Date: 15 Dec 2014 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
No mention of my theory as to her relationship to James. I still think I'm right. Thanks for the reply.
Date: 15 Dec 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
James is her brother isn't he? So did we get the update because I asked and can I convince to give us another one soon? Today perhaps? I'll even settle for tomorrow? That's generous. Lol
PS he's an even bigger dirt bag then I thought and would like to see him get another beating
Author's Response:
We are posting daily now, and the final will post on Christmas Eve.
Date: 15 Dec 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 6
where is his body? how can his spirit be reunited with it? just me thinking out loud. no need to answer. I'll read the story and find out!
Date: 15 Dec 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 6
I wonder if James is Bella's brother or knew Bella's brother
Date: 15 Dec 2014 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
he's starting to remember! what a dick he was to her! I hope he can get her to accept his apology, when it comes...
Date: 15 Dec 2014 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
Ahhhh!!! He needs to hurry up and come to his senses. If Alice is right (which we know never to bet against her hehe) Bella is going to go to whoever "He" by herself and pretty sure names/Jacob have summin to do with it. And I'm pretty sure whatever happened between b/j, it def wasn't mutual. Gah!!! Def. Any wait for more updates... Sooner the better ;) sitting on edge of seat waiting lol
Date: 14 Dec 2014 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
I thought Edward was going to be at least grateful, but no, he's still a jerk, and why does he not remember Bella? Was he hit on the head?
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2014 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
Edward is an ass. There is no excuse for the way he has treated Bella
Date: 14 Dec 2014 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
He is so mean why is he so mean to her now he is sorry what an ass he has been.
Date: 14 Dec 2014 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
Edward is so mean. If I was Bella I wouldn't help him.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 14 Dec 2014 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
man....i will make a new years promise to never read ya'lls stories until its done i cant take waiting for a week! and wonder what will happen now
Date: 14 Dec 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
Edward is still an Ass!! I hope once he does figure it out that Bella makes it hard for him to make it up to her. Serves him right!!!!
Date: 14 Dec 2014 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
was the warning that alice gave edward to d about what was going to happen to bella was it to do with james and his friends (has james molested bella in the passed or could it be (raped!!!) or is that what she is trying to warn him is going to happen in the future i hope im wrong but in her nightmare she is wanting him to get of her. as for edward he is an ass the way he treats her i wish she could just walk away from him as he don't deserve her help.....i know she is doing it for morgan but please dont let her forgive him to easily
Date: 14 Dec 2014 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
I LOVE IT BUT EDWARD IS REALLY STUPID AND AN ASSHOLE!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE YA AND THANK YOU!
Date: 14 Dec 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow Ed is a real arse. If it weren't for morgan, I'd say let him rot.
Date: 14 Dec 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
He still is a selfish beep beep beep. I really don't like him. You really going to make us wait for Thursday.
Date: 13 Dec 2014 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 4
Now.. Wee of course we think he is dead. No one can see him but Bella. She sees the dead. So now you planted that seed in our little heads. LOL
Date: 12 Dec 2014 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 4
Bella was in the home with Edward and he dont remember her so sad. Alice is going to tell them where he is.
Date: 12 Dec 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 4
Really has me hooked!
Date: 12 Dec 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter with a bit of mystery of how they met. It will be hard to wait 'till Sunday!
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2014 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 4
This is so good, can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 12 Dec 2014 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 4
oooh we get a little more backgroud on thier past. Wow Bella is so sweet taking care of Morgan
Date: 11 Dec 2014 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
so if he's not dead, he must be hurt somewhere and his spirit is out-of-body and astral travelling to Bella, or something like that....thanks for clearing that up! Was Bella in that foster home he was in?
Date: 11 Dec 2014 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
This Is pure brilliance
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2014 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
I think Edward is having an out of body experience or something similar. I really like this story.
Date: 11 Dec 2014 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
Edward is in a coma right?
Date: 09 Dec 2014 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
I LOVE IT! IM RATHER CONFUSED, EDWARDS DEAD AND ONLY BELLA SEES HIM? THIS IS SAD,EDWARDS AN ASSHOLE,AND MOGANS SITUATION IS HORRIBLE.ITS VERY INTERESTING,YOUR A GREAT WRITER AND I CANT WAIT FOR MORE. THANK YOU!
Date: 09 Dec 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
Weekitty you know how it is.. You write, I read. That is our deal. :-) Even if I am not liking Edward, well you might have written him that way. LOL
Dead Edward? Sounds like he is gone. So Bella is the only one that can see him or talk to him. Poor Morgan. Too bad Bella is not old enough to take her away from the Nasty family.
Author's Response:
He's not dead ... we promise.
Date: 08 Dec 2014 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
I think Renee came from that orphanage. Who has Bella seen before and why is she leaving the school because she thinks she is sick. Has Edwards body been found yet or is he still out there??
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2014 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
Shaping up to be a fantastic story.
Date: 08 Dec 2014 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
I really hope E is having an out of body experience while doctors are working on him
Date: 07 Dec 2014 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
Was not expecting the story to take this kind of twist can't wait for your next chapter
Date: 07 Dec 2014 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
hmmm You've got my mind spinning with questions. Is he really dead or not. hmmmm Poor little morgan
Date: 07 Dec 2014 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
I can't believe Edward is dead
Author's Response:
Edward is not dead.
Date: 07 Dec 2014 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
He's a creep of epic proportions. He totally fits the statistical likelihood of become an abuser. His wake up call wasn't loud enough if he can still say all those cruel things to her. What a prick.
Date: 07 Dec 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
I take it that Edward is dead. Killed by his "friends" who thought he was a rat? If this is so, I may have to re-evaluate reading this story. That would be almost too sad to take. The only HEA possible then would be to also kill Bella and Morgan. Ugh. I need to think about this....IF Edward is dead....
Author's Response:
Edward is not dead. and this will be a happy ever after.
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2014 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 3
Tears rolling. Love it.
Date: 07 Dec 2014 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great beginning! Really like the characters. Just wish you would update more often. :o) Thanks!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
what can I say that you won't get mad? Nothing
Author's Response:
Hi Mary How are you?
Date: 05 Dec 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
He is freaking out and taking it out on Bella. Now his so called friends are killing him
Date: 04 Dec 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 2
Just found this today ladies. Not liking this Edward very much, lol,
BUT I trust you to make it better eventually.
Cant wait to read more.
Date: 04 Dec 2014 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
I have a feeling Bella will come to his rescue.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 2
Edward was really nasty with Bella and she was only trying to help him
Date: 04 Dec 2014 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is a rough start to this story, here. I trust you guys to make it right, but don't much like Edward, except that he cares for Morgan. Is someone going to die? A major character? I get that feeling and hope I'm wrong. They do treat Bella like shit, don't they? I wonder if Morgan's friend, that she wants him to meet, is Bella.
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
post soon
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ugh Guessing Jake is the narc. Cowards
Poor little morgan.
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
SO EDWARD THINKS BELLA IS FAT,UGLY,AND ANNOYING. WHAT AN ASSHOLE AND HE IS NO WINNER EITHER!! HOW DO THESE TO HOOK UP?
Date: 01 Dec 2014 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's different - I like it!
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2014 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Will the storyline vary here, TWSC, from the version at FFN.net?
Who is Edwards real father?
What kind of police record does he have? Petty theft, break and enter, public indecency, assault; he could have a list as long as his arm if it took place while in the social services system. Did he graduate from high school?
Will Esme and Carlisle be influential in his recover from a life of crime?
How will Bella become involved with Morgan? What a sweet and innocent little girl. I'm glad someone is attempting to parent the little angel. Better her older half-brother(or is he her full brother, Edward did suspect) than her pickled parents.
Author's Response:
"Will the storyline vary here, TWSC, from the version at FFN.net? Yes but not much and only will be edited at FFN for any sexual content to not violate their TOS and no such scenes have yet been written, but there is as always with our stories that chance it may be there and this one is not yet fully written.
Who is Edwards real father? He has no storyline really in this other than being missing from Edward's life.
What kind of police record does he have? Petty theft, break and enter, public indecency, assault; he could have a list as long as his arm if it took place while in the social services system. His crimes involve stolen property and traffic things.
Did he graduate from high school? Yes
Will Esme and Carlisle be influential in his recover from a life of crime? No.
How will Bella become involved with Morgan? What a sweet and innocent little girl. I'm glad someone is attempting to parent the little angel. Better her older half-brother(or is he her full brother, Edward did suspect) than her pickled parents." How Bella knows Morgan comes out soon, and Edward thinks that Morgan may be his full sister not half, but there is not any confirmation either way.
Hope this covers most of what you wanted to know, without spoiling too much.
Date: 01 Dec 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 01 Dec 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow an arsehole and an angel in the same chapter. Poor Morgan. She's lucky she doesn't have fetal alchol syndrome with the way her egg donor drinks.
Date: 30 Nov 2014 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Intriguing. Looking forward to reading more!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow this is different. Edward doesn't like Bella and even participates in harassing her and calling her fat ass? not sure I like that! let's see what happpens, shall we?
Date: 30 Nov 2014 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds great so sad. Bella is a good person and can see that Edward is not like the rest of them but he needs his ass kicked to for being mean
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2014 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
looking forward to reading this