Date: 26 Oct 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 30
Baby Bella is a little voyeur - hawt!!
Date: 26 Oct 2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 28
Jasper joins in on the party and i didn't hate it. It's getting super steamy. :o)
Date: 26 Oct 2014 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter and I can't wait to read more.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 26
“Daddy Porn-star said what? Gotta love Emmett.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 25
Delicious chapter; great job.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 30
All this poly coupling has me very squirmy, if you know what I mean. This is my absolute favorite WIP right now! So next chapter deflowers Bella, huh? I hope there are loads of details included! Thanks for this....
Date: 26 Oct 2014 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 30
My goodness this story is on fire. I can't wait for these two to get it on.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2014 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 29
Loved it!
thanks for the updates.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2014 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 29
How long do Esme and Carlisle hang out with the three couples? Do they remain on the island the entire time or come and go as the business needs?
Will Heidi be a problem for any of the guys, or gutls for that matter? Will she attempt to interfere?
Date: 25 Oct 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 29
Uhm, Heidi seems like trouble.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2014 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 29
I was worried at the beginning of the chapter that Bella would have a hard time with Edward being with the other girls but you put that worry to rest soon after.
Date: 24 Oct 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 29
hope your feeling better and love this story
Date: 24 Oct 2014 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 29
Very nice breakfast reading for me this morning! I've never experienced a 4some....sounds very yummy, at least the way you write it! An island, huh? Good for privacy! I think Heidi wants to join in too.....
Date: 24 Oct 2014 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 28
LOVE rose and Bella
Date: 24 Oct 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 29
Your story is really more well written than a lot of erotic novels I have read. Thanks for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2014 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 29
Heidi is bad news...mark my words! *snorts*
That foursome between Rose, Em, Ed and B was...DAYUM!
Now that they are in the island, Edward is ready to get started.
I don't blame him, I can't freaking wait myself!
Thanks for the update.
xoxo Mina
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2014 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 29
:) Hope you are all feeling better soon
Date: 23 Oct 2014 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 28
So sorry you are not doing well, and then sick kids on top of that. ((hugs)) Loved this chapter. I would love a Jasper pov of that encounter, and I am really not that much of a Jasper fan, but damn that was hot !!
Date: 23 Oct 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 28
Poor you! I hope you are at least feeling better now.
I believe Bella is okay with the guys and girls because she trusts them. If another person joined the group I don't think either of them would like to share. Especially Edward. Bella might want to try it out since she's so young and new to it all. I think Edward would go crazy with jealousy. Lol. I can't wait for more but only if your not to tired.
Date: 22 Oct 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 28
;) Loved this!!! But, the pictures didn't show up :(
Date: 22 Oct 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 28
yeah please more chapterssssssssssssssssssss
Date: 22 Oct 2014 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 28
I like this a lot. I also like how Edward said it would just be the 2 of them at the end of the day.....I always wanted to have 2 guys at once, but never did in my youth. Now I'm too old and broken down for this to happen so I read about it and live vicariously thanks to lovely ladies like you who write these fabulous scenes!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2014 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 28
Wow so hot and naughty but the pictures did show
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2014 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 28
Sharing is Caring! LOL
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2014 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 27
I really like this so far! I did not read the first version, so it is all new to me.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 27
I feel like you have provided a deeper explanation of why the cameras will be turned on at an undisclosed time. Whereas before it seemed to be a bit vague as to Carlisle's reasoning. Or it could just be my memory failing me and it's exactly the way it was before, Hahaha. My mind is slipping as my children and husband has reminded me recently.
Date: 20 Oct 2014 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 27
so we are getting closer to lights camera action. he he he he
Date: 20 Oct 2014 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it! Yes, James Deen is a hottie! Can't wait for more!
Date: 20 Oct 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 27
I can't wait!
Date: 20 Oct 2014 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 27
I love the Connection they all seem to have with each other..
Date: 20 Oct 2014 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 27
As always want the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2014 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 27
Hehehheloced ot
Date: 19 Oct 2014 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 27
James Deen is pretty fine, isn't he? There's a guy named Bruce, don't know his last name, who I like a lot too.....
I don't have to guess what will happen very soon after they get to the new house.....I'm pretty sure I know. Maybe not details, but the general idea....I'm so very happy with this story. There are very few FF stories anymore that satisfy my level of need and this is a very pleasant exception. Can't wait for more!
Date: 19 Oct 2014 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 27
Please hurry up and get to the house already!!! I just know it's going to be so very, very, very steamy. I'm looking forward to it but als a little scared. Lol. These updates already leave me all hot and bothered I don't know if I'll be able to handle more.
Date: 19 Oct 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 26
I can't wait for more!
Date: 19 Oct 2014 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 25
I just found this story this morning and have been reading it all without stopping to comment, but this chapter was HOT! I LOVED that hot tub scene. Whew!
Date: 19 Oct 2014 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 26
Haha, love no one know when it Will go live...
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2014 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh my, things are starting to take flight, and Daddy Porn-Star has laid down the rules...Alrighy, then!
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE! xoxo Mina
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 26
Oh wow well Bella seems happy with the new life she is going to have
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2014 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 24
i havent been getting updates either but im on ur fb account thats the only way i know its updated. i notice some diffrences with this version compared to the original. i love them both and ya know i love ya. i cant wait to see whats cumming...*snickers*..loves ya babes
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 26
I'm glad the girls backgrounds will be protected.
The house will be a huge factor in how easily the couples can mountain the image of playfully guys and gals with the respect of their pairings.
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2014 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
baby girl!!!! im so glad ur back!!!! i FLOVE...FLOVE....FLOVE this story
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2014 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 26
Can't wait for them to enter the house!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2014 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 25
Hot and sweet, loved it
Date: 18 Oct 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 26
ANother great chapter !!!
Date: 18 Oct 2014 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh wow! I loved this! I'm so happy that, at the end of the day, Bella is still Edward's :-) . Cannot wait to see what will happen next (please don't forget to put a "warning" or rather a pairing announcement in the AN at the beginning. Thank you).
Date: 18 Oct 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 26
I like Carlisle's last idea....I guess it's a directive more than an idea....that nobody will know when the cameras go live. I also like that, even though there will be sharing, that the boys are quite proprietary with their girls!
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2014 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 26
I like that idea daddy-porn star had. Great chapter.
Date: 18 Oct 2014 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 26
Yay!! Weekend updates are the best!!!
Date: 18 Oct 2014 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 26
Can't wait till the next chapter!
Date: 18 Oct 2014 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 26
Emmett always makes me laugh.
Date: 18 Oct 2014 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 25
Upon just made my weekend so much better!!! Weekend updates!!!!!
Date: 17 Oct 2014 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 25
From the beginning to the end of this chapter was SO HOT
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2014 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 25
So exotic yummy
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 24
Now that is a good night out
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2014 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 23
Oh the girls are going to keep them boys on their toes hehehehehehehehe
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2014 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 22
Holy hell that was hot
Date: 17 Oct 2014 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 25
oh girl, I pay good money to get scenes like this from the books on my Kindle. this was as good as any I've read so far. please let us know when you publish and under what name. I'll buy. I'm falling for Edward too. What Bella did with Jessica at the club took a lot of guts and a big heart. Kudos to Bella!
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 25
Time management, overrated. Lol
Just make a Priorities List and check them off as you go.
That hot tube needs a good scrubbing after all that activity!
Bella's the only female to receive simultaneous attention from all three males. Is that something that will change in the next few chapters? Is it a problem for Alice and Rosalie that Edward and Jasper have not yet connected with them?
Date: 17 Oct 2014 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 25
If you get the time management thing share with me please. wow,, I will never look at a hottub again without seeing that scene in my head. Loved it !!!! And if your in a hottub you don't have to worry abut wetting your panties
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2014 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 25
Holy crap....I'll never again let my mom read my emails. LOL
Thank for the update, no Dean gif today. I'm not at home and I'm running late. SORRY!
xoxo Mina
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 24
Bella is handling the idea of Edward's work crossing over into their new found connection rather well.
Alice and Bella make a great double team, making Rose feel linked to the group.
Date: 16 Oct 2014 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 24
Yay your back! I was so excited to find this today!
Date: 16 Oct 2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 24
wow, the club was fun. Glad there was no drama with Jessica. Love how everyone is reaching out to each other - physically the first kiss with Emmett, and rose again. Glad you took the advice on the panty warning
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2014 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
Going to the club and dancing all night long..
And then Pornward makes us almost come...
GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GIMME ME MORE!!!!!!!!
Enough said.
Date: 16 Oct 2014 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 24
I can't believe I almost forgot to read this update!!! It's been that crazy today. Now I'm going to sleep thinking of all the naughty things these peeps are up to. Ekkk!
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2014 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oh, love that are exploring more and more...
Can't wait for them to get in the house!
xoxoxoDate: 16 Oct 2014 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 24
I can't wait for more!! I'm loving this story!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2014 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 22
Enough said.................. *dead*
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2014 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 21
Since this chapter has 2 POVs, you'll get two gifs. Hehehe
Bella is getting some interesting ideas, not to mention those feelings that are developing.
YOU GO BELLA!
Now, Porward...oh Pornward...and that gif...uuuuuuughadfghjk...
OFF TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
Date: 16 Oct 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 24
Bella's really coming into her own, and Edward is making it fun. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 16 Oct 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 23
Holy Hawtness - can't wait to read how things go at the club.
Date: 16 Oct 2014 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 22
Steamy -- it looks like Bella, Edward, Alice and Jasper are getting into the swing of things.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it!!
so glad you're continuing this story
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2014 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 23
I've ruined all my panties by now...
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 22
I'm combusting over here
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'll take Rose's place if she won't do it lol
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2014 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 19
Damn that was hot!!
and it was just a kiss
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2014 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 18
Feisty Bella is out to play I hope :)
Date: 16 Oct 2014 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
Still swooning, damn!!