[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2014 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 18
DEAN APPROVES MORE CHAPTERS A DAY!!!!!!!!!
Date: 09 Oct 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 18
yes. more is better. whatever you can give us will be greatly appreciated by me!
Date: 09 Oct 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 18
More chapters? Yes and please! Loving this so far!
Date: 09 Oct 2014 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 18
More chapters, please. I think I'm enjoying this more the second time around.
Date: 09 Oct 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
Very good, we would enjoy more chapters a day. I have been to England, was on my way back from Spain and our plane had mechanical issues. We had to land at Gatwick and then was bussed to Brighton for the night. Very pretty.
Date: 09 Oct 2014 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 18
More chapter a day, I would never refuse!! I absolutely live that u update like clockwork!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 17
Still loving it all over again
Date: 09 Oct 2014 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella is taking the news really well and I'm happy to read them being so playful about it. Great chapter.
Date: 09 Oct 2014 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
well I'm glad he told her about the possibility, no the probability, of "other things". Since she's comfortable with Alice, maybe that can open her up, so to speak, to some of those other things....I love Edward, he seems so sincere, but I suspect that his practiced smoothness coming out....
Date: 09 Oct 2014 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 16
He was being honest with her. I believe he was. I believe he was truly smitten with her picture and that this has become more than a job to him. I hope she sees that and takes the job. I just want to read the smut you are writing....LOL!
Date: 09 Oct 2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yup, Mother Nature is going crazy. I'm in arizona and after a month we are still having detours because the roads are closed due to road damages caused by the floods. Whole pieces of roads were washed away. Houses and cars were destroyed. It was so scary. I hope you don't get tornadoes today.
Woah!!!!! Bella was so sexy and took control. That was so very hot!! I can't wait for more.
Date: 09 Oct 2014 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
She's taking it all in stride
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2014 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm too sleepy to find a gif right now, so all I'm going to say is thanks for the update and can't wait for the next one!
G'night! xoxo Mina
oh well, look at that! I guess wasn't as sleepy as I thought I was. Hehehehe
Date: 09 Oct 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 16
It doesn't sound as bad as what I'd first thought. She is kind of in between a rock and a hard place.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2014 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh boy the big reveal! LOL!
Can't remember her exact reaction the first time I read this, but she obviously doesn't leave! ;) LOL!
xo
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Totally agree with your A/N at the end! :D
xo
Date: 09 Oct 2014 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
Phew!! That went better than I imagined. I hope Bella and the girls agree to stay.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
I think they still need to give these girls more details. Great story concept. Very different.
Date: 08 Oct 2014 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 16
I need more! Can't wait till morning to see what she says.
Date: 08 Oct 2014 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
I can't wait for more.
Date: 08 Oct 2014 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm so in love with this story. Edward explained himself very well. I'm so glad they are both being so honest I'm actually surprised at how strong their bond is already.
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2014 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
GAH! Me thinks another couple of updates are in order. Right Dean?
See, he agrees. You gotta do what Dean says! :-P
xoxo Mina
Date: 08 Oct 2014 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great, and are you going to give us several more updates
Date: 08 Oct 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
Hate having to wait
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 15
Heck, I would freak out as well!
I guess times up for Pornward.
OFF TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Date: 08 Oct 2014 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 16
i think edward was brilliant!! i really do hope they can follow through with his "taking it slow" promise! im still pretty apprehensive about bella and edward being coupled with other people.... except alice and bella, that was fine before... im hoping that if they are paired with other people, they at least get to be together... (for example: bella is paired with emmett, but edward is in the room with them to make it more comfortable.) i would love a threesome, im just hesitant about the pairs being different from canon. (mainly edward and bella). but i am keeping an open mind!! and im super excited for each chapter update...like super duper excited! you should think about making a blog for this story, and post outfits and stuff. it doesnt need everyday clothes, just when they dress up and stuff. oo and a picture of the house they will be in!!
until next time!!
Date: 08 Oct 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh Bella, it's going to be alright. Can't wait for more!
Date: 08 Oct 2014 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
I love seeing what is in her mind. She IS freaking out. Just wait until she hears what the job is....although being a mail order bride is a pretty creative thought! LOL! Dare I say AGAIN that I love this story!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2014 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 15
I can't wait for Edward's side. Poor Bella has a gut feeling and truth be told she's right on target. It may not be marriage but it's more. This is gonna be great, lol. what will their reactions be? Thank you for sharing.
Date: 08 Oct 2014 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
Very good, but, I imagine Edward is getting a little nervous
Date: 08 Oct 2014 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 15
I can relate to Bella's feelings, no one has told them anything about the job.
Date: 08 Oct 2014 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
I think her response was justified. She is very smart. That does seem very strange and she doesn't really know them. Good for her!!! I'm glad someone in that car is scared and worried for their safety. Lol. *sigh* Edward is just dreamy with her.
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
This chapter was awsome. I love Bella's bashful innocence. Thank you for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2014 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh my... *fans self* yeah, that kiss left me breathless...
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
Um, yeah..... Oh... My... God... Pornward made me all kinds of giggly and happy. a86; a86; a86;
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2014 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh my, yeah...Edward is definitely blurring lines, but not in the rapey-song-version kind of way...just sayin', that song is creepy! But I love the Weird Al version 😁 LOL
And Bella, who would resist Pronward? He can dazzle me anytime, anywhre. Right, Dean?
Off to read the next chapter! xoxoxo
Date: 08 Oct 2014 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oy, can't wait to see how Bella reacts to that~~
Date: 07 Oct 2014 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 14
Gah!! I can't wait!!!
Date: 07 Oct 2014 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
Edward and Bella are choosing lingerie now - love it. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 07 Oct 2014 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm falling in love with Edward already. I don't think I'd be suited for this job as I have always been a sucker for the kind of treatment he is giving Bella, whether it is real or manufactured. I'm swooning again....
Date: 07 Oct 2014 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
Not tomorrow, more tonight please
Date: 07 Oct 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
He is so perfect!
Date: 07 Oct 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
Edward and Bella are so saweet together in this chapter. I loved that he took her into the dressing room and helped her appreciate her beauty. Lovely.
Date: 07 Oct 2014 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
I agree! Edward is so swoonworthy! He has a very smooth tongue, I bet in more ways than one, and has her purring like a kitten. He was very sweet in his assessment but I still wonder how much of that was "grooming" and how much was sincere. Maybe he doesn't even know yet...Still, either way, he was sexy as hell and I very much enjoyed reading this chapter!!
Date: 07 Oct 2014 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 13
Where's my own Edward?! I love him!
Date: 07 Oct 2014 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
Yup, definitely swoon worthy. I wonder what is going on in his head!!! She not only did what he wanted but he got her out of her clothes. 😏
Date: 07 Oct 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved this! Edward is wonderful!
Date: 07 Oct 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it! Just one thing, when Alice said "Good afternoon, gentleman", it should have been "gentlemen", since she was talking to all the men, not one man. Just a nitpick of mine.
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2014 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 12
I loved Edward in this chapter and I really think it will take no time at all for him to become her protctor and love of her life, maybe they will have a poly relationship but have a deeper conection to their soul mate
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 12
Really enjoying the expanded chapters! :D
Date: 07 Oct 2014 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 12
I can't wait to read how Bella responds once everything is out in the open. Really love this story so far.
Date: 07 Oct 2014 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
Looking forward to seeing how they get along with the shopping
Date: 06 Oct 2014 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
I don't know who Dean Winchester is. Sorry. I do think Edward is coming off as a bit of a smooth operator here and maybe scaring Bella a teeny little bit. Bluring the line between business and pleasure? He sure is....
Author's Response:
He's from Supernatural, which I've just started to watch. I agree with you, I think he is coming off like that. I think, maybe, it's because of his line of work. Bella is scared. She's in a whole new world, way out of her comfort zone. Will it come back to bite her on the backside? Probably. At the moment, all she can see is that her best friend is happy and that they are away from home. And yeah, Edward is blurring the lines lol. He should do fine though ;) xxx
Date: 06 Oct 2014 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for all the replies, love your work.
Author's Response:
<3 Thanks for reviewing! xxx
Date: 06 Oct 2014 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
Awesome! they finally met and I'm just hoping that you would hurry up and write faster. :o) Take care.
Author's Response:
LOL. I hsve several chapters already written, but I have to stck tp the posting times for the time being lol xxx
Date: 06 Oct 2014 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm so glad he already feels protective of her. I'm also glad Alice is there to take care of her. Both of them seem to understand bella and care for her. I can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Bella will come into her own soon, she just needs to find out how to do it. Until then, Edward and Alice will be on hand ;) xx
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2014 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
:)
Author's Response:
<3
Date: 06 Oct 2014 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
:)
Author's Response:
<3
Date: 06 Oct 2014 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
Gah!!!! I want the update now!!!! I'm on fall break and I can't wait!!! Ugh!!! I want to know what he's thinking. I'm not being very patient am I? Lol. Thanks for theAMAZING story!! I can't wait for more. I wonder why Rose changed her attitude once the girls showed up? Is she scared of competition? Is she scared of going back? I wonder what her story is?? I still want more E and B, but I'm curious.
Author's Response:
LOL. Rose will warm up soon, but she's been through a lot, too.
Date: 06 Oct 2014 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 11
oh boy. like shooting fish in a barrel......this is going to be so much fun. I hope. And sexy fun!
Author's Response:
Lots of fun and plenty of sexiness to come ;) xxx
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2014 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks for the update. I missed this story this weekend. Happy Monday indeed.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you like this story so much :D xxx
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2014 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 11
Yep, bells should definiteltt been ringing...but we all know they wouldn't be the warning ones *winks*
And Pornward can be swoony! Oh my..............................
Can't wait for the next chapter! xoxo Mina
Author's Response:
lol, I'm loving these. I keep coming back to look at them lol xxx
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2014 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh Edward, things will definitely work out.
These boys... gawd...
Author's Response:
LOL!!!!! <3
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2014 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 9
Bet that limo driver caught the free show in the back seat! LOL
Author's Response:
Hehehehehehe <3
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2014 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
I really don't know if him not telling her was the right choice, but the important thing is that he didn't lie and tell her it was for something else.
Okay, I'm almost all caught up. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE GIRLS TO MAKE THEIR ESCAPE!
Author's Response:
I think he made the right choice at the right time. And yeah, it was better than lying.
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2014 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh my, about that femslash bit...
Now, can't wait to hear from Edward!!! a86;
Author's Response:
LOL <3
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2014 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love this Emmett...and not just because he kissed Edward's ass and brought lots of naughty fantasies.
Author's Response:
I love this Emmett, too. He's serious when he needs to be, but has the sense of humor to balance out everything else lol
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
It's starting! It's starting!
Author's Response:
PMSFL!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2014 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh yeah, Edward found something he likes, alright...
Author's Response:
Hehehehe, me like!
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2014 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 10
I've read this story before. I think on Twilighted. I'm not sure how far into the story I read. But I'm glad to be re-reading it and hopefully finishing.
Author's Response:
I never managed to get it up on Twilighted, but it has been here before :) xxx
Date: 04 Oct 2014 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm excited for them to meet. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
:D xxx
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2014 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks hun xxx
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2014 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
Edward is stressing over more than the position if team leader. He already has feelings for Bella.
Let's hope Jasper and Emmett's reaction to their women is on the same level as Edward's.
Author's Response:
Oh, they will be ;) xxx
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2014 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 9
:):):)
Author's Response:
<3
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2014 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 8
Not at all, he was right.
Author's Response:
:) xxx
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2014 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 5
:):)
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<3 xxx
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2014 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
:)
Author's Response:
<3 xxx
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2014 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
Of course I remember, delighted to ee your return.
Author's Response:
Thanks hun xxx
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2014 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 10
:)
Author's Response:
<3
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 10
I am so loving it all over again thank you
Author's Response:
Thanks hun! xxxx
Date: 04 Oct 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
I can't wait!!!
Author's Response:
:D xxx
Date: 04 Oct 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 10
I am so happy for Edward and Bella (and everyone else, too!)! :)
Author's Response:
:D xxx
Date: 04 Oct 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
LOVED this! I'm so happy Bella's willing to do whatever the job is ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks hun! <3
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2014 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 10
I can't wait fir them all to meet. I'm excited to see how the girls react to there new job, especially Alice and Bella. Thank you
Author's Response:
Thanks hun :D
Date: 04 Oct 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
They're almost here! Perv that I am, I can't wait to see, to read about, all the various interactions....
Author's Response:
:D xxxxx