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Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2015 7:15 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

They're so adorable!  I love that they're able to just be with each other and enjoy the time those if us with children can tell you goes by WAY TOO QICKLY!!!  Looking forward to the next chapter. 

 

Hope your our husband is doing well!  Family always comes first but I'll always be waiting for your next post when life and family afford you the time to write!

sincerely,

virginia

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 6:58 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen

Love a man that is not afraid to show he has a women lol.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 1:02 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 12:34 AM Title: Prologue

I <3 you! thankyou for writing this sequel I just finished reding COACG for the 3rd time i love it so much looking forward to monday have a great weekend

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 10:37 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

II AM so sorry for all of the woos you and your family are experiencing.   

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 10:19 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 7:35 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

:)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 7:23 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

Papparazzi should be outlawed.  Have no sympathy for them ever/at all.  

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2015 5:55 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen

Such a sweet little family. They seem to be handling the changes in their lives very calmly.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2014 10:21 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen

He is such a good dad and Bella is super mom lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2014 8:03 AM Title: Chapter Tweleve

She was amazing and I do like the name Caleb so cool.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2014 6:12 AM Title: Chapter Ten

Matthew so that way his nick name would be MAC.

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2014 5:04 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen

; )

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2014 5:53 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen

To cut or not to cut......age old discussion. Like father, like son. That made the decision a lot easier.

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen

Lovin' it as always!!!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2014 10:31 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen

yea paps are just pathetic.   Calling them press or media is like calling a drug dealer a pharmacist.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen

:)  Happy Christmas and New Year to you too

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2014 11:21 AM Title: Chapter Tweleve

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2014 6:37 PM Title: Chapter Tweleve

; ) my twins share a bday with Caleb 

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter Tweleve

Oh wow 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2014 10:17 PM Title: Chapter Tweleve

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2014 5:15 PM Title: Chapter Tweleve

:):)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2014 3:21 PM Title: Chapter Tweleve

Edward was indeed a mess during the days events. I chuckled at his thoughts on hoping his bean would not be an April Fools Baby. He got his wish.
Caleb Anthony Cullen, a very solid male name.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2014 3:20 PM Title: Chapter Tweleve

woo Hoo new baby!!!!

fw

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2014 8:21 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Hey for them. Can't wait until the baby is here.

Reviewer: joshuasmom131 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Omg great story keep the updates coming I'm biting my nails lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2014 9:51 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

What a big night for them that was great.

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2014 7:14 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

; )

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Wow,  GREAT JOB! 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 2:41 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Delightful fluff without the disheartening drama.
Yea, Baby name on the horizon.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2014 6:04 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

:)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2014 4:53 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2014 4:21 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

wonderful night.  Love it when the winners are actually "real" and gracious.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 5:39 PM Title: Chapter Ten

I like Lucas or Caleb the best.

Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter Ten

I'm going with Spencer. It was our secong choice when our son was born. First choice was Shaffer and that one won out. He is very happy to be a Shaffer now that he is 24. He thinks it's so very cool and unusual. I'm still loving our coffee girl a lot.

merrily

Kat

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2014 2:44 AM Title: Chapter Ten

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 5:31 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Maybe they should choose Matthew. Then they could call him Mac.(using his initials MAC)
The emotion coming from your description of their singing was so insightful that it brought moisture to my eyed.

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter Ten

I can't wait til the Oscars and everyone's reaction to them singing together live!  Of course want to find out about her dress too. I'm so glad you're giving us Exward's point of view!  I don't think Edward was wrong for nit giving Malice more of a chance. She showed her true colors oncd again!  Not worth risking Bella or their baby!

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 10:38 AM Title: Chapter Ten

I like Thomas Anthony.   I really love how much Edward is devoted to Coffee girl.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 6:09 AM Title: Chapter Ten

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2014 12:13 AM Title: Chapter Eight

Alice will always be a hateful bitch so sad for the rest of the family

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter Nine

Great chapter. I love men who are good daddies.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2014 4:36 AM Title: Chapter Nine

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2014 11:26 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Love the story!!

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2014 8:56 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Love your story can not wait for more.

Reviewer: 30somethingmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Loved the kit that Emmett put together for Edward. Just another way that shows how thoughtful his character is and how he looks out for the family. Great story, can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2014 8:52 PM Title: Chapter Nine

very sweet story, but, are we going to see Alice again?

 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2014 12:32 PM Title: Chapter Nine

Your Emmett surprised me with his preparedness kit. Lol.
Every man needs a lesson in babies from Gina!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2014 9:54 AM Title: Chapter Nine

:)

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter Eight

Wow!  Only way he could treat her!  Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 4:18 PM Title: Chapter Eight

I hope Esme and Carlisle realize that Alice has a serious problem. She has no reason to be jealous. Emmett doesn't seem to think he was ignored or bullied by his parents to "be like Edward". He seems to have a very healthy relationship with Edward as well as his parents.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 3:24 PM Title: Chapter Seven

I think that Alice is still jealous. She is just lonely and doesn't know what to do with herself. Her true self will come out again.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 12:19 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Love your story can't wait for more.

Reviewer: IANticipate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 8:59 AM Title: Chapter Eight

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2014 1:09 PM Title: Chapter Eight

As a husband and soon to be father, Edward can only do what he feels best and that is keep his family protected from his vicious sister.
They are a winning combination!

Reviewer: sweet_n_juicy Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2014 12:37 PM Title: Chapter Eight

I loved Renee and the cupcake lol. I think he did what was best for his family and if his parents couldn't understand that, then maybe they shouldn't be in their lives either. I wait can't for the Oscars. I think they'll both win (crosses fingers).

Reviewer: Melcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter Eight

I'm in love with this couple. So happy you did a sequel! Glad Bella is getting recognized in Hollywood too. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 5:10 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: 30somethingmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 5:06 PM Title: Chapter Eight

I just finished reading the first nine chapters and I am so pleased to be reading the sequel. I absolutely love your stories and I am always eager to read more. I really enjoyed reading how you decided to keep Malice the way she is. It shows more realism with the story. I love HEA's but I also like to see when the characters have to face the consequences of their actions and a simple "sorry" does not make things right. Just one small constructive criticism, when Edward was reflecting over how his parents would feel about his decision, there was one minor error. You had written his parents would not be "happen" instead of "happy". From the way your stories are put together and edited, I can tell you want them to be as perfect as possible which is why I point out this one small error. I do not say this to offend you in any way. You are a wonderful writer and I look forward to reading more of TCHD.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 5:43 AM Title: Chapter Eight

:)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 2:21 AM Title: Chapter Seven

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: sweet_n_juicy Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 11:48 AM Title: Chapter Seven

I want to believe she's changed because I try to see the good in everyone, but trust is very important to me. Once someone breaks that trust, it's hard to get back in my good graces, which is probably how Edward feels.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter Seven

Happy 16th Anniversary!

I'm concerned about Alice's initial entrance into Edward and Bella's home. The negative vibes were still rolling off of her. The loss of Jasper was not truly addressed by Alice. But I suppose she doesn't wish to discuss it any further.
Will she really try to amend her tainted ways? I'm not sure.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2014 12:14 PM Title: Chapter Seven

I don't think Alice has changed

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2014 7:29 AM Title: Chapter Seven

I think Alice has screwed up her life so much she wants to hate Bella but cant find anything.  I love Bella and Edward they are such good people.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2014 12:20 AM Title: Chapter Seven

I am not holding my breath.   She was so mean to Bella and she might be blaming Bella for all her troubles. 

Reviewer: twimom1960 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2014 12:11 AM Title: Chapter Seven

Nah Malice hasn't changed.  Too much hate in her eyes!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2014 11:01 AM Title: Chapter Six

I found it very entertaining that Edward did all the research for child birth.
Alice should be making moves to show her remorse or even some sort of change in her behavior before Edward let's her anywhere near his family.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2014 12:11 AM Title: Chapter Six

The story is not about Malice but about Edward,  Bella and Bean.  It was cool to see Edward being extremely active in this process. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2014 9:55 AM Title: Chapter Six

Freak the poor guy out but he is good

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter Six

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: tawelephant Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2014 12:43 PM Title: Chapter Six

So so good. I cracked up at "growing a penis". When I was pregnant with our son, when the doctor said "we are at the stage when his balls should be dropping" I laughed so hard. I told my husband "I don't think I needed to know that my sons balls are dropping inside of me". Hahahaha

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2014 11:29 AM Title: Chapter Six

:)

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Date: 06 Oct 2014 6:04 AM Title: Chapter Five

I cant wait to hear Malice bullshit

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2014 12:59 PM Title: Chapter Five

That's a huge amount of pressure on both Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2014 12:21 PM Title: Chapter Five

Honestly, I wouldn't give that witch a chance.   She does not have a kind bone in here body.   Bella doesn't need this stress and I can bet Malice isvplaying nice to get in and do more damage. I'm with Edward on this.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter Five

Let's hope she doesn't try to ruin things!!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2014 5:22 AM Title: Chapter Five

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: tiffanyleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter Five

I'm with Eddie on  this.  Malice hurt Bella before, and with her being pregnant now, I'm not sure re-introducing her into their life is the best decision.  I can't wait to see what happens, but If I were Eddie, I'd be getting something stronger, too.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2014 12:05 AM Title: Chapter Four

They are so perfect together love it.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2014 10:07 PM Title: Chapter Four

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2014 3:38 PM Title: Chapter Four

Awesome scene of their professional debut.
They are perfect together!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2014 9:20 AM Title: Chapter Four

:)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it can't wait for more:)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 3

Edward walked right into that mess. Hehe
Take it away Uncle Edward, tell your nieces what pregnant means.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter Two

Watched the video; wow, what a powerful rendition of the song.
It fits the emotional connection you have given these two.
Is your intent to eventually get these two to work together on scene. The heat of their passion just might burn up the screen.

Edward's confessions at the onset of each chapter is hilarious.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 4:10 AM Title: Chapter One

Eddie, ever the charmer!
They are inching closer to becoming a young power couple in Hollywood.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 3:46 AM Title: Prologue

So happy that Eddie finally decided to tell the rest of this story.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2014 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 3

Edward is so cute ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2014 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 3

:):)

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2014 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 3

Lol! Love it!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2014 12:55 AM Title: Chapter Two

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: booksandcat Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2014 11:04 AM Title: Chapter Two

Tickled to see you are ready to post. Another reason to look forward to Fridays.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2014 9:38 AM Title: Chapter Two

He is the best hubby in the world.  He is going to make her more famous if she likes it or not lol.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2014 5:31 AM Title: Chapter Two

:):)

Reviewer: tiffanyleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter Two

Oh my gosh, I just listened to the song and imagined the two of them singing and my heart nearly broke.  I agree with Edward, I bet it's going to be a big hit!

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2014 1:50 AM Title: Chapter Two

Excellent chapter.  It will be a great song with them singing the song. 

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