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Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2019 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 30

Amazing!

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2019 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 18

I am a snot sobbing mess!

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2019 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 9

Nope wasn't expecting that.You got me on that one.Gotta read some more.

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2019 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 9

Nope wasn't expecting that.You got me on that one.Gotta read some more.

Reviewer: KimiD Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 30

AWESOME STORY~!

Reviewer: KimiD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 29

Ahhh, seems Jasper sees the man Edward is now and has changed his tune... he is Nothing like his father...

Reviewer: KimiD Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 28

Oh Great/!!

Reviewer: KimiD Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 26

Bet he wasn't expecting that...

Reviewer: KimiD Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 24

I wonder what it is going to take for Edward to win Jay over???

It would seem that Carlisle may already be smitten with our fair Esme...

Reviewer: KimiD Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 23

Oh Charlie~ no child should have to go through losing their parent so young... my heart aches for this little man...

Reviewer: KimiD Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 22

After the way he was brought up, it must have been such a pleasant change to feel like he does...

Reviewer: KimiD Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 19

In the past it has always been Royce King, so that is who I assumed it was.

 

Reviewer: KimiD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 18

You have such a gift for making me cry... lol and yeah, Charlie breaks me too~ love your stories ~ even when they make me cry...

Reviewer: KimiD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 15

I hope she let Bella in on her plans...

Reviewer: KimiD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 14

Whoa ~ another twist, did not see that coming... she senses his care for Charlie~!

Reviewer: KimiD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 10

I love that you named the youngster Charlie...

Reviewer: KimiD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 9

Nope... sure wasn't~ Nice twist~

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2015 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 30

this is sooo good!! Thank you Betty :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2015 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 30

Though this story held some tears within, I still really loved it all! Charlie's note choked me up the most, of course because who wouldn't echo his prayer for a cure?

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2015 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 30

Great story.  You had me in tears.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2015 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 30

sweet ending.  You made me cry at the end.  Ty for writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2015 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 29

Go Edward!!!  Glad Jasper seems to be coming around.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2015 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 28

Poor little Charlie.  Wow E crashed a funeral?!?!?!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2015 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 27

hmm can understand Jaspers rage at E's sperm donor (he ain't a dad), but he shouldn't take it out on Edward by proxy

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2015 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 26

Poor little Charlie.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2015 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 25

Yea Big Ed isn't going to make things easy.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2015 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 24

hmmm sounds like Jay is going to continue to be a wanker.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 30

That note Charlie wrote was heart wrenching! I had a bit of an ugly cry face. 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2015 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 30

Sad but beautiful... Loved it!!!

Thanks so much for sharing.

Loved Charlie!!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2015 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 30

Sweet,sweet story that has left me balling my eyes out.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2015 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 28

Lord have mercy. What a tear jerker. I love it!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2015 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 23

Holy carp, I am crying now. Again.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2015 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 30

:) Loved this story

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2015 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 30

Big tears OMG love this story. What happened to the evil father and the no carrying mother?

Reviewer: twilightgrrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2015 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 30

Oh, that is so sad "sobs" I I loved it, it was so beautiful but very heart broken about Emmett.

Reviewer: twilightgrrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2015 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 29

Such a sad, heartbreaking story, but I am so happy that Edward Sr. was handled & Jasper came to his senses. & YAY, Edward will be living w/ Bella & Charlie, well I hope anyway. i am loving this story & can't wait for another update.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2015 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 29

Go Edward! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2015 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 29

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2015 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 29

Edward has got Jasper to understand that Edward is the good guy.  I am so happy Edward took out the trash.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2015 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 29

Not to advocate senseless violence, but boy, did I love Edward puching hell out of his rotten father! Sure impressed Jasper, too!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2015 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 28

Omg! I think a confrontation is about to happen!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2015 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 27

Only a few chaps left....  :(

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2015 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 26

Bold Bella! Get it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2015 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 28

Oh dear, now the crap is about to start! Daddy Masen will not care for any of this involving his cnhildren. Like he cared about them to begin with! It's all about control with that man! Can't wait to see how it goes!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2015 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 28

Edward needs to drag that man back out the door.  Poor little charlie he does not need any crap from Edwards father.

Reviewer: CaptCron76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2015 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 28

I realize I will have to stand in line, but I seriuosuly want to smack Ed, Sr. Seriously...

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2015 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 28

This can't be good

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2015 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 27

You just keep dribbling little bits of background information to us, kind of like a trail of breadcrumbs! I had to smile when Bella got a bit miffed when Edward said her kiss was nice! He really ought to hunt for better adjectives!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2015 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 27

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2015 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 27

Jasper is realy a good guy just so much pain. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2015 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 26

They need each other love it

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2015 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 26

Atta girl! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2015 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 26

:) :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2015 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 26

Well, well, well! Guess Edward may n ot be alone in his feelings! Rose seems to have started something growing between Bella and Edward by asking them to raise her son.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2015 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 25

So now he knows she needs him 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2015 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 25

The dad is going to go ballistic. 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2015 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 25

I got wrapped up in the drama of Rosalie's death and forgot about Edward and Esme's awful father! The focus is all on Charlie and Bella now and I'm eager to see what happens next! That little bit where Jasper said their mom wouldn't care to hear about Rose was pretty damn sad!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2015 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 25

loving this

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2015 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 24

Poor little Charlie, I feel real bad for him. Thank heaven he has Bella, and now Edward, too. I'll bet they'll try to have a little Christmas for him.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2015 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 24

Poor Emmett! I look forward to Bella & Edward falling in love all bc of Charlie. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2015 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 24

He wants that and he feels it he just don't know it

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 24

They've all lost Rose

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 23

aww poor little kid.   So glad Bella and E are there for him.  I agree, keep charlie away from his family....except for Esme of course.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 23

So sad & every mom's worst nightmare!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 23

OMG this is killing me but I love it my heart is hurting for them.

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 23

So sad and beautiful.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 23

Can't blame Edward one bit for having to hold back the sobs! I know exactly how he felt, and the tears are still clouding my sight as I tap out this review! That was such a sweet final gift from Rose to her baby! I love this story, even when it makes me cry!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 23

Poor thing!  Makes me so sad! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 23

so sad....

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 22

That is such a sweet picture you illustrated there!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 22

thank you for the update..hope your feeling better....I wonder how Esme & Carlise are doing ..lol...Edward's father is not going to be happy

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 21

thank you for the update..I hope you feel better soon...........I wonder why Rosalie pick Edward also?  Cgharlie really has taken a liking to Edward..can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 22

I can just picture it, the three of them, eating Fruit Loops, watching cartoons, being together!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 22

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 22

He is getting a good thing

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 22

Awe!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 22

aww for he and charlie bonding

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 22

I don't think Royce is Charlie's father. I think Charlie is Edward's half brother

 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 21

hmmm if Charlie hadn't wandered into the store I wonder what Rose would have done.  Just Bella I guess.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 21

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 21

I hope you are feeling better soon wish you well.  Rose knows what she was doing

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 21

Thank you so much for the effort, I hope you are feeling a bit better. This is a very heart-felt story, I can tell. Looking forward to seeing more when you can get it out to us! Take care and have a great new year!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 20

I guess she has put her finger on the problem quite nicely. Looks like Edward is about to make some hard decisions.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 19

Wonder why some people get hung up on that part? I think it's nice that Bella seems willing to give Edward the benefit of the doubt. Her brother and Emmett aren't nearly as forgiving.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 18

Picturing that child singing to his dying mother,made the tears flow, just no stopping them! I see now why Rose asked Edward to help raise her son, she saw a good man in his actions, not just his words.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 17

I was pretty sure when he didn't remember who she was, that he hadn't fathered Charlie.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 16

Everybody hang on tight, this is going to be awful sad, I can tell!

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter. Hope you feel better soon.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 15

No one in that family is going to believe Rose asked Edward to raise Charlie! This could get  ugly!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 14

Wow, that just popped up out of the blue! She must see that Edward cares for the boy. Wonder if she can talk him into it?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 13

Got a funny feeling when Rose asked Edward to come talk to her. Jasper wasn't very friendly, guess he doesn't like the name Masen.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 12

It's such an awful feeling, to want to do something to help, and there's just nothing! Been there, done that.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 11

That poor little boy is going to lose his momma! I hate to see that, though it's a part of life. Children need their moms! (okay, both parents, you know what I mean)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 10

It was a bit surprising to hear Rose admit Edward was her high school crush. Emmett didn't seem too happy about it either. Wonder what relationship Bella is to Rose?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 9

No, I sure wasn't expecting it to be Rosalie. No matter who, though, it's awful that Charlie's mom seems to be so ill!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 8

Well, now we know, and I was afraid of something like this!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 7

Oh dear! Now we'll find out why his mom doesn't dance anymore!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 6

I'm liking thet bastard of a father loess and less!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 5

So, their father is not only an adulterer, but an abuser as well! Nice guy!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 4

Momma used to dance, hmm. That sounded a bit ominous, as if she can't dance anymore. She taught her son well, that nothing in life is free and you must work hard to have anything of value.

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