[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2014 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 14
I bet they'll love mommy Esme and she'll live the girls
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2014 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 13
Swooooooooon
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2014 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 12
Ok I'm gonna trust you on Rose
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2014 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 11
I hope Rose ain't a bitch.
Date: 15 Oct 2014 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
Edward is so cute
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2014 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 9
The adventure of a lifetime:)
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 7
That was hot! *fans herself*
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
Too pure? I bet edward will change that in a heartbeat lol
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2014 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
They're cute with each other
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
Naaaw he's besotted
Date: 15 Oct 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait for all the different pairings lol
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm so happy this is updating again!
so happy I'm starting it from the beginning!
thanks sweetie for continuing it
Date: 15 Oct 2014 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 24
so the girls are getting acquainted pretty well, aren't they? ooooh mama, this is one hell of an erotic story. I'm loving every moment!
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2014 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 23
Bella and Edward have that desirable connection that heats up the entire place the minute they enter a room.
Sounds like each of the couples has this chemistry.
Date: 15 Oct 2014 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
I haven't reviewed before but will we hear more about Edward's past. I already know there will be some girl on girl but will there be any guy on guy stuff or just them watching the girls and jacking off.
Date: 15 Oct 2014 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 23
You're trying to kill me. I just know it!
Date: 15 Oct 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 23
Omg!! How s ths possible!!! It's getting even steadier!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh yes... That was... Loved the little four on four action !! Can't wait to read more ! I think it's even better the second time around !!
Date: 15 Oct 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wow, that was so very steamy. Like burning hot!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 22
Naughty girls indeed.
A taste of heaven for both Edward and Jasper.
Date: 15 Oct 2014 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 23
I see that you're ramping up the sex and I'm drooling! Poor Baby Bella has to wait for her IUD to be removed, is that it? Geez, Edward is the model of restraint here and I'm getting a big kick out of that somehow. Between this and the book series I'm reading, I'm almost coming unglued here, figuratively....I gotta go spend some time with my Hitachi....
Date: 14 Oct 2014 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thank you for the sipets.
Date: 14 Oct 2014 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 23
ummm loved it. so sweet the gif!!!! Wow two updates today !! I am feeling spoiled. Loved the back and forth pov !!
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2014 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wow, that chapter needed a wet panty warning!!! I loved it. very nice. So will we find who has the biggest cock?
Date: 14 Oct 2014 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 22
Whew! I need a fan. Bring on the next chapter! And fist pump on The Divine Trilogy,
Date: 14 Oct 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 22
whew! that was quite stimulating! I'm so glad more is coming today....
Date: 14 Oct 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 22
Gah, that lemon was AMAZING!! I cannot wait for more! I'm also excited to read Surreal when it comes out!
Date: 14 Oct 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 21
Still loving this story! Love that they are finally getting to know each other. Excited to see where things go from here!
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2014 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 21
Edward can read her body language so well.
Technically, Edward will be her first.
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2014 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 20
Edward is very astute. Bella's holding a few things close to her heart.
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2014 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 19
As I mentioned before, more is always good!
Bella's quick mind will aid her well in this new environment.
Will Rose stop her condescension?
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2014 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 18
More is always good! Hehehe
Watch out Rose, Bella's set her sights on you and that attitude is going down.
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2014 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 17
How sad is it that anyone should view a situation as not having any choice in the matter.
Her upbringing has skewed her areas if concern. But I suppose survival will always win out
Date: 14 Oct 2014 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 21
The foreplay is driving me crazy!
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2014 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 21
Let the games begin! :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 16
Full disclosure is just as much of a risk as lying for Edward.
How much convincing will Alice need to accomplish for Bella to relent to this idea?
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2014 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 15
Glad Alice was there to ease Bella's panic attack.
Edward is probably upset that he is not able to sooth Bella.
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2014 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 14
Everything is moving too quickly for Bella's inexperienced mind to process. But she is comfortable with Edward's presence. Odd, yet comforting.
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2014 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 13
Perfect imperfections!
Edward is so gentle yet smooth in his approach to the skittish young foal.
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2014 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
Bella's out of her element. Let's hope the relaxed atmosphere while shopping will help to settle her unease.
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2014 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 11
The unknown would have made me a nervous wreck.
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 21
oooooooh yeah, getting to the good stuff *wiggles eyebrows*
Date: 14 Oct 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 21
So amazing!!! I love Edward's idea! Perfect!
Date: 14 Oct 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 21
Yes!!!!! Two chapters!! Now if only you updated twice a day!! Gahhhhhh!!! That would make me so happy. ;-) The innocent one totally fits. these two are so in love with each other and don't even know it. Let me clarify, they know it but don't know the other feels the same way. Love this story!!
Date: 14 Oct 2014 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 21
Hot
Date: 14 Oct 2014 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 21
Bella and Edward are setting their pace and it's nice to read. I'm loving this story and I can't wait to read more.
Date: 14 Oct 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 21
Bella isn't going to be able to wait too long at all! I wouldn't! Love it and can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2014 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love this chapter, and the tease of what is to ocme. I like how you have them slowly going along. not just balls deep yet. can't wait for the next update!!
Date: 13 Oct 2014 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 21
Terrific new story, great to read not the same old thing again and again. In am hooked💑
Date: 13 Oct 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loving it the second time around as much as the first!
Date: 13 Oct 2014 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 21
So Bella really is sort of a virgin? That will make for a lovely shot when they simulate her deflowering....I love the gif....I love it all. sorry that folks are being buttheads at reviewing! How can they not?? I'm sometimes compelled to give you word vomit, although I try to contain myself...
Date: 13 Oct 2014 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 20
TWCS had a snafu, I think, because the last chapter I got was 19 last Friday. 20 didn't get to me and 21 came this morning so now I am up to date when I read it. I can see we're just now getting in deeper to the sex stuff...fine by me! I love that there is a good storyline brewing here to go along with all the penetrating action I love.....on to 21.
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 21
Im excited to be getting to the part where they are on camera, I really love your story!
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2014 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 20
Rose sets her limits (not that I blame her) and Bella asks the important questions.
I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for the update.
Date: 11 Oct 2014 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 20
The anticipation is killing me.
Date: 11 Oct 2014 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 19
You Go, Bella!
And more chapters sound awesome.
Date: 11 Oct 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 20
Ready for the good stuff
Date: 11 Oct 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 20
Can't wait for another
Date: 10 Oct 2014 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh, I can't wait!!!
Date: 10 Oct 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
Looking forward to Monday's chapters
Date: 10 Oct 2014 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved the teaser and this chapter as well. Have a great weekend
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2014 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
I was reading this chapter expecting some sort of word battle and then...
Wait, what? Oh damn... bet more than one guy in that room got turned on by that! LOL
Thanks for the update, off to read the next one!
xoxo Mina
Date: 10 Oct 2014 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 19
Sounds perfect! I REALLY love this Bella.
Date: 10 Oct 2014 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
I think you posted the same chapter twice...
Krazi
Xoxo
Date: 10 Oct 2014 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yay!!! I love it and I'm so happy to get more updates. I was not expecting what bella did at all. Mind blown!!
Date: 10 Oct 2014 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh god! I love how she went off on Rose, what she said! She surprised me. I guess I should have known, but I do love being surprised! Bring on all the chapters you want to. I always read yours first when I open up my mail....
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2014 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow, Bella is amazing. Reminds me about that saying: You have to watch out for the quiet ones, cause you have no idea what they are thinking of. Yay about the future chapters!
Date: 10 Oct 2014 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
Awesome, Bella gave Rose the hottest scolding ever. great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2014 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 19
With respect to more chapters: Good good good
With respect go this chapter:damn bella
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2014 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
So adding this to my fav's list. Loved this chapter and Bella getting her growl on.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2014 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 19
yes please. i love bella's attitude. she is my hero. thank you and i can't wait for the next update.
Date: 10 Oct 2014 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 19
Just the other day I was trying to remember what story that scene took place I think that's one of my all-time favorite chapter's again loved it as much as the first time I read it
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2014 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
jumps up and down screaming yes yes yes oh and hell yes
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2014 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 19
Sounds good to me!!! This story is like crack... you can't get enough!! I'm addicted!
Date: 10 Oct 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 18
What did she do!!???!!
Date: 10 Oct 2014 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 18
Yeeeesssssss!!! Please put more than two updates a day!! I'm dying. Dying!! I didn't read it the first time around. Thanks for writing such an amazing story. I can't wait for more.
Date: 10 Oct 2014 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 18
Yes more chapters!!!!!
Date: 10 Oct 2014 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 18
Bella's next chapter is going to be great if it's anything like how you wrote it last time
Date: 09 Oct 2014 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh Yes Please!
Date: 09 Oct 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm enjoying your story so far. I would love to see more chapters a day since these are fairly short.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2014 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
hell yes please. Ps old fan and love the new tweaking you have done to this.
Date: 09 Oct 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
Cliffy meanie!! What the hell Rose? To each their own.
Date: 09 Oct 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 18
Can't wait to find out how Bella reacts to Rose's comment.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 18
Keep them coming! :o)
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2014 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
Omg I hope bella punches rose. Please update soon