The Best Kind of Perfection
:) loved this story. Looking forward to reading your new one. Happy New Year to you too
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter-18: Light Up My World
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[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2014 7:36 PM Title: Chapter-17: When The Levee Breaks
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Date: 16 Dec 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter-15: Black Hearts and Misplaced Trusts
No way!! Seriously ?!
Author's Response:
Yeah. *grins evilly*
I bet you didn't see that one coming. ;)
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2014 6:30 PM Title: Chapter-15: Black Hearts and Misplaced Trusts
poor Bella
Author's Response:
I know. *sighs*
Thanks for reading.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter-14: A Light In The Darkness
definitely want to kick Jerkob's ass!!!
Author's Response:
Me too! ;)
Thanks for reading.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:37 PM Title: Chapter-14: A Light In The Darkness
this is the first time i've read of this story and i have to say i'm enjoying it. :)
Author's Response:
Aww ... thank you so much.
I hope you enjoy it to the end.
Thanks for reading.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2014 5:35 AM Title: Chapter-2: The Truth Junkie
Aww, poor Bella. So much for keeping your mind open to anything that could happen! Jerks! :( Don't mind them, Bella. You keep your nose on the trail, gumshoe!
:D
Author's Response:
I'm guessing you like it so far? ;)
Thanks for reviewing.
The next chapter should be up on next Friday.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2014 5:12 AM Title: Chapter-1: Prologue
Ha ha! Wow, aliens? Definitely different type of story in comparison to Over the Counter! Cool!
How can body snatchers NOT be creepy? LOL
Author's Response:
Yeah...I decided to try a different track for a change. :P
Thanks for taking this ride with me. :D
Take care.
Ann